Book Jacket

 

rank 1742 (-39)
word count 49516
date submitted 24.07.2009
date updated 06.02.2010
genres: Fiction, Thriller, Crime
classification: moderate
incomplete

Norm

Frank Rawlins

 

Norm is Oxford's new bright crime fighter. But Morse he ain't. He drives his girlfriend's Ka. He likes Springsteen. Sometimes he drinks lager ...

 

Norman Philip Ducker is far from the norm. And far from the late lamented Chief Inspector Morse. Unlike Oxford's celebrated detective, Norm uses the city's buses or borrows his girlfriend's little Ford. He likes lager as well as real ale. He likes Buddy Holly and REM and Bruce Springsteen. Oh … and he’s not a policeman. He does like crosswords, however. And reading. Cosmology and science and religion fascinate him. So do football and rugby. But he still can’t get his head round Doris Lessing. Norm is a civilian employed by the police as a coordinator for Crimestoppers, the charity that invites anonymous tip-offs. He isn’t overkeen, however, on police procedure and political correctness. He relies on an acute sense of hearing, a good memory, and a strange logic to weave a way through laborious, official channels; through piles of electronic files and folders, sheaves of paperwork, and tangles of red tape. This is the story of how he battles the Brass to play a key part in unravelling a complicated web of murder. It also happens to be a moving love story.

 
 

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a new crime fighter, in oxford but he's no morse, not even a cop, suspense, thriller, with a love story too

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FrankR wrote 198 days ago
paxie wrote 9 hours ago

Norm

I read your loaded chapter one & jumped to six........
The opening is gripping..And first I was irritated by all the times you said....'I' .....Then I got it,,, you did it to crank up the tension,,,,,Mmmm,,, clever, it did make me feel I had to read faster....

C6
TV (just) in time to see the British team lose.
he remembered (just )too late to stop himself
telling them he (had) (just ) remembered the creepy

I didn't see the need for the words in brackets......You very rarely need 'had' before an - ed verb.....

Best of luck with this...
Shelved with best wishes.

Esta wrote 5 days ago

The perp' s list is such a chilling inciting incident in the book grabbing the reader. I loved Norm's eclectic tastes. The prose fairly races, taking the reader along too. Yes I agree, Doris Lessing is so-ooo-ooo boring. I thought I had better read her and then wished I hadn't. I was going to give it to Age Concern but then thought that would be cruel.
You have such a great style, chilling, humourous and so interesting with that vast encyclolpedic brain of Norm's.
This is great reading and I wish you very best. i have backed it with pleasure.
Best wishes,

Katy
Stone Relics.

Eleanor Anne Dudley wrote 11 days ago

Dear Frank.

Your book contrasts greatly with ours, yours is terribly funny and a little mysterious.

You could put more fun into it if you showed more, not that what you do show isn't enough, but we would love th "see" more of "Norm."

Backing it.

Eleanor and Sharkey.

Jo Ellis wrote 12 days ago

You have a flair for narrative and thus write lit fic well. Although I am not usually a fan of lit fic I found Norm an intriguing character, quicky and original and your first chapter was chilling and perfect for a thriller.

I like the way you end chapter two... with a nutter calling crimestoppers.... an insight into Norm's work, where he isn't a policeman working for crimestoppers. I would be interested to see how Norm goes about solving crimes without the police procedures....

Fun, quicky, great writing.

Jo xx

Spoilt

Pat Black wrote 14 days ago

Hi Frank, really enjoyed this - looking forward to the clash between the very methodical killer and Norm, a lovable copper. The humour was strong and you've got great characterisation - key skills for creating a detective, even one so off-beat. Well-written, too. Big fan of this

Pat Black
Snarl

Fromante wrote 14 days ago

This is great Frank, I have looked for a book like this on the site after I was reintroduced to the thriller genre. I say nothing more than I back this book with a certain feeling of its success.

Fromante. (Norman). Muddledydo and also The Witch of Hambone Bk.3.

Kolro wrote 15 days ago

It always fills me with joy when I find a comedy on here that instantly stands out as having that certain something or as the French call it "that certain something." Due to the nature of this site I can't copy and paste all the little bits I loved but I just want you to know there were a lot. I love the humour here and think that this is going somewhere fun. Backed with pleasure.

T.L Tyson wrote 22 days ago

Hello,
this came recommended in the forum, not too sure who it was at this point. As my memory is shite these days.
I enjoyed the first chapter, it told us exactly what was going to happen through Mr 10CC's prep plan. Though I liked it I felt the second chapter was stronger than the first. I enjoyed it more.
Apart from some lengthy paragraphs that I thought could be broken up to be easier on the eyes, I thought this was a good read. It moved steadily, had great character development and some humor through Norm's eyes. Namely the last line of the second chapter.
Definitely heading down the fast paced thriller road.
The thing that caught my eye is , he likes Springsteen and since Springsteen is pretty much the coolest guy that walks the planet I am gonna go ahead and back this. Don't think you don't deserve it, your writing is good but Bruce is better. ;)
Backed
T.L Tyson-Seeking Eleanor

C.C.McKinnon wrote 25 days ago

This book was recommended to me and I am happy it was. The opening chapter grabs your attention and pulls you in. You have constructed such a good character who is interesting and smart. In fact, that is how I view your writing after getting caught up reading this. Interesting and smart. I want to read more.

Strayer wrote 27 days ago

I hope you continue on with Norm and write a series. i enjoyed this book because the story was clear and easy to follow. It held my interest. Norm isn't typical. Thanks for writing this.

TheLoriC wrote 90 days ago

A fantastic blend of crime and thriller. Very strong and well-written premise and your opening chapters also work well. This is written with such great style and grabs the reader almost right away. On my shelf.

L. Anne Carrington, "The Cruiserweight"

lynn clayton wrote 91 days ago

Frank, your pitch is brilliant- it tells us everything we need to know whilst being interesting and not trying too hard. Then we get to the book. And quite honestly, I'd rather read about Norm than Morse. Your style is unpretentious but lacking nothing. To set it in Oxford is clever because people like to imagine themselves there. And Norm is a really great character who could make your fortune. Shelved.Lynn

demolinero wrote 95 days ago

Crime and thrillers are my favourite books of choice for relaxation, and I'm very taken with yours. It is just a bit different, as Norm is a Crimestopper rather than a police officer, which gives the story a fresh dimension.

Unlike some other readers, I have enjoyed the little diversions into cod-philosophy, and I didn't even mind the reference to literary fiction, even though that's what I try to write.

Some good humorous lines, a light touch, and excellent characterisation gives this story an edge. Backed. Cheers! -Liz (A Bed of Knives)

Francis Albert McGrath wrote 96 days ago

Norm is a great character, well set up and realised in ch 2. I don't quite understand what ch 1 is trying to achieve - it's not coming across to me as a reader. Given the Oxford location, it might be no harm to mention some prime spots in Ch 1 or 2, so we can ground ourselves as readers. Very enjoyable. All the best with this.
Frank

FrankR wrote 96 days ago

Hi fellow Frank - thanks for comment. I like the little rant - it's only half a paragraph.

Immediate, fresh prose and sharp characterization.
Nice.
Backed.
The rant against literary fiction could come out though, it didn't seem to fit.

FrankR wrote 96 days ago

Hi fellow Frank - thanks for comment. I like the little rant - it's only half a paragraph.

Immediate, fresh prose and sharp characterization.
Nice.
Backed.
The rant against literary fiction could come out though, it didn't seem to fit.

FrankR wrote 96 days ago

Hi fellow Frank - thanks for comment. I like the little rant - it's only half a paragraph.

Immediate, fresh prose and sharp characterization.
Nice.
Backed.
The rant against literary fiction could come out though, it didn't seem to fit.

Francesco wrote 96 days ago

Immediate, fresh prose and sharp characterization.
Nice.
Backed.
The rant against literary fiction could come out though, it didn't seem to fit.

Ron A Sewell wrote 99 days ago

Hi Frank,

The planning of a double murder, an intriguing opening. Good introduction to Norman, and his job in life. Not too much info dumping to spoil the flow.

Great line – refurbished cottage pie.

I like this a lot. You have an easy flowing style of writing and a distinct voice. Norm is easy to read.

On my shelf for a while.

Ron S

You Can’t Hide Forever.

Clare Hill wrote 101 days ago

In Chapter 1, I thought the rant against literary fiction was more a writerly thing than a copper thing. It seemed more like the author's opinion than the character's. I enjoyed chapter 2, particularly the cottage pie (although the characters didn't!) Watch out for POV change in exchange between Norm and Dewi, it's a bit disconcerting.
Norm is a great character, and with a bit of tweaking you could really have something here; it's unusual, which would make it memorable to the reader.

Terry61 wrote 194 days ago

This was a great read. Good story, well-drawn characters and a clever plot line. The pace of the book keeps you interested and the lead character, Norm, has that little extra 'something' that keeps him apart from other fictional detectives. Highly believable and an unusual slant on the work of Crimestoppers!

Jo Carroll wrote 197 days ago

Your pitch is great - and I love the way you take us straight into your characters. One thought - I don't think we need the list of books Norm has read at that point, nor the sporty bit. It helps you to know your character that well, but - this early in the book - I think the reader needs something to push the story forward. Maybe use them later if you feel the reader needs to draw breath. good luck, j

Zeta Pi wrote 198 days ago

This is terrific. Immediately you hook the reader with Mr10CC’s – great pseudonym btw – calculated, methodical approach to the impending crime. Norm is such a well-rounded character; his thoughts are interesting, on everything from Space to Literary Fiction, which don’t seem out of place, or too much information. Instead, these snippets give us a huge insight into Norm, and his personality.

I would say, take care when changing POV. For a very short time, I thought Norm was Mr 10CC. I then had to reread the pitch to check before realising they were two different people. I know why you’ve done it, and I’m not saying you shouldn’t do it, but there are pitfalls, and distracting the reader from the story is one of them.

Overall though this has all the ingredients set up for a great read: clean, natural sounding dialogue, tantalising hooks at the ends of chapters 1 and 2, so I’m happy to support by giving it a spell on my shelf.

FrankR wrote 198 days ago
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