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date submitted 08.07.2009
date updated 04.10.2012
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The Doctor of Summitville

Bill Carrigan

In a Depression-struck country town, treachery, violence, and a murder trial mark the lives of a young doctor and his much younger love.

 

April 1927. A passenger train wrecks as it nears a mid-eastern U.S. farm town. Young Dr. Jim Martin, treating the injured, meets Annette, a French girl trained as a midwife, recently orphaned, and sent here to live with her uncle. When the uncle dominates and abuses her, Jim intervenes but is blocked in his efforts. Meanwhile, conflict with the county medical society drives him to practice in isolation, fully a 'country' doctor.

His failing but inescapable marriage stands in the way of freeing Annette from bondage. He contrives to send her to nursing school; where her studies are interrupted just short of graduation. Then Jim's concern and love for her lead to fateful moves and a killing. Scandal and social conditions threaten the relationship. And Annette, when older and more independent, forces a crisis.

Spanning a crucial American decade, the narrative brings to life a physician's practice in that era. One case in particular is critical to a defiant, impassioned love affair resolved in a distant land.

 
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Chapter Twenty-Seven

    The Fourth of July, 1931, fell on a Saturday. Though Jim usually made house calls six days a week, he stayed close to the office today in anticipation of emergencies.

    The action had started at dawn with the sound of a cherry bomb blowing a bucket sky high. It was like the opening shot of a battle that would last all day and into the night. The larger firecrackers would be exploded individually, the smaller ones in strings. For variation, there were torpedoes, red devils, and snakes. Even firearms would be discharged, mostly by older patriots zealous to affirm our Independence. The din would finally diminish at sundown when the display pieces took oversparklers at dusk, then pinwheels, Roman candles, fountains, rockets. With so much powder being fired by novices, accidents were inevitable. 

    There could be other kinds of accidents as well. Knife wounds, snake bites, food poisoning. Collisions, drownings, falls. Sunburn and prostration from the usual intense heat. Not all the trauma would be related to the celebration; it was just that the Fourth was a day for fun and disaster. And if Summitville was to be a battleground, the doctor would be ready with military medicine: antiseptics, analgesics, antitoxins, plasma, tools, bandages, splints. 

    But actually, this year’s accidents were few. Some  that did occur were odd. Suzy Nichols, six, caught her index finger in the hollow handle of a jump rope, and Jim had to split the wood despite her screaming conviction that he was amputating. A railroad worker, Zack Powers, suffered a spider bite on the scrotum in changing his pants and went into severe, intractable pain that would last weeks. A city woman was badly scratched on barbed wire while fleeing a bull. One serious accident, the real tragedy of the day, was young Mike Laurier’s partial loss of vision in his right eye. He had made the mistake of inspecting a pipe that contained a smoldering dud.

    Jim also treated a few regular patients in his office. Between cases, he managed to water his plants, repair a toilet, and mow the lawn.

    Then, shortly after dinner the office doorbell rang. He was astonished to meet in the waiting roomViolet Dalton.

    Had she been released from Mount Olive? Had she escaped? Hard upon surprise came a surge of guilt, for he had neglected to visit her since her confinement, relying on her husband’s word that she was making progress. She might have been the telephone caller who wouldn’t tell Margaret her name.

    She had lost weight and appeared shapeless in a short, loose gown. Indeed, time and confinement had treated her harshly. Her once gorgeous hair was matted, stringy, and graying. Her eyes were red rimmed and bleary. Her muddy boots and soiled gown suggested foot travel and outdoor sleeping. She held a large straw hat before her and gazed up at him, her cheeks streaked with sweat or tears.

    After a strained greeting, he led her through the empty waiting room to his office. She hesitated, protesting that she hadn’t come as a patient; but she accepted a chair and, sitting primly, followed him with her eyes. He expected anger for his part in putting her away, but she told him in an earnest burst that he was her only friend. He felt awkward as he asked how he could help.

    “Oh, Jim,” she said in a near whisper, “you have no idea what they put me through. Did they tell you about my operation? They were taking no chances on their female loonies getting pregnant . . . It was really Grove who put them up to that. Well, I couldn’t take another day of it, so I slipped out. Ran, walked . . . Finally a farmer with a truckload of ducks

    “Have you been home, Vi?”

    She looked around vaguely, hiding her mouth with the hat. The words came from afar. “Home? You can call it that . . . But no; Grove would just send me back.”

    “So you came here.

    “Where else could I go, Jim? Or should I say Doctor Martin, it’s been so long?” She leaned toward him abruptly, extending her hand. It was too far away for him to take, and when she dropped her arm, her spirits seemed to fall as well. Why, he thought, am I handling this so poorly?

    “There was this boy . . . an attendant,” she said, now twisting her hair. “He was kind to me; he came to my room nearly every night. It’s been a year now, but I remember my thoughts as we I always thought about you, Jim. Do you understand what I’m saying? Knowing I was alone, that everyone had abandoned me” She broke off and looked away.

    A witness unfamiliar with her sudden shifts of mood and topic might have thought she was faking. She needed help, but he felt helpless. At least he wouldn’t abandon her as before. She started to rotate the hat by its wide brim.

    “I never knew what I was doing there,” she said with rising agitation. “I know I’m not rightbut that placewhy does it have to be that place? A flat in Chelsea maybe; a room on the Left Bank . . . But why a psychiatrist who wants to save my soul? if you can imagine anything so absurd . . .”

    “Vi, try to calm down,” said Jim. “I’ll help you, I promise.”

    “I knew you would, Jim. There was always something between us.” 

    He felt compassion, along with exasperation and perplexity. Absent, though, was any physical attraction, for he now enjoyed a blissful indifference to all women except Annette. Hoping to put Violet at ease, he handed her a small glass of laudanum, barely enough to calm her. He had no way to accommodate a sleeping female refugee.

    The doorbell buzzed and he heard the screen door of the waiting room slam. He found Joel Shoemaker, fifteen, pacing the floor and waving a crudely bandaged hand. Jim said he’d be with him in a minute.

    Violet merely sat now, limp, eyes blank. Too soon, he thought, for the opium’s effect. Manic-depressive? Schizophrenic? Both maybe. He could do nothing for her. And he saw no way to get her off his hands. He couldn’t take her back to the san, or keep her here, or turn her out. He led her to the waiting room, planning to treat Joel while thinking of a suitable haven.

    Joel had burned his hand in lighting an original firework, a lid of gunpowder mixed with gasoline. Jim soaked the hand in linseed oil and bandaged it. When he released Joel through the waiting room, Violet was no longer there. He looked out into the twilight and saw her sitting on the marble bench. Joel eyed her until his attention shifted to a burst in the sky and a shower that lit up the whole town.

    Jim sat down beside Violet and took her hand, trying to think what to do next. Again, as of old, he was strongly moved to help her, though her strange disorder was beyond his reach. He could at least be kind. She had turned to him―seeking shelter, sympathy, probably sexdespite his disloyalty and neglect. She nestled against him and rested her head on his shoulder. He had to reach a decision.

    “Come on, Vi,” he said. “We can’t stay here. I’ll take you home. Stunned by his words, or dark images they awoke, she shrank away with a dazed look. He stood and drew her to her feet, a robot. Leaving her in the front seat of his car, he cranked open the windows, then went to get his bag and tell Margaret he had to go out. Still undecided, he drove toward the Daltons’ house.

    Violet appeared to be in a slough approaching catalepsy. Lights in her house indicated that Grover was there. Delivering her to him, and thus to Mount Olive, was unacceptable. He drove on slowly, trying to review his options. The streets were deserted while the townspeople watched the fireworks. A burst of stars above the roofs heralded hollow explosions and distant cheers.

    Thinking she might rally if he could erase the threat of the asylum, he said, “Vi, I won’t take you home, but you’ll have to tell me where to go.”

    She stared straight ahead with no sign of comprehension. He drove in silence through the warm darkness. It was not unusual for her trances to persist indefinitely, as though a paralysis had seized her thoughts and will. He was losing hope of reaching her. But then, as if waking, she spoke in a voice almost normal. “Where are we going, Jim? Can’t we stop and get something to eat?”

    The air grew cooler as they neared the foothills. Her lucidity proved to be intermittent, though she never fully regressed to the former state. She chatted or hummed, vibrant and responsive; but something he might sayeven his asking if she had a friend nearbycould return her to apathy. As he drove on, however, he thought she had recovered enough to pass the night alone in his cabin. At length they reached the narrow dirt road, the rocky hillside, and finally the cabin itself.

    He lit the hanging lantern and led her to a chair at the table. She remained seated while he fired up the stove and opened tins of soup, deviled ham, and crackers. He saw her rise slowly, go to the screen door, and look out. Testing, he said, Watch the soup, Vi. I have to fetch water.”

    She turned. “Jimlook at me,” she said, moving her hands aimlessly over her body. “Do you realize I haven’t bathedI can’t say for how long. I’mI’m offensive . . . I ought to wash my hair . . .

    He was relieved to see her coherent and concerned about her person. It would take a while to heat water, but he picked up two empty pails and went out. He followed a moonlit path uphill for about fifty yards and dipped the pails into a spring-fed pool. Descending, he gazed across the lunar valley and down at his faintly lit cabin. He was anxious about his absence from town. In leaving Violet here, hed only defer the problem, but it could wait until morning.

    He served the soup and set the pails of water on the stove. To humor Violet, he replaced the lantern with a candle, which wavered in the breeze. She ate slowly with only one interruption, a brief spell of anxiety. She started toward the door, but Jim caught her hand and led her back to the table, apparently quelling her demons. He tried to keep the conversation light. When asked about her daughter, she said she hoped to see her soon, but there was no feeling in her voice or expression. 

    “The water’s warm now,” he said. “You’d better wash your hair in here and rinse it outside in the shower.” He got his bag from the car and offered her a bar of soap. She gazed at it. “All right,” he said, “I’ll help you.”

    “I’d best take this off, love. Will you untie me?”

    In complying, he saw a laundry mark at the collar and realized she was wearing a hospital gown. He helped her remove it, and she stood before him in panties and boots. She was still shapely, with smaller but high breasts and full thighs. “They stole all my lingerie,” she said with no sign of embarrassment.

    She bent over the sink, and he wet and soaped her long hair. She wrapped it in a towel, and he placed another over her shoulders and handed her his pajamas. Bearing the pails of water, he led her uphill to a niche in the rocky cliff, where he filled an elevated trough connected to a shower head. With her back to him, he removed her boots, and she slipped off the towels and panties. Moonlit rock partly surrounding them sheltered her from the breeze. 

    Humming, she rinsed her hair and washed and dried herself while he folded up the pajama cuffs. She stepped out of the niche, huddled in her arms, and donned the pajamas. He seated her on a boulder and helped her put on the boots, then followed her downhill. She seemed more comfortable now and more lucid than she had been all evening. 

    When they reached the cabin, he said, “I have to go now, Vi. I’ll see you in the morning.” He was pretty sure she wouldn’t try to burn the cabin. 

    “You’re not leaving me here alone?”

    “You’re perfectly safe. There’s no one for miles around.” 

    “No. Don’t go, Jim. I’m afraid.

    “I’ll lend you a gun. If you see a prowler, shoot him.” 

    “Jim,” she said, touching his arm, “do I always have to be a patient? Can’t you stay tonight?”

    “I’m afraid I’d forget myself.

    With his back to her, he took his father’s revolver from his bag, unloaded it, and pocketed the cartridges.For your protection against goblins,” he said, showing her the gun as he placed it on a shelf. “Blow out the candle and hook the screen door. Have a good sleep, and I’ll join you for breakfast.”

    She tried again to persuade him to stay, drawing him toward the cot, but he stood firm and was soon headed back to town.

#

    Nearing the highway from Summitville to Carroll, he stopped at the Herns’ farm. It was about time to see Ed Hern, a fairly new patient, and hed get in a call to Margaret.

    While Ed quieted the dog, Mrs. Hern emerged from the parlor, which was lighted by the dial of a large, bass-heavy radio. The three slowly mounted the stairs to Ed’s room.

    Ed was sixty-eight and suffered from a colon cancer that had spread to other organs. Superficial treatments in the city had drained his savings before an honest surgeon sent him home to die. Jim had learned a good deal about the Herns during his visits. For example, he had seen Mrs. Hern march off with a bottle of whiskey her husband had hidden. Ed took this meekly. He was deeply concerned about becoming a burden on her.

    Tonight Jim listened to the recital of symptoms, which Mrs. Hern confirmed or revised. He decided to increase the codeine to sixty milligrams. That was about the limit; a larger dose could cause excitement. He tried to look ahead. Morphine, while stronger, was constipating, and a free bowel was vital in Ed’s condition. Where to go next?

    Jim agreed to have a cup of coffee. Mrs. Hern’s absence would give Ed an opportunity to speak in private. The worried farmer, now lying on his bed exhausted, confided as soon as his wife was out of earshot.

    “Doc, I want you to send me a bill.”

    “We don’t have to go into that now, Ed.”

    With glances toward the door, Ed continued in a low, matter-of-fact tone. “We’re going to lose the place, Jim. There’s the mortgage, debts, taxes  Tom Mosely, at the Carroll bank, says he can hold off awhile, meaning till I’m gone. That’s when you get paidwhen they settle. But they say a claim against the estatewell, the bills should be in before, you see. So bill me now rather than later.”

    “Okay, Ed, if you say so. What about Mrs. Hern?”

    “She’ll go to her sister’s in Richmond. And Docall this malarkey about my appetiteshe’s just trying to help by loading on the food. It’s a woman’s way, I guess.” His haggard face assumed a look of deeper distress. “She feels so helpless . . . I could take this better if I had a little nip now and then.”

    “I understand,” said Jim, leaning in and lowering his voice. “What we need, Ed, is a strategy” He heard Mrs. Hern’s returning footsteps. As she entered with two mugs of coffee, he asked her, “Do you have a way to get a prescription filled? Lem couldn’t afford to go on delivering.”

    “I could stop after church tomorrow,” she said. “I’m sure the Staffords wouldn’t mind.”

    Ed muttered, “At least I’ll get out of that.”

    Jim wrote a prescription for C2H5OH in syrup, to be refilled as needed. “Ed, I want you to take a tonic to improve your appetite. It’s important to keep up your nutrition.” And despite the farmer’s strained features, he said to the wife, “He needs a soft dietlots of liquid.” He knew Ed would soon find that the tonic was mostly alcohol.

    He phoned Margaret from the Herns’ foyer. She said his father had called twice within the hour. Jim called him at once, apprehensive of a turn in his condition. Everett, sounding strong but agitated, asked how soon he could get there.

    “What’s up?” Jim asked.

    “It’s Al.”

    “Allison?”

    “Yeah; he’s been sleeping in the barnhiding out. I didn’t tell youfigured you had enough on your mind.”

    “Well, go on.” He expected a sequel to the affair of the stolen horses.

    “He caught his wife cheating and thrashed the guy. The law is after him again. Guess he was feeling pretty low, because I found him in his truck, unconscious, with a hose from the exhaust through the window.”

    “Good Lord! Is he still out?”

    “He seems to be coming around. But you’d better get here soon as you can. His lips are blue and he’s moaning . . . clenching his jaw. Looks pretty bad.”

    “Okay. I’m about ten miles out of town, and I need to stop by the office for oxygen. Keep him quiet. And don’t give him alcohol, even if he asks for it.”

    Jim took leave of the Herns and sped toward home. Passing the moonlit fairgrounds, he saw forlorn traces of the firework display: tattered bunting, scattered trash, a burnt-out pinwheel on a post. For most of Summitville, the long day was over. He stopped briefly at the office, then made haste for his father’s house, running the traffic light in the deserted center of town.

 

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‘The Doctor of Summitville’ tells the story of Jim Martin, a small town doctor in late 1920s America. The novel opens with a catastrophic train crash. Jim is first on the scene. While tending to the wounded, Jim meets a young French girl called Annette. In the aftermath of the accident his relationship with Annette grows and his medical practice stagnates. With a backdrop of a crucial ten year period in American history, the novel shows how inhabitants of a small town were affected in the deepest depression of the 20th century.

I would like to start by saying that I greatly enjoyed reading ‘The Doctor of Summitville’. The central story is engaging and Bill Carrigan has created a wonderfully believable setting populated with a myriad of well developed and interesting characters. The novel is clearly well researched both historically and medically.

Carrigan employs a ‘less is more’ philosophy in his writing style to great effect. With a very small number of well chosen words, he manages to convey a great deal about a character or a location. He is able to get to the crux of secondary characters swiftly and economically rather than indulging in reams of unnecessary description that would weigh the novel down. I was reminded at times of J.M. Coetzee’s concise but evocative style. The succinct and almost clinical writing mirrors the mind of his protagonist. When Jim meets someone he immediately identifies the root of their personality in the same way that he would identify the cause of an illness.

I like how Carrigan uses very short and fairy contained chapters in the novel. Each one offers a different quick snapshot of life in Summitville. While the story of Jim’s relationship with Annette takes centre stage, the numerous patient interactions breathe life into the setting. Carrigan’s aptitude for concise but accurate character description means that he can scatter these scenes throughout the novel without distracting the reader from the central story. I greatly enjoyed the scene where Jim goes to visit Violet. While Jim attempts to remain professional, as he is with many of the other patients in the novel, his clinical veneer is occasionally breached. The turbulent nature of their history is subtly suggested and brings awkwardness to the encounter. There is clearly more to their relationship than we are being told and it draws the reader in expertly. Nothing seems throwaway and every character interaction helps to draw you into the novel’s world.

Though by no means widespread, there are a few things that need to be worked on. Occasionally attempts to root the story in the time period can feel a little forced. Unnecessary allusions to taking pictures as modern technology and the recent World War seem shoehorned in at times.

I also feel that more care needs to be taken with sudden shifts in tense. When the general narrative abruptly alludes to the future it can come off a little contrived. This is most noticeable at the end of the chapter 16 where Carrigan dramatically states, “But the evasion would one day compromise him in a serious way” and the start of chapter 17, where he begins, “The third event would later prove fateful, marking a turning point in the lives of both Jim and Annette”. Having the two portentous sentences one after the other is also too much of an abrupt shift. The novel is at its strongest when it is building slowly with Jim in control of the narrative. These sudden attempts to increase tension feel clichéd and forced.

Other than these few issues there was very little I could find to fault with this novel. I definitely feel that it has commercial potential.

Dakota Velasquez wrote 397 days ago

The Doctor of Summitville...

Bill, I must say this is a breath-taking piece of work. Starting it, I found myself captured by every word, flowing seeminglessly never once missing a single beat. Before I knew it, chapter one was behind me, then chapter three, and then chapter six. You know how to use words, you know the human nature, it is astounding how you write. Clearly you have been at this for quite some time (and if not, please lie so you don't make the rest of us here on Authonomy feel bad). I don't usually go for this type of story due to the fact that I have found many to be rather boring, stale, and predictable. But you sir, you have reignited the flame of interest inside me. I do hope you weren't expecting me to point out any errors, for due to letting myself be consumed by you words, I found none of the sort and do have my doubts that there are any there. Six stars from me and now I must figure out how to make space on my bookshelf for you.

To all Authonomy readers just scanning through the comments on this stunning story, take my word. This is a piece of work by someone who knows exactly what he is doing. This story shouldn't even be here, it should be on display in every bookstore around the world. It should be published. Fans should be fighting each other for the last copy of this book. The characters are written so well I feel as if they are real people, people you could meet. Give this book a chance and you shall not regret it.

Bill, I do plan to return to finish. I unfortunately have little time left to spend here, alas I must bid you farewell for now. It has been an absolute honor reading your work and I can't wait for the day this is published so that I may buy a copy. Recommending this to everyone who will listen.

Thank you for sharing this,
Dakota

JennyWren wrote 433 days ago

The Doctor of Summitville

Bill, This is one of the most outstanding books I have been privileged to read. You are a skilled writer who draws your reader immediately into the story. The characters are strong, interesting and very human. Minor characters are sufficiently well developed so that the reader knows how they fit into the story. There is gentle humor, emotional turmoil, and great personal tragedy and triumph throughout the story.

You clearly understand human nature and behavior. I loved and cared for the main characters. I didn't want to finish the book because I didn't want the characters to leave me. This book is a treasure.

Dear reader, allow yourself the luxury of time to read “The Doctor of Summitville” without turning your attention to other books. I read it in three sittings as it was hard to leave the “pages” to do other things. I kept thinking about the characters and wondering what was going to happen to each one. In my humble opinion, that is the mark of a great book – when the writer captures your attention and quietly demands you give it to nothing else. Of course, you can, if necessary, read this book in multiple sessions without losing interest or forgetting what has previously occurred. While reading you will notice the fine points are painstakingly researched as the story discusses medical jargon and situations along with vivid descriptions of small town culture and history of the depression and war era.

Had I been allowed to rate this book more than six stars, I would have done so. It is truly a masterpiece.

LittleDevil wrote 441 days ago

Hi Bill

I first read and backed this over 900 days ago. I've reached chapter three and in my opinion this is by far one of the best books I've read here on authonomy. And I don't bullshit, Bill. I remember enjoying it back then, but at the time I was getting George to the desk and time was short. Although I still managed 6 chapters.

I would not hesitate to buy this book. Honestly it is written with all the qualities of a published MS. If this is not the first to be picked up from the desk, I'll eat my hat.
I'm already in love with Jim!

Had this book been uploaded recently, it would have made the desk weeks ago. Just sorry for you that it has got caught up in the old system and taken so long. But I believe anything worth having is worth waiting for.
Very best of luck
Sue xxx

JohnDoe wrote 472 days ago

I happened across Violet's thread and decided to have a look.  That was some good fortune on my part.  This is easily one of the very best books I've read on this site in a full active year here.  From the first chapter I was completely gripped by your writing abilities and your characters and the story you were laying out, and you continued to deliver unfailingly chapter after chapter.  I'm just sorry I found this so late in the night here in the UK and I don't have time to read more tonight.  This is one I'll be coming back to at my first opportunity tomorrow and reading to the end.  Your two main characters are fully formed, engaging and evoke respect, sympathy and care.  Your other characters are as well perfectly  drawn and written so as to make me interested in them all.

It all flows without one missed beat.  

I see a recent reviewer has used a word I wished to.  But before I saw that I'd emailed my feeling on your work to another writer here, I was so taken by it, so pease do take this as an original sentiment from me.  Stunning.  Stunningly good.

I would buy and recommend this to anyone who wanted to read a book.  I honestly think it has a universality of appeal, irrespective of genre tags.

Thank you.  Finding work like this here refreshes me more than I can say.  Really great, fully formed, and well but not obviously structured  writing and story-telling has a way of rooting us back into our own realities, and reminding us of our own hopes and aspirations not just through story alone, but also through a level of achievement.  It strengthens us.

John

Barry_Twotter wrote 472 days ago

This is a stunning novel driven by many skillful attributes. First of all, the pace is not only excellent, but each chapter moves the story along in a meaningful way. I started reading this and quickly found myself more than half-way through the book. Not only do you capture the time period and medical details flawlessly, but the characterization is full-bodied. This is a book where I felt like I really knew the characters and understood their motives and actions.

I've just read the events where things are starting to fall apart for Jim and will continue to read, as I'm anxious to find out what happens next. In many ways, this powerful novel demands the reader's attention, and it's difficult to put down. An easy six stars, this well crafted novel is one I highly recommend.

Bazza

MJ Gleason wrote 155 days ago

Bill - This outstanding and am glad to see HarperCollins gave it such praise. You're WL-ed and will eventually be on my bookshelf. Your candid response to Summer Of 1989 and WL would be very humbling.
Wishing you health and success,
MJG

made wrote 248 days ago

Really enjoyed reading this yesterday and just commenting now well done I will be starring it

LittleDevil wrote 261 days ago

Wow, congratulations, Bill! What a great and well deserved review. Just sorry that a book as well written as this one took over three years to come to the attention of the editor's desk. Which proves what a flawed system this can be at times.

Now get the damn thing published!
Good luck and best wishes
Sue xxx

andycp1999 wrote 297 days ago

Bill,

Six stars for an exquisite love story. It begins with a train wreck and the tension builds, escalating in chapters 24 and 38, twisting and turning to a satisfying ending. I didn't just read this novel. I studied your finesse with words and learned more from this novel than any of your others (with the possible exception of The Burden of Matter.) However, I do believe this novel has the potential to be greater and on par with To Kill a Mockingbird. If when Jim and Weber lock eyes about distinguishing between sheep and goats, it began a discussion about intolerance that carried to the conclusion, it would add tension and realism to a time when they had segregated hospitals. Jim’s character could shine through it all and show that not everyone in that era was intolerant.

Call Home the Child is my next book to read.

I love Authonomy. I didn’t think I’d get any responses but people pop up from nowhere and tell you how to improve your writing. It’s wonderful.

Andrew Parker
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kcquaretti wrote 367 days ago

Oh my, once you start you cannot stop reading.

Kathryn Page wrote 382 days ago

What a fantastic start. Very exciting way to start a novel. The prose flows superbly and it was really possible to imagine what the crash was like. I like the ending to the chapter as well which suggested possible story lines. Can't wait to read on.

John King wrote 382 days ago

beautiful language, built in a suspensive atmosphere. gripping.

Nick Goulding wrote 384 days ago

Really glad to see this excellent work at number five at the end of the month. Such engaging writing. I loved the feel of the work, brought across by vivid descriptions of the setting and medical procedures at the time. The research and knowledge of the author is clear. Very polished work.
Nick
'Where She Lies'

EngLit Traveller wrote 385 days ago

Strong, classic American writing. I like the style and the content. Interesting plot, believable characters, impressive description. The story moves along with a decent pace and is a very satisfying read. Highly rated.

Oscarsmom wrote 386 days ago

Excellent, captivating story. I'm only a few chapters in and I already can't wait to read more.

Amy Ratcliffe

PatrickGray1 wrote 386 days ago

I live in Bill Carrigan's city and I bought the book from him at a signing. I have read the book twice and just re-acquianted myself with the first few chapters online. If anything, it reads better now than my first time through it. I especially like the portrayal of medical practice during the period, the portrayal of the Doctor Jim's wife ( what a hard-case!) and the way the narrator (in italics) ties everything together with tibit comments for the reader. Mr. Carrigan is an innovative writer who holds on to your interest while he takes you for a ride through history.

Six big stars!
May he write many, many, many more.


Pat Gray

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Tarzan For Real wrote 387 days ago

Somehow I have my own flashbacks of the patients I treated during hurricanes Katrina and Rita in New Orleans when I read this. Or just treating people in general over 20 years.

Great read and a great find on this website. Compelling characters, taught and tense subplots, and plot twists that foreshadow many conflicts within. Highly recommended and starred.-- JL"The Devil Of Black Bayou"

ironinthesoul wrote 387 days ago

This is a well-crafted piece of work. The research seems sound historically and medically. The only halt I had was in the character's name Doc Martin, not just the shoes but a uk t.v. series of the same name. This is so well written, with a marvellous flow, perfect vocabulary, economic descriptions and tight dialogue. I've given high stars.

Antonius Metalogos wrote 387 days ago

Dear Mr. Carrigan,
I have had the absolute pleasure of reading the first chapter of your book and have realized that it is a very fine and wonderful piece of literature that you have written here. It certainly deserves all the praise that your readers have lavished on it, and there does seem to be a lot. I will most surely return to read more but for now please allow me to back your book with my highest regard for your artistry as a writer.

A.D. Stratu wrote 387 days ago

This is smooth, premium-quality prose with all the makings of a classic. I cannot form a more elaborate opinion until I'm finished with reading, but the long pitch shows a captivating story, and this, in combination with your beautiful stylistics, is bound to take you to bestseller lists. Yours, A.D.

Kaychristina wrote 388 days ago

A re-backing for Bill's work of true excellence.

From Kay with much love and best of all wishes for success with HC xx

Ladyred497 wrote 388 days ago

A lot of research has gone into this novel. You show the train wreck and we are rooting for Dr. Martin from the time he defends the patients over greed and power right from the start. He's not "perfect", but he is a good man and an excellent doctor. I hope enough readers check it out to provide you a chance on the editor's desk at Harper as you so richly deserve.

Writer3320 wrote 390 days ago

Bill,

You have written an excellent story. Proof of your mastery flows from word to word on every page.

Jennifer

Ironsides wrote 390 days ago

Bill,
I knew you were a gifted writer and consummate wordsmith, but reading your novel The Doctor of Summitville has boosted my respect for your writing skills even higher. I found the Depression-era tale compelling yet comfortable. Easy reading with the right amount of tension to keep me interested. I was hooked from the Prologue. Bravo, well done! This novel should be published. Please, for all of us, keep writing and sharing!
John Shanahan

Jacksfriend wrote 390 days ago

This is truly reminiscient of all I've ever read about the depression era. More importantly teh characters jump right off the page at you. They are believable. One can only want more of this book or more like it. It's a six star dfor sure, Terry aka Jack's friend

santabarbara wrote 392 days ago

The Doctor of Summitville by Bill Carrigan.

I think it's a great story. The writing is exquisite. There's lots of conflict throughout. Good pacing. Great visuals. The senses allow this reader to experience each scene in mind-blowing authenticity. Good, believable dialogue. Wonderful use of language throughout. I was immediately drawn into the story. There's a lot going on here. I was captivated by our main character, Doc Martin. He's real and he cares about people. I can see him.

Best wishes to you, Mr. Carrigan! Thanks for sharing.
Santabarbara

lucifer wrote 393 days ago

Bill: You are to be congratulated for composing a story that grips the reader from the first page. Your manuscript has many compelling aspects. One is a sense of urgency, which propels the reader into the plot and makes him want to keep reading. Another is the creation of setting, which makes the reader feel as if he is on site as the story unfolds. There are numerous other strong attributes as well, making your book worthy of publication.

Patricia Laster wrote 393 days ago

I know you're on the editor' desk and don't need any reviews, but I just had to tell you what a marvelous book you've written! Actually, a couple of days ago I decided I was tired of doing reviews and wanted to read a good book just for the fun of it. I like period novels especially when they involve a doctor and his everyday life. Well, I've just finished this one and I can honestly say that I don't have a better book on my real-life (not authonomy -but that, too) bookshelf. I'm an avid reader who swallow a Koontz, Lewis, Patterson - well, any NYT bestseller novel every day or two (retirement makes this a possibility). I am running out of authors! Then I discovered your book. e-w-w-w-w-h, I hope you go on to write many more novels so I'll have something good to keep reading. This one was awesome - right there at the top with all the bestsellers of its genre! Congratulations on your success. Pat

Carding wrote 393 days ago

Bill,

Recommended by Dona Lee. Read it straight through. A remarkable book--a love story that simultaneously gives the reader a sense of the social and political complexities of the era. Congratulations on a fine work.

Pat Grayson wrote 394 days ago

I read the first three chapters and found the character of Jim Martin to be engaging young man. I liked the French girl, and the other characters are lively and memorable. There is conflict established early on in the story, and it held my interest. I am always looking for a historical novel to read, and this fits the bill.

Diana Colson wrote 394 days ago

This is an excellent read! The characters are memorable and real. The atmosphere of the Depression is beautifully captured, as is the life of a small town doctor in the 1920's and 1930's. I am only a few chapters in and look forward to reading the rest. Kudos to author Bill Carrigan,

fictionguy wrote 394 days ago

This is a fast paced well written book. I am sure it will be published. Way to go. Five stars.

Tod Schneider wrote 395 days ago

Just looked over chapters 33 and 34 and they look fine to me, but with a caveat -- I can only look at it through my modern day understanding of the law. I think this should fly just fine with readers, but if you wanted to make doubly sure I'd check with a local law school and ask if they have a legal historian. Nowadays we'd say Murder IN the second degree, not OF. Witnesses would not be in the courtroom, they'd be isolated and brought in one at a time. You don't expressly tell us where they are, so ... no problem unless you wanted to clarify that. Previous convictions and hearsay wouldn't be allowable nowadays, and that's where you're on thinner ice, but I think you pull it off. I really think you're OK.

JamesRevoir wrote 396 days ago

Hello Bill:

It is clear by your attention to detail throughout the narrative that you have extensive medical training. At the same time, you strike the right balance in moving the story along without bogging the reader down in details. Another strength of this book is the thorough character development of every person who is introduced in the novel; and the complexity of their relationships.

Well done on this book-the high ranking is tremendously deserved.

James

BessV wrote 397 days ago

I have been admiring your cover and title for a while and finally got around to reading. I'm glad I did! I can see why it's in the top 5. You certainly know how to write a sentence. The books feels a little like Graham Greene, and I can really see it as a movie. You've done an excellent job with characterization and creating intrigue. The only bit of constructive criticism I would offer is that, while I really like the Prologue, I wasn't as taken in by the italicized section at the end of chapter 2. At that point, I was really into Jim's story and wanted to stay in it. Great job!

Dakota Velasquez wrote 397 days ago

The Doctor of Summitville...

Bill, I must say this is a breath-taking piece of work. Starting it, I found myself captured by every word, flowing seeminglessly never once missing a single beat. Before I knew it, chapter one was behind me, then chapter three, and then chapter six. You know how to use words, you know the human nature, it is astounding how you write. Clearly you have been at this for quite some time (and if not, please lie so you don't make the rest of us here on Authonomy feel bad). I don't usually go for this type of story due to the fact that I have found many to be rather boring, stale, and predictable. But you sir, you have reignited the flame of interest inside me. I do hope you weren't expecting me to point out any errors, for due to letting myself be consumed by you words, I found none of the sort and do have my doubts that there are any there. Six stars from me and now I must figure out how to make space on my bookshelf for you.

To all Authonomy readers just scanning through the comments on this stunning story, take my word. This is a piece of work by someone who knows exactly what he is doing. This story shouldn't even be here, it should be on display in every bookstore around the world. It should be published. Fans should be fighting each other for the last copy of this book. The characters are written so well I feel as if they are real people, people you could meet. Give this book a chance and you shall not regret it.

Bill, I do plan to return to finish. I unfortunately have little time left to spend here, alas I must bid you farewell for now. It has been an absolute honor reading your work and I can't wait for the day this is published so that I may buy a copy. Recommending this to everyone who will listen.

Thank you for sharing this,
Dakota

Lionell wrote 397 days ago

Bill I am halfway through your book and actually can't put it down. The Doc is such a strong and very real character. One can only hope that he will be able to overcome adversity without too much collateral damage!
Based on what I read thus far I confidently rate 5 stars.
Will let you know how I get on.

Ladyred497 wrote 400 days ago

I enjoy the narritive perspectives of those not directly involved in the story. It's a nice style for this piece, reminicient of the time.

junetee wrote 401 days ago

The Doctor of Summitville

A wonderful action-packed start to the book. The doctor really had chance to show the town exactly what he was made of.
You've created an interesting, likeable character with Doc Martin. Along with a very vivid picture of the depression.
The town and the characters I can visualise so well.
Your writing is polished and flows well. (And I like the short chapters).
The humour mixed with the all the pain and tragedy, complete this amazing story.
This is an excellent book and I cannot fault it.
highly starred
junetee
FOUR CORNERS.book one.The Rock Star.
highly starred.
gentle humour and

Christa Wojo wrote 407 days ago

Dear Bill,

Congratulations on your success! You are most deserving. I am sorry I didn't have the time to comment before, but now I will take the opportunity to tell you how much I appreciate your book.

I enjoy the insight into this period in time because as far as historical novels go, I haven't seen much done in this era. It is when my grandparents grew up and it is fascinating to witness it as you reveal it in realistic detail.

I also like the setting of the small country town. It is far more interesting to see how the story unfolds because the impact of the events in the plot are amplified when played against this intimate ecosystem of characters.

You write with class and moderation and I wish you the very best!

Christa
The Vulning Pelican

SpicePepe wrote 409 days ago

An enthralling read. Congratulations on reaching the top five.
Bridget
The Road from Makhonjwa

Andrew Esposito wrote 409 days ago

Bill, it was a pleasure to read several chapters of your book. It is a great example of a slow burning romance spiced with intrigue. I love how you did not introduce the girls name until the 4th Chapter, this shows very mature control on tension, especially after a fleeting introduction to the reader in the first action scene of the train wreck. James is outlined well early, emotively by his career and by his obvious compassion for human suffering. Tthis again is a sign of experienced writing where the reader is influenced to form an opinion beyond visual description. I usually have a lot of tips to contribute, but in this case I have nothing further to say except I'm backing your novel and star rating it very highly. I plan to read it more thoroughly in the near future. Good luck & best regards, Andrew Esposito / Killing Paradise

Ladyred497 wrote 410 days ago

The short prologue really sets the scene, pulls you into the time and place flawlessly, leaving the reader wanting to know about the scandal, the killing? The protagonist's strong, compassionate character shine through without being over the top. Believable, nice, normal, setting the stage for the reader to cheer him on.

Christine May wrote 410 days ago

This book is my kind of choice of reading. It is about real people. It is about good and evil and the in between. Look forward to reading more.
Christine C. May

fictionguy wrote 411 days ago

I usually don't see writing this polished on this site. I imagine you have been writing for a while. Nice attentian to detail and the characters are well drawn. I didn't have time to read the complete book, but I will return when I have time and finish reading it. My bookshelf is full for now but five stars. Good luck.

Fender wrote 414 days ago

I've not just logged in and picked random books. I've been reading for a bit before diving in and this book is one I kept coming back to. It's definitely publishable. Good luck with it.

Natalie1 wrote 414 days ago

I can see why you are ranked No 2, Bill! Excellent in every sense. 6-stars to bring you to No 1 where you belong! Well done. Natalie (The Diary of John Crow - would you mind taking a peek if you have time?)

S.C. Klaus wrote 415 days ago

Great book! Beautifully written and full of twists and turns with diverse characters. Should be a N.Y. Times bestseller. Good luck, Bill!
From your Elite Critque group, Susan

S.C. Klaus wrote 415 days ago

Great book! Beautifully written and full of twists and turns with diverse characters. Should be a N.Y. Times bestseller. Good luck, Bill!
From your Elite Critque group, Susan

Sue50 wrote 416 days ago

Have backed you in the past and very happy to do it again. Looks like you're on your way to the editor's desk! Hope you have a chance to take a look at Dark Side by CC Brown.
Good Luck!
Sue50

maretha wrote 417 days ago

Dear Bill, I read the last few chapters of your book again and this time I used the scale at the top of the page, rather than straining my eyes. I love your characters and they'll be around my mind in any case for a long time. I've rated 6stars and hope others who take the time to read your well written script will do the same.
Maretha/African Adventures of Flame .. and Friends
P.S. I think you have to send me a pending friendship notice. For some reason I do not have those icons below my pic and info

Lee Libro wrote 418 days ago

After having only read the first chapter, my palms have begun to twitch to hold this book in paper and ink form. The opening scene with its beautifully crafted sense of time, place and character has anchored me to the story. Bill, as you know, I'm a fan of your writing, but in this case, the word fan doesn't accurately describe my reaction. The word obsession does it more justice. The Doctor of Summitville will now serve a compulsion for me to return to my computer to read, a habit I'm not fond of as I don't care to read books in electronic form. But now you've made it impossible for me not to!

Lee

Ms. J wrote 420 days ago

Doc of Summitville- Historical Reader's Group

Well, Bill, I just had to finish it tonight. I'm glad it was a happy ending. I particularly liked the twist you added. That was fun. I'm still in disbelief that the town would turn a blind eye to an uncle marrying a niece. Wow!

Anyway, great book, enjoyable read. It kept my interest. From the start, I connected with Jim, and I was so glad to see him conquer the conflict!

Cheers,
Ms. J- Lord of All

Ms. J wrote 420 days ago

Doctor of Summitville for Historical Fiction Reader's Group

Bill,
Just dropping by comment on chapters 5-17.

Chapter 11 confused me a bit. I wasn't sure of it's purpose, what it revealed, how it helped moved the plot along. Perhaps as I finish reading the book, I will understand better.

Ok, seriously! How is this marriage legal?!?! What a level of duplicity! So, the country was all in up arms about some Mormons having two wives, but the were ok with a man marrying his niece? How is that? -Ok, I'm done ranting. Obviously your chapters here gave me an emotional reaction. :-)

In Ch 17 I noticed that you spelled Henry two different ways, Henry and Henri. I would go with the French spelling, perhaps he changed it to fit in. Either way, it should be consistent.

I'm still reading, and that's good! I now know who I want Jim to kill, but we shall see.

Regards,
Ms. J- Lord of All