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rank 5847
word count 60301
date submitted 18.09.2009
date updated 18.09.2009
genres: Fiction, Chick Lit, Religious
classification: universal
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The Ladies of Faith

Lynn McMonigal

Everyone has a secret.... What happens when those secrets invade a women's Bible Study?

 

Trouble has invaded the Women’s Bible Study at Faith Community Church. Widow Abby is pregnant; who is the father? Lorna no longer speaks to or about her adult daughter. Emily’s perfect marriage is threatened by a dark secret. Morgan is devastated and starting over after nearly 30 years of marriage. Frankie is lost and doesn’t know what to believe anymore. The ladies of Faith Community Church need each other more than ever. But can they trust enough to share their deepest secrets?

 
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Chapter Twenty-Four

Morgan was pulling to a stop in front of her house at the same time most of the other Davis family friends were parking their cars at the cemetery.  Not that she didn’t want to be at the graveside service.  Morgan would have liked little more than to be standing at Lorna’s side, supporting her as Claudia was lowered into the ground.  Her friend needed the support, especially since Wade had never showed up.  But she had other things to do, things that were just as important.  She had offered to host a dinner for Claudia’s loved ones.  Though she knew the women she had given a house key to and allowed into her kitchen were perfectly capable of preparing the food and setting it out, Morgan still felt that she needed to be there to help.

And besides that, Abby needed her help.

Morgan opened her door and walked around the car.  Abby had already opened her door and was sliding her feet out of the car.  Morgan hurried to her side, holding out an arm to steady the young woman.

Bringing Abby with her had not really been in the plan.  After spending one night in the hospital, Abby had been given a clean bill of health.  Her parents stayed with her one extra night before heading home.  She was now on her own again, and planned to do things her own way.  Though many of her new friends thought spending the day on her feet would be too much stress and strain on Abby, no one was willing to tell her no.  The sadness on Abby’s face was mixed with a fierce determination; she was going to say a proper good-bye to Claudia, no matter what anyone else said. 

When the service was over, though, Morgan saw the tired look on Abby’s face.  She stared at her for a moment, watching as Abby massaged her belly with one hand and rubbed her lower back with the other. 

“Get her to leave with you,” Frankie had said.  “Abby needs to get off her feet.  Claudia would want her to protect that baby.”

As Frankie made her way out of the funeral home, Morgan walked toward Abby.  Emily was there first, and Morgan overheard part of their conversation.

“I think I’ll just sit in the car,” Abby said.  “I don’t know how long the service will be, and I really don’t think I should be on my feet for long.”

“Do you want me to give you a ride home?” Emily asked.  “Shane is riding with the family anyway.”

Abby shook her head.  “No, I don’t want you to be late.  I can just wait in the car for you.”

“Or you can come home with me,” Morgan said.  “I need to get some things ready for the dinner.  You can get comfy on my sofa with your feet, maybe take a little nap before everyone gets there.”
 
    “Oh, are you sure you don’t mind, Mrs. Lawson?”

It had been easier than Morgan expected to get Abby to leave the funeral home.  She didn’t want to baby her, but she did want to protect her.  She had an arm around Abby’s waist, letting the young woman lean on her as they headed to the front door.  Morgan heard a car door close, but assumed it was one of the neighbors.  She was surprised when she heard a male voice she didn’t recognize call her name.

Morgan turned toward the man.  “Can I help you?” she asked him.

“I’m looking for Morgan Lawson,” he said.  “Do you know her?”

“I am Morgan Lawson.”

“Then this is for you.”  The man produced a thick envelope.

“What is it?” Morgan asked, slowly closing her fingers over the envelope the man pressed into her hand.

He didn’t answer.  He only nodded and walked back to his car.  The man drove off without another word.

Morgan looked down at the envelope.  She recognized the name in the return address, and did her best to ignore it by shoving the envelope under her arm.  Slowly, Morgan wrapped her arm around Abby again and they began walking back up the walk.

“What was that about?” Abby asked.

“Nothing you need to worry about,” Morgan told her with a forced smile.  She opened the front door.  “Let’s just get you off your feet for a while.”

She helped the younger girl get settled onto the sofa, dropping the thick envelope onto an end table.  If Morgan was right about the name on the return address label, there was only one thing the envelope could hold.  It would have to be dealt with, but not now.  Right now, she had to focus on getting a meal ready.  There would be time to think about papers from a lawyer later.

As she walked out to the kitchen, Morgan had a thought about one of her favorite characters.  She’d seen Gone with the Wind more times than she could count and had read the book at least three times.  Each time, she’d laughed at Scarlett O’Hara’s procrastination.  It was like the girl thought putting off everything for a new day and a better time would make all of her problems go away. 

For the first time, Morgan felt the same way.  She hoped that leaving that envelope for another time would make the words inside it hurt less.

Not that she thought anything would make hearing her husband of nearly 30 years say he wanted a divorce hurt less.

 

 

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palexander614 wrote 1105 days ago

Has another week gone by? Well, the weekend is upon us. What a great time to grab a cup of ice tea, comfy chair, and help us noobies get noticed by reading our work. If you are interested in this, please pick a book and let me know what you think. I would appreciate all comments and help . . . blessings, Pam

klouholmes wrote 1338 days ago

Hi Lynn, I like the way this launches into an issue that will be awkward at the circle. And how you’ve given just enough information about each woman, a bit about their husbands, showing the hint of problems from their POV. I noticed the dialogue was stiff once in a while because of contractions or not using them. It’s or it is (is in italic). Or “It has been a rough year” – maybe “It’s or It has (has in italic).” I'd like to read to see how they talk around their private pressures – Shelved Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

alice price wrote 1342 days ago

As a christian I can see this novel has a scarlet thread of biblical elements and truths running through it just like the bible itself. It is captivating and so full of home-truths and the hypocracies that have ruined the church. The pettyness and divisions are apparent I love your lines 'concentrate on what God wants and leave it at that' maybe we should all take that truth on board, and 'past not define the future what inspirational words. It is easy to see how judgementalism and hypocracy is rife in Gods church reading this and I will be more careful in the future how I judge by what I see with my natural eyes. The way you've switched pov's is well done and doesn't interrupt the flow of this spiritual masterpiece. When this is on the market I will be encouraging all my sisters in Christ to buy it (for me, that is) I need it as much as they do. This is delightful, true to life and a must read for all christians. Alice, Castell Brenin.

Alecia Stone wrote 1343 days ago

Hi Lynn,

Welcome to Authonomy. You have an interesting premise. Sounds like a lot of drama. Just my thing. Some good vivid descriptions to start off with. I could picture Abby in the parking lot; it’s very visual. Nicely done.

Your writing is fluid and it’s easy to read. Precise sentences and good pacing; it’s not too fast or too slow. I think you handled the POV switches well. It wasn’t a distraction at all; smooth transitions.

I’ve only read the first two chapters, but so far your characters felt real and the dialogue was believable. I sense so far, that this is a story with a lot of heart and soul and the emotions jump off the pages. I didn’t get the sense of setting in these chapters in terms of where it’s set but that might be mentioned later in the story. A good hook at the end of chap 2.

This is very well written. I’ve enjoyed what I’ve read so far.

Shelved!

Shinzy :)

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