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rank 5842
word count 12162
date submitted 03.09.2008
date updated 10.02.2009
genres: Fiction, Thriller, Romance
classification: universal
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The Millionaire Maverick

Susan James

What if one man could make everybody millionaires? What if the powerful individuals who control the world’s money supply will do anything to stop him?

 

What would happen if the entire world used a Magic Wall to create their wealth? What would then happen to the banking systems that seemed to be in control of the world and its resources? What would happen to the men and the institutions that seemed to hold the world's purse strings? And what then would happen to anyone messing with those hands that held those same purse strings? Hank Ramsan, The Millionaire Maverick was about to find out. Hank Ramsan made everyone Millionaires who learned to use his Magic Wall. This enraged the powers that controlled the world's banks because hidden secrets were revealed and lifestyles threatened, as the world's money systems crumbled. Only one person could save Hank from the peril he had created; only she didn't love him anymore. (sj)

 
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Hank pulled on his jeans, socks, and boots and looked for his toothbrush. Since his belongings had been tossed everywhere, he hadn’t found it the night before, and therefore did one of those trusty-finger-with-toothpaste scenarios. As he lifted various items in search of the toothbrush, on the floor behind the desk, he eyed it. Bending down, stretching out his hand, he noticed a gold coin lying close by.

This coin was different than any he had ever seen. Picking it up while still crouched on the floor, he read embedded in the gold coin the word: Epigram. Turning it over, were the words: Secret Formula.

A surge of electricity shot up his spine. What was an epigram, was his immediate thought, along with, secret formula? Secret formula for what? The fact that this was on a very old gold coin must also be considered. The question was ‘did he find it?’ Or was it placed there on purpose, as a breadcrumb of sorts? Something for him to pay attention to and follow? His investigative prowess was in high gear. Questions looking for answers flowed swiftly though his mind.

Hank flipped open his laptop computer and went directly to the word processor. He typed in Epigram and sent it to the thesaurus. Decree, dictum, edict, precept, maxim, canon, axiom, truism, verity, truth, mastery, were the words in common with Epigram. There was that ‘Mastery’ word again, just as the Genie of Aladdin’s Lamp, used the word master. This must be a major key to his quest.

Time to shave and get down to the restaurant. While running the razor along his jaw line something startled him and he almost cut himself. He thought he saw or sensed someone behind him. He abruptly turned, but no one was there. He was anxious to get on his way and out of that room!

Hank grabbed his favorite blue denim shirt, glanced in the mirror and noticed his abs. He hadn’t made time to work out during this mission, and he realized he was losing a bit of his six-pack tone. His fitness level was always important to him, as it helped him feel strong and sure of himself. It also didn’t hurt where women were concerned. Once again, his mind wandered back to the times Jocy would let him know when he was getting flabby. He always knew she was joking and she knew very well how to show appreciation of his physique. Hank quickly shook away that thought; he must get downstairs for breakfast.

Breakfast was never much of a big deal for Hank, but this morning he felt that the carbohydrate overload of last evening’s fettuccine noodles needed some balance of a huge western omelet filled with protein, and of course more coffee. He felt quite good about himself after a great breakfast and a fun flirtatious banter with the waitress.

Glancing at his watch, he grabbed his duffel bag and laptop from the restaurant seat at his side and made his way to the front desk to check out. The concierge assured him that his ride to the airport, as well as his flight, were right on time.

 

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Dean Lombardo wrote 383 days ago

Hi Susan,
I read the first two chapters, and you write very well and your story is bursting with promise and even some supernatural potential. I think you are going to do well with this. Highly starred.
A few suggestions:
"memories of the girl, his love," sounds a bit melodramatic. Why not just "memories of the girl he'd loved" or "memories of the girl he loved" ?
Last two paragraphs, Chapter 1: It is my personal view that such omniscience take us out of the third person you've already established and inserts you as author too much into the story. Unless Hank is telling this whole story as a flashback and I don't think you should go that route, I think you should cut these fortune-telling last two paragraphs from Chapter 1.
Chapter 2: Consider adding first two paragraphs of Chapter 2 to the end of Chapter 1. They fit better there time-wise. Then, sStart Chapter 2 with "Excitement filled ..."
Really good, easy-to-follow writing, plotting and characterization so far. I get the sense Hank means wells/wants to do good but he doesn't understand the implications and there's going to be some chaos. I also like the references to the Persian tales and would be interested in seeing how those and any modern-day genie-like activity might fit in. Careful what you wish for, Hank.

Dean Lombardo
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