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rank 5854
word count 12162
date submitted 03.09.2008
date updated 10.02.2009
genres: Fiction, Thriller, Romance
classification: universal
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The Millionaire Maverick

Susan James

What if one man could make everybody millionaires? What if the powerful individuals who control the world’s money supply will do anything to stop him?

 

What would happen if the entire world used a Magic Wall to create their wealth? What would then happen to the banking systems that seemed to be in control of the world and its resources? What would happen to the men and the institutions that seemed to hold the world's purse strings? And what then would happen to anyone messing with those hands that held those same purse strings? Hank Ramsan, The Millionaire Maverick was about to find out. Hank Ramsan made everyone Millionaires who learned to use his Magic Wall. This enraged the powers that controlled the world's banks because hidden secrets were revealed and lifestyles threatened, as the world's money systems crumbled. Only one person could save Hank from the peril he had created; only she didn't love him anymore. (sj)

 
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Hank was eager to get back to his writer’s loft right away. Friends and acquaintances never understood why he wanted to spend so much time in the quiet isolation of the loft. They badgered him relentlessly, claiming he lived like a monk. They didn’t understand this passion for what moved in his veins, how this kept him happy in his writer’s loft. That was until now.

He strode over to the black truck in the library parking lot, and climbed in behind the wheel. There was a time when he only dreamed of owning the truck, and then he bought the vehicle with a piece of paper. This was not the first time, either. Hank manifested his very first car as he was graduating from college. In college he didn’t understand how the car showed up that way, he didn’t care. As his knowledge of how things really work advanced, he began to understand and to teach others how to get the things they wanted.

He had recently taken a piece of paper to his local banker. The paper showed Hank’s success as a writer being rewarded. Previous to that point, Hank never wanted to borrow money, and was waiting for the right circumstance to bring him the cash. That perspective changed when he read a book about The Disney Brothers, Walt and Roy. They too did not want to build their business on borrowed money. However, if they could make back each month more than the installment payment called for, it was a sound business decision. That was good enough for Hank.

The bank lent him the money based on the strength of that paper. Hank also used his own “User Friendly Physics” to produce that piece of paper. What he didn’t yet realize was that these same physics were about to take him to death’s door.

As he climbed into the truck, Hank was noticed by two girls walking up the library sidewalk. He didn’t notice them noticing him. He was deliriously absorbed, thinking about Aladdin’s Lamp and Ali Baba.

Besides, Hank had reached the place in his heart that he no longer needed another person to make him happy. This was quite a great place to be based on the previous turmoil that he brought himself and others in previous relationships. Asking for happiness on a continuous basis brought him just that, and he was grateful. Physical yearnings for someone intimate always presented themselves, however he had his own methods of relief from that.

So it was nothing new, not noticing others noticing him. What he also didn’t notice was that someone else was watching him, and this time it had nothing to do with physical attraction.

 

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Dean Lombardo wrote 385 days ago

Hi Susan,
I read the first two chapters, and you write very well and your story is bursting with promise and even some supernatural potential. I think you are going to do well with this. Highly starred.
A few suggestions:
"memories of the girl, his love," sounds a bit melodramatic. Why not just "memories of the girl he'd loved" or "memories of the girl he loved" ?
Last two paragraphs, Chapter 1: It is my personal view that such omniscience take us out of the third person you've already established and inserts you as author too much into the story. Unless Hank is telling this whole story as a flashback and I don't think you should go that route, I think you should cut these fortune-telling last two paragraphs from Chapter 1.
Chapter 2: Consider adding first two paragraphs of Chapter 2 to the end of Chapter 1. They fit better there time-wise. Then, sStart Chapter 2 with "Excitement filled ..."
Really good, easy-to-follow writing, plotting and characterization so far. I get the sense Hank means wells/wants to do good but he doesn't understand the implications and there's going to be some chaos. I also like the references to the Persian tales and would be interested in seeing how those and any modern-day genie-like activity might fit in. Careful what you wish for, Hank.

Dean Lombardo
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