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rank 5855
word count 10761
date submitted 04.09.2008
date updated 10.02.2009
genres: Historical Fiction
classification: moderate
incomplete

Child of Aetos

Ian Saunderson

1651 - Paul is escaping following the execution of the Earl of Derby. He hides a secret about his master's death and feels responsible.

 

‘Child of Aetos’ based on real characters. It is historical fact with some fiction woven in, told from the viewpoint of Paul Morrow, secretary to James Stanley, the Seventh Earl of Derby.

The novel is written as two stories in alternating chapters. Even numbered chapters are set in the present (1651) and are written in the third person. The odd numbered chapters are the flashbacks of Paul as a first person narrator. The intention of this is to allow the reader to judge whether Paul is a reliable witness, and to assess whether he is responsible for James's death.

It resonates with themes relevant today; how individuals can motivate themselves to fight a civil war when the political order breaks down; distrust of a minority religion; a state trial and execution of a ‘war criminal’; the effect of war on individuals and families; and the policy of governments to exploit fear of a fifth column to keep the stability of the state.

 
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catholicism, charles i, earl of derby, english civil war, historical fiction, isle of man, james i, lancashire, military, war

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IDRoberts wrote 1662 days ago

Hello Ian - have just uploaded edited and new chapters for Wolff Pack http://www.authonomy.com/ViewBook.aspx?bookid=1332 but it fell off all bookshelves and watchlists! Please can you take another look and welcome it back to your bosom if you like it? Thanks Ian

Reg Plate wrote 1664 days ago

Hi Ian, recognise this from that other site. Have watchlisted and will try and get back to you soon. Best wishes, Reg (AKA Chris)

Aetos wrote 1667 days ago

The 0 ranking - could be that I've not been logging onto the site for the last few weeks. I have been completing my novel, as it is going to b published by 'You Write On'.

lucylockett wrote 1668 days ago

Ian, is there a reason you are zero ranked? I don't know what it means. If it's like a high ace, great, if it's a low one, something's gone wrong!

Best

Lucy

camellard wrote 1705 days ago

Well I never Aetos = eagle! If you google Earl Aetos this comes up in the top three. Good read Ian.

jimlattin wrote 1712 days ago

I've just read the first two chapters and think they're pretty good. The plot moves at the right pace, and there's plenty of detail to make you feel like you're in the 17th century.

lucylockett wrote 1716 days ago

Oh, I just wanted to ask, are you going to post more? Please do, I would love to get to grips a bit more with the ambiguity of Paul's narration. My unseen final was on Wuthering Heights, with the question, 'How trustworthy is Nelly Dean as a narrator?' and it's always reminded me to look at this aspect ever since (it's been a while!). Funny old world.

Lx

lucylockett wrote 1716 days ago

Hi Ian,

Well, I've read this and it's brilliant. Your knowledge of period just shines through and it's all deftly treated. The language is authentic without being laboured and everything moves naturally. The pace is not raucous, but there's a sense of the plot building on different levels. There's so much merit here, but I think Paul is your real asset. He has a lovely, distinctive voice and I already care about him. All the very best with your writing and I hope that this book achieves great things for you.

Best wishes

Lx

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