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date submitted 23.11.2009
date updated 22.05.2013
genres: Fiction, Romance, Horror, Crime
classification: moderate
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Annabella and Other Stories

Bill Carrigan

Annabella is a ghost, Annie a remarkable cat, Snell a mad scientist . . . Meet them and others on this varied palette of tales.

 

"Annabella." A playwright visits his little theater, long dark, where an explosion killed several performers. Beautiful Annabella, among them, was to become his love that fatal night. The actors materialize on the dim stage and play his play. Annabella reminds him that they have a date . . .

"Jani and the Pigeon Man." Jani, orphaned in Kosovo, finds shelter with an American couple in Nice. His parents' death left him remote and mute. Then a carrier pigeon, storm weary, rests on the couple's terrace, and its uniformed owner comes for it. Holding the bird gently, he tells Jani something that changes everything . . .

"Jekyll Generic." Miles Dawson, chemist, visits historic London houses to humor Paula, his fiancee. Finding himself in Henry Jekyll’s lab, he locates the formula for the transforming potion. He prepares some for limited trials. Paula first, then a friend accidentally drink it . . .


These and forty other stories, including several prize winners, are entered here as chapters. Read them in order or at random. See also Bill’s now-featured novel CALL HOME THE CHILD. Please comment.

 
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Dedicating Daisy

    Daisy Wayne had just checked the oven, close to noon, when she heard voices at the front door. Her younger sister stepped into the sunny kitchen. “It’s Johnny Trowbridge,” Pansy said. “He wants to see you.”

    “Mayor Trowbridge,” Daisy corrected in a hushed tone. The sisters had known Johnny since he was their pupil in elementary school. They weren’t quite used to his new role as mayor of Rockport. Removing her apron, Daisy went to see why in the world the mayor was calling on her.

    He stood in the doorway holding his straw hat in both hands. My goodness, Daisy thought, his hair is already getting thin.

    “Howdy, Miss Wayne,” he said, and glanced out through the screen. “Don’t you have a splendid breeze here.” People often remarked how well situated they were, with a fine view of the Potomac beyond the dry canal bed and the fringe of trees.

    She directed him into the parlor, the only room besides the kitchen on the first floor of the lock house, the sisters’ home since birth. Pansy stood in the doorway, and the mayor invited her to join them. When all were seated, he said, “We’re going to have a celebration this Saturday, and I’m counting on you both to be there.”

    “It was posted in the store,” said Daisy. He was always rather round, she thought, but he doesn’t look so short sitting down. 

    “Yes, we’re rewatering the canal—the part that runs past Rockport.”

    “You mean there’s going to be water in the canal again after all these years?”

    “That’s right. And water in the lock, of course, just like it was when your dad, the legendary ‘Salty’ Wayne, tended it. The Park Service will operate it now. They’ll use the barge for tourists and kids on weekends, like at Georgetown and Great Falls.”

    Pansy said, “I never thought we’d see the day. There’s been no water above Violette’s Lock since the river dams washed out in the flood of ’36.”

    “You always remember that date,” said Daisy proudly.

    Johnny Trowbridge smiled. “There’s more,” he said. “The Canal Society has donated funds for a mule. She’ll be one of a brace of mules to pull the barge.”

    “That’s nice,” said Daisy. “It will be like the old days.”

    “We’re going to dedicate her Saturday,” said the mayor.

    “The barge?”

    “No, the mule.”

    Daisy suppressed a smile. She had heard of dedicating ships and buildings, but never mules. Pansy excused herself to fetch refreshments.   

    “There’s more, Miss Wayne,” said the mayor. “We’re going to name her Daisy. We’re naming her after you, because you’ve lived on this old canal since the glory days when the barges hauled stone and coal and lumber. It’ll be an epic event. The whole town and the Canal Society will turn out, and we may even have a congressman or two.”

    She had listened patiently. “I think it’s crazy,” she said—“dedicating a mule. And just because I was born on the canal is no reason to name a mule after me. Was this your idea, Johnny Trowbridge?”

    “Now, Daisy” (as mayor, she thought, he should use her first name), “you have to take a historical view. It will be educational. We’ll get in a little Civil War history—”

    “I won’t have to give a speech, will I?” Though still dubious, she began to feel the honor of being included in the ceremony.

    “Oh, no. I’ll just introduce you and mention your life on the canal. You can say a few words if you like.”

    “It’s been a long time since I taught my classes.”

    “I’m sure you’ll do just fine.”

    Pansy came in with hot drop biscuits, jam, and coffee on the silver tray.

#

    Saturday, the first in May, was cool and clear; bright with forsythia and dogwood. Daisy and Pansy wore new spring dresses and hats. They didn’t have far to go, since the ceremony would be held at the lock—Wayne’s Lock—just a stone’s throw downstream.

    A gate would be opened, letting water fill the canal and the lock where the old barge lay. Deemed still serviceable, the barge would rise to the upper level, ready to be drawn by the mules on its token weekly journey.

    The road into Rockport was jammed, and some visitors walked blocks from their parking places, past the town’s homes, stores, and historic buildings. A high school band had come up from Harpers Ferry. Because of the nearby junction of three states, they played “Maryland, My Maryland,” “Carry Me Back to Old Virginia,” and “The West Virginia Hills.”  The only hitch was when a gust blew music off the stands.

    Daisy, Pansy, and Mayor Trowbridge stood near the massive wooden lock, facing the people. Daisy had never seen such a crowd. Suddenly struck with awful stage fright, she clutched her sister’s hand.

    Visiting dignitaries spoke. They called the Chesapeake & Ohio Canal a national treasure, an ambitious project that, if completed, would have connected the Potomac River with the Ohio, and thus the Mississippi. An inland waterway from Norfolk to New Orleans. The mayor raised his arm, and a distant aide turned a large wheel. Water rushed down the weed-grown channel. There were cheers and applause.

    Daisy began to feel better when a man arrived with her namesake, the mule. She had grown up around mules. As a child she had watered and fed them. Pa had sometimes let the girls ride them while he walked along talking with the barge captain. She stepped back to speak to the mule and stroke its nose. It followed her as she moved up between the mayor and her sister.

    Johnny Trowbridge tapped the microphone. “Ladies and gentlemen, howdy,” he said. He welcomed the distinguished visitors and introduced them one by one. Then he gave Miss Daisy Wayne a large bouquet of flowers.

    “Folks,” he said, “you’ll recognize these flowers, since most of you come from the states they represent: the black-eyed Susan, dogwood, and rhododendron.” Gusts of wind snatched at Daisy’s bouquet and wide-brimmed hat, distracting her from the mayor’s speech.

    “And now,” the mayor enthused, “I want to tell you about this wonderful gift . . . mule of fine stock and very sweet disposition . . . appropriate that we should name her Daisy, since Daisy Wayne, known to most of you, has spent her entire life on the C and O. Daisy, would you like to say a few words to these good people?”

    She gathered her wits as best she could. She had thought of one small point shed like to add.

    “This is a lot like facing a new class on the first day of school,” she said. Her voice had carried only a few feet. The mayor raised the microphone, and there was a shriek from the loudspeaker. Her next words, though, rang out clearly. “I’d just like to add one thing to what Johnny—what Mayor Trowbridge told you.” She looked at Pansy for support.

    People were starting to laugh. Nothing she had said seemed amusing, but smiles had turned gleeful. The wind tugged at her hat. Was that it? The hat in one hand, the flowers cradled in her other arm? Trying to ignore the levity, she forged on.

    “When I was born—right here on the C and O, in that old lock house yonder—Ma and Pa were looking for a name. Ma wanted to name me after her mother, but Pa . . .”

    More were laughing, children even. She was afraid shed be too nervous to continue. Most were local folks, but some were city people and she was just a country girl after all. Tow-headed Daisy and Pansy, now two old maids whod lived their entire life on a canal that dried up in 1936. Tears filled her eyes.

    “Pa won out,” she said, trying to make the best of it. “He named me Daisy—after his favorite mule.”

    More laughter. Desperately she turned to Pansy and whispered, “They’re laughing at me. I didn’t realize . . . I should never have agreed . . .”  She let go of her hat to wipe away a tear.

    Pansy looked up at her, smiling. “Honey, they’re not laughing at you. They’re laughing at the other Daisy—mule Daisy. She’s eating your flowers!”

    Bewildered, Daisy turned to look, then covered her surprised grin. To wild applause, she slowly drew a black-eyed Susan from the bundle and offered it to her co-star.

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PATRICK BARRETT wrote 1138 days ago

Bill - these short stories are beautifully written and you certainly have a way of capturing the reader like a spider does a fly. The plots are perfectly laid out and the characters so life-like. You are certainly talented and your book made for a very enjoyable read. Backed with pleasure - congratulations on a great book - Paula - How mean is my Valley?

Jason Morte wrote 1025 days ago

Very professionally done. Polished as well as anything on this site. I've read Annabella so far (it reminded me of Hemingway's early shorts) and plan to read more. I love short stories because the reader doesn't have to sit through hours and hours of reading in order to get to the end. In this day of short attention spans, you'd think that short stories would become popular again. Sadly, however, the short is almost a dead art. Aside from you, me, and a couple of others, nobody on this site seems to do short stories. I enjoy yours immensely and endorse them with pleasure. Nicely done.

andrew skaife wrote 1021 days ago

A highly crafted piece of writing and the very definition of writing that is polished, sculpted and ready for publication.

BACKED

Sly80 wrote 1237 days ago

Checked the other two stories you suggested, Bill.

21 Losing it: 'To spare her from a lifetime of hardship without him' I snorted with laughter there ... such irony. In fact, you manage to make the whole messy business funny given how useless McHenry is. The humour vanishes when O'Rourke appears. This is a man not to be messed with. But even he is tempted by wealth and beauty. Fate deals well with both men. (Some formatting problems, but that's authonomy for you.)

27 Pillar of Truth: This one just had me totally enthralled from the get-go. Clever plotting with another satisfying ending, though not without some cost to the MC. You describe the underworld and corruption exceedingly well.

Popping Annabella and Other Stories on my shelf for a while.

Christine May wrote 30 days ago

Bill, I have read many of your short stories, One through seven, twenty one and twenty seven. What is so interesting is that they are all very different. This book will keep me entertained for a long time.
I still think we have met in Orlando at an Art show.
Christine

Christine May wrote 42 days ago

Hi Bill,
I read your first two short stories. The first a work of art, the second delightful.
will return.
Christine
I added a sixth story if you are interested.

Susanna Clayson wrote 50 days ago

Just a great collection of stories that gripped me from the start. Very well written and crafted. You deserve to get these in print. Best of luck

Susanna

Susanna Clayson wrote 50 days ago

Just a great collection of stories that gripped me from the start. Very well written and crafted. You deserve to get these in print. Best of luck

Susanna

Seringapatam wrote 92 days ago

Bill, Spot on. Not my genre and not what I would read at all. With that said, I loved it. You have a fantastic hypnotic narrative voice here that dragged me right into this book from the word go and smacked me all over the book before spitting me out when I had to put it down before I lost my job! So well done for this. Magic pace, flow, descriptive voice, stick to this genre at all costs. Loved it and big score.
Sean Connolly. British Army on the Rampage. (B.A.O.R) Please consider me for a read or watch list wont you? Many thanks. Sean

Andrea Taylor wrote 99 days ago

Beautifully written, very elegant, mature writing, stories that hold the attention; what more can the reader ask.
Thoroughly enjoyable and no criticisms at all.
Andrea
The de Amerley Affair
I'd appreciate a return read if you have time

Cyrus Hood wrote 262 days ago

Great stuff- just the right length

Mark

Cyrus Hood wrote 262 days ago

Hello Bill,
Actually Annabella reminded me of Capote, the style is entirely right for the genre and the pace measured- a well crafted piece. Only one niggle 'the foreboding alley' doesn't quite work for me but that is probably down to the language that separates us. Nice writing.
onto the next one....
regards

Mark

julia rush wrote 268 days ago

Dear Bill:

A very charming story about Annabelle. I think Annabelle and you could sustain a novel or novella. I was enchanted by your descriptions of the theater and acting and the the beautiful actress. I am starring and I will try to shelve if the system will let me. Good Writing! Good Luck!

Simone Marie
My Rhapsody

celticwriter wrote 585 days ago

Hi Bill, re backing this delightful work.

blessings!
jim

klouholmes wrote 789 days ago

Hi Bill, The stories I've read so far, Annabella and Born Again, are fantastic. The atmosphere is so well established in both and then the unexpected happens, putting another dimension on that atmosphere. I recommend Born Again, number 5, to anyone else who doesn't know what it's about - the conflict, debate, and revenge between a scientist who drowns rats in experiments and an animal activist. It's really well-written from the scientific point, I think, and an excellent read. I'm shelving because I'd like to read more of these, a few at a time. Katherine (The House in Windward Leaves, The Swan Bonnet)

kendra ann ziems wrote 794 days ago

i would have to say the same as some of the other comments; beautifully written, well crafted, polished. going on my bookshelf! if you have time would appreciate any input on my book that you could give.

Benjamin Dancer wrote 934 days ago

I'm taking notes as I read 32. I'll post them once I'm done so you can see my reaction to the story.

The no feet makes a great hook for this story.

The tension is great. I'm on the delivering of the baby to his wife--and the unanswered question about the feet holds suspense.

I hang on every word of this story.

When we get to the mother's possible ancestry--the opening suddenly clicks--her reluctance.

I loved the Colt 45.

Fine ending. Good story about decent people who mess their own lives up like every decent person does. The weight of it, its implications for the mother. The empathy. Really solid piece.

A couple more notes in your messages.

Pia wrote 936 days ago

Bill -

Annabella and Other Stories - Oh you are right, this collection of yours was neglegted. I loved Doctor of Summitville, one of the first books I read here. But with these short stories you do something different. They are jewels, brilliantly deep. Tonight I enjoyed no 35, Salesmanship, a random choice. I was in fits ... I thought of panties but decided not to press my luck ... subtle, erotic, ironic, and the twist at the end, such skill. Your wit is delightful. This goes on my WL - to be sitting soon on my shelf, for some time, because I now have an appetite to read the whole collection of stories ... Pia ;)

paperbat wrote 1014 days ago

Wow. Some marvellous short stories. Where do you get your great ideas from? Annie is certainly a remarkable cat! Your on my shelf as I read more of the stories.
PAPERBAT

andrew skaife wrote 1021 days ago

A highly crafted piece of writing and the very definition of writing that is polished, sculpted and ready for publication.

BACKED

Jason Morte wrote 1025 days ago

Very professionally done. Polished as well as anything on this site. I've read Annabella so far (it reminded me of Hemingway's early shorts) and plan to read more. I love short stories because the reader doesn't have to sit through hours and hours of reading in order to get to the end. In this day of short attention spans, you'd think that short stories would become popular again. Sadly, however, the short is almost a dead art. Aside from you, me, and a couple of others, nobody on this site seems to do short stories. I enjoy yours immensely and endorse them with pleasure. Nicely done.

mvw888 wrote 1060 days ago

Hello Bill,

I think that I have been to your page now three different times, to read three different books. We seem to travel the same routes here on authonomy...often I see your name when I'm visiting a book I like and of course, thrice now I have been circuited back here. And I always find good books on your shelf.

This is another example of expert prose. I wanted to applaud out loud your use of -- in the first paragraph. Time and again I caution against its use (perhaps a personal bias but I just can't see justification for it in most cases). Here, a perfect usage. Your tone here is so different from what I remember from your other work (Dr of Summitville?); more wistful, almost elegaic ("as I had done before Hell opened, when she promised to be mine"). And of course, poetic at times, perfectly matching the theme of theater in stanzas and perhaps lost love... Wonderful, humbling writing.

---Mary
The Qualities of Wood

Marija F.Sullivan wrote 1060 days ago

I read Ch.17 as you suggested. Very warm story, beautifully told. The story of home coming pidgeon reflected the destiny of the poor child. Strong writing voice plus a great story, the winning combination.
Backed with very best wishes,
M
- Weekend Chimney Sweep
- Sarajevo Walls of Fate

Maria K. wrote 1067 days ago

Bill this sounds right up my alley! Backing and putting on my book shelf. Reminds me of the not-scary-but-spooky-yet-lovely ghost stories of old, like Priestley's story of Jenny Villiers.

Rosemary Peel wrote 1081 days ago

Read Annabella and Annie. Will, if I get time, which is unbelievably scare now that I've found authonomy, I will return to read more. Enjoyed both stories. A very nice read. Best of luck with the book.

Su Dan wrote 1119 days ago

i love short stories and these do not disapoint. the first two i read are nicely compact and read well...omn my watchlist...
su dan...[read SEASONS]

Kidd1 wrote 1131 days ago

Wonderfully compelling and imaginative stories that show a masterful grasp of the short story genre. Well written in a unique voice. Backed.

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 1138 days ago

Bill - these short stories are beautifully written and you certainly have a way of capturing the reader like a spider does a fly. The plots are perfectly laid out and the characters so life-like. You are certainly talented and your book made for a very enjoyable read. Backed with pleasure - congratulations on a great book - Paula - How mean is my Valley?

SusieGulick wrote 1157 days ago

Dear Bill, Well, I backed your other 2 books, but can't find where I backed this one. It is very excellently written, just like your other 2. I love that you use rhyme, dialogue, & short paragraphs for an easy read. Could you please take a moment to BACK my unedited version, "Tell Me True Love Stories." Thanks, Susie :)

Salude El Dia wrote 1229 days ago

Let's see, I read #34, "Rube's Revenge", and #19, "Lenz's Way". Both very different, both well-written, with #19 something of a surprise, with seemingly in-depth knowledge of the state of "atomic" research in the 1950's. Pleasant surprise, displaying the type of versatility of subject that most authors only dream about. Backed.

Sly80 wrote 1237 days ago

Checked the other two stories you suggested, Bill.

21 Losing it: 'To spare her from a lifetime of hardship without him' I snorted with laughter there ... such irony. In fact, you manage to make the whole messy business funny given how useless McHenry is. The humour vanishes when O'Rourke appears. This is a man not to be messed with. But even he is tempted by wealth and beauty. Fate deals well with both men. (Some formatting problems, but that's authonomy for you.)

27 Pillar of Truth: This one just had me totally enthralled from the get-go. Clever plotting with another satisfying ending, though not without some cost to the MC. You describe the underworld and corruption exceedingly well.

Popping Annabella and Other Stories on my shelf for a while.

Linda L. wrote 1264 days ago

I am impressed with the three stories I read. The first, Annabella, is eerie. (I noticed the name of the narrator isn't until mid-story. Did you want it that way?) The Good Times's Robert is, in my opinion, not likeable but definitely interesting, and the witty dialogue kept the story moving. Rovers had two sympathetic characters and even though it takes place in the Great Depression, I think it say a lot about our times today. Excellent work. Backed.

DDickson wrote 1264 days ago

Really smashing - I was enthralled and a little puzzled which is I am sure is the absolute reaction that you would look for with a ghost story. Very well written which makes it very easy to read. I congratulate you and pop you on my shelf. good luck with this - Diane (3 things that might have happened) Could I be a little forward and suggest that if you have time to look at my work you look at two or three - I think that they may appeal to you more than one and I have had a lot of very helpful feedback already for James. Thank you .

John Booth wrote 1265 days ago

Hi Bill,
I read Annabella and Salesmanship. They were superb - shelved.

I can't help you with either as I thought they were brilliant.

John

Jupiter Echoes wrote 1271 days ago

Short stories are so difficult to pull off, yet you do so beautifully. All have a life of their own... well, the three i read anyway. You bring characters to life and carry us along at a good pace.

BACKED

Clare Hill wrote 1274 days ago

I read Salesmanship, Puppy Love and A Place For Discord. I agree with Andrew, the characterisation in these stories is superb, as is the dialogue. In Puppy Love, Terra is a puppy - you make me believe. The guy in Salesmanship was a bit sleazy but I still felt kind of sorry for him. In A Place For Discord you capture so many levels, from their developing relationship to the disagreements in wider society about the war. Discord has its place, indeed, as do these stories: on my shelf.
Nitpick: Discord (28) has some formatting issues, some of the text is grey.

Andrew W. wrote 1277 days ago

Annabella and Other Stories

Hi Bill,

These are very different from each other, I have read three now and what impresses me is the characterisation. The dialogue is well handled, these people speak in a way that is not only natural but adds a dimensionality to their personality as much by what is not said as what is. Your also have a gentle and considered way of putting us in this place, nothing showy or pretentious, but lines like the fireflies couldn't quite wait for sunset conveys much about the air temperature, the light levels and the scene generally. Accomplished and enjoyable writing, Stephen King once described a short story as a quick kiss in the dark from a stranger, I think that's what you've given us here, a surprising and pleasant experience that leaves us thinking about it long after it is over. Best wishes and good luck with these.

Andrew W
(Sanctuary's Loss)

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