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word count 97340
date submitted 23.11.2009
date updated 06.04.2013
genres: Fiction, Romance, Horror, Crime
classification: moderate
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Annabella and Other Stories

Bill Carrigan

Annabella is a ghost, Annie a remarkable cat, Snell a mad scientist . . . Meet them and others on this varied palette of tales.

 

"Annabella." A playwright visits his little theater, long dark, where an explosion killed several performers. Beautiful Annabella, among them, was to become his love that fatal night. The actors materialize on the dim stage and play his play. Annabella reminds him that they have a date . . .

"Jani and the Pigeon Man." Jani, orphaned in Kosovo, finds shelter with an American couple in Nice. His parents' death left him remote and mute. Then a carrier pigeon, storm weary, rests on the couple's terrace, and its uniformed owner comes for it. Holding the bird gently, he tells Jani something that changes everything . . .

"Jekyll Generic." Miles Dawson, chemist, visits historic London houses to humor Paula, his fiancee. Finding himself in Henry Jekyll’s lab, he locates the formula for the transforming potion. He prepares some for limited trials. Paula first, then a friend accidentally drink it . . .


These and forty other stories, including several prize winners, are entered here as chapters. Read them in order or at random. See also Bill’s now-featured novel CALL HOME THE CHILD. Please comment.

 
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A Machine to Save the World

 

    Clifford Bacon was working on his invention when the kid came into the garage and shuffled up to the workbench. Glancing aside, Cliff confirmed that he was Joel Woolsey from across the street—the kid Bobby called a couch potato because he watched TV a lot. Cliff was glad his son, just turned twelve, preferred the outdoors.

    Joel stood quietly and gazed at the model. Presently he said, “Why do you need that big magnifying glass to see the tin can?”

    “It’s not to see with,” said Cliff, pleased to explain the apparatus. “It focuses the sun’s rays on the can. That’s the boiler. Water in the boiler turns to steam, which drives the engine to spin the generator. So the engine runs on the sun’s heat. We’re in Florida, right?—the Sunshine State.”

    “What’s a generator?” The boy’s thick lips seemed to pout, furthering the impression that he spoke in doubt or contempt.

    “It makes electricity,” said Cliff. “The electricity charges the battery.”

    “Why?”

    “It’s a storage battery. So we can have lights at night.”

    Joel looked puzzled. Cliff thought he might not have grasped that the device was just a model, that a full-size one would light a city. He picked up the board that served as a base and went outside to a picnic table in the full sun. He heard his wife, Eunice, talking on the kitchen phone, and saw his neighbor, Muriel Wood, trying to start her lawnmower. With Joel standing by, he resisted an impulse to offer Muriel his help.

    Cliff filled the boiler with water and turned the glass to collect the sun’s rays. The engine soon took off at high speed. He checked to make sure the battery was charging. When he looked up, Joel was walking away and Muriel was standing beside her mower in obvious frustration.

    He had noted that she wore a white halter and turned-up blue shorts, displaying a figure befitting a movie star. Strands of honey-colored hair had eluded the ponytail and clung to her moist cheek. She placed a shapely leg on the mower platform, bent over to grasp the handle, and gave the cord another futile tug. Cliff strolled over and asked if she had checked the fuel.

    “No,” she said with exasperation. “Fred told me it was ready to use before he left this morning.” She raised a tag end of the halter to wipe sweat from her chin.

    “Sometimes they won’t start on grass,” he said. “Let’s try it on the driveway.”

    She went along as he pushed the mower to a flat cement surface. He started the motor with a single pull.

    “Oh, Cliff, you’re so clever,” she said, smiling gratefully, and took off across the lawn. The sight inspired a sigh. It might be coincidental, but she often seemed to be outside when he was. She must know how enticing she looked in her costume.

    As he stood watching her, Eunice called him from the kitchen window. The solar engine was still running. He tilted the lens out of line with the sun lest the boiler run dry, then went inside with a backward glance. Muriel waved as she steered the self-propelled mower around a tree.

    “What was her problem?” said Eunice, doing kitchen things.

    “Couldn’t get the mower started.”

    “Yeah, right.”

    He tried to draw his wife to him, but she pushed him aside and opened the refrigerator. Twelve years on a short leash, he thought. Ten of those in the suburban doldrums of Jacksonville, where he had finally become a branch chief in the IRS regional office. He deserved a break.

    He went into the living room and wrested a pillow from Bobby, who was about to pommel nine-year-old Shirley. It was time to make a move. Time to expand his life through the fame and fortune he hoped to gain in a noble cause.

    The phones rang. Cliff and Eunice answered simultaneously.

    “Is Mr. Bacon there?” said a woman’s voice. When Cliff responded, she said, “You called for an appointment with Mr. Sobel, patent attorney. Mr. Sobel will be available tomorrow at ten, if that’s convenient for you.”

    “Ten’s fine,” said Cliff. He heard Eunice hang up the other phone.

 

 

    The following morning Cliff called his office to say he’d be late and prepared to visit the lawyer. He considered whether to take the model. Would it be misleading? While it only approximated the product he foresaw, it should do as an illustration, especially if there was a window facing east. He placed the model in the SUV and headed downtown.

    The traffic was still heavy at 9:30 A.M., and Cliff was unable to pass a truck that intermittently belched fumes. Waiting at a light, he contemplated the shimmering pollutants—CO, CO2, hydrocarbons. And he pictured a city with clean air, when vehicles, thanks to his invention, would run on alcohol produced with solar energy. Clifford Bacon had a mission.

    Not to say, of course, that he was a bona fide inventor. Seated in the lawyer’s outer office, he felt a bit ridiculous. Most inventors today were engineers who worked for corporations, or at least came here with professional models or diagrams. How would the young receptionist view him, clearly an amateur, with this homemade contraption on his lap? He longed to explain that it represented a practical industrial system, to run solely on wasted energy, pollutant free. A machine to save the world.

    Paul Sobel, around forty, probably no older than Cliff, obviously lived a soft life. Untold calories misspent. Cliff placed the model on a chair to grip a pudgy hand.

    “If you raise that blind,” he said, “we can have a demonstration.” The lawyer obliged, sunlight poured in, and shortly the engine sprang to life. Sobel sat down and listened to Cliff’s explanation. Then he rose again and closed the blind, causing the engine to slow down and stop. He barely looked at it, Cliff noticed. For a patent lawyer, he showed damn little interest in a mechanical marvel.

    “I hate to rain on your parade,” Sobel said, “but there’s nothing here that’s patentable. Lens, steam engine, power pack. And I’m sure you’re aware of other ways to turn sunlight into current.” He shoved a small calculator, presumably light operated, across the desk. “In fact, a firm we represent makes a solar furnace that generates five thousand degrees.”

    “There’s more to it,” said Cliff. “Instead of a magnifying glass, picture a dome with many lenses focused on the boiler. Stationary. No energy needed to track the sun as the earth revolves.”

    Sobel shrugged. “What firm would handle it without patents?”

    “There’s more. Fill the boiler with sea water. Salt-free steam drives the piston. After each thrust, the steam escapes into a condenser using cold sea water as a coolant.”

    “So? What’s that get you?”

    “Drinking water,” he said with animation. “The Bacon Generator-Distiller solves three huge problems: energy, water shortage, and global warming.”

    Sobel folded his hands, appearing to give it thought. Had he seen that the whole was greater than the sum of the parts? Wasn’t that a recognized principle in patent law?

    “It would be a hard sell,” said the lawyer. “You’re bucking oil, coal, and nuke. Who’d take it on?”

    “Maybe the government,” said Cliff hopefully.

    “You’re dreaming. There’d be swarms of lobbiests to block it. But you might wangle a grant from the NSF or EPA to build a pilot, say big enough to light a public building.”

    “I’ll look into it.”

    “If it works out, I’ll be glad to register your trade mark.”

    “Thanks, Sobel. Send me a bill for your time.”

     “Oh, I will. Sorry I can’t be of more help.”

 

 

    Cliff took the lawyer’s advice and wrote to the National Science Foundation and the Environmental Protection Agency. Several days later he received letters enclosing application forms for grants. Applications to compete with Ph.D.’s in vast research laboratories. And both agencies warned that funds for development were severely limited.

    He brooded. Even if he got a grant, there was no way he could produce a convincing prototype. It would mean taking time from work, hiring engineers, leasing land . . . Too big for a little guy to pull off.

    So the dream faded. The model languished in the Bacons’ garage. Cliff tried not to be discouraged, but clearly saw that fossil fuels and uranium would hold the day. Only when VIPs were thirsty or choking would energy—clean, free energy—be drawn from the bountiful sun.

 

 

    Days passed. Eunice decided to visit her parents for two weeks, taking the children. Cliff drove them to the airport.

    On returning home, he saw Muriel take a potted plant from the trunk of her car. It looked like she might need assistance. But he heard a lawnmower and saw her husband follow it around a corner of the house. Muriel tried to open the screen door holding the plant, and Fred cut the motor to help. Then he sauntered over to chat with Cliff.

    “Where you been keeping yourself?”

    “Still at IRS plucking the geese. How about you?”

    “Same old same old. Decided to take two weeks off.”

    Muriel had reappeared at the back door, apparently to linger and watch them. Her hair was loose today, touching her shoulders. She wore a T-shirt and jeans, simple attire sending complex signals. Cliff made a point not to look as he talked with Fred. How could such a dolt have such a doll?

    His eyes met hers for a moment.

    She shrugged.

    What did it mean? Fred’s taken over the lawn care. Or, sorry, I’m pinned down for the duration. To ask would be awkward, maybe embarrassing. He’d probably never know.

    As he was about to go inside, Joel’s father, Ed Woolsey, lumbered up the driveway. He apparently wanted to talk but took his time. Like his son, he was chubby, shapeless, a balloon going flat. He wore a baseball cap, and the legs below short pants were white and knobby. Cliff had heard he sold life insurance.

    They exchanged greetings, platitudes. Long time no see. Everybody’s up to their neck these days; might as well be living in different states. Then: “Joel tells me you’re quite an inventor.”

    “Really? I showed him a model.”

    “He tells me it makes electricity from sunlight.” Was that a question? Woolsey tilted his head a little, squinting against the evening sun. Perhaps he meant to convey admiration. What did he want?

    “Joel’s slipping in school,” he went on. “Did poorly last winter. We enrolled him in special classes so he could go to the next grade in September. Well, he’s got this science project to do, and they want the parents to get involved. I’m a real klutz with these things. Thought you might lend him your model.”

    “Lend it?” said Cliff, scratching his head. “I don’t know. It’s hardly something Joel could have thought up himself, much less built.”

    “Sure, I know that. Me neither. But you’ve seen these assignments they come up with. We borrow books from the library and sweat it out. There’s not a kid in that class could count frogs’ eggs without their parents’ help.”

    “Well, why don’t we take a look and see what you think. See if you’d really want to pass it off as something Joel did.”

    They went into the garage, and Cliff explained the apparatus. Woolsey touched the rim of the magnifying glass. “This really makes enough heat to boil water?”

    “Joel saw it run.”

    “He told me. I think this would do fine. We’d only need to borrow it for a week or two. We’ll print up a sign to explain it. What do you suggest we say?”

    “Oh . . . maybe, ‘Solar Power: Our Gift from the Sun.’ Something like that.”

     “Hey, that’s great. They’ll love it. You mind if I just take your model with me?”

    Cliff watched him plod down the driveway bearing the planet’s best hope. Maybe someone with powerful connections would see Joel’s exhibit and promote the idea. Fat chance. They’d probably own shares in Exxon or General Electric.    

    Facing an evening alone, he decided to drive to Jack’s Bar & Grill for a beer and a cheeseburger. Maybe watch the game on television. Maybe get drunk.

 

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PATRICK BARRETT wrote 1132 days ago

Bill - these short stories are beautifully written and you certainly have a way of capturing the reader like a spider does a fly. The plots are perfectly laid out and the characters so life-like. You are certainly talented and your book made for a very enjoyable read. Backed with pleasure - congratulations on a great book - Paula - How mean is my Valley?

Jason Morte wrote 1018 days ago

Very professionally done. Polished as well as anything on this site. I've read Annabella so far (it reminded me of Hemingway's early shorts) and plan to read more. I love short stories because the reader doesn't have to sit through hours and hours of reading in order to get to the end. In this day of short attention spans, you'd think that short stories would become popular again. Sadly, however, the short is almost a dead art. Aside from you, me, and a couple of others, nobody on this site seems to do short stories. I enjoy yours immensely and endorse them with pleasure. Nicely done.

andrew skaife wrote 1015 days ago

A highly crafted piece of writing and the very definition of writing that is polished, sculpted and ready for publication.

BACKED

Sly80 wrote 1231 days ago

Checked the other two stories you suggested, Bill.

21 Losing it: 'To spare her from a lifetime of hardship without him' I snorted with laughter there ... such irony. In fact, you manage to make the whole messy business funny given how useless McHenry is. The humour vanishes when O'Rourke appears. This is a man not to be messed with. But even he is tempted by wealth and beauty. Fate deals well with both men. (Some formatting problems, but that's authonomy for you.)

27 Pillar of Truth: This one just had me totally enthralled from the get-go. Clever plotting with another satisfying ending, though not without some cost to the MC. You describe the underworld and corruption exceedingly well.

Popping Annabella and Other Stories on my shelf for a while.

Christine May wrote 24 days ago

Bill, I have read many of your short stories, One through seven, twenty one and twenty seven. What is so interesting is that they are all very different. This book will keep me entertained for a long time.
I still think we have met in Orlando at an Art show.
Christine

Christine May wrote 36 days ago

Hi Bill,
I read your first two short stories. The first a work of art, the second delightful.
will return.
Christine
I added a sixth story if you are interested.

Susanna Clayson wrote 43 days ago

Just a great collection of stories that gripped me from the start. Very well written and crafted. You deserve to get these in print. Best of luck

Susanna

Susanna Clayson wrote 44 days ago

Just a great collection of stories that gripped me from the start. Very well written and crafted. You deserve to get these in print. Best of luck

Susanna

Seringapatam wrote 86 days ago

Bill, Spot on. Not my genre and not what I would read at all. With that said, I loved it. You have a fantastic hypnotic narrative voice here that dragged me right into this book from the word go and smacked me all over the book before spitting me out when I had to put it down before I lost my job! So well done for this. Magic pace, flow, descriptive voice, stick to this genre at all costs. Loved it and big score.
Sean Connolly. British Army on the Rampage. (B.A.O.R) Please consider me for a read or watch list wont you? Many thanks. Sean

Andrea Taylor wrote 93 days ago

Beautifully written, very elegant, mature writing, stories that hold the attention; what more can the reader ask.
Thoroughly enjoyable and no criticisms at all.
Andrea
The de Amerley Affair
I'd appreciate a return read if you have time

Cyrus Hood wrote 256 days ago

Great stuff- just the right length

Mark

Cyrus Hood wrote 256 days ago

Hello Bill,
Actually Annabella reminded me of Capote, the style is entirely right for the genre and the pace measured- a well crafted piece. Only one niggle 'the foreboding alley' doesn't quite work for me but that is probably down to the language that separates us. Nice writing.
onto the next one....
regards

Mark

julia rush wrote 262 days ago

Dear Bill:

A very charming story about Annabelle. I think Annabelle and you could sustain a novel or novella. I was enchanted by your descriptions of the theater and acting and the the beautiful actress. I am starring and I will try to shelve if the system will let me. Good Writing! Good Luck!

Simone Marie
My Rhapsody

celticwriter wrote 579 days ago

Hi Bill, re backing this delightful work.

blessings!
jim

klouholmes wrote 783 days ago

Hi Bill, The stories I've read so far, Annabella and Born Again, are fantastic. The atmosphere is so well established in both and then the unexpected happens, putting another dimension on that atmosphere. I recommend Born Again, number 5, to anyone else who doesn't know what it's about - the conflict, debate, and revenge between a scientist who drowns rats in experiments and an animal activist. It's really well-written from the scientific point, I think, and an excellent read. I'm shelving because I'd like to read more of these, a few at a time. Katherine (The House in Windward Leaves, The Swan Bonnet)

kendra ann ziems wrote 788 days ago

i would have to say the same as some of the other comments; beautifully written, well crafted, polished. going on my bookshelf! if you have time would appreciate any input on my book that you could give.

Benjamin Dancer wrote 928 days ago

I'm taking notes as I read 32. I'll post them once I'm done so you can see my reaction to the story.

The no feet makes a great hook for this story.

The tension is great. I'm on the delivering of the baby to his wife--and the unanswered question about the feet holds suspense.

I hang on every word of this story.

When we get to the mother's possible ancestry--the opening suddenly clicks--her reluctance.

I loved the Colt 45.

Fine ending. Good story about decent people who mess their own lives up like every decent person does. The weight of it, its implications for the mother. The empathy. Really solid piece.

A couple more notes in your messages.

Pia wrote 930 days ago

Bill -

Annabella and Other Stories - Oh you are right, this collection of yours was neglegted. I loved Doctor of Summitville, one of the first books I read here. But with these short stories you do something different. They are jewels, brilliantly deep. Tonight I enjoyed no 35, Salesmanship, a random choice. I was in fits ... I thought of panties but decided not to press my luck ... subtle, erotic, ironic, and the twist at the end, such skill. Your wit is delightful. This goes on my WL - to be sitting soon on my shelf, for some time, because I now have an appetite to read the whole collection of stories ... Pia ;)

paperbat wrote 1008 days ago

Wow. Some marvellous short stories. Where do you get your great ideas from? Annie is certainly a remarkable cat! Your on my shelf as I read more of the stories.
PAPERBAT

andrew skaife wrote 1015 days ago

A highly crafted piece of writing and the very definition of writing that is polished, sculpted and ready for publication.

BACKED

Jason Morte wrote 1018 days ago

Very professionally done. Polished as well as anything on this site. I've read Annabella so far (it reminded me of Hemingway's early shorts) and plan to read more. I love short stories because the reader doesn't have to sit through hours and hours of reading in order to get to the end. In this day of short attention spans, you'd think that short stories would become popular again. Sadly, however, the short is almost a dead art. Aside from you, me, and a couple of others, nobody on this site seems to do short stories. I enjoy yours immensely and endorse them with pleasure. Nicely done.

mvw888 wrote 1053 days ago

Hello Bill,

I think that I have been to your page now three different times, to read three different books. We seem to travel the same routes here on authonomy...often I see your name when I'm visiting a book I like and of course, thrice now I have been circuited back here. And I always find good books on your shelf.

This is another example of expert prose. I wanted to applaud out loud your use of -- in the first paragraph. Time and again I caution against its use (perhaps a personal bias but I just can't see justification for it in most cases). Here, a perfect usage. Your tone here is so different from what I remember from your other work (Dr of Summitville?); more wistful, almost elegaic ("as I had done before Hell opened, when she promised to be mine"). And of course, poetic at times, perfectly matching the theme of theater in stanzas and perhaps lost love... Wonderful, humbling writing.

---Mary
The Qualities of Wood

Marija F.Sullivan wrote 1054 days ago

I read Ch.17 as you suggested. Very warm story, beautifully told. The story of home coming pidgeon reflected the destiny of the poor child. Strong writing voice plus a great story, the winning combination.
Backed with very best wishes,
M
- Weekend Chimney Sweep
- Sarajevo Walls of Fate

Maria K. wrote 1061 days ago

Bill this sounds right up my alley! Backing and putting on my book shelf. Reminds me of the not-scary-but-spooky-yet-lovely ghost stories of old, like Priestley's story of Jenny Villiers.

Rosemary Peel wrote 1075 days ago

Read Annabella and Annie. Will, if I get time, which is unbelievably scare now that I've found authonomy, I will return to read more. Enjoyed both stories. A very nice read. Best of luck with the book.

Su Dan wrote 1113 days ago

i love short stories and these do not disapoint. the first two i read are nicely compact and read well...omn my watchlist...
su dan...[read SEASONS]

Kidd1 wrote 1125 days ago

Wonderfully compelling and imaginative stories that show a masterful grasp of the short story genre. Well written in a unique voice. Backed.

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 1132 days ago

Bill - these short stories are beautifully written and you certainly have a way of capturing the reader like a spider does a fly. The plots are perfectly laid out and the characters so life-like. You are certainly talented and your book made for a very enjoyable read. Backed with pleasure - congratulations on a great book - Paula - How mean is my Valley?

SusieGulick wrote 1150 days ago

Dear Bill, Well, I backed your other 2 books, but can't find where I backed this one. It is very excellently written, just like your other 2. I love that you use rhyme, dialogue, & short paragraphs for an easy read. Could you please take a moment to BACK my unedited version, "Tell Me True Love Stories." Thanks, Susie :)

Salude El Dia wrote 1222 days ago

Let's see, I read #34, "Rube's Revenge", and #19, "Lenz's Way". Both very different, both well-written, with #19 something of a surprise, with seemingly in-depth knowledge of the state of "atomic" research in the 1950's. Pleasant surprise, displaying the type of versatility of subject that most authors only dream about. Backed.

Sly80 wrote 1231 days ago

Checked the other two stories you suggested, Bill.

21 Losing it: 'To spare her from a lifetime of hardship without him' I snorted with laughter there ... such irony. In fact, you manage to make the whole messy business funny given how useless McHenry is. The humour vanishes when O'Rourke appears. This is a man not to be messed with. But even he is tempted by wealth and beauty. Fate deals well with both men. (Some formatting problems, but that's authonomy for you.)

27 Pillar of Truth: This one just had me totally enthralled from the get-go. Clever plotting with another satisfying ending, though not without some cost to the MC. You describe the underworld and corruption exceedingly well.

Popping Annabella and Other Stories on my shelf for a while.

Linda L. wrote 1258 days ago

I am impressed with the three stories I read. The first, Annabella, is eerie. (I noticed the name of the narrator isn't until mid-story. Did you want it that way?) The Good Times's Robert is, in my opinion, not likeable but definitely interesting, and the witty dialogue kept the story moving. Rovers had two sympathetic characters and even though it takes place in the Great Depression, I think it say a lot about our times today. Excellent work. Backed.

DDickson wrote 1258 days ago

Really smashing - I was enthralled and a little puzzled which is I am sure is the absolute reaction that you would look for with a ghost story. Very well written which makes it very easy to read. I congratulate you and pop you on my shelf. good luck with this - Diane (3 things that might have happened) Could I be a little forward and suggest that if you have time to look at my work you look at two or three - I think that they may appeal to you more than one and I have had a lot of very helpful feedback already for James. Thank you .

John Booth wrote 1259 days ago

Hi Bill,
I read Annabella and Salesmanship. They were superb - shelved.

I can't help you with either as I thought they were brilliant.

John

Jupiter Echoes wrote 1265 days ago

Short stories are so difficult to pull off, yet you do so beautifully. All have a life of their own... well, the three i read anyway. You bring characters to life and carry us along at a good pace.

BACKED

Clare Hill wrote 1268 days ago

I read Salesmanship, Puppy Love and A Place For Discord. I agree with Andrew, the characterisation in these stories is superb, as is the dialogue. In Puppy Love, Terra is a puppy - you make me believe. The guy in Salesmanship was a bit sleazy but I still felt kind of sorry for him. In A Place For Discord you capture so many levels, from their developing relationship to the disagreements in wider society about the war. Discord has its place, indeed, as do these stories: on my shelf.
Nitpick: Discord (28) has some formatting issues, some of the text is grey.

Andrew W. wrote 1270 days ago

Annabella and Other Stories

Hi Bill,

These are very different from each other, I have read three now and what impresses me is the characterisation. The dialogue is well handled, these people speak in a way that is not only natural but adds a dimensionality to their personality as much by what is not said as what is. Your also have a gentle and considered way of putting us in this place, nothing showy or pretentious, but lines like the fireflies couldn't quite wait for sunset conveys much about the air temperature, the light levels and the scene generally. Accomplished and enjoyable writing, Stephen King once described a short story as a quick kiss in the dark from a stranger, I think that's what you've given us here, a surprising and pleasant experience that leaves us thinking about it long after it is over. Best wishes and good luck with these.

Andrew W
(Sanctuary's Loss)

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