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word count 97445
date submitted 23.11.2009
date updated 22.05.2013
genres: Fiction, Romance, Horror, Crime
classification: moderate
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Annabella and Other Stories

Bill Carrigan

Annabella is a ghost, Annie a remarkable cat, Snell a mad scientist . . . Meet them and others on this varied palette of tales.

 

"Annabella." A playwright visits his little theater, long dark, where an explosion killed several performers. Beautiful Annabella, among them, was to become his love that fatal night. The actors materialize on the dim stage and play his play. Annabella reminds him that they have a date . . .

"Jani and the Pigeon Man." Jani, orphaned in Kosovo, finds shelter with an American couple in Nice. His parents' death left him remote and mute. Then a carrier pigeon, storm weary, rests on the couple's terrace, and its uniformed owner comes for it. Holding the bird gently, he tells Jani something that changes everything . . .

"Jekyll Generic." Miles Dawson, chemist, visits historic London houses to humor Paula, his fiancee. Finding himself in Henry Jekyll’s lab, he locates the formula for the transforming potion. He prepares some for limited trials. Paula first, then a friend accidentally drink it . . .


These and forty other stories, including several prize winners, are entered here as chapters. Read them in order or at random. See also Bill’s now-featured novel CALL HOME THE CHILD. Please comment.

 
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    She saw through the front-door window that the young man who had knocked wore a uniform. What did he want? All morning long shed seen men driving by, some with their families. They were leaving the citydriven out, the radio said. Riots, clashes with police. And she all alone today . . . Still, he looked safe, decent, though much in need of a shave. Maybe just crack the door on the chain . . .

    “Excuse me, ma’am. Could I trouble you for a bite to eat? I’ll work, of course, if there’s anything that needs doing.” He looked weary, famished. Through his open jacket, she saw sweat on his shirt and surmised a long walk in the heat. He put down a battered suitcase.

    “I can’t think of anything I need,” she said. “But wait there while I make you a sandwich. Would that be all right?”

    “That’d be just fine, ma’am. And a glass of water, if you don’t mind.”

    “You won’t mark my house, will you?”

    “Mark your house?”

    “To let others know I’m a pushover.”

    “No, I won’t do that.”

    The way he looked her in the eye . . . bold . . . too bold? He has strong features, she thought. But why so pale?

    Tar, her Newfoundland, came from the side porch growling. Did he sense danger or just strangeness? She relaxed a little when the man summoned him with friendly words, but she pressed the door shut until she heard the click.

    Having caught only bits of news, she wasn’t sure what had happened. She spread a newspaper on the kitchen table and made sure it was today’sJuly 29, 1932. Then she opened the icebox and took out sliced chicken, mayonnaise, and lettuce. She cut two slices from a loaf of bread. While spreading mayonnaise, she read the headlines:

 

 

TROOPS DRIVE VETERANS

FROM CAMPS IN CAPITAL

 

Army Ousts 20,000 from Anacostia

Who Burn Own Shacks and Scatter

 

FEW KNEW WHITHER TO GO

 

    It was plainer now. President Hoover had called out the regulars, who cleared the disputed area near the Capitol, then charged the main camp along the Anacostia River. “Late last night,” she read, “General MacArthur and his cavalry bore down with bayonets, machine guns, tanks, and tear gas while the sullen bonus seekers hurled bricks and epithets. The fight did not last long.”

    So many angry men. With all her lodgers out for the day, it might be better if the young man stayed awhile.

    She had kept the windows closed, but the heat had found its way in. She lifted the lid of the icebox and chipped off ice for his water. After holding a piece to her cheek, she rinsed it and dropped it in a glass. 

    He was sitting on the porch in the shade, his back against a post and one foot on the top step. She intended just to hand out the lunch, but stepped outside so he wouldn’t have to get up. Not much older than her son, she thought. Had he resisted the authorities and been driven from the city? He looked up and thanked her, taking the glass and the plate.

    She stood with her back to the opposite post and watched him. He had placed his jacket and cap on the railing, his suitcase beside him. Many who passed Molly’s Home on “tourist row” carried a suitcase, likely job hunting, and he wasn’t the first she had fed. Few knew whither to go . . .

    “Mmm. Good,” he said. “First real vittles I’ve had in days.” He gave Tar a piece of chicken. “By the way, ma’am, I’m Ben Hunter.”

    “Call me Molly.”

#

    Her husband, she reflected, had fared better than most veterans, having left the war as a Navy Commander with good connections. As his business failed in the Depression, he worried about the family. Stress may have caused his heart attack.

    Watching cars streaming north, she recalled her excitement as a little girl seeing sheep herded down this very road. Now a pickup truck went by with a man and woman in front and three children in the bed. An American flag trailed from the tailgate. They loved the country but hated the government.

    “Why are they leaving town?” Ben mumbled half to himself.

    Puzzled, she said, “Weren’t you there? They were forced out.”

    “No, I’ve been on the road, hitching and hiking down from Cumberland. I came to join the B.E.F.the Bonus Expeditionary Force. They’re here for the bonus we were promised after the war. Who drove ’em out? Why?”

    “The Army. It’s been on the radio.” She returned to the kitchen and brought back the paper. He was eating, so she read aloud.

    He slowly shook his head, seeming perplexed and dejected. Then he started to cough, and she saw black spots on the bread. When the spasm was over, he wiped his mouth on a bandana. “Sorry,” he said.

    “Are you sick?”

    “No . . . coal dust.”

    Concern and curiosity prompted her to ask, “You’re a miner?”

    “Yes, ma’am.” He showed no attitude, but added, “Black lung killed my pa. Guess it’ll get me―down the road a piece, though, I hope.”

    She refrained from further probing. Was he out of work? Did he have a family? A place to stay? “I see,” she said.You’re on your way to Washington.”

    He nodded, took another drink, another bite of the sandwich. “Whyd they force them out? Lots of folks need that bonus bad―need it to live on.”

    “The President, in a statement, said there were communists among them.”

    “Don’t seem likely.”

    “They were squatting in government buildings under construction. First the police attacked them and they fought back. One was killed and several policemen were injured. Then the Army took over.”

    “But Anacostia? I thought that was outside the city, sort of a wasteland. What harm did they do?”

    “I don’t know. You wouldn’t think we’d storm our own veterans, would you?” Neither spoke for a while. “What will you do now?” she asked.

    “Look for work, I guess.” He finished the water and let the ice fall against his face.

    “Do you want to stay here? I have a room that’s not rented.”

    He smiled. “I’ll have to get a job first.”

    “You could pay me later.”

    She let him have the room on the closed-in back porch, a few steps from the toilet and shower in the basement.

#

    The next morning, Saturday, he appeared in civilian clothes, shaven, his sandy hair combed. Lodgers came and went, and he greeted them politely. Without being asked, he mowed the lawn and thinned the apple trees. Sunday he took the streetcar into Washington for his first visit, and Monday he looked for work. That evening she invited him to share supper.

    “Tell me about your search,” she said as he sat down at the kitchen table. At a glimpse of his sweaty back, she turned up the oscillating fan.

    “Tried a few places. Government offices said I’d need to pass a civil service test.” He added wryly, “They don’t give one for coal miners.”

    “Did you try anywhere else?” She filled his plate with meatloaf, mashed potatoes, and green beans, then poured a glass of milk. Tar, lying beside him, looked up hopefully.

    “Yes. I figured I’d make a good streetcar driver. Seems pretty simple, since you don’t have to know where you’re going. But they’re turning men away.”

    The next day he applied as a janitor at hotels and apartment houses. He told the managers he knew furnaces, which drew only sneers in early August.

    “Why don’t you try restaurants?” she suggested. “Maybe they need a waiter.”

    “I did already. You have to belong to a union. Besides, I might cough on the bread.”

    It pleased her to find his sense of humor intact, if rather grim. When he described using streetcar transfers to loop the city on a single dime, she pretended to scold him and they both laughed.

    That evening she mentioned him in a letter to her daughter, calling him a victim of these awful times. It was better long ago when they didn’t have a penny to spare but felt secure. They should vote for Franklin Roosevelt in November. No, she couldn’t get away to see the new baby, but maybe they could all meet here at Molly’s Home for Christmas.

#

    Ben stayed two weeks, spending the days in the city. Then one morning he rapped on the back screen door and said he was pulling out.

    “Well, stay for breakfast,” she said, confident that he wouldn’t pass her sunny kitchen with its aroma of freshly baked rolls.

    He entered, leaving his suitcase outside but letting Tar squeeze in beside him. As they chatted, she made sandwiches to fortify him for his journey. She took the rolls from the oven. Bacon, eggs, and home fries followed. Over coffee, she asked, “What’s next?”

    “Back to the mine, I guess. Plenty of coal to dig. I’ll send you my first pay.”

    “You don’t have to do that, Ben. I’m getting scads of tourists and rovers.”

    “You’re a very kind lady,” he said, rising. “But I will, anyhow.”

    As he reached for his suitcase, she pushed the dog out to keep it from following them through the house and out the door. Tar pawed at the screen. Then she led the way to the front hall, and Ben thanked her for her hospitality. She watched from the porch as he crossed the road to hitch a ride headed north. He turned and waved. She waved back, smiling despite the mist in her eyes.

 

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PATRICK BARRETT wrote 1138 days ago

Bill - these short stories are beautifully written and you certainly have a way of capturing the reader like a spider does a fly. The plots are perfectly laid out and the characters so life-like. You are certainly talented and your book made for a very enjoyable read. Backed with pleasure - congratulations on a great book - Paula - How mean is my Valley?

Jason Morte wrote 1025 days ago

Very professionally done. Polished as well as anything on this site. I've read Annabella so far (it reminded me of Hemingway's early shorts) and plan to read more. I love short stories because the reader doesn't have to sit through hours and hours of reading in order to get to the end. In this day of short attention spans, you'd think that short stories would become popular again. Sadly, however, the short is almost a dead art. Aside from you, me, and a couple of others, nobody on this site seems to do short stories. I enjoy yours immensely and endorse them with pleasure. Nicely done.

andrew skaife wrote 1021 days ago

A highly crafted piece of writing and the very definition of writing that is polished, sculpted and ready for publication.

BACKED

Sly80 wrote 1237 days ago

Checked the other two stories you suggested, Bill.

21 Losing it: 'To spare her from a lifetime of hardship without him' I snorted with laughter there ... such irony. In fact, you manage to make the whole messy business funny given how useless McHenry is. The humour vanishes when O'Rourke appears. This is a man not to be messed with. But even he is tempted by wealth and beauty. Fate deals well with both men. (Some formatting problems, but that's authonomy for you.)

27 Pillar of Truth: This one just had me totally enthralled from the get-go. Clever plotting with another satisfying ending, though not without some cost to the MC. You describe the underworld and corruption exceedingly well.

Popping Annabella and Other Stories on my shelf for a while.

Christine May wrote 30 days ago

Bill, I have read many of your short stories, One through seven, twenty one and twenty seven. What is so interesting is that they are all very different. This book will keep me entertained for a long time.
I still think we have met in Orlando at an Art show.
Christine

Christine May wrote 42 days ago

Hi Bill,
I read your first two short stories. The first a work of art, the second delightful.
will return.
Christine
I added a sixth story if you are interested.

Susanna Clayson wrote 50 days ago

Just a great collection of stories that gripped me from the start. Very well written and crafted. You deserve to get these in print. Best of luck

Susanna

Susanna Clayson wrote 51 days ago

Just a great collection of stories that gripped me from the start. Very well written and crafted. You deserve to get these in print. Best of luck

Susanna

Seringapatam wrote 92 days ago

Bill, Spot on. Not my genre and not what I would read at all. With that said, I loved it. You have a fantastic hypnotic narrative voice here that dragged me right into this book from the word go and smacked me all over the book before spitting me out when I had to put it down before I lost my job! So well done for this. Magic pace, flow, descriptive voice, stick to this genre at all costs. Loved it and big score.
Sean Connolly. British Army on the Rampage. (B.A.O.R) Please consider me for a read or watch list wont you? Many thanks. Sean

Andrea Taylor wrote 99 days ago

Beautifully written, very elegant, mature writing, stories that hold the attention; what more can the reader ask.
Thoroughly enjoyable and no criticisms at all.
Andrea
The de Amerley Affair
I'd appreciate a return read if you have time

Cyrus Hood wrote 262 days ago

Great stuff- just the right length

Mark

Cyrus Hood wrote 262 days ago

Hello Bill,
Actually Annabella reminded me of Capote, the style is entirely right for the genre and the pace measured- a well crafted piece. Only one niggle 'the foreboding alley' doesn't quite work for me but that is probably down to the language that separates us. Nice writing.
onto the next one....
regards

Mark

julia rush wrote 268 days ago

Dear Bill:

A very charming story about Annabelle. I think Annabelle and you could sustain a novel or novella. I was enchanted by your descriptions of the theater and acting and the the beautiful actress. I am starring and I will try to shelve if the system will let me. Good Writing! Good Luck!

Simone Marie
My Rhapsody

celticwriter wrote 585 days ago

Hi Bill, re backing this delightful work.

blessings!
jim

klouholmes wrote 789 days ago

Hi Bill, The stories I've read so far, Annabella and Born Again, are fantastic. The atmosphere is so well established in both and then the unexpected happens, putting another dimension on that atmosphere. I recommend Born Again, number 5, to anyone else who doesn't know what it's about - the conflict, debate, and revenge between a scientist who drowns rats in experiments and an animal activist. It's really well-written from the scientific point, I think, and an excellent read. I'm shelving because I'd like to read more of these, a few at a time. Katherine (The House in Windward Leaves, The Swan Bonnet)

kendra ann ziems wrote 794 days ago

i would have to say the same as some of the other comments; beautifully written, well crafted, polished. going on my bookshelf! if you have time would appreciate any input on my book that you could give.

Benjamin Dancer wrote 934 days ago

I'm taking notes as I read 32. I'll post them once I'm done so you can see my reaction to the story.

The no feet makes a great hook for this story.

The tension is great. I'm on the delivering of the baby to his wife--and the unanswered question about the feet holds suspense.

I hang on every word of this story.

When we get to the mother's possible ancestry--the opening suddenly clicks--her reluctance.

I loved the Colt 45.

Fine ending. Good story about decent people who mess their own lives up like every decent person does. The weight of it, its implications for the mother. The empathy. Really solid piece.

A couple more notes in your messages.

Pia wrote 936 days ago

Bill -

Annabella and Other Stories - Oh you are right, this collection of yours was neglegted. I loved Doctor of Summitville, one of the first books I read here. But with these short stories you do something different. They are jewels, brilliantly deep. Tonight I enjoyed no 35, Salesmanship, a random choice. I was in fits ... I thought of panties but decided not to press my luck ... subtle, erotic, ironic, and the twist at the end, such skill. Your wit is delightful. This goes on my WL - to be sitting soon on my shelf, for some time, because I now have an appetite to read the whole collection of stories ... Pia ;)

paperbat wrote 1014 days ago

Wow. Some marvellous short stories. Where do you get your great ideas from? Annie is certainly a remarkable cat! Your on my shelf as I read more of the stories.
PAPERBAT

andrew skaife wrote 1021 days ago

A highly crafted piece of writing and the very definition of writing that is polished, sculpted and ready for publication.

BACKED

Jason Morte wrote 1025 days ago

Very professionally done. Polished as well as anything on this site. I've read Annabella so far (it reminded me of Hemingway's early shorts) and plan to read more. I love short stories because the reader doesn't have to sit through hours and hours of reading in order to get to the end. In this day of short attention spans, you'd think that short stories would become popular again. Sadly, however, the short is almost a dead art. Aside from you, me, and a couple of others, nobody on this site seems to do short stories. I enjoy yours immensely and endorse them with pleasure. Nicely done.

mvw888 wrote 1060 days ago

Hello Bill,

I think that I have been to your page now three different times, to read three different books. We seem to travel the same routes here on authonomy...often I see your name when I'm visiting a book I like and of course, thrice now I have been circuited back here. And I always find good books on your shelf.

This is another example of expert prose. I wanted to applaud out loud your use of -- in the first paragraph. Time and again I caution against its use (perhaps a personal bias but I just can't see justification for it in most cases). Here, a perfect usage. Your tone here is so different from what I remember from your other work (Dr of Summitville?); more wistful, almost elegaic ("as I had done before Hell opened, when she promised to be mine"). And of course, poetic at times, perfectly matching the theme of theater in stanzas and perhaps lost love... Wonderful, humbling writing.

---Mary
The Qualities of Wood

Marija F.Sullivan wrote 1060 days ago

I read Ch.17 as you suggested. Very warm story, beautifully told. The story of home coming pidgeon reflected the destiny of the poor child. Strong writing voice plus a great story, the winning combination.
Backed with very best wishes,
M
- Weekend Chimney Sweep
- Sarajevo Walls of Fate

Maria K. wrote 1067 days ago

Bill this sounds right up my alley! Backing and putting on my book shelf. Reminds me of the not-scary-but-spooky-yet-lovely ghost stories of old, like Priestley's story of Jenny Villiers.

Rosemary Peel wrote 1081 days ago

Read Annabella and Annie. Will, if I get time, which is unbelievably scare now that I've found authonomy, I will return to read more. Enjoyed both stories. A very nice read. Best of luck with the book.

Su Dan wrote 1119 days ago

i love short stories and these do not disapoint. the first two i read are nicely compact and read well...omn my watchlist...
su dan...[read SEASONS]

Kidd1 wrote 1131 days ago

Wonderfully compelling and imaginative stories that show a masterful grasp of the short story genre. Well written in a unique voice. Backed.

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 1138 days ago

Bill - these short stories are beautifully written and you certainly have a way of capturing the reader like a spider does a fly. The plots are perfectly laid out and the characters so life-like. You are certainly talented and your book made for a very enjoyable read. Backed with pleasure - congratulations on a great book - Paula - How mean is my Valley?

SusieGulick wrote 1157 days ago

Dear Bill, Well, I backed your other 2 books, but can't find where I backed this one. It is very excellently written, just like your other 2. I love that you use rhyme, dialogue, & short paragraphs for an easy read. Could you please take a moment to BACK my unedited version, "Tell Me True Love Stories." Thanks, Susie :)

Salude El Dia wrote 1229 days ago

Let's see, I read #34, "Rube's Revenge", and #19, "Lenz's Way". Both very different, both well-written, with #19 something of a surprise, with seemingly in-depth knowledge of the state of "atomic" research in the 1950's. Pleasant surprise, displaying the type of versatility of subject that most authors only dream about. Backed.

Sly80 wrote 1237 days ago

Checked the other two stories you suggested, Bill.

21 Losing it: 'To spare her from a lifetime of hardship without him' I snorted with laughter there ... such irony. In fact, you manage to make the whole messy business funny given how useless McHenry is. The humour vanishes when O'Rourke appears. This is a man not to be messed with. But even he is tempted by wealth and beauty. Fate deals well with both men. (Some formatting problems, but that's authonomy for you.)

27 Pillar of Truth: This one just had me totally enthralled from the get-go. Clever plotting with another satisfying ending, though not without some cost to the MC. You describe the underworld and corruption exceedingly well.

Popping Annabella and Other Stories on my shelf for a while.

Linda L. wrote 1264 days ago

I am impressed with the three stories I read. The first, Annabella, is eerie. (I noticed the name of the narrator isn't until mid-story. Did you want it that way?) The Good Times's Robert is, in my opinion, not likeable but definitely interesting, and the witty dialogue kept the story moving. Rovers had two sympathetic characters and even though it takes place in the Great Depression, I think it say a lot about our times today. Excellent work. Backed.

DDickson wrote 1264 days ago

Really smashing - I was enthralled and a little puzzled which is I am sure is the absolute reaction that you would look for with a ghost story. Very well written which makes it very easy to read. I congratulate you and pop you on my shelf. good luck with this - Diane (3 things that might have happened) Could I be a little forward and suggest that if you have time to look at my work you look at two or three - I think that they may appeal to you more than one and I have had a lot of very helpful feedback already for James. Thank you .

John Booth wrote 1266 days ago

Hi Bill,
I read Annabella and Salesmanship. They were superb - shelved.

I can't help you with either as I thought they were brilliant.

John

Jupiter Echoes wrote 1272 days ago

Short stories are so difficult to pull off, yet you do so beautifully. All have a life of their own... well, the three i read anyway. You bring characters to life and carry us along at a good pace.

BACKED

Clare Hill wrote 1274 days ago

I read Salesmanship, Puppy Love and A Place For Discord. I agree with Andrew, the characterisation in these stories is superb, as is the dialogue. In Puppy Love, Terra is a puppy - you make me believe. The guy in Salesmanship was a bit sleazy but I still felt kind of sorry for him. In A Place For Discord you capture so many levels, from their developing relationship to the disagreements in wider society about the war. Discord has its place, indeed, as do these stories: on my shelf.
Nitpick: Discord (28) has some formatting issues, some of the text is grey.

Andrew W. wrote 1277 days ago

Annabella and Other Stories

Hi Bill,

These are very different from each other, I have read three now and what impresses me is the characterisation. The dialogue is well handled, these people speak in a way that is not only natural but adds a dimensionality to their personality as much by what is not said as what is. Your also have a gentle and considered way of putting us in this place, nothing showy or pretentious, but lines like the fireflies couldn't quite wait for sunset conveys much about the air temperature, the light levels and the scene generally. Accomplished and enjoyable writing, Stephen King once described a short story as a quick kiss in the dark from a stranger, I think that's what you've given us here, a surprising and pleasant experience that leaves us thinking about it long after it is over. Best wishes and good luck with these.

Andrew W
(Sanctuary's Loss)

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