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rank 5850
word count 10441
date submitted 17.12.2009
date updated 20.01.2010
genres: Fiction, Literary Fiction, Romance,...
classification: universal
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to know him

Karen Jordan

This book tells the story of Dr. John Henry Jordan, the first black doctor in Coweta County, Georgia. He was also the author's great-grandfather.

 

Doctor John Henry Jordan's life begins humbly, but he learns not to eschew small beginnings. However, it is his relationship with his father, Berry, a Georgia sharecropper, that is a constant source of contention. When John decides at a young age that he wants to become a doctor, Berry could not be more disappointed. He does everything in his power to dissuade John, believing that the only way a black man can make a living for himself is by working in the fields.

Against his father's wishes, John embarks on a medical school career, leaving his home state of Georgia to attend medical school in Tennessee, graduating in 1896 as valedictorian of his class. After graduation, his heart leads him back to Georgia where he marries, Mollie Ramsey. She is from the same hometown and a daughter of the first black doctor in Troup County, Georgia. John's career thrives, but he is perpetually haunted by the memory of the loss of his most important patient and wonders whether he will be able to create a legacy that will endure for generations to come..

 
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Cyrus Hood wrote 536 days ago

Interesting work, just had a glance and will pick this up later - on my WL

Cyrus

Scott Toney wrote 547 days ago

Karen,

What a great premise and valuable work you have here! Gladly starred highly!

Have a wonderful day!

- Scott, The Ark of Humanity

COOKIE GAWAIN wrote 1161 days ago

Backed. Reading your book I felt a sense of pride, and the pain of the heritage. He is important and you were right to give us the story of his life.. Cookie

Jesse Hargreave wrote 1181 days ago

Backed February 13.

Jesse - Savant

Nick Poole2 wrote 1190 days ago

This is lovely. We start with a great line and you craft the birth with such love. I'm trawling through the old books on here to see if I can drum up support for mine, and I am finding glittering gem after glittering gem.

This is another one.

And the title resonates, too, I've got that tune in my head now. To know, know, know him, Is to love, love love him...

Nick
"Mirror In The Sky"


Jesse Hargreave wrote 1191 days ago

Backed.

Jesse - Savant

Bob Steele wrote 1195 days ago

To Know Him is a moving, character-driven story with dramatic conflicts crossing social, racial and generational divides - it sounds like a perfect recipe for the literary fiction genre from the excellent pitch, and the opening chapters live up to that expectation. I liked the way you grabbed my full attention in your opening sentences, and I felt the tension at the delivery of John's second son with the relief when it seemed to be a healthy boy. Writing that stirs the emotions so strongly is to be applauded, and I have no suggestions for improvement. This book deserves to do well in its genre, and I'll be happy to back it.

Bob Steele wrote 1195 days ago

To Know Him is a moving, character-driven story with dramatic conflicts crossing social, racial and generational divides - it sounds like a perfect recipe for the literary fiction genre from the excellent pitch, and the opening chapters live up to that expectation. I liked the way you grabbed my full attention in your opening sentences, and I felt the tension at the delivery of John's second son with the relief when it seemed to be a healthy boy. Writing that stirs the emotions so strongly is to be applauded, and I have no suggestions for improvement. This book deserves to do well in its genre, and I'll be happy to back it.

Natalie Jones wrote 1199 days ago

Read only the first two chapters and was pleased with your writing and storytelling. Such stories need to be told and I'm glad you've taken it upon yourself to write about such an important person and time in African American history. This is still all too relevant in today's society. I would advise, however, you review your chapters for sentence breaks. There were at least five places in the first chapter in which a sentence was cut off and continued a line or two down the page. Check and you'll see for yourself. Other than that, nice work.

Good Luck
Natalie

MiniMePom wrote 1201 days ago

Wonderful. I was drawn into the story from the first sentence. I read in your bio that you are a journalist--your professionalism shows in this prose. Backed with pleasure.

Telegraph wrote 1202 days ago

A man ahead of is time is was the first thought that came to mind after reading your pitch. This is as much history as the realitiis that surrounded a time when foward thinking was unheard and suceeding was even more uncommon. C W

C.P. wrote 1202 days ago

I think it must be hard to turn non-fiction into fiction. And I think you have a good start here. What a hard life to live. I think though, that there was a lot of information dropped in the first chapter. Telling instead of showing. But I may be wrong, as I have never written a fictionalized true story.
Good luck
Connie

SRFire wrote 1203 days ago

You really have a voice and a great opening chapter. I wish you every success with your story. Backed, Sana

C W Bigelow wrote 1207 days ago

Karen, you've done a nice job - using a fiction approach which is very effective (but when using it "Might have been a model in another time." didn't fit to me cause it jumped out of the period. You've done a very nice job acting the story rather than just telling it, allowing the reader to get inside the characters and get to know them. Happy to shelve it. CW (To Save the Sun)

Karen J wrote 1210 days ago

Hello J.A.,

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. Thanks for your feedback about the title as well. I look forward to reading "The Wild, Wild Quest" and will be happy to do so. I want to go ahead and let you know though that I really like your title. It's catchy!


Thanks again,

Karen





Karen,

"To Know Him" the first non-fiction work that I have backed on Authonomy and I am more than happy to do so. You do a wonderful job conveying your great-grandfather's story. And what a story it is. The only thing I wasn't wild about was the title. I "think" I understand why you chose it, given that the book seems to be your way to get to know your ancestor. But beyond that reason I don't believe the title does justice to the narrative. That said, I don't really have any suggestions to offer. Anyway, "To Know Him" is on my bookshelf. Great work!
If you get a chance, would you mind checking out my novel, "The Wild, Wild Quest"? I aways appreciate any and all comments/feedback I can get.

Best of luck,
J. A. Johnson
(The Wild, Wild Quest)
http://www.authonomy.com/ViewBook.aspx?bookid=13246

bookjunky wrote 1211 days ago

Karen,

"To Know Him" the first non-fiction work that I have backed on Authonomy and I am more than happy to do so. You do a wonderful job conveying your great-grandfather's story. And what a story it is. The only thing I wasn't wild about was the title. I "think" I understand why you chose it, given that the book seems to be your way to get to know your ancestor. But beyond that reason I don't believe the title does justice to the narrative. That said, I don't really have any suggestions to offer. Anyway, "To Know Him" is on my bookshelf. Great work!
If you get a chance, would you mind checking out my novel, "The Wild, Wild Quest"? I aways appreciate any and all comments/feedback I can get.

Best of luck,
J. A. Johnson
(The Wild, Wild Quest)
http://www.authonomy.com/ViewBook.aspx?bookid=13246

Mairi Graham wrote 1213 days ago

Just up the street from me there's a building that used to be a pharmacy run by the first black female pharmacist in the state. Just a little titbit of information in the history of a people but behind it there's a story that I don't know. Behind your grandfather's 'first' there's a story that I do know, at least partly. Statistics are all well and good but the human struggles behind them is much more intersting and "To Know Him" adds to the important work of individual history. Your family will thank you, as will future historians.

Suzannah Burke wrote 1213 days ago

You asked me to take a look at this and I am more than happy to do so. I have placed it on my watchlist and anticipate reading it tomorrow.

Suzannah.

Jupiter Echoes wrote 1246 days ago

Hi fellow authonomist..

I've read a portion of your work and feel that you write well enough to be backed. I have only looked at the way you construct dialogue and how authentic it is, your characterizations, your descriptive powers and the tightness of your prose. My backing has nothing to do with how well you spell or punctuate, for I need all the help with this myself. Neither am i commenting on the originality or how good your story is. Finally, i believe every book is holistic, and there is no one way to open a novel, or how to make it flow, so I will not force my own style on you, pretending it to be the best.

I have received all the comments I need, and my book, Dream Diamond, is now ready for the Ed's desk to receive a professional evaluation.

I ask you to BACK Dream Diamond NOW, even without a read or comment.

If you want me to comment on you specifically, message me.

BACKED

My best wishes for you and your book.

Jupiter Echoes

Andrew W. wrote 1247 days ago

To Know Him

Hi Karen,

This is a special book for a number of reasons, firstly it is family, it is well researched and it is very real and secondly it brings to life a very important slice of human history. You transport us immediately into the scene, your research hidden, no long info-dumps, but it is weaved subtly into the background of your story. You must be deep into the first draft because there are many places where I thought you could cut down the prose and keep the over all sentiment being described. Each individual sentence works on its own but for example, with the description of winter and the snow, it would all probably have a little more impact if there were slightly less references to it in the first two paragraphs.

But these are nit-picks and this manuscript is still raw, it is unfair to criticise it in the raw form. What you have is an idea that will stand the test of time and appeal to many readers, I found the whole thing fascinating, I am happy to support your book.

Best wishes and good luck
Andrew W
(Sanctuary’s Loss)

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