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I knew it..... Aliens do exist...........

Hello----------any body out there?
Did you forget to do something important? Like----type or write???????
Beth Anne having fun late at night.
Oh yes is this a quiz on what is this picture? How about a wreck yard of old cars? Maybe sale day as the shopping mall?
Let me know when you get your book up to the 13,116 words. :) or 10,000 will do just fine!

awesome! Looks like what my brain sends out when I get up in the morning!

A literary masterpiece. There are no words...

Well-spoken sentiments for this, or any, new year!

I shall take this story to heart as I eagerly await the screen adaptation.

Cheers, MJ
The Dark Dot of November

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Hi .

Well, it's all been said, spot on I reckon - Andrew W.

This is not my ususal genre and I'm no expert on microdots or binary but I pride myself on being able to 'spot' a winner. Jim D Serpent's Blood

The main character is a little too one dimensional for me I'm afraid.

apart from a few typos this reads like a dream. The premise is excellent although I do think you need to work a little on your short pitch. All in all though a bloody excellent read. I did fear that it might trail off towards the end but on the contrary it is only at the end that you as a writer really get into your stride.

I really like the idea behind this. It's sort of a blank canvas, the story could go anyway. You've obviously got a way to go to achieve your goal of the ed's desk but with your sort of talent for promotion I'm sure you'll get there!

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this a compelling story i really like the bit "........................... ............................... ......................" whilst t story ia bit repetitive it has potential. in the words of your M/C .....................

Is the sequel going to be called - ?

I suggest you beware of run-on sentences and extraneous adjectives/adverbs. Overwriting is always a danger.

I don't get it. Am I missing something? At least you have one character!

This beats the washing machine instruction manual, which was sent recently to a US vanity publisher, and received the reply: 'We think your work is highly publishable.'

Backed. Back mine please!

You are right...This is AMAZING................M

A rare find in this overcrowded industry of pop-culture oversaturation. This is . at his galvanizing best. Another fucking classic.

=Miles=
tAgGeRs

With works like this, why do I even bother?

Wonderful. Backed. Please read mine.

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And here I thought 'test' was good. Another winner in the same genre. These just get better and better.


What will they think of next ?

I thought this was absolutely shit hot.

I think you should produce a Braille edition.

Like a breath of fresh air (or a cavern of it). Shelved with the utmost pleasure.

Perhaps the greatest book ive ever read.

Backed
AR Latif
The Mr.Terry Mysteries

How unique and original. Almost makes me regret not learning morse code or other obscure dot languages. I regret to say, however, it doesn't inspire backing from me at this time. The premise is a little shaky and your pitch does it no justice at all. Let me know when you get through your edits and I'll take another look ;)

Madison Woods - Retribution

Deeper than dust. Shelved without a moment's thought. :P

Apologies, nothing wrong with the punctuation in this tautly written masterpiece of understatement. It was specks of dirt on my glasses.

Okay, the changes did it for me. Backed.

Hey Dot,

I found this to the point and spot-on. My only quibble would be with your lack of cover art - might I be so bold as to suggest this?

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b21/InternetGeek/bigblackdot.jpg

Best of luck with this full-stop masterpiece!

~Traci

Zen like in its serene simplicity though I did notice a few punctuation problems.

This book is deceptively deep for such a sparse style. You are a true ascetic.

I stare into the void and it stares back.
back...not backed. ;)

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Peaceful. Bless you.

Negative space on a blank canvas.

A quiet masterpiece.