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rank 1250
word count 18112
date submitted 03.01.2010
date updated 29.01.2010
genres: Fiction, Romance, Fantasy
classification: adult
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Love Immortal

F E Heaton

When you’re searching for your purpose, the last thing you expect is to discover you’re a reincarnated goddess who’s about to regain her immortal powers.

 

Lauren is an average woman who is about to become anything but that. Rescued from werewolves by handsome immortal Julian, she discovers that she’s a reincarnated goddess with a 3000 year old destiny, and that’s only the start. Soon, she will need to awaken her powers by drinking blood and continue her duty to defeat Lycaon, the original werewolf and the man who murdered her parents, before he can gain revenge on Zeus. Swept into a dark new world, Lauren embraces her destiny and her desire to avenge her parents and win Julian's heart.

With the help of Ghost, a demon-hunting organisation, Julian fights to protect Lauren. But his feelings go beyond duty. Bound by the rules of her predecessors, Julian battles the attraction, determined to hold on until he cannot deny his forbidden love for her. But Lauren will stop at nothing to crack Julian’s armour.

As the love between them grows, so does the threat of Lycaon. Under a full moon, Lauren and Julian battle for their future together against a vast army of werewolves. Lauren fights to the end against Lycaon but will she be strong enough to win her happily forever after?

 
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M.A. Hoak wrote 1558 days ago

Love this. Please, for the love of God, post more. Fast paced, drama-filled, and a delight to read.

Backed,
MA Hoak
The Secret Diaries of Alex Barnett

kristinnb wrote 1563 days ago

What a great idea for a story. It's unique and intriguing. What a great start. Can't wait to read more.

Kristin
Demon in the Knight

AmyJ09 wrote 1562 days ago

I have read and still have both of your books on my watchlist. I hope to see you add more especially to LOVE IMMORTAL. Thank you for sharing.

Amy J
A RISING MOON: The Secret & The Promise

Carolrainbow wrote 1565 days ago

Great story line - something new for a change!

My only criticism? You have left me in mid-air. Tell me more; please finish the story - soon!!!

Jo Ellis wrote 1562 days ago

This is lovely writing with a great premise.

Your opening is great, intriguing and I could see it all in my mind's eye as you painted a wonderfully descriptive picture. I could see first the wolf and then him perfectly, just as I always like in a story. A great way to open a book with an exciting hook. I want to know what is happening, who he is, who she is and why they are after her. I can see I would form a little crush on him which is something I love to do when reading a great book.

I would definitely read more of this for the romance and even though fantasy isn't one of my first choices for genre, you drew me in with your lovely writing.

Backed

Jo xx

Spoilt

DesiS. wrote 793 days ago

Love Immortal was a very enjoyable read- Love the Julian character. The tension between the characters add interest in the story. I so want to know how this relationship unfolds. The story is well paced and polished- with none of the editorial issues that I often run across. Chapter one- very vivid descriptions. I liked when you switch MC persectives in Chapter 2. I think it is most interesting when you get to hear what both characters are thinking in a romance. Five stars and I would have backed your story if you had been on the site within the last 2 years. Best of luck on this story. I would love to be able to read the rest. Desi.

E. Apanda wrote 798 days ago

The format is driving me nuts! Wayy too many spaces between paras, which is pretty distracting as a reader.

That's the only "bad" critisim I can give you but so far the storyline is going great!

Hope this dosen't sound too harsh.
happy writing,
e. apanda

JeffCorkern wrote 1269 days ago

"now she had her own Terminator"

This, alas, is a copyright violation and will have to be cut. By the way, copyright violations like this just SCREAM "inexperienced writer" and you should change this as soon as possible. Before an editor sees it.

But this is very, very good. Your short pitch caught my attention. I will give it a turn on on my bookshelf in a day or two. On my WL for storage.

CamilleS wrote 1350 days ago

Polished and well written. Excellent first chapter! I couldn't stop reading. Backed!

Camille
Curse of the Golden Fly

Mandi Oyster wrote 1431 days ago

This is really well written, fast paced. A definite page turner. We all need more!

Mandi Oyster
Daci Wolf & the Prophecy

Bamboo Promise wrote 1503 days ago

Great premise. I love it. Backed
Bora Matarazzo
Bamboo Promise

Phyllis Burton wrote 1536 days ago

Hello F.E., I don't usually like werewolf and vampire stories, but this is so well written, exciting and beautifully told. My only problem with it is, that there are only three chapters...I cannot find anything to criticise. Well done. SHELVED with pleasure.

Phyllis
A Passing Storm (Would you take a look at this for me please?)

kdlonna wrote 1540 days ago

Please,Please,Please post some more. You're killng me over here. I just love Julian. It's a GREAT story so far and never a dull moment.

kyria wrote 1548 days ago

Great work! Can't wait for the rest of the book!!

ceradragon wrote 1551 days ago

When is chapter 4 coming i got to know what happens.

Salude El Dia wrote 1554 days ago

Great opener! I wish I could have figured out a way to make a werewolf battle somehow fit into the opening of my book! Reading this was so effortless, like watching a movie. You certainly have a knack for "balls to the wall" action, if you don't mind my saying so. Can't wait to read more. Backed!

M351977 wrote 1555 days ago

Oh! my goodness. I must have more. Please, please give me more. It is so different from what's currently on the market. Your characters are very intriguing and leave me hungry for the rest of the story.

Shelia4663 wrote 1556 days ago

It was great and I cant wait to read the rest. Please post more.

SB

Roscoe wrote 1557 days ago

How glad am I that I deicded to visit the Romance subforum. Strongly reminding most of all of J.R Ward (one of my favorite paranomal romance authors, this is something I would quite cheefully run to the bookstore and buy, with no remorse. Hopefully, you'll post a bit more... :)

Backed!!

- Kalera
Author of Ying and Yang

lillieblue613 wrote 1557 days ago

So glad I found this. Can't wait to read more.

Mysticneomaya wrote 1558 days ago

I loved this book opening. The fact that a mear mortal is about to awaken into an immortal being. That she is learning about other supernaturals. I can't wait to read the rest. I want to find out what she is and what her powers are; why she is hunted; etc.. Please FINISH THE BOOK and ALLOW us the pleasure of reading this paranormal story. Thanks---can't wait---SO PLEASE HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

M.A. Hoak wrote 1558 days ago

Love this. Please, for the love of God, post more. Fast paced, drama-filled, and a delight to read.

Backed,
MA Hoak
The Secret Diaries of Alex Barnett

pams00 wrote 1559 days ago

Felicity, I loved the premise and sneak peak of this. Hope to see it release soon :)!

Pam S

lisasine91 wrote 1560 days ago

Amazing story plot. Can't wait to continue the story.
Lisa

Jo Ellis wrote 1562 days ago

This is lovely writing with a great premise.

Your opening is great, intriguing and I could see it all in my mind's eye as you painted a wonderfully descriptive picture. I could see first the wolf and then him perfectly, just as I always like in a story. A great way to open a book with an exciting hook. I want to know what is happening, who he is, who she is and why they are after her. I can see I would form a little crush on him which is something I love to do when reading a great book.

I would definitely read more of this for the romance and even though fantasy isn't one of my first choices for genre, you drew me in with your lovely writing.

Backed

Jo xx

Spoilt

Josie wrote 1562 days ago

looking forward to read the whole book !

Margie wrote 1562 days ago

This really isn't my kind of story. It's different from what you normally write. It's repetitive and Lauren seems too childish like for a 35 year old. Sorry, but I just can't get into it.

AmyJ09 wrote 1562 days ago

I have read and still have both of your books on my watchlist. I hope to see you add more especially to LOVE IMMORTAL. Thank you for sharing.

Amy J
A RISING MOON: The Secret & The Promise

rkgamble wrote 1562 days ago

i was so mad that i couldnt finish it. But i will be one of the first in line to buy your books. Great job we need fresh writters out there.

Lost-Souls1988 wrote 1562 days ago

I'm really glad that she is starting to trust Julian. Can't wait to read more.

Lost-Souls1988 wrote 1562 days ago

Great start to what I know is going to be a great story which you usually write awesome stories. I love the idea that you have for this one. I plan on trying to comment on each chapter.

kristinnb wrote 1563 days ago

What a great idea for a story. It's unique and intriguing. What a great start. Can't wait to read more.

Kristin
Demon in the Knight

obsidianrose wrote 1563 days ago

Hey, do u watch manga? There's definatly something manga ish about this story. Full of monsters, action and excitement. The only thing I didn't think was quite right was the sentence she saw them again bisected and dead. Isn't that supposed to be disected not bisected. I don't think bisected is a word.
I love the premise of the story, the whole idea of her being the reincarnation of an ancient goddess is awesome. The pacing of your works really good. I think you should make this into a full blown lengthy novel.
U have my backing

Dark souls
Deloris Collins

mazzadonna wrote 1563 days ago

Awesome. It has kept me intrigued. Look forward to reading the rest of the story.

ann03525 wrote 1564 days ago

This is a very gripping story which you have here so far. I think it has great potential, the characters are very likable and you have very good sentence and paragraph lengths.

Just being very picky, I think there might be an over use of the word retch...

Thank you very much for uploading this.

MISTY76065 wrote 1564 days ago

Oh my gosh!!!!!!!!!! Great start can't wait to read the rest!!!!!!! When are we going to be able to read more?????? Its new its different and very intriguing, cant wait to finish the story.

amhessio wrote 1564 days ago

unique blend of usually very separate lore, which is great! X-Men meets Underworld meets Clash of the Titans!

babybear wrote 1564 days ago

great start when do get the rest. I love Blood & Snow

kaymom wrote 1564 days ago

Wonderful story idea, great characters. When do we get the rest of the story? More chapters please. Backed.

audreym wrote 1565 days ago

Wow. Another fantastic read! Can't wait for the rest to come out.

Carolrainbow wrote 1565 days ago

Great story line - something new for a change!

My only criticism? You have left me in mid-air. Tell me more; please finish the story - soon!!!

FMKnight wrote 1565 days ago

This book has great potential and your short, simple descriptions make it an easy read. One thing I noticed is your use of the word 'that'. I have the same problem. I would go through and Ctrl-F for them and delete them where unnecessary. Watch out for the word 'had' as well. Good luck to you. On my shelf.

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