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rank 5855
word count 61468
date submitted 11.01.2010
date updated 18.02.2010
genres: Fiction, Literary Fiction
classification: moderate
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Wild Dreams of Reality

Jerry Ratch

A tale of love, obsession, and liberation. Two brothers whose lives are heading in opposite directions. One wild night drive to find salvation.

 

"I became a fool for Adrienne Parker the first moment I set eyes on her." With these words, Philip Janov, a middle-aged realtor and poet, begins his escape into life and freedom after fifteen years in a sour marriage; an escape that calls into question what his life has been about, forcing a reexamination of family loyalty and allowing him to become the person he truly is inside. At the same time, Philip’s older brother Darrell struggles to hold on to the wife he has suffocated with his controlling nature. As one man’s life comes together, the other’s falls apart. A potent brew of magic mushrooms, dead bodies, jealous suitors, drinking binges, and midnight escapades in green trucks and red Saabs. It is a story that is rich with atmosphere and insight into the human spirit.

 
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Vanessa Darnleigh wrote 1038 days ago

This flows very smoothly, not only on account of the balance achieved between narrative and dialogue but also because it is realistic and believable. Excellent read...well done!
Cheers
Stewart

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 1087 days ago

A fascinating plotline which could almost be non-fiction. There are so many threads which could be woven in so many different ways that I was intrigued to read your main submission. I certainly wasn't disappointed - good descriptions, timely pace, professional presentation and above all - an enjoyable read. Wishing you every success - Paula (Cuthbert: How mean is my Valley?)

Burgio wrote 1133 days ago

This is a good story. Most stories about divorce are done from the woman's standpoint and men are depicted to be the wrong doers. So this is a welcome read to find a husband telling the story. Both Philip and Darrell are good characters; likable and sympathetic each in his own way. Your dialogue is fresh and suits your characters. I’m adding this to my shelf. Burgio (Grain of Salt).

Marija F.Sullivan wrote 1133 days ago

Beautifully done! All the exhilaration of falling in love and introducing us in a bigger story of betrayal etc. If only I could read more than opening chapters! Congratulations! Best wishes,
M (Weekend Chimney Sweep)

LittleDevil wrote 1188 days ago

This is great, sucked me in from the word go. Can't understand why it has a red arrow to be honest. Quality writing - possibly the pitch!

Pitches are about the story - or supposed to be. Why don't you try writing the long pitch as a short synopsis instead of mentioning the author. Personally I think it turns readers off to hear about the author. It has to be the reason. Once they open the book (if they get that far) they will not be disappointed. Go on! re-write the pitch.
Best wishes
Sue

Bob Steele wrote 1215 days ago

I have tried to find something to suggest for improving Wild Dreams of Reality. Nothing. I was inside Philip's head after the first paragraph and couldn't get out again even to make notes. Your prose and dialogue is first class - I especially enjoyed C2 where he takes Darrell home and you show Elizabeth's reaction. I'll happily back this. Well done!

senyah nala wrote 1226 days ago

Jerry

I read your pitch and chapter 1 of Wild Dreams of Reality.
I comment purely as a reader, I often get comments about my grammar.
Just a little confused. The pitch appears to be merged with comments about the book.
You write very well and I can almost believe you are in love with Adrienne Parker yourself.
I did expect some dialogue earlier in the chapter with the lady. You say the first time you spoke to her (Para 3)
Watching for several weeks (Para 4)
I did not understand, the table next to an emormous burst of sunflowers. Where were the flowers.
Small points I know (just as a reader)
You are very descriptive with what you write and I believe the book should do well. It has potential and my backing. It's on my shelf for reading later.
Senyah Nala (Kate's Legacies)

Ccastle wrote 1226 days ago

Nicely written. I like the protaganist and enjoyed his watching the girl from afar. I thought the sentence regarding children's food at the table was a little overworked - but this is a nitpick.

An enjoyable read nontheless. Best of luck with this - backed. Cx (Simon's Choice)

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