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date submitted 03.05.2010
date updated 19.08.2010
genres: Thriller, Chick Lit, Young Adult, C...
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Forgive Me; I'm Not Perfect

Linda Randall

Sadie Johnson’s comical mishaps start when she brings back a cursed golden idol from Egypt. Sadie does not know that the curse leads to death.

 

SADIE JOHNSON has two goals to accomplish, move into her new PENTHOUSE SUITE, and get on a flight to New York City for an important interview. Moving day becomes a comical series of events as The Two Moving Guys show up late. Sadie has bad luck with just about everything from food, to clothing, to travel plans.

While on her way to New York City, Sadie figures out that, her bad luck has been happening since she brought a golden idol back from an archaeological dig in Egypt with Dr Vock. Sadie meets Professor Thompkins, Frank Fortino, David Radford, Roy Saunders, Michael Ferreras, and Rachel Tornquist. They all race against time to save Sadie Johnson’s life before the golden idol’s curse of death kills her too.

My screenplay is complete with a 21,738-word count, 102 pages, using the Celtx software program. I won the 2010 Script Frenzy Challenge.

I am an author, writer and daily blogger on The Idea Girl Says Wordpress and The Calamity Girl Wordpress where I write about my fictional characters, the city of Toronto, Ontario, Canada, New York City, United States, the Arts, Culture, Music and things that my characters love in my novels and screenplays.

 
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Sadie is leaning against the wall of the helicopter with her    

          eyes half closed. She was trying to calm her nerves by          

          meditating.                                                     

                                                                          

                                                                          

          EXT. HELICOPTER - STORM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS                    

                                                                          

          Flashes of lighting CRACKLING THUNDER electric air around       

          the helicopter while it ROCKS IN THE WIND there on the          

          field. HOWLING WINDS increase in LOUDNESS as the WIND PICKS     

          UP IN SPEED.                                                    

                                                                          

                                                                          

          EXT. FUNNEL CLOUD - FIELD - NEW YORK CITY - CONTINUOUS          

                                                                          

          A FUNNEL CLOUD appears from out of nowhere and RIPS UP THE      

          TREE and TOSSES IT towards the helicopter sitting there in      

          the field.                                                      

                                                                          

                                                                          

          EXT/INT HELICOPTER - STORM - NIGHT CONTINUOUS                   

                                                                          

          Suddenly the WIND DRAGS THE HELICOPTER (CREAKING NOISES IN      

          HELICOPTER) ACROSS THE GRASS, RIPPING UP THE GROUND as it       

          goes along.                                                     

                                                                          

          Inside the helicopter - The three of them are sitting there     

          shaking. Jake is white faced, knuckles white, gasping for       

          air.  David grabs Sadie’s hand and is crushing it in            

          terror.  The STORM ROARS around them.                           

                                                                          

          Sadie SCREAMS AS THE HELICOPTER LIFTS OFF THE GROUND then       

          sets down on the parking lot.                                   

                                                                          

          They are all shaking.  Nobody moves for about thirty            

          seconds. Finally Jake turns around and looks at David and       

          Sadie.                                                          

                                                                          

                              JAKE                                        

                         (yells above the ROAR OF THE                     

                         STORM)                                           

                    The landing gear is going to be                       

                    shot.  We might need to call a                        

                    truck in with a crane to lift it                      

                    onto a truck.                                         

                                                                          

                                                                          

                                                                          

                                                                          

                                                                          

                                                                          

                                                                 36.      

                                                                          

                                                                          

          EXT. STORM -FIELD - NIGHT NEW YORK CITY - CONTINUOUS            

                                                                          

          David nods his head. Let’s go of Sadie’s hand. They wait and    

 

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Elizabeth Wolfe wrote 1034 days ago

Dear Linda,
Your title is excellent - just exactly right for the tone of your book. Your pitches are good too, making the reader want more. Wonderful for teen girls and young adult women. You do have a way!

BACKED
Elizabeth Wolfe (MEMORIES OF GLORY)

Idea Girl Consulting wrote 1035 days ago

http://ideagirlconsulting.wordpress.com/2010/08/18/forgive-me-im-not-perfect-script-frenzy-elevator-pitch-screenplay-writer-linda-randall/


http://theideagirlsays.wordpress.com/2010/08/18/forgive-me-im-not-perfect-sadie-johnson-and-the-pyramids-linda-randall-my-movie-trailer-michael-jackson-music/


http://ideagirlconsulting.wordpress.com/2010/08/18/forgive-me-im-not-perfect-moving-day-popeye-olive-oyl-bruno-cartoon-screenplay-by-linda-randall-lady-gaga-music/


here are the movie trailers I've made so far for this screenplay :)

celticwriter wrote 1070 days ago

Hi Linda! Nice again!
joy to you,

jim

name falied moderation wrote 1077 days ago

Dear Linda
What a good short pitch and also long. You so grabbed me and if you like forced me with your use of words to read on. CONGRATS. I know it is not finished yet, but what I have read is so well crafted. I love the character portrayal, I loved Sadie. When I read the short pitch I thought mmmm Maltese Falcon revisited. this book is funny , zany, had me on the edge of my seat in places, and certainly never left me borred. CONGRATS.
So glad I crossed over to find talent, I found so much more to back.
BACKED for sure by me
I do hope you can cross over to my genre and review my book, please comment ( this assists me in honing my skill) and if you feel, back it.
Thanks and BEST OF LUCK WITH YOUR BOOK
Denise
The Letter

SusieGulick wrote 1077 days ago

Dear Linda, I love your wonderful play for the stage - totally radical idea - what a great story - I heard about not bringing seashore relics from Hawaii. :) Your pitch is excellent, so set the hook for me to read your book. :) When you use short paragraphs & lots of dialogue, it makes me want to keep reading to find out what's going to happen next. I'm backing your book. :) You have already backed one of my memoire books & I've backed all 5 of your books, now. Could you please just take a moment to back my other memoir book, "Tell Me Truei Love Stories?" Thanks. :) Love, Susie :)

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