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A Stony Path: Lived and Imagined Troubles

William Holt

Here are short stories, a play, poems in many forms from sonnets to free verse. Stars, comments, and backings much appreciated.

 

Please note: I'm happy to get comments even if you do not shelve this. Chapters 4-7 are all poetry, and poetry is the least marketable of the literary genres,

All the stories and poems here say something about trouble, ranging from small frustrations to the deaths of loved ones, and the moods range from cheerful to gloomy and even suicidally depressed. Many dwell in the land of ambivalence, with narrators fighting conflicting impulses.

The first seven chapters contain a table of contents and all the stories and poems. Chapter 8 is a personal list of books this old English professor considers valuable for writers.

Though some of the poems are in free verse, I confess an affection for the old forms--sonnets, villanelles, triolets, haiku. Some readers are turned off by formal poems. I don't mind. The readers of poetry are entitled to their own tastes.

 
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Poems on Many Subjects, Including the Roughly Autobiographical

The trouble with writing a book about yourself is that you can't fool around. If you write about someone else, you can stretch the truth from here to Finland. If you write about yourself the slightest deviation makes you realize instantly that there may be honor among thieves, but you are just a dirty liar.--Groucho Marx

 

 

Juvenilia, 1946-1961

 

Ascension (After Hearing the Story of the Ascension--recited at age 3, recorded by a proud mother)

When Jesus went up

In the clouds in the sky

He didn't die.

 

He only went up there that day

To talk to God

In a strange way.

 

 

Phoebe Limericks (age 12, written after seeing an actual wedding announcement for Phoebe B. Peabody and William Beebe)

 

1

 

Phoebe B. Peabody Beebe

Feared she had contracted some TB,

So she went to the doc

Who gave her a shock

When he said, "Just a slight heebie jeebie."

 

 

2

 

Phoebe B. Peabody Beebe

Was feeling distressingly sleebe.

So she went up to bed,

And she laid down her head,

And a bedbug bit Phoebe B. Beebe.

 

 

After the Storm (age 17)

 

The long night is o'er, with its torrent and thunder,

The storm clouds so black have been driven asunder.

The wind roars, the sun pours its light through the clouds;

The earth has been freed from its stifling shrouds.

 

The church bell now peals from its steeple so fair,

The small bird now wheels through the clear morning air.

The light cheers; a man's fears are carried away,

And I greet with a glad heart this bright, perfect day.

 

 

College Poems, 1961-1967

 

The Fungus

 

The Fungus is a lowly form of Thallophytic Life.

Its hyphae, growing rapidly, become extremely rife

And penetrate the hapless host, much to its detriment--

O Fungus!  Such a one as thou cannot be Heaven-sent!

 

The Fungus is omnivorous; it feeds on sundry things

Like shoes and bugs and fishes' tails, and dogs and cats and kings,

On roses and on rattlesnakes, on raincoats and on hams,

On ancient, rotting barrel staves and Grandma's finest jams.

 

The ugly, itching, burning thing we know as athletes' foot

Is really flesh being eaten by this little creature's "root."

It burrows, in, to our chagrin, where'er damp warmth is found

Depositing conidia 'mong all the cells around.

 

And although some be good to eat, too many poisonous are,

So we cannot be always sure what's good and what will mar

Our poor insides; but this I know, whatever else I say:

This wondrous little Thallophyte is here with us to stay!

 

The Alien

The layered swirls of frost obscure

The soundless home wherein

I seek a moment's entrance, sure

That warmth I'll find akin

To fireside leisure, well deserved

In climates harsh and rude

Where simple ends and gods are served

And chief delight is food.

(The loss of such simplicity

Reflects our present state,

With childlike love's felicity

Devoured by lust and hate.)

The entrance is a hidden door,

The windows all opaque

And though the walls are flimsy, or

At least they seem to shake

With every breeze that passes by

I dare not force my way,

For that might prove the whole to lie

On crumbled base of clay.

With trembling heart and furrowed brow

I search the place once more,

And, although sad, no wiser now

I close again my door.

 

Reassurance

A lifted fog now grays the morning sky;

Chill breakers swirl and drop the passive sand.

I wake to gulls; their harsh and haunting cry

Pervades the slow-receding edge of land.

She lies beside me, sleeping yet, though all

Around us nature's clamor has begun.

Pressed by advancing time, I gently call

Her from her slumber--was it dearly won?

"No!" I protest. "We love each other well!

There were no pleas, no tears that went before,

But soft advance and full surrender fell

Like soothing balm upon an open sore!"

We try to look into each other's eyes

To free ourselves from earth with tacit lies.

 

Exemplum

 

It was a hanging darkness

rose quickly dead to faces white

from wrath with lineal black of a descent

from real live apes.

 

So felt the men

while rope-strained limb

of tree and dangling corpse

burned in their hearts and eyes.

 

The night deed after

mattered little

whether acted out or not

by shadow-puppets of an inward hand.

 

The cyclic and perennial descent

to real live apes

so said one watching them

brought on the tears.

 

 

Adult Poems--1967-2010

 

Abandoned

 

My tears drop into the river,

The river runs to the sea.

I’m likewise tempted to flee,

Bereft of my one life giver. 



 

She said goodbye in the morning,

I went on my confident way.

I thought she was going to stay,

Not noticing she was adorning 



 

Herself for serious travel

With me just part of her past.

How could I think it would last?

Now my life has begun to unravel. 



 

I wish I could have her still,

But she’s worlds away by now.

So I have to believe somehow

Love was something she had to kill.

 

Exposed

A dream unveils a private wish or fear.                                                                                        

I chase, I flee, I undergo absurd                                                                                         

Changes, become a rose or snake or bird.                                                                               

My joys and griefs are locked up safe in here.                                                                       

Even when dreams break out in smile or tear,                                                                      

Their phantom venue mostly lets me gird                                                                            

Against the prying strangers who are stirred                                                                            

By morbid curiosity to peer.                                                                                                

Safest to let a tear evaporate,                                                                                                      

A smile die on my lips, to be denied                                                                                          

If others question what I might have meant.                                                                          

Poems put all things in peril, and I hate                                                                                   

The way they tell a stranger why I cried,                                                                            

Transmute a dream into a document.

 

 

Spring Song for the Crane Fly

 

Strange that I never saw the crane flies mate

Before. Surprised, absorbed, I watch them dance,

Aloft on feeble wings. As they advance,

Retreat, rise, fall, over my lawn this late

March morning, bodies joined to generate

Next spring's ephemera, I drift toward trance:

One hour ago I would have called it chance

That I found two crane flies to liberate.

I found them in the den--I often do--

Swept air with my cupped hands to make a cage,

And took them outside where I set them free.

These mating ones I see--again? are two.

Did I grant them this final happy stage

Of their brief lives, this dying ecstasy?

 

 

Military Intelligence: a Villanelle

(An Essay on Generalship and Formalist Poems)

 

With steady step and concentrated rage,

Fated to fight in some strange catacomb

My magic soldiers march across the page.

 

Their battleground's a many-chambered cage.

They must march in beneath its hostile dome

With steady step and concentrated rage.

 

Want must suffice them when they reach that stage--

They'll have no fresh supplies, no hope of home.

My magic soldiers march across the page.

 

They must not kill the foes that they engage,

But capture them and never further roam

With steady step and concentrated rage--

 

No, they must stay and serve without a wage,

Slaves to their captives till they lie in loam.

My magic soldiers march across the page.

 

Whether they live a day, a month, an age,

Whether they dine on dust or honeycomb,

With steady step and concentrated rage,

My magic soldiers march across the page.

 

 

Martyr and Mistress

 

His

 

It doesn't matter how I have to grieve.

I know so many different kinds of pain

I will not try to stop you when you leave.

 

Your face and form would rival those of Eve,

A prize a man might risk his life to gain.

It doesn't matter, though. I have to grieve.

 

Your mind's a scalpel; no one can deceive

You, though a fool might twist and turn in vain.

So I won't try to stop you wnen you leave.

 

For you my love was easy to achieve--

No harder than to get wet in the rain.

It doesn't matter now; I have to grieve.

 

I think I bore you now, and I believe

You've found someone of whom you can't complain.

I will not try to stop you when you leave.

 

It feels "so huge, so hopeless to conceive"

That we might halt this now onrushing train.

It doesn't matter how I have to grieve;

I will not try to stop you when you leave.

 

 

Hers

 

You pitiful old fool.  It's very well

When you must cover up your unconcern

To write your rueful little villanelle.

 

There was a time when we both though to dwell

Together; now I know you'll never learn,

You pitiful old fool.  It's very well.

 

You never learned how much it felt like hell

To have you turn away from me--just turn

And write some rueful little villanelle.

 

You loved me? No, you only loved to tell

The world you did, while I could sit and burn,

You pitiful old fool.  It's very well.

 

I've never thought it fortunate I fell

In love so I could dutifully earn

The right to hear a rueful villanelle.

 

And so I'm gone--and you, you empty shell

Can stay alone and sulk alone; I spurn

You, pitiful old fool; it's very well

To write your rueful little villanelle.

 

 

A Safe Driver*

 

Sometimes lana

or sandra or virginia

or all three

got disabled friday

or saturday nights

and one called me,

her slurred speech

enough to tell me

where to go--their favorite club

where i, sad schlub,

hating the smoke cloud

unable to dance

sober of habit

helpful by reputation,

never entered.

"Come" said she

and whatever i was doing

i got my key

covered the seats and floors of my old car

with thick towels

in case of sickness

and ventured into the night,

heart beating faster

because I was at least Useful

to these pretty women

whose daytime space i shared

in classrooms and meeting rooms

at the college.

We never dated.

I was only the friend they relied on

however much i might wish

things were otherwise

and i was one of the cool guys.

But they wanted no cool guys

to drive them: they were drunk too

and lana sandy virginia

were conscious enough of safety

to want someone safe: me.

 

I didn't much like being safe

but i did like being Useful.

 

One night

lana sandra virginia

were all too drunk to walk

or call.

Someone found my number

in lana's purse and tried it.

I did my usual thing

with the towels and got there

soon, found them leaning against each other

guided them into the large back seat,

listened to their silly profanities

and trite endearments

as I drove ever so carefully

these women who spoke intelligently in classes

where history and botany and literature were our daytime subjects

but now I drove them to safe homes

to sleep off their debauchery.

 

Sandra and virginia clung to me

hard enough to hurt

but I did not mind

when they smelled so sweet

even after such a night

as I walked them to their doors

and they entered, letting me go

leaning on door frames chairs countertops and tables

until they vanished inside.

But lana fell asleep

and i could not wake her.

Her i had to carry

a beautiful dead weight in my anxious arms

to her screened-in porch

where i placed her gently on a futon

wished her well and left,

fearing I would never see her alive again

because I--lustful beast not true friend--

had slightly savored the touch

of all that unresisting

unresponsive

lovely flesh.

 

*For a flash fiction version of this story, see "A Useful Nerd, 1962" in Chapter 3.

 

 

Final Warning

 

A woman I knew

Shrieked in terror

When a gray creature

Ambled across her lawn.

"A huge rat!" she cried,

Grabbing my arm.

She seemed ready to faint

Till I said, "No, a possum."

Quick as a camera's flash

Her fear vanished.

That's how much

Names matter.

So the next time

You call me fool,

I shall depart

And you will not see

This fool's face again.

 

Boat People, circa 1978

 

According to the United Nations High Commission for Refugees, between 200,000 and 400,000 boat people died at sea. Other estimates compiled are that 20% to 70% of the 1 -2 million Vietnamese boat people died in transit.

 

They crowd into my classrooms--

Huong, Long, Tien, Chuong, Huynh--

Smiling, speaking their strange tongue,

Eyeing my entrance with glee,

For I have with them a reputation (why?)

 

And they trust me,

Trust me with dread memories

Of pirates

Who robbed, raped and killed for sport and profit

But did no more than that

And so were lesser evils.

 

The greater evils--invaders from the north

Who had stolen their country

And the sea itself--

Had brought them to such an extremity

 

That some--

Some of these beautiful young men and women--

Ate their brothers' and sisters' raw flesh on the boats

When the starving time came and help did not come,

And what they left

They saw gulls and sharks devour

In the bitter water.

 

They endured. Yes, they endured

What humans can endure, and now they are in my classes,

Reading King Lear and The Metamorphosis and No Exit and Waiting for Godot.

 

Did the boats prepare them

For our kind of tragedy and pathos,

Or did the time in those fragile shells adrift in hostile seas

Kill their compassion for imaginary victims?

What hard-wrought armor

Let them finish those voyages

And learn our language and earn our money

And buy our Fords and Chevrolets

And study Shakespeare, Kafka, Sartre and Beckett?

 

Are they only now getting ready for the real

The radical

The existential pain

We of the West have known

 

Or are they past it already

And all our authors fools?

 

 

Eight Haiku

 

1

The stone cannot tell

The thrower, nor the wound its bearer

Their deep connections.

 

2

Red-brown oak leaves hide

My widowed neighbor's driveway.

Three days--no tire tracks.

 

3

Getting wet--easy

In spring, in these woods alone.

Rough bark meets the rain.

 

4

Bright winter moonlight

Showering stars of crystal

On a snowy hill.

 

5

Three scars: a hurt heart

Bids me mend imperfectly

The plate that cut me.

 

6

Cut thumb and finger

Hold the glue brush: in this place

All healing leaves scars.

 

7

Questing in the wind

My kestrel calls, its voice

Sharp as eye or beak.

 

8

Tsunami Haiku

 

My garden flourished

Until a wall of water

Took rocks, plants, and me.

 

 

Winter Illusion

 

Bright deceiver, that green fire

From a bit of copper wire--

Spring's far off; don't tune your lyre.

 

 

Note: the next five poems relate to the accidental death of my son Jim, December 1983

 

Putting It Off

 

When it happened I was peaked, ready for running

My best race of five, and I couldn't stop.

When it happened, I was on the last nine miles

Before my marathon, ready

For a thirty hour rest and a race

To beat my personal best, and he was driving

To the lake with friends to carouse,

As scornful of my ways as I was scared of his, driving fast

Into a low bridge and a dry creek bed, the car

Tearing against concrete, turning over, tossing him out

And landing on him.

When I learned he was gone I went on running.

Sixteen he was, almost ready

To be a man, serious, reserved, ready to run

With other men for the trophies

He never would see, and I,

Peaked, hard, tearless for a little longer, ran.

I beat my best time in my big race, my marathon,

Drank the free beer, drenching the chair with sweat,

And started to mourn my son.

 

 

  Legal Matters Re Jim

 

Two papers I shall sign, have notarized

And send, lie on my desk at break of day.

Their careful language has not emphasized

The weight of what I’ll use them to convey.

Their purport is to sell a motorbike

We bought our firstborn son two years ago.

He loved it, and although we didn’t like

To lose a thing he loved, we didn’t know

What else to do with it when he was killed,

Crushed in the car he’d just begun to drive.

These papers will suffice; they’ve both been filled

With what needs to be said.  When they arrive

In someone’s mail, grief will take one more form,

Dull public record of our private storm.

 

 

Vacation, January, 1984

 

Things in my office, vacant of life, wait--

the earthbrown carpet for the vacuum,

paper for a vacancy in a file,

a clock for someone to need the time

its crystalline cycling the only movement

in this small dead world

since the poisons entered.

Crickets, silverfish, psocids lie about

in corners, under papers, behind books.

I shall find their skeletons when I return--

brittle, dust-light, empty, their dry insect odor

masked by a lingering poison perfume.

I shall check the clock; I shall wonder

how much time is left.

 

My bones weigh more than an insect's.

My flesh hangs heavily upon them.

I wonder, will enough of me still be left

to interest these insects' kin

when they begin

their long vacation

from us

and even our poisons

decay?

 

 

Seven by Seven by Seven

(Muddling through a Saturday breakfast with toast, eggs, coffee, and Revelation, chapter

one, two years after the accidental death of a firstborn son)

 

This mathemagical apocalypse

Cries the wrong truth.

The old brain's tired; this cataract of words

May wear it out.

Caught in an eastern ray, a mote of dust

Floats wordlessly before me,

Floats into sunlight from the silent shadow.

 

Men of vast learning speculated here,

Proved themselves fools.

They sold their minds, they waited for the end

And still they wait.

This toast with English marmalade spread thick

Defies my comprehension;

Dully I sit in sunlight and in shadow

 

The strange surrealistic images

Confuse the eyes.

Sword tongue, brass feet, and hair as white as wool

And eyes like fire

Have no place here by this chipped coffee mug,

Pot, plates, fork, knives, and napkins

Set here amid the sunlight and the shadow.

 

Old fiery sage, yours are transcendent truths

About the world,

But I must have one simple earthly truth:

My second son.

Fourteen and tall, he wolfs down scrambled eggs;

I watch, and my world steadies.

He grows in both the sunlight and the shadow.

 

The old doxologies—what alien mind

Can give such praise?

To him be glory and dominion in

What unseen place?

"That shirt looks good on you; it fits just right,"

I venture; he nods gravely

But glad in his own sunshine streaked with shadow.

                                                

Baffled by words too hard, I close the book

And put it by.

What sane man tries to wrestle with such texts?

The sports page calls.

And yet a phrase, to him who loves us, seems

To pull me back.  He loves us,

Trapped here between the sunlight and the shadow?

 

Huge formless thoughts well up, hitting my brain

First, then my hand,

Spilling some coffee.  Wide awake at last,

I mop it up.

Tomorrow, or perhaps another day,

I'll play the theologian,

When I've more sunlight and a lot less shadow.       

 

 

Epitaph at Laurel Land Cemetery (partly adapted from a poem by Walter Savage Landor)

 

Two things you loved: Nature and Art.

You strove with none; instead of strife,

A pencil's whisper bared your heart.

Your swift young hands, so warm in life,

Grew cold so soon for such a start.

 

 

Meditation Upon Loss

 

We all learn what we hold most dear

When things we cherish disappear.

 

 

 

Afterwar

 

for Vaclav Havel

 

He caught the smells of oil, of gasoline,

Of well-worn wool and sweaty leather straps.

Steel and copper blended sharp scents

With rubber running board treads and tires.

All these smelled "Packard" to a boy of four.

No longer a rider of buses,

He stood on the front seat beside his father,

Now the long war was past, and plain people

Could drive again.

 

The Packard--pre-war, a '39 One Twenty--

Far from the finest in the Packard line,

But swift and sturdy and smelling like heaven--

Held the boy who had never known

These rich scents heretofore.  The city buses

Smelled good enough: the diesel fuel and multitudes

Variously washed and dressed

Gave these great wheeled boxes their own

Pleasant effluvium, while trains,

Ridden but rarely, had yet another:

Sharp with metallic undertones was their

Scent music. But the Packard smelled the best.

One whiff, and he needed no further bribe

To change his agenda from toys to travels.

 

He stood by his father--

A tall man then, fearless, invincible,

Not yet shrunk, drained, terrorized by time--

And watched the huge

Pageant unroll on the windshield's movie screen.

No--it was better than movies.

Leaving the Packard, he was

Where the screen showed, not on the cracked

Sidewalk in front of the Roxy

Whose rich popcorn-scent kept calling him back.

No, this was travel, this was truth,

And the wheels of the Packard

Turned swiftly, turned at his father's will,

And the land gave itself,

Its vast expanse,

To his inspection.  Here, here was the point of all

When he was four, and a Packard smelled better than popcorn.

 

But this gray rainy day he is forty-six.

Relieved of a longer war,

He feels too weak, too old and ill to help

A world so scarred, so scabbed, so sick.

He stays near home when not at work. Travel scares him,

Shows him horrors before he is ready to look.

See him now at the cleaners, picking up shirts,

Face lined, eyes dull, heart hidden, he hopes, from view.

In the chilly drizzle his car is warm.

He unlatches the door, and he catches the scent,

Perfect, complete, the scent of the Packard.

No time, no change, no age-dead nerves

Prevent his noticing.  Then it is gone

Into memory's locked box whose combination

Is spun by chance alone,

 

But he knows once more the ecstatic four-year-old boy

Of that postwar world, too prodigal of its joy.

              (published Dec. 1990)

 

 

Fred Holt, 1908-1988 



 

Covering a wall in my study

Laden with heavy books

Is a bookshelf he made

Thirty eight years ago,

Sturdy enough to hold a ton

Yet light enough to carry, disassembled, in one hand. 



 

In my garage

Stands a wardrobe, finely crafted by him

Forty two years ago,

Framed with aluminum

 

Faced with polished maple,

Lined with lovely aromatic cedar. 



 

He shared with me his love for

Cabinet making and Coleridge

Baseball and Bach

Stonework and Stevenson.

 

 

Scholar, athlete and craftsman,

He worked with his hands

And relaxed with his mind,

Making music and poetry

My childhood constants

When all else quivered with constant change.

 
But my hands and nerves were not his 
And I turned from all things 
Needing his quick reflexes 
And clever fingers

To the things of the mind alone.

Half the man 
My father was, 
I have been a teacher of writing,

A spinner-out

Of articles

Poems 

Stories.

Words are the only tools

I handle with any skill.

So his play

Became my work

And his work

Except for a few things he made and others kept

Died with him.

 

Shopping 



I drive. She shops. She never learned to drive

And blames her long-dead husband for that lack.

No remedy for that at this late date;

She's eighty-nine, forgetful and so weak

That entering the car takes all her strength.

The seat belt balks her fingers; I must help,

And I must hold her hand if there's a curb

She has to climb to reach the clothing store. 



 

But once safe in, she seems to draw new force

From everything the store displays for sale.

She doesn't know what she is looking for;

The hunt itself excites her most of all.

The blouse she buys today she will take back

Tomorrow, or she'll put it in a drawer

To look at in another year or two.

I doubt that she will ever put it on.

She shops some more. At last, I drive her home,

Where she's been visiting the past three weeks. 



 

My wife, her daughter, smiles when we return.

The two retreat to talk about her finds

While I, with nothing more to do for her

Just now, head for my study, where my books

And papers wait. I cannot comprehend

Her urge to shop, nor can she understand

My work, my passions. But I do my part.

Love works this way between us these last years.

 

Victoria and My Job

 

My cat Victoria hates the simple fact

That she is not the center of my world

At every moment.  When I have to act

On other obligations that are hurled

At me from where my time is not my own,

She stares into my face and looks betrayed

And seems to wonder how my love has grown

So cold when she herself has always stayed

So single-minded in her deep devotion.

I try to take sufficient time with her,

But duties multitudinous as the ocean

Consume my days.  She hates that I defer

The moments she depends on me to give

For what enables both of us to live.

 

 

Farewell from the Faculty to an Exceptionally Talented Honors Class, circa 1999

 

You're casting off so soon to go your ways?

You can't moor here a few months more, or weeks?

Those boats of yours--have they been checked for leaks?

And you're provisioned for how many days?

For two years now you've earned our honest praise;

You've borne with open minds all our critiques

Of your materials and your techniques,

And having built your boats, you want to raise

Sails to the breeze, and you've no more to tell.

But still we want to give you something more.

Can we impart some secret yet untold?

Are we reduced to waving from the shore?

We know you need to leave, and we won't hold

You longer.  All of us now wish you well.

 

 

Miracle

 

Even this cat

May forget his feline magic

Momentarily

And make an awkward move,

 

But then he gathers

Himself,

Leaps with absolute grace

To the countertop

 

Where I have opened

A tin of tuna.

He looks up

As if to say grace

 

To me,

Clumsy provider,

Before eating.

I stroke his sleek head.

 

Miracles need

Plain things first:

Food, water,

Someone to care.

 

Given these,

Sometimes they occur

In time for us to see.

Keeping a cat gives us many chances.

 

 

Love and Fear Recollected in Tranquility

                           (for Jeff)

 

The day you were born, the untrimmed nails

On your flailing hands scratched up your face,

And when I informed the smiling nurse,

I am sure she thought I lacked the grace

 

To let the professionals do their work,

Interfering on the very day

That I should be grateful that no worse

Than this slight annoyance came my way.

 

But I was reminded of many tales

Of the harm begun by small distress,

And I kept insisting, like a jerk,

That they trim your nails and acquiesce

 

To a nervous father’s foolish demand

That his child not be hurt by his own hand.

 

 

Critique on Jeff's Poetry

 

“My suffering made his real”—James Baldwin, “Sonny’s Blues”

 

“Placed on this isthmus of a middle state”--

The words of Pope, his summary of all

That man could grasp about his rise and fall,

Re-echo in these poems of love and hate.

I can identify with every trait

Your men and women show.  Though they appall

More often than delight, when they recall

This “being darkly wise, and rudely great”

To me, I breathe a thankful prayer, now glad

That when despair drives some so far within

Their convoluted cages that they seem

Unreachable, your images will gleam

In shadowed places, strong enough to win

A few  who might have otherwise gone mad.

 

                         

For Granddaughter Allison, Lately Entered into the Temporal Realm

 

Ignore time at your peril; flowers close,

Fruit ripens, rots almost before your eyes,

And nothing you imagine or devise

Will stop the flying moments. Notice those

 

Who strive against it all their waking lives.

They want more hours in every passing day,           

And stint their sleep and will not pause to play.

They hate the knowledge that their death arrives

 

As surely as it does for placid souls

Who ride time's stream ambitionless and free

Greeting new dawns with simple hearted glee,

Lightly dismissing missions, plans and goals.

 

These are extremes.  No doubt some compromise

Is what you'll settle for.  You'll eat the fruit

Before it rots, enjoy the bloom, uproot

The plant, although it may have won a prize

 

For beauty when it flowered with your care,

But you won't stir the ashes of the past

Too long, and though you know your time won't last

Forever, you will try what mortals dare.

 

You need not even shun the two extremes--

Just recognize that since they're bound by time

The one cannot complete his ceaseless climb,

The other might as well be lost in dreams.

 

Many a field lies here for you to plough,

Many a song was made for you to sing.

It's good to do your best in everything

And good to have no wrinkles in your brow.

 

Landlubber

 

A lifted fog now grays the morning sky.

Cold breakers swirl and drop the passive sand.

I wake to gulls; their harsh and haunting cry

Pervades the slow-receding edge of land.

In all this strange immensity of brine,

Beside which I have lain a long night through,

Is there some sense in which it's really mine

To use as it seems right for me to do?

My heart says no. This is too much for me.

Whatever use my feeble brain devises

Seems but a trifle to this restless sea

Mother of life, transcender of all surmises.

Shaken, I turn my back upon the strand,

Confirmed in my devotion to the land.

 

Thanks--an Impromptu Sestina for the Authors on Authonomy

 

I find it very easy to give thanks

To all who show me any sort of love

Because in all my reaching for the truth

I find it leads me to a place of terror,

And I begin to be afraid of death

Before my work attains its true perfection.

 

Yet now, because of you, I chase perfection

And have to give unmitigated thanks

For helping me face all my fear of death

With that which overcomes it--your sweet love,

Which takes away the soul-destroying terror

And strikes my shackles off with potent truth.

 

Dear ones, you've really freed me; that's the truth--

Freed me to try for ultimate perfection

And showed me how brave souls can face their terror.

For such a gift, how can I not give thanks?

Your insights and suggestions draw forth love

As surely as our life draws forth our death.

 

It's true that what I write makes ugly death

The only pathway to enduring truth,

And that when any person dares to love,

That love can only hope to reach perfection

When those who love are willing to give thanks

For every moment not enslaved to terror.

 

Even our children have to face the terror

When grandparents and parents yield to death,

And they're too filled with hate to offer thanks

When faced with all the awfulness of truth.

They learn too young they cannot reach perfection

But hope their flaws are overlooked by love.

 

Then older, wiser, knowing now that love

Is all we have to mitigate our terror,

And that our little lives must miss perfection

Because our work is cut too short by death,

We still will strive to tell a little truth

And when acknowledged, give our humble thanks.

 

You've seen my terror and still shown me love.

My little truth you've seen before my death.

Despairing of perfection, I say--THANKS!

 

 

Time and My Granddaughter

 

My three years' grandchild spots me at the door

And runs full tilt at me to get a hug

But falls face forward toward the marble floor

When her left foot slips on the padded rug.

Before she hits, I pick her up and say,

"Careful, Sweetheart, I don't want you to fall,"

And she grins at me in the  sweetest way

And says, "I knew you'd catch me."  But the wall

Seems to slant toward us.  Breathing hard, I stand

Straight up with her. Holding her safe at last,

I breathe a prayer of thanks.  I understand

Too well what foe is stalking me.  Too fast

He'll strike me down and leave this child bereft

Of one friend--yes, but she'll have many left.      

 

 

Meditation on a Too-Public Death

Whitney Houston, 1963-2012

 

Years back, each time I saw your pictured face

And skimmed an article or heard your voice

Lifted in song, I was a lazy judge

Of how you might be victim of your fame

And how you might not have too long a  future.

Sudden success can bring on sudden death

 

Too easily, I thought, and deemed your death

Imminent.  Hungry tabloids loved your face,

Feasted on it and saw doom in your future

While drink and drugs wrought changes in your voice

And scandal kept intruding on your fame

And every loiterer felt free to judge

 

You. When you died, I lost the will to judge

Either your troubled life or troubled death.

I've never known the pressure of such fame;

I've never had to see my foolish face

In supermarket aisles, or hear my voice

Droning away for a too-public future.

 

My path on earth will matter in the future

To family and friends. I hope they judge

Me kindly, keeping memories of my voice

When I spoke well enough to put to death

The times I proved a fool.  I hope my face

May stay on my son's wall--that's enough fame.

 

But you had no such choice. Your early fame

Determined some large part of your brief future.

The magazines and films displayed your face

To millions, and you didn't get to judge

How public you would be in life or death--

There was a sense in which you had no voice

 

In what would happen to you next; your voice

Was public property, now that your fame

Had caught you fast. Perhaps your early death

Let you escape a bleak and hopeless future

When those you thought were friends would harshly judge

Your every word and deed, even to your face.

 

I can't judge now the future of your fame,

But death cannot delete your classic face

From memory, or silence your sweet voice.

 

 

The Wrong Side of the Bed

 

Last night she wore my socks,

Claiming her feet were too cold,

And being casually told

This morning at eight o'clock

 

Why I found them both

On the floor by her side of the bed

I got it into my head

That back when we swore our oaths

 

To be true to each other till death,

No footwear was mentioned, but now

I recall my heartfelt vow,

And before I can draw a breath

 

I think of love's many expressions:

Its youthful exuberant flame

That cools to something more tame

And its passionate tearful confessions

 

That turn to moments like this.

A tenderness seizes my heart

Before I softly depart,

And we start our day with a kiss.

 

The End

 

No, I don't intend

To drift to my predestined end

Dying piecemeal, inside and out,

Excessively stout.

This is not the way

To face the unforgiving day

When this too conscious breathing thing

Can no more talk nor sing.

Yes, I shall take care

With what I am and have, as fair

As I can keep it all together

Whatever the weather.

And when I go

I hope to make a decent show

Of having fought a good fair fight

And say good night.

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rachel_mary wrote 25 days ago

I have found many works on authonomy that have intrigued me, and a few that have genuinely impressed me, but this is the first piece of writing on the site that has truly moved me.
I've read most of the poems in Chapter 5 and some of the flash fiction in chapter 3. You are right that poetry is sadly the least marketable of genres, but as a student of literature and all-round poetry lover I enjoyed your verses immensely. Although I believe my prose writing and storytelling skills are improving all the time, I am lacking as a poet, so I have great admiration for your abilities in this field. This line in particular really got to me: "Two papers I shall sign, have notarized / And send, lie on my desk at break of day. / Their careful language has not emphasised the weight of what I'll use them to convey."
Being interested in Japanese culture in general and Japanese poetry in particular, I also very much enjoyed your selection of haikus. The first one (about the stone and the thrower) and the one about leaves piling up in a neighbour's drive stood out for me.
Elsewhere, I was very taken with the Phoebe B. Peabody Beebe limericks!
My favourite pieces of flash fiction seem to be the ones featuring animals - the spider, the snake in the schoolyard, the crushed cat.

Other than that, I'm not sure what there is to say. Certainly I will be shelving this is in a month or two when a space becomes available.

Best wishes,
Rachel
The Diver's Brilliant Bow

Daniel Rider wrote 393 days ago

This is one of the best works I have discovered on Authonomy.

Story and poetry collections are not an easy sell, and the quality often seems uneven when it does, with some pieces not living up to the ones surrounding them. However, this is not the case for William Holt's "A Stony Path." I was mesmerized both by the light, seemingly easy, feel of his works and the gut punch so many of them provide by the end. This is apparent right away in the Flash Fiction and Drama section (which I loved completely; there was not a sour note throughout) and the wisely-chosen first selection "Incident in a Meadow." It was such a short piece, but said a ton to me about childhood nastiness, morality, human nature, and human interaction with nature. The contrast between the narrator and the friend was remarkable, and yet this short short is crafted so well that it feels simple. I loved it and had to share it with my wife right away (something I almost never do; no, actually, something I actually have never done with an Authonomy piece up until now.) "Worms," "Cynics," "The Yogi and the Scorpion"--all the works in this section were just as strong and just as compelling.

The poetry section, I am happy to say, meets the same high quality, with "Of Trees and E's," "Shooter," and "Found Pen" being favorites. It was neat to see Holt's more playful side in a lot of these poems, not that it wasn't there in the Flash Fiction, but that I somehow came away from the poetry with a completely different feeling.

Unfortunately, I only made my way through the zombie poems before other promised return reads pulled me away, but from these first two sections, I can say that this is one particular fiction and poetry collection that deserves every consideration for publication.

I will be back to read more, hopefully very soon. Until then, six stars and a backing. An easy choice on my part.

Daniel Rider
"Indian Summer"

levielm wrote 207 days ago

William,

Stop what you are doing...now...and send several of these stories to www.brevitymag.com

These are powerful in their simplicy. The language is poetic in its tone and movemnt. Your precision with words is outstanding. HIgh starts. You could publish several of these in some very popular online lit journals. Well done. :) JK

Tom Bye wrote 199 days ago

Hello William-
book A Stony Path; lived and imagined troubles-

What a brilliant array of writing we have here- Your assorted stories and poems and might i say doodles had me captivated almost from the first line- This book is certainly different from anything else i have read on site-
I could sense the feeling that you have put into this book, everything from the heart and written with care-
Really enjoyed it and I recommend it to other reader
I will give it my six stars and wish you the best of luck in your endeavours-
regards
tom bye
book' from hugs to kisses'
A Memoir of 'me fein' growing up in 40s dublin

philip john wrote 182 days ago

This is all delightful, except that most people are likely to give the struggle to become writers at this point, for the simple reason that they cannot hope to compete. I certainly feel that it would be presumptuous of me to comment or criticise, although I would just like to put my head above the parapet and question the reference to 'British' literature in Chapter Seven. Most of the authors listed are English but a few are Irish. Careful now!
Philip John

Miss Pat wrote 25 days ago

I've started by reading the poems and am enjoying them for themselves and for the path they trace. - how wonderful that you saved a few gems from your childhood. Well done. I look forward to reading more.
I'm still reading and enjoying the poems. The college poems make me wish I knew you then. The adult poems stretch my mind.Very well done.

rachel_mary wrote 25 days ago

I have found many works on authonomy that have intrigued me, and a few that have genuinely impressed me, but this is the first piece of writing on the site that has truly moved me.
I've read most of the poems in Chapter 5 and some of the flash fiction in chapter 3. You are right that poetry is sadly the least marketable of genres, but as a student of literature and all-round poetry lover I enjoyed your verses immensely. Although I believe my prose writing and storytelling skills are improving all the time, I am lacking as a poet, so I have great admiration for your abilities in this field. This line in particular really got to me: "Two papers I shall sign, have notarized / And send, lie on my desk at break of day. / Their careful language has not emphasised the weight of what I'll use them to convey."
Being interested in Japanese culture in general and Japanese poetry in particular, I also very much enjoyed your selection of haikus. The first one (about the stone and the thrower) and the one about leaves piling up in a neighbour's drive stood out for me.
Elsewhere, I was very taken with the Phoebe B. Peabody Beebe limericks!
My favourite pieces of flash fiction seem to be the ones featuring animals - the spider, the snake in the schoolyard, the crushed cat.

Other than that, I'm not sure what there is to say. Certainly I will be shelving this is in a month or two when a space becomes available.

Best wishes,
Rachel
The Diver's Brilliant Bow

YvonneMarjot wrote 37 days ago

I'm fond of weevils,
And Tennyson. One more thing:
Don't lose no more fingers!

William, you've made me laugh...and sigh. I'll come back to these again and again. I'm particularly partial to sonnets myself, but all that you've written here is good. You've a clear, individual voice and your writing shines. Good luck and six stars. Yvonne.

Falcon W Ryder wrote 46 days ago

I cannot believe how little attention I spent reading short stories in my past. I read this and I was immediately pulled in. I kept laughing and smiling and nodding my head, finding each section to be progressively more fascinating. I liked how pithy they were, and how the voice changed for each character. Some were shy and some were nervous, while others were just quirky and wonderful. I especially like the crawdads one, I'm not sure if it was just the first one or not, but it set me up for some beautifully written work to follow. Wilbur's tone of voice just resonated, and it challenged first impressions and self-consciousness very well. I hope you do succeed with this, because it truly is very beautiful.

Truly, all the best,
~Falcon

DDickson wrote 47 days ago

Just re-read A New Year's Omelette - I know I'm bad but for some reason it makes me grin. Now why would that be - d'ya know I think it's that last line and the thought of all those men sitting there quoting movies - it's just funny.

Michelle Richardson wrote 47 days ago

Oh William, your poems are great. As a secret poetry writer I loved the limericks but my favourite was the Authonomy one. Much better than Elliot's attempt! Lovely to find some poetry on here. On my WL and I will read more soon.
Michelle -43 Primrose Avenue

Michael Matula wrote 47 days ago

I just checked out the comic poems in chapter 4, and I was very impressed. In particular, I loved the poem “Of Trees and E's” - incredibly clever and witty, and I often think of poems as being from another time, and being antithetical to technology, but you did a wonderful job with this, and making it modern and fun and simultaneously ringing true. I also got a big kick out of the redneck haiku section. And being a horror writer, the zombie poems were a whole lot of fun for me, as well, and even though I'm not a poet myself, I really related to the “Halfhearted Plug”.

I did get slightly hung up on the line “That my best will can scarce avail,” in “Of Trees and E's”, but that might just be me. In Redneck haiku, I thought the misspellings worked well, but I did wonder about adding in the typos, like “friiend” and “Yelllin',” as these seemed less an instance of being slow-witted, and more a slip of the finger. And it also made me think of rednecks as using computers, which isn't how I usually imagine them in their natural habitat.

Those were the only issues I had, though, and they were both incredibly minor. This was a pleasure to read.
Full stars.

Mike
Arrival of the Ageless

Seringapatam wrote 62 days ago

William. These are really good. They have everything I would certainly be looking for in a read and although it isnt my genre as a rule, I would have no problem making this my genre and of course my book. It reads really well with a magical flow to them and they are all so different in their own little way. That is a very good talent to have. Well done with these and good luck.
Sean Connolly. British Army on the Rampage. (B.A.O.R) Please consider me for a read or watch list wont you?? Many thanks. Sean

Cherry G. wrote 74 days ago

Chapters 4-8
I've enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon. The sunlight was filtering in through my window and I sat back and relaxed, letting your words filter through my mind! I have read some of these before but the beauty of a good poem is that it grows with a revisit.
I was amused by your lighthearted verse, such as "How many does it Take..." (well, I THINK it's lighthearted, but it really does depend!), your "Halfhearted Plug" and "Authonomy, the Mystery Site". You've hit the truth with all of them.
Of course, as a lover of Greek mythology, I loved "Talk Therapy-Daedalus, Icarus, Oedipus and Freud! and then Life's Brevity was especially beautiful. I will try to remember the lines:
"...We creatures of a moment only
Creatures ever sad and lonely
In the bright hall's fleeting glow." Brilliant!
I also enjoyed looking through your bibliography. As you would probably expect from a Brit., I'm reasonably well read from the British section...but gosh, I am woeful when it comes to American Literature (Mark Twain and Steinbeck being the exceptions) and my reading of World Literature is limited to Chekhov and Tolstoy. I will have to broadened my horizons, especially as I've only got 23 years before I reach 78!

Thank you for an enjoyable afternoon. I've given A Stony Path a 6 star rating.
Cherry
The Girl from Ithaca

EMDelaney wrote 140 days ago

Bill Holt is arguably the most talented individual to have come to Authonomy. I don't think anyone could say his contribution here has been anything but profound. Reading through this wonderful work, the poetry, his thoughts, humor and candor, one gets a sense that they are reading brilliance. I know I do.

Words tend to be for Mr. Holt what mortar is to a bricklayer. His command of English, so beautifully articulated in his verses, make an argument for whether he should have been born in a different time perhaps. A time when the true appreciation of these works were a more apparent means of entertainment for a reader. I truly believe, if that were the case, the world would be a better place today. I know this, if he and Shakespear would have lived in the same era of time, Mr. Shakespear would have written him regularly for advice.

Whether it be his unique sense of humor displayed in 'Tree's and E's, or his masterful usage of clever language and deep vocabulary in all of his work, combined with a true understanding of life, as it would seem the obvious in the general theme of all of his work, Mr. Holt is a precious treat in whom we should all read whenever he makes something available.

I can only imagine what it would have been like to be a student of this talented and capable man. To think that there are those who have had the opportunity to sit in a classroom, being instructed by, no, I would say being nurtured by, William Holt, is amazing. I'm sure those that carry around this memory of experience are very grateful indeed. And while Professor Holt did leave my personal favorite book, Kidnapped, off of his 'valued reading' list, I'm sure the thought of it tears at his very core. :)

evermoore wrote 140 days ago

Bill...What a lovely collection of verse. You share your heart so clearly in your writing and I thank you for sharing it.

linda
Daniel Simmons Journey
and
Children Walking with Jesus

Andrea Taylor wrote 177 days ago

I've dipped in and out of a few of your stories. You are an incredibly good writer. Not only that but you have something to say and you say it eloquently, succinctly and effortlessly. You should be published.
Andrea
the de amerley affair

philip john wrote 182 days ago

This is all delightful, except that most people are likely to give the struggle to become writers at this point, for the simple reason that they cannot hope to compete. I certainly feel that it would be presumptuous of me to comment or criticise, although I would just like to put my head above the parapet and question the reference to 'British' literature in Chapter Seven. Most of the authors listed are English but a few are Irish. Careful now!
Philip John

LCF Quartet wrote 196 days ago

Hi William,
I read until the end of Chapter 4 in one sitting and I have to say that I loved your poems. They're strong and I liked your authenticity and the way you structured them. I also think that some of them would make great lyrics for a new album on the horizon.

The short story at the beginning was great and demonstrates your story-telling skills. I enjoyed reading your first-person voice all throughout the various plots you've introduced. Very well put together, kudos!

Highly starred and best wishes,
Lucette- Ten Deep Footprints

Tom Bye wrote 199 days ago

Hello William-
book A Stony Path; lived and imagined troubles-

What a brilliant array of writing we have here- Your assorted stories and poems and might i say doodles had me captivated almost from the first line- This book is certainly different from anything else i have read on site-
I could sense the feeling that you have put into this book, everything from the heart and written with care-
Really enjoyed it and I recommend it to other reader
I will give it my six stars and wish you the best of luck in your endeavours-
regards
tom bye
book' from hugs to kisses'
A Memoir of 'me fein' growing up in 40s dublin

CMTStibbe wrote 201 days ago

WOW, Bill, these are beautifully written. The spider’s enlarged abdomen made me want to puke and I could ‘see’ the thing in my mind’s eye. Rather too vividly unfortunately and I started itching as I read it. The cat’s chainsaw purr is such a lovely word picture, we can hear this clearly. And the JW Worley story made me wonder how many others out there actually stoop to this type of thing. I mean a broken nose is no laughing matter but holding a bus company to ransom certainly is.

The dialogue in Petty Vigilante is superb. This was my favorite story. I liked it because of the flow, the fast pace and the constant hooks. Bill, this would really make a great book, a 'stand-alone'. Have you thought of expanding the story somehow? A ten million dollar organization being thwarted by one man and his somewhat tongue-in-cheek activities is too good to miss. And he helps people too. I like that. Not saying it hasn’t been done before, but a unique angle such as this would be very entertaining. You are a great wordsmith and you have a canny ability to resonate with a wide audience. Great writing!

Gooey Glop had me in stitches and Heigh, Ho, The Wind and The Rain was another favorite, a boy and a lost dog. Readers pay to be entertained. And you have managed to do that. I saw no typos since I was too caught up in the story and I will definitely be coming back for more.

High stars and on my shelf after the next shuffle to the Ed’s desk. Claire – The Snare of the Fowler.

carol jefferies wrote 204 days ago

Hi William,

I enjoyed reading your first four short stories. They certainly deliver a punch and are composed with some enjoyable prose.

Even though I have a spider phobia I had to read on in 'Incident in a Meadow,' to see what happened to the poor spider.

With 'Mephistopheles' I liked Morphie the violent cat, and Bill's attempts to woo Melissa. This also gave a good sense of place with your lovely prose.

Both 'Strange Bodies,' and 'Bad Brakes' sound as if they are real events that occurred in your life.

It was good that all four stories were set in different places.

Good luck with them.

I would be very grateful if you could take a look at my book, 'A Prince Unboyed,' by Carol Jefferies.

Thanks,

Carol

levielm wrote 207 days ago

William,

Stop what you are doing...now...and send several of these stories to www.brevitymag.com

These are powerful in their simplicy. The language is poetic in its tone and movemnt. Your precision with words is outstanding. HIgh starts. You could publish several of these in some very popular online lit journals. Well done. :) JK

superostah wrote 220 days ago

I read through many of the short stories/flash fiction you have under chapter 2 on here and I have to say I was impressed. These stories all manage to perfectly capture a moment as well as an emotion. There's a form of nostalgia here, like sitting at grandpa's feet, letting him tell you all his stories.

I love it. I can't wait to get back here and read some of your poetry as well. I'm tossing this on my watchlist and will be back when time allows.

Reedspeed wrote 237 days ago

Somehow you say everything that precisely needs to be said in as few words as possible. Well done.

hwf1942 wrote 256 days ago

Dear William,
I've just read your Flash Fiction and Drama. What I particularly liked was your light hand, the sense of humour, the lean language, the lack of artifice, the simplicity with which each tale was told, all of which pulled me in and allowed me to see and feel the subtleties. My favourites were: Useful Nerd, Utopian Paranoia, Worms, and Yogi.

Good luck with your book,
Regards
Harris
Irina's Eye
http://authonomy.com/books/46331/irina-s-eye/

brooksjk wrote 263 days ago

Just a quick editorial comment - the last comment at the end of "The Yogi and the Scorpion" is attributed to Tourist #1 and I think it was meant to be said by Tourist #2 (at least it fits with that character's worldview).

elsanovel wrote 264 days ago

Outstanding collection. I was having a bad day and this writing made me feel a little better
Well done and I will be reading more of your work.

R. Dango wrote 280 days ago

This book reminds me that writing is not about therapeutic exercise or self satisfaction, but indeed it is an art.
I've taken a random look at this book, according to my mood and the weather of the day for the last several days, and decided that I have to take a break now and write down my impression or I'd be reading it over a year, flipping back and forth different sections. It is that kind of a book. It's a kind of a book that would keep me company for a long long time and even decades later, I'd reread it and enjoy it all over again.

In more details; the poems in chapter 3 are superbly funny. Especially, Of Trees and E's, I've decided to post it in front of my computer.

A Slow Death, Spinning to a Parmanent Hook Up, Yogi and Scorpion: They are all my favorites though each are quite different.

Cynics is my great favorite yet.

I am continuing to read, and read till the end.

R.

CharlieGreen wrote 283 days ago

Oh I did enjoy chapter 3 ... I shall be dipping in and out of this for a while :)

Lovely.

lisa85 wrote 334 days ago

Hey, William!

Commenting on Seven Haiku.

For me, Haiku is something very precise despite its poetic value. It's an image so bright that it almost immediately pops in my mind when I read the verses. It's a leaf, a drop of water, a Sakura in bloom, the sunset... Haiku is literary impressionism for me.

In this sense, some of your verses are more successful than others. The Haiku #2 is very visual for me. Maybe there are too many pictures summoned to the imagination at once but I can see them all, including the omnipresent widow (an old lady with a gorgeous white cat).

Haiku #3 is all about feelings, perceptions, which is extremely Japanese in my understanding. And you have the season as well.

Haiku #4 is gorgeous with its seasonal reference and imagery. Its pensive and fluid, I can see myself staring at the snowy hill bathed in moonlight for hours, just meditating on the nature of things and reaching Nirvana. Perhaps 'bright' throws me off a little, breaks the contemplative mood. I'd replace the word for something more subtle.

Yet, my favorite has to be the Tsunami Haiku. Poignant and tragic just in a few words. This is what the Japanese are all about. They don't necessarily show much emotion on the surface, even when they are hurting a lot.

Overall, you have a true gift to this kind of poetry. As a person who cannot write poems at all, I admire you :)

G.W. 2012 wrote 336 days ago

I stumbled across the contest you posted and I must say it's quite a clever way to get others to read your work. That aside, as I scanned through capters 2-5, reading most of the shorter ones, I came upon Life's Brevity which was by far the most captivating. I read through several times and I must honestly say that I had to look up the definitions to a of couple of words, rue and pelf. When I did the definitions of those words didn't seem to fit; rue being sorrow, and pelf, money: especially when gained in a dishonest or dishonorable way. That aside, as I read through this piece I envisioned a child emerging from it's mother's womb, born into the light of the world with everything to look forward to. But life, as we know, can be full of dissappointment and hopelessness, and all that we really have to look forward to is the light at the end of the tunnel as we depart this world.

Was this what you meant?
I cannot begin to guess.
Is this what I got out of it?
One hundred percent yes.

Best wishes G.W. 2012 ~Escaping Shady Lane~

Cariad wrote 336 days ago

I'll have a go, but I enjoyed reading it anyway:

The dawn of fear. To me, (and of course, what a poet intends is only the beginning of a poem's story) the poem made me visualise a man, long ago at the birth of mankind, keeping a night-watch at the opening of a cave. he sees a heavenly object - the stars themselves perhaps, or a comet or meteorite, and his dawning consciousness begins to project, to think - of the imminence, or presence of mortality. That he himself will fall and die like the stars seem to as dawn comes and the sleeping bodies of his companiions begin to become clear. His eyes mist with a new feeling of regret, or anticipation of loss. The new day has come, his family wake, but for him, peace has gone. The white claws of human awareness - of nameless fear, have him by the throat.

Loved the poem, however far off I may be to what you intended when you wrote it.
Cariad.

John Lovell wrote 336 days ago

Hello there William

I saw several of your posts and thought I'd have a look.

That being said I actually haven't read a poem since I was a kid. And I think that might have been the Daffodils by William Wordsworth if I remember correctly. Never actually read one out of choice.
I had a look at a few of them, I saw the one titled 'The Alien' first, read that and found that it wouldn't stay with me so I looked at a few more and then found After The Storm even though it's someone shorter than most. I'm not going to pretend that I'm an expert at what things mean but I just liked this one because you're saying storms might be scary but then you'll have awesomeness afterwards.

This may not be the kind of comment you've been seeking but I just wanted to comment to make you aware that people are reading your work

All the best

John

Bill Scott wrote 341 days ago

Saw your thread. I loved The Cynics. Sorry, I can't give you a helpful critique. I would suggest you develop it into a full length play. The two women are a hoot. I'd love to see them at the funeral, befriending the killer and character witnesses at her trial.

grahamwhittaker wrote 345 days ago

A comment on your Black Clerihew. While many see the old "mystic' through misty eyes, it seems to me that someone else has 'nailed' the old bugger down! In the 1960's the (also strange genius) Aldous Huxley 'reinvented' Blake who had been somewhat forgotten, buried there in Bunhill Fields in his pauper's grave. His quest to rewrite the bible from an opposite view "above is below, below above" was quite a feat of madness. The juxtaposition of LSD and the "mystical" works gave Blake a new following. But genius... maybe. Mad as a hatter? Absolutely. This made me grin, so in response I would say:

THE POEM

What did Blake pretend to see
In his Tygers fearful symmetry?
The hand? The mind of God? The eye?
To offer truth of Christ’s telegony?

If the sun and moon should doubt
They’d immediately go out
Says Blake amid his augerie.
Dear Mr Blake, the cosmic shout
Is now. I doubt. I doubt. I doubt.

Yea Mr Blake, our telescopes
Have put a dash to your fond hopes.
Still Grey the monk, and Black the priest.
Salvation comes NOT from the East
And every cry of every child
Has never yet been reconciled.
And science takes yon God’s delight
In Shewing Isaac Newton right.
And Tygers now are specters, sprite
Hid in forests of your night.

Luvah, Beaulah, Enion
Behemoth, Leviathon,
Los, Eno, and Albion
Rintrah, and Palamabron…
CURSE your names and symbols Blake!
Thou madman, genius, master-fake.
Born with words beyond your station
You took revenge on education.

NB ‘Pretend’ Used by Blake to mean ‘Profess’

And so in conclusion Mr Blake… All art is fake. Art is caught in the imagination. Imagination is fancy, lies, and wishes. To become real, they must be brought into creation by the artist. And what is revealed is thus fake.
These words are not mine.
They came to me in a vision!

Greenleaf wrote 347 days ago

Hi William,
I've read several of your poems and liked them. I was moved by the poems about your son who was killed in an accident. I could feel your pain, especially since I have a good friend who lost her eldest son in an accident, too, and I talked with her about it many times. He was a teenager climbing around on a bridge with some friends and he fell.

I was equally moved by the poem about your father, Fred Holt. It sounds like you shared some interests and talents with your father, but you didn't master the one thing he enjoyed the most: using his hands to create fine pieces of furniture. You have a few pieces of his furniture, which are physical reminders of him, but you think you've somehow let him down because you haven't taken up his work.I can relate to that because my father was fascinated with our family's history. He scoured records and visited places looking for clues about his family, and he put together several volumes of the 'family tree'. He was meticulus about keeping them up-to-date, adding new births, deaths, address changes, etc. Unfortunately, I am interested in those things, but not to the extent he was. When he passed away five years ago, his books weren't updated and passing wasn't recorded. I'm not sure I could type it in the book if I wanted to because it would be too sad. Maybe some day I will do it. I feel I've let him down by not keeping up with his legacy of the family tree.

Susan/Greenleaf

Jim Darcy wrote 347 days ago

Ok, thin little poem: I read poetry aloud and a couple of lines I struggled to make flow:
'though he means no-one any harm'
'one of the myriad'
I understood myriad does not a 'the' in front of it?
Clerihews; enjoyed immensely - including the Tonia one- very smart indeed.
I've been deader - nice bit of fun but very much an in-joke methinks.
overall I definitely feel like the horse and the apple! :)

Meta Marbles wrote 348 days ago

Comment for your contest on 'Shot in the Dark?': At face value it seems like the man in the story has a choice to make, but in reality he has already made it. I know what it's like to be suicidal, and I also know that it takes a great amount of willpower to actually do it. It's the difference between 'cutting' and 'slitting your wrists'. Someone who actually intends to kill themselves won't take the time to think over all the external factors, there will simply be pain and a desire to end that pain.

jlbwye wrote 351 days ago

A stony Path. Yes - the Butterfly poems are so evocative. No matter how hard we try to lock up our troubled nightmares, they rise again. You have a great way with words, Bill!
Jane (Breath of Africa)

Lena M. Pate wrote 359 days ago

What delightfully wicked short stories. Too short by a long stretch! You left me wanting to hear more. I felt as if I were standing to the side eavesdropping. Too funny. Loved them and many kudos.

grouserock wrote 368 days ago

I wasn't disappointed. Since I enjoyed reading Faust's Butterfly, I expected I would like this work as well. You do have a clever way of stringing a few small words together to make them say many big things. I read a few out loud to find the right rhythm and liked some of your phrasing so much I had to re-read them. I especially liked the Sonnet from Faust's Butterfly, and Farewell to Faculty. The Forever Girl sounded like a song, and of Trees and E's made me smile. Thanks for sharing this.

RaineyC wrote 385 days ago

My first thought was 'not my cup of tea, really', but I'm hooked. I've backed it', and I'm annoyed that I don't have time to read more. The description in the first story was so vivid and the ending so dramatic. I'm in awe of authors who can pack so much in to so few words. I loved 'Worms'. The emotional impact, the poetry, the imagery, the originality... what more is there to say? Brilliant!

philip john wrote 392 days ago

It is hard not to like work that is so varied and interesting. Clearly a reflection of a lively imagination and , dare I say it, a butterfly mind which flits around so many different topics. I am not sure that I can absorb it all at one sitting, however.

Philip John

Daniel Rider wrote 393 days ago

This is one of the best works I have discovered on Authonomy.

Story and poetry collections are not an easy sell, and the quality often seems uneven when it does, with some pieces not living up to the ones surrounding them. However, this is not the case for William Holt's "A Stony Path." I was mesmerized both by the light, seemingly easy, feel of his works and the gut punch so many of them provide by the end. This is apparent right away in the Flash Fiction and Drama section (which I loved completely; there was not a sour note throughout) and the wisely-chosen first selection "Incident in a Meadow." It was such a short piece, but said a ton to me about childhood nastiness, morality, human nature, and human interaction with nature. The contrast between the narrator and the friend was remarkable, and yet this short short is crafted so well that it feels simple. I loved it and had to share it with my wife right away (something I almost never do; no, actually, something I actually have never done with an Authonomy piece up until now.) "Worms," "Cynics," "The Yogi and the Scorpion"--all the works in this section were just as strong and just as compelling.

The poetry section, I am happy to say, meets the same high quality, with "Of Trees and E's," "Shooter," and "Found Pen" being favorites. It was neat to see Holt's more playful side in a lot of these poems, not that it wasn't there in the Flash Fiction, but that I somehow came away from the poetry with a completely different feeling.

Unfortunately, I only made my way through the zombie poems before other promised return reads pulled me away, but from these first two sections, I can say that this is one particular fiction and poetry collection that deserves every consideration for publication.

I will be back to read more, hopefully very soon. Until then, six stars and a backing. An easy choice on my part.

Daniel Rider
"Indian Summer"

Rachelsarah wrote 397 days ago

The Yogi and the scorpion was a sweet and quaint piece. I enjoyed reading it. I think that this could be the first scene of a very interesting play. It could follow the tourists around different situations where they learn simple but poignant lessons encountering different religions at each stage. May i make a suggestion that it would go very well with the style that Bertolt Brecht used. I think that would suit the play very much.
As soon as I have space on my bookshelf I will be backing this as I love your poetry too.

fatema wrote 400 days ago

I am Glad that you still capturing the poetry. Heartfelt; poem splash and don't give cash, great all of them.

Rachelsarah wrote 401 days ago

i love the line "lest you deserve the mocking epitaph, here lies an optimist that made god laugh" i love the way your lines flow into one another. i think i overuse the term "flow" in comments on poetry but it is the best way i can think of to compliment a poet. i will deifinitely be reading alot more of this book.

Rachelsarah wrote 401 days ago

i've just read your first poem and had to comment now. it is such a novel idea for a poem. i love the way you have fitted modern technology(the email) into a poem. the rhyme is tactfully done, usually i don't too much like rhyme in a poem but in this case it complemented the words perfectly. i will read on and let you know what i think of your other poems.

Jeff Holt wrote 414 days ago

I'm not going to pretend to be objective here, as I am commenting on my father's book. However, I believe that, as a poet myself, I have enough objectivity to say that the poems in this volume are more than just heart felt. They are that, but that is only one part of poetry. As Dad taught me, growing up, poetry is a craft, and each poem in this volume has been sculpted, not simply gushed, which is a crucial distinction, as a number of writers in the 20th century fostered the notion that poetry should simply be "the first thing that comes into your head." That's fine, if you're a teenager. I often wrote that way as a teenager. But if you want to write lines that stay with readers, you have to engage both inspiration and intellect, which William Holt certainly does.

I have known many of these poems for years, and have several favorites. I am going to briefly analyze the one that has stayed with me since the first day I read it, at some point, when I was a teen writing (genuinely) angst filled poetry. This sonnet used to be titled, simply, "Legal Matters." While I wasn't mature enough yet to appreciate the full depth of emotion that was being conveyed, and understood nothing of the very skillful use of meter for effect, I still felt the bewilderment and despair in the fourteen lines my father had crafted to describe yet another absurd event in the utterly insane years following my brother Jim's death: staring at two bland, legal documents that required his signature for the sale of my brother Jim's motorcycle.

For whomever these documents are for, these papers are simply for filing in the same types of seeminly meaningles files that fill the drawers of endless file cabinets in government buildings. But for the narrator in the poem, they are one more representation of the familiar absurdity that had haunted our house for the last two years: "getting over" Jim's death. After all, he had been crushed in a car wreck only months after he learned to drive. This hateful fact is stated matter of factly, by the narrator, and yet this same narrator is simply staring at the papers rather than signing them. A careful reader might wonder why this is. And anyone who has suffered a terrible loss, and been faced with a similar mundane task, might venture an answer: signing the paper would make this brutal, unacceptable tragedy real. Signing that paper feels like signing Jim's death certificate, or even his death warrant; perhaps there is an irrational hope, within the narrator, that if he doesn't sign it, that Jim won't really be dead.

That's as far as I will go with analyzing "Legal Matters." I just wanted to hopefully provide a little illumination of what could be going on in the poem, simply on the level of meaning. I'm not going to even touch on the prosodic elements that reinforce the heavy sense of grief in the poem, but they are certainly there, and I think it would be wonderful if someone else were to take up that challenge.

There are many, many other poems in this growing collection that would bear fruit under the same scrutiny. I am extremely pleased to see that so many readers are enjoying this collection. I am also very impressed by the flash fiction; Dad has a way of creating individual scenes that serve as microcosms for characters who are just as frightening as the characters in a particularly grim Joyce Carol Oates short story. If i ever begin to write flash fiction, I will seek to emulate that.

Well, I hope this review is interesting to readers and edifying to you, Dad. You deserve it!

Jeff Holt

Natalie1 wrote 419 days ago

I really enjoyed these, William. It's quite an art to create concise 1-piece tales such as these - a bit like writing an article. It's not easy. The constraints of space make it all the more challenging and enjoyable. I shall continue to read on as you have intrigued me! Natalie (The Diary of John Crow)

emeraldraj wrote 422 days ago

Dear William Holt,
I echo the feelings of earlier reviewers like Kalya, Hellarthus, Zap, Jessica etc It is a pity that your literary talent has not lifted you to Editor's desk even after 20 months. I claim to be a poet, but only to rue that poetry is not popular nowadays as I have received 20 rejection slips from publishers and literary agents. If you find time, please read chapter 17 of my book (apart from 600 traditonal rhymed poems in my full book)
With great pleasure, today I have backed your book.
Emerld
Third World War .

fictionguy wrote 423 days ago

Short stories are usually 2000 words. Mine grew to between six and eight thousand words. That's when I started writing novels. However, there are a couple of literary magazines that publish short-shorts as they are called. You can find them in the Writers Market. Your poems are more suited to newspapers rather than literary magazine and no,. no commercial magazine publishes poetry, not even the great poets writing today. It's getting to be a lost art.
My only advice is to try to make your stories longer, say 2000 words or more. Good luck with this. Three stars.

Kenneth Edward Lim wrote 425 days ago

William,
Enigmatic would be the word to describe your collection of literary gems. Your persona shines through not only your poems but also through the essays in the beginning and the three chapters of fiction toward the end. You have mastered the art of double entendre, making your pieces worthy of rereads more than once, every visit a new enlightenment. The irony of the spider sepukku, the whodunnit riddle of the kestrel and the dead girl, the panning of old poets all served to stimulate and titillate. Thanks for sharing.

Kenneth Edward Lim
The North Korean

Clare B wrote 426 days ago

This book is utterly brilliant, poetic and praising, I am totally in my comfort chair, relaxed, smiling and at ease with your style of writing. Brilliant...well deserved I will be backing this book and rating many stars.

Would appreciate if you could return the comment and rating, also backing if genuinely enjoy Be The Human Sunshine Clare :)

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