Good Ghosts

Hi Beatrice,
This is a excellent short story. I love the MC. Crazy --it's no secret now.
Backed with pleasure, Barry
LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS

Nice. This was a pleasure to read.

Backed with pleasure and best of luck.

El
Reckless Scarlett

Beatrice

Bravo! Well written enjoyable read.

Excellent and happy to back

The Third Eye

Really looking forward to reading these stories. Will be back with further comments.
Backed with pleasure
Helen
The Last Dream

Once I’d got to the Goblin for a brain I was hooked!
There is something about this that makes it a brilliant read, can’t put my finger on whether it your style or the humour or both that has made it a good read for me. Got to 2 had had to finish them all. I have enjoyed these immensely. – Good luck!

This is such an entertaining read. For some reason, I was expecting a comedic tale. But there is so much more to it than that. Told with joy, pain and honesty and a lovely sense of humour, this is just a book that I feel deserves to be out there. I read your three chapters and the time just flew. I found nothing to nitpick so I'll just offer my congratulations.
Good luck and backed
carl
The Time Hunters

Hi Beatrice, I enjoyed Inflatable Bats. The narrator’s dialogue with the psychic was funny and the voice is a puzzle, something that a person wouldn’t want to tell many people about. Her flair for Halloween leading up to the man in the black car is a little scary at the end when it becomes clear that she’s been leaning on the voice. A spirited telling. Shelved – Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

I read your first two stories and they are well written and well paced. I really like your use of the first person narrative and how you explore the characters' thinking process and emotions. Your finely crafted short stories are a pleasure to read. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

Welcome aboard, BB. This website will improve your writing craft, if you allow it. I'm a bit of a pitch doctor, having read thousands of pitches in my time on this website, so I want to share my insight here with you. You have to think of your pitches as your sales tool to grab the casual reader's eyes. The short pitch works. The long pitch needs to be expanded upon, show more of a mini story arch, end with a question to pique your readers' interest. Perfecting your pitches is how you climb in ranking to gather more exposure and comments to better your novel. The writing is good so I am SHELVING you.

Though I have been a very active member for over a year and have the most commented book on the website, I can still use your comments on my book when you get the chance. Every little bit helps. Cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

Dear Beatrice, I got so excited when I saw that you had backed, "He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not." :) Thanks so very much. :) Since I have already "backed" your book, I will put your book on my "watchlist." Could you please take a moment to "back" my completed unedited memoir version? "Tell Me True Love Stories," which at the end tells of my illness now & 6th abusive marriage. I'd be ever so grateful. :) Thank you. :) Love, Susie :)
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When you back a book, it only improves the ranking of that book, not yours. However, the author whose book you are backing may decide to back your book also, in which case yes, your ranking would be improved...authonomy

GOOD GHOSTS
This is a unique set of short stories. Halloween is my favorite holiday – I decorate just like your character in the first story – then wish as she did I had young children to enjoy the holiday with me. So your first story really popped out at me. Your third one equally struck home. I inherited a grandfather clock from my mother-in-law and it never chimes at the right time. I’ve always thought she did that to it to irritate me – but maybe not. Maybe there are other forces out there . . . Bottom line: I liked this book a lot. I’m adding it to my shelf. Burgio (Grain of Salt).

Hi Beatrice, I really liked your work and thought it was so different from the usual Chick-lit read.
I had no hesitation in backing you and I wish you luck.
Best wishes,

Barry
LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS

Dear Beatrice, I love your stories - God said He would give His angels charge over us to keep us in all our ways. :) Your pitch was very well done, setting the hook for me to read your book. :) Your story is good because you create interest by having short paragraphs & lots of dialogue, which makes me want to keep reading to find out what's going to happen next. I'm "backing" your book. :) "When you back a book, it only improves the ranking of that book, not yours. However, the author whose book you are backing may decide to back your book also, in which case yes, your ranking would be improved"...authonomy quote. :) Please "back" my TWO memoir books, "He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not" & my completed memoir unedited version? "Tell Me True Love Stories," which tells at the end, my illness now & 6th abusive marriage." Thanks, Susie :)
additional authonomy quote: "Every time you place a book on your bookshelf, your recommendation pushes the book up the rankings. And while that book sits on your bookshelf, your reputation as a talent spotter increases depending on how well that book performs." :)

backed :)
Love, Susie :)

I agree with lynn, you are limiting your market by labelling this YA. The writing and your narrative voice is wonderful, full of vigour and life (no pun intended)!! Brilliant stories that are easy to read and that I can happily put on my shelf.

Best of luck
Melxxx
Impeding Justice

Good writing, backed, Eveleen.

This is excellent stuff: vivid characters, an excellent and unique premise, and a great deal of intelligence and wit. Backed with absolute pleasure.
Abi xxx

Apologies to YA but this seems far too subtle and sophisticated to be written for just them.
I love the way you talk directly to the reader and your descriptions are some of the clearest and most vivid on this site. Dialogue sounding the way we speak, and most importantly, ghosts. You begin each of your stories in a way that hooks us. Backed. Lynn

Beatrice, what a fantastic read. I love how you immediately feel a connection with the characters and the plot. When we can we expect the next one please........... I wait in anticipation ..............

Beatrice this is a good read and do like the way you have incorporated 3 shorter stories it makes for an interesting book. Crafted well with an upbeat feel to it all which I like and your characters played well in my head. SHELVED and welcome to the site. you will do well

Would you take the time to read some of my book and give me your feedback. All comments are always welcome, one can never get too much help. and if you like it please back it.
BACKED
BEST OF LUCK
Denise

BACKED with pleasure. Excellent premise with talented writing.

Liz
The Cheech Room

Welcome and good luck, I think this is perfect for your target audience, I wish you the best of luck. E.Loraine Royal Blood Chronicles book one