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date submitted 14.07.2010
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PEASANT REBEL

Paul McGuire

A fourteenth century peasant youth is catapulted into the centre of the Peasants' Revolt, one of the most dramatic episodes of British history.

 

Set in late 14th C England, this is an all-action, fast-moving middle-grade historical tale that will also appeal to adults.

Readers will identify with Spragg, a peasant youth who takes a literal and metaphorical journey beyond his traditional boundaries that simultaneously stretches his view of the world and challenges- and then confirms - his convictions and beliefs. On the way his story unfolds at the very heart of social and economic forces that changed England for ever.

Tthe young Page of a rebel Lord, monks, villagers and vagabonds join forces to confront the most powerful forces of the middle ages with little more than their wits and simple weaponry.

Within the main plot are sub-plots of romance and political intrigue woven around what is left of the historical record. The central question remains: will the rebellion succeed for each of the main characters?

 
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The dying embers of the cooking fire spat and crackled as Guy reluctantly rubbed a gobbet of pig’s fat into his hair.  He then pulled one of Spragg’s old smocks over his shoulders. 

“You’ll make a peasant yet,” laughed Spragg.

“More chance than you’ll be a knight I venture,” he teased. “This material is rough, but it will do I suppose.”

Spragg did not rise to the bait, choosing to tease Guy instead.  “My sister be a good seamstress, don’t you think?” 

Guy quickly diverted the conversation.  “How will we eat on the road?”

“The forest will provide us with food. We can survive on roots and berries alone even if we catch no game.  I’ve packed some bread and turnip strips and some of mother’s oat cake.”

Guy did not want to embarrass his friend, so he suppressed a grimace as he recalled great feasts in the castle during which guests ate the finest meat till their stomachs could take no more.  Instead he focused on more practical matters.

“My master tells me stories of campaigns he fought in far-off lands spending weeks away from camp, far from farms and rivers. Once he was forced to eat rats.  I doubt we will be so sorely tested.”

“Has your master killed many men?” Spragg asked.

“Knights use violence only when necessary, and take no pleasure in it.  They are guided in thought and deed by a code of chivalry.”

“Could I ever be a knight?”

Guy began to smile but could see Spragg was serious. “I think it would not be so easy with no coin.  My father pays a lot for my training.” 

Spragg’s face fell.  Guy slung a sympathetic arm around his shoulder, but he shrugged it off. 

“Leave me alone,” he huffed.

Guy could think of no words to comfort his friend, so instead he took the cross found in the parchment from his pocket and hung it round Spragg’s neck as a gift.  Spragg was about to protest when, to his dismay, Maewynn flounced in with bright eyes and a grin as broad as a barn door.  Her braided hair was tightened into a bun and she wore a dress Spragg had not seen before.

“I thought you’d be sulking today, sister.  What makes you so pleased to be stuck at home instead of coming with us?”

Maewynn settled, cross-legged, atop a lichen-covered oak stump.  She freed her hair and the spring sunlight glowed from every strand.  The daisy necklace she wore around her neck added a golden sheen to her soft skin.  However she might try, she could not banish Guy from her mind and meant to act on her growing feelings for him.

“I’m taking Guy to the old granary in the woods. Father says I can’t go there alone.” Spragg could think of no good reason for anyone to visit the broken-down shell of a building, but seeing the look on Guy’s face he held his tongue.

Guy tried in vain to avoid Maewynn’s longing gaze.  His stomach felt shivery and light and these new sensations made him both nervous and excited.  Their eyes met in that sparkling instant Guy enthusiastically agreed to accompany her.

As the couple strolled off together, Spragg grabbed his shoulder pouch and headed for the fields.  Minutes later he found his father planting buckwheat on the far strip next to the pond. He lay down his sowing bag. 

“Hello, boy,” he greeted him. “Be you ready to leave?”

Spragg straightened.  “Yes sir, though I’ve work to do here. You need much help with the planting these next few weeks.”

His father smiled.  “You be a good son, but I have friends and can cope here while you’re gone. The good folks of Moldwood will help and will keep your leaving secret.” 

Spragg was about to reply, when a wrenching scream rent the air.  He and his father reached the green at the same time and they both started at the sight of Modrag, writhing on the floor gripping his bleeding arm. All around, villagers stood open-mouthed.

A pompous-looking official, wearing a cloak with gold braiding stood over the potter and waved his metal-tipped rod in the air like a scythe.  He was flanked by two soldiers bearing black shields.

“What’s going on here?” demanded Agrik.   “This be a peaceful village, we want no trouble.”

“Quiet your tongue, peasant.  My name is Bancroft the Reeve. Mark it well.  I have come to collect the taxes due to the King,”  he growled. “These men are searching for an escaped fugitive from justice, wounded these past few days not far from here.  Should any man be found helping the rogue, their vengeance will be swift and deadly.” 

He looked to Spragg like someone who would not be so brave without his tough companions.

Agrik stepped two foot lengths forward.  “Are you collecting money for the King or yourself?”

“Have a care,” rasped the Reeve.  “Peasant vermin may fool local lords into paying only half what is owed, but you will not find me so easy to deal with.”

“Nor us, my friend.”  Agrik looked about him and raised his hand.  About a dozen villagers ghosted from the shadows, carrying axes, pitchforks and sturdy oak staves.  They held their simple weapons aloft and strode purposefully toward Bancroft and the two Regent’s men.

Bancroft realised the odds were against him. “Fools. You do not know the power of your enemies. The King does not take kindly to disobedience.  Nor will I forget this insult.”

Spragg clenched his fist.  This man was threatening his village and he rose to speak.  “You can kill or punish a few, but not every man.  We work hard and be not slaves or criminals.”  His father moved to restrain him, but he continued.  “We’ve been bullied enough.  We’ll defend ourselves as you can see.  Return if you will.”  Beads of sweat peppered Spragg’s face, but his resolve did not falter.  An evil glint appeared in Bancroft’s shifty, brown eyes. 

“You people will see me again, of that you can be sure, and I will teach you that life is not fair.  Not fair at all.” He pulled his cloak angrily around him, mounted his horse and thundered away.

The potter’s daughters rushed to their father.  There they saw that Reeve’s blade had left a nasty gash three fingers wide. The eldest called for water, a clean cloth and a cup of burdock root powder to tend the wound. 

Although Agrik was proud of his son and the way he’d spoken out, he remained nervous that the boy was brave beyond his abilities.  Over the years, he’d seen poor folk suffer much violence and knew they were now in great danger.  Perhaps it really was for the best he was leaving soon, he thought.  Agrik leapt up onto a barrel to address the whole village. 

“My friends, neighbours, be not feared by what you’ve seen here today.  Stand together and we’ll be safe. Let us go about our work and do what we must. Go now, care for your families but be watchful.”  As the crowd dispersed Seth seemed in more of a hurry than the rest.

Spragg checked Modrag was comfortable and the girls needed no more help then ran to the monastery to fetch the friar and Juilliard.  On the way back to the village, this time at a more leisurely pace, he told them everything that had happened, missing out only the role he himself had played. 

“We must leave as soon as possible,” Spragg told Juilliard when they were alone.  “Friar Rowan says there have been riots in several towns and villages across this county and the next. Soldiers and landlords are panicking.  Even if only half the stories are true we need to hurry. Where’s Guy?”

As Spragg remembered the answer to his own question, Maewynn and Guy approached from the woods and, for a second, their hands touched.  Spragg called the group together and glanced at Rowan to get permission to speak first. Rowan nodded his assent.

“A change of plan. We leave tonight at dusk, and travel by moonlight.  Anyone found where they shouldn’t be could get arrested, and most likely worse.  Let’s meet back here in two hours.”

    Spragg packed what he needed for the trip, including his trusty bow.  They would have to move quickly. The open road was no place for lay-a-beds and speed of foot could mean the difference between living and dying.  Guy welcomed the return to action.  He was anxious to complete what he had started.  In other times he may have chosen different travelling companions, but needs must, he thought. 

    Darkness fell quickly as the group gathered. A loud chorus of chirruping of crickets and the distant howl of a prowling wolf cut through their nervousness.  Juilliard’s attempts to look saintly were laughably weak and Spragg still thought the storyteller ridiculous, but there was no time to waste. Spragg’s throat was dry with nerves at the prospect of finally making a start.  He swallowed hard and addressed the others.

“We’ll just about pass as a group of holy pilgrims I think. With luck, folks on the road will be too busy to pay us much heed.  And you three,” he said to Guy, Juilliard and Rowan, “better pray for good fortune.” 

    Spragg kissed his mother then shook hands with his father.  Maewynn stood silently, staring vaguely at appoint in the distance.  Guy put down his bag so he could gently usher her just out of hearing.  He brushed her cheeks lightly with his fingertips. 

    “This business will have an end, then I promise to come back to see you.” He was scarcely able to look away from her moistening eyes.  Maewynn was ready to place her trust in him, to love him from the depths of her soul.  She pulled from her pocket a small amulet filled with senna, mint and rue. 

“Take this, and wear it on your journey, it will protect you from danger. I made it myself.”  A single salty droplet slid down her cheek.

 

 

 

 

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iandsmith wrote 477 days ago

Paul, As far as I can tell, this novel should, "engage the mind of young readers". Seems like a good effort to me. The action's well written, I can picture Spragg, the Wat Tyler revolt is as relevant as it's ever been, and there aren't any grammar errors. Not much to comment on really. Well done - Ian

GriffinsMustFly wrote 755 days ago

Nice...very nice...from the first chapter you weave an intricate tale already. Keep it up, and keep promoting, and you'll have a publishing contract sooner or later, I think :)

hockgtjoa wrote 819 days ago

I enjoyed this very much despite an occasional lapse in agreement between who was speaking and who was spoken tow (I suggest you proof read by reading aloud to some one else or vice versa). I would also make sure to have each chapter tell enough of the story to make it a satisfying episode--think of TV episodes. Some of the chapters currently fall short. Four stars.

RonParker wrote 913 days ago

Hi Paul,

I'm not a fan of historical fiction, but this is good and I shall certainly be returning to read more when I have the time. You have obviously spent a consierable amount of time on research.

There are, espeially in chapter 3, a few pov issues, but I'm sure you can sor these out in a re-draft.

One small continuity point, in chapter one, you give sprags age as 15, but in a later chapter he says he is four years older than 12, which would make him 16. A minor point but the kind of thing readers pick up on.

Ron

WendyB wrote 978 days ago

Your pedantic pitch and first chapter heading don't do your work justice.
This is an appealing book for young people and adults alike.
It has an attractive, familiar period voice, and the subject is an interesting one.
Well done.

Wendy Bertsch
(Once More...From the Beginning)

TuesdaysChild wrote 986 days ago

The writing is clear, crisp, gives the reader something to wrap their mind around. If I had more time, I'd read more, but I'm trying to catch up with dozens of requests! Good writing here. Backed.

shornexe wrote 991 days ago

A strong opening chapter. Nice touches with the historical details that do just enough to set the scene without becoming overtly instructional. I suspect Spragg will prove to be a witty, resourceful and likeable character.
Well written stuff, backed with pleasure.
Shaun
The Six Acts

Joanna Carter wrote 992 days ago

I found this engaging, atmospheric and well written. On my shelf.
Joanna
Fossil Farm

lj reads wrote 992 days ago

It seems scary. You're obviously not afraid to write about anything. Descriptive. Good for you Paul!

Sly80 wrote 996 days ago

Spragg encounters one of the 'fancy folk' but in dire circumstances. Having taken him to the healer, he's off again the next day to see the results. Instead he finds another wounded creature, and by helping the she-wolf, has perhaps earnt himself some dangerous allies. He shows even more cunning when covering for the injured page. But the friar finds them with the message, and young Guy must decide who to trust...

Lively, colourful writing of the kind that will engage any child's imagination: 'his white naked backside as flabby as a vat of baker's dough', 'scraggly hair exploding in random directions', 'seven snarling shapes ghosted into view'. This is an authentic introduction to a time and place in history which comes alive through the various characters, and in particular, Spragg, a street-wise kid in a time before 'streets' as we know them. There's a slight flourish of fantasy with his helping of the wolf, but that just adds to the thrills that children will get from this absorbing and exciting story ... backed.

Possible nits: 'pushing towards the morning light ... pushed through a tangle ... pushed these thoughts'. There's no sign or mention of Magda when the boys meet again at her hut. There are quite a few M names: Magda, Modrag, Moldwood, Mayweather; the first 2 being particularly easy to confuse.

mvw888 wrote 999 days ago

Wonderful sense of time and place, and a plot that begins in the middle of the action, right from the start. You have a direct yet descriptive style that moves along at a pleasing pace. The discovery of the injured boy is an intriguing start, and you hint at Spragg's past in a way that leaves us wanting more, in a good way. (Although I couldn't help but think that that early wolf bite may lead to some werewolf type of plot--I think that's a result of reading so many books here on authonomy :-).) Well done. Really enjoyed this.

---Mary
The Qualtiies of Wood

paperbat wrote 1000 days ago

Good afternoon Paul.
I read half a dozen chapters of your book and found it very easy to the eye. The pcae was good, as was the characterisation of young Spagg. You obviously know and researched your medieval history, so you could paint a realistic picture for the reader to enter.
The best comment you have, however, is when you say as an introduction '' The central question remains: will the rebellion succeed for each of the main characters''. Now this is key, because as we know the actual outcome, one can not expect a surpise there. However for the individuals, we must weight and see or sohould I say read the whole book!
Excellent. BACKED.

I would really appreciate if you could reciprocate and read some of my childrens' book called Adventures of the Paperbats''.
Many thanks. Jerry [paperbat]

Daniel Manning wrote 1003 days ago

Lord Moldwood sends out an urgent coded message, but its intercepted by the regents men, leaving only one assigned to do the job still alive. A peasant boy helps the high born to safety, and together they set out to deliver the message.
Treminology such as high born and tax coin means the class system and money were unknown entities but issues such as taxation are the causes of friction between those of the noble class, and the peasantry. Lets hope the message triggers another poll tax riot. We see the peasant boy benevolent of all living things, while the high born is trained for adventure and war, so the story is as informative as it is entertaining.
Nicely written period piece that endeavours to retain authenticity, crucial if the object is to educate as well as entertain which I think the story does so successfully, so for that reason it has my backing.
Daniel Manning
No Compatibility.
Minor typos Chapter two: The path fmeandered through abandoned fields covered in weeds and corn stubble.
Chapter four: Spragg hesitated but he remained determined to act 'You'll need to k...'

CarolinaAl wrote 1009 days ago

Your brilliant, dynamic story grabbed me and kept me riveted. Credible characters. Crisp dialogue that evokes the era. Vital writing. I absolutely love this thoughtfully composed story. Backed.

nsllee wrote 1009 days ago

sorry, I meant Monty Python and the Holy Grail, of course.

Nicole

nsllee wrote 1009 days ago

Hi Paul

I enjoyed this. I don't usually go for mediaeval tales with everyone wandering around covered in mud and rough homespun like extras from Life of Brian, but you manage to pull it off and engage the reader. Spragg is a very sympathetic hero and it's great the way you introduce new introduce into each chapter - Magda, the wolves, the political element. Very nicely done. Backed.

Nicole
Chosen

John Warren-Anderson wrote 1014 days ago

Great opening chapter, full of action, suspense, and attmosphere. And it finishes with a laugh.
That reminded me of a Dave Alan joke.
"If you don't suck the poison out your friend will die."
"What did the doctor say?"
"He said you're going to die."
Backed

Lisa Scullard wrote 1016 days ago

Peasant Rebel is a really good Young Adult historical read - immediately involving, shows the author's writing experience straight away. Would appeal to fans of the 'Robin Hood' genre era.

All the best (and sorry for the wait returning the read),
Lisa (Death And The City)

homewriter wrote 1017 days ago

What a gripping start. I love historical fiction and you write it so well. Brilliant. I reall like Spragg already! Well worth returning for more! Gordon - The Harpist of Madrid, also an historical novel

homewriter wrote 1017 days ago

What a gripping start. I love historical fiction and you write it so well. Brilliant. I reall like Spragg already! Well worth returning for more! Gordon - The Harpist of Madrid, also an historical novel

theweed wrote 1018 days ago

PEASANT REBEL - 8/11/2010

The pitch does not do justice to the story. It could be much more effective by reflecting the suspense and action. The story does start out with a bang and keeps going. I like the imagery and descriptions, but the details of the plant life might be a bit overdone. The MC is a good anchor for the story, appealing to the young adult and full of pride and defiance. But, the "mud-brown eyes" are not exactly a good complement for him. Mud just doesn't inspire likability.

Dialogue is well done, just enough of the vernacular to place the story in the time frame, but no to the point of rendering it unreadable. The plot is sound and includes enough twists and complications to keeps a reader's interest. A good young adult read. Good luck with it.

Marc - Where's The Ivy

Wilma1 wrote 1024 days ago

There is something highly engaging about your book. Chapter one sets us a challenge to find out what’s in the pouch and who it is to be delivered to. Spragg’s encounter with the wolves is both magical and scary at the same time. We are left in no doubt that Spragg is special and will encounter many challenges. If my shelf were not so full I would read more than the two chapters as your book promises a gifted story

Wilma1
Knowing Liam Riley – I hope you can spare a moment to take a look

Walden Carrington wrote 1026 days ago

Paul,
Peasant Rebel is a well-researched and riveting historical with universal appeal. Backed with pleasure.

Eveleen wrote 1029 days ago

Backed
Lenny Harry
(Like a dot on the horizon)

Benjamin Dancer wrote 1031 days ago

I backed your book a few days ago based on chapter one, came back and read through chapter five. I'll to come back for more tomorrow. Great job with names and evoking a sense of place. Good luck!

Benjamin Dancer

Muggins100 wrote 1035 days ago

Thanks so much for your kind message. Much appreciated.
Paul M.

Peasant Rebel
A must read for historical fiction fans,young and old! Reminiscent of Ken Follett's "Pillars of the Earth". Well researched and great pace. Loved it.
Alison Butler

Butler's Girl wrote 1035 days ago

Peasant Rebel
A must read for historical fiction fans,young and old! Reminiscent of Ken Follett's "Pillars of the Earth". Well researched and great pace. Loved it.
Alison Butler

andrew skaife wrote 1037 days ago

HI. I really enjoyed this and I can see it having a wider audience than just YA. I have been a teacher of English for many years and would have appreciated writing of this quality to engage my students, too many of whom are fading away from reading altogether. This would certainly have been a welcome addition to my lesson plan resources but would also have been something the students could have taken home for themselves.

You manage to create a strong and vibrant character in Spragg that will carry the narrative easily along. I am also a father of four who actively sought to turn the kids to reading. They would have loved this.

Excellent stuff and you set your time period in stone.

BACKED.

Elizabeth Wolfe wrote 1037 days ago

You have an exceptionally beautiful cover and a good pitch. These elements make the reader want more. I enjoy this historical period. You've done an excellent writing job here.

BACKED
Elizabeth Wolfe
Would you consider backing MEMORIES OF GLORY? I thank you for taking a look.

mariecapri wrote 1039 days ago

Hi Paul. You flash out your characters really well. Spragg is really great and Magda a great contrast. You have caught the era in a contemporary way through your writing, which lows well. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic Linx)

LintonWood wrote 1039 days ago

As a fan and writer of historical fiction, it was only right and proper that I looked in. I like your contemporary style, which manages to maintain period authenticity in its words. I also like Spragg, I reckon he might just grow up into my kind of scum! One or two parts could be trimmed a little, but I reckon you can pick those up yourself. I am all for the idea of historical fiction for children.
Best wishes and good luck,
Linton

DP Walker wrote 1040 days ago

Hi Paul
A charming piece of writing with some wonderful visual imagery. This is entertaining and educational as well - quite original. I wasn't sure which age group it was aimed as some of the language might be tricky for younger children. Overall, I loved it and I'm sure my kids would too.
DP Walker
Five Dares

celticwriter wrote 1040 days ago

Hey Paul, love the genre. Nice story telling. Backed.

blessings,
jim
jack & charmian london

name falied moderation wrote 1040 days ago

Dear Paul
I did, yes comment and back this book a few days ago, however I cannot find the backing. I believe this book is worth taking the trouble to do it again, so I am. BEST OF LUCK

Denise
The Letter

Paul_aucuparius wrote 1040 days ago

Hi Paul
I'm enjoying your writing - an unusual genre.

klouholmes wrote 1040 days ago

Hi Paul, This took me right to the time and the action began swiftly. You've incorporated Spragg's background, his being no stranger to death, easily into the developing plot. Interesting characters, the messenger and Morag. It's vivid and written so that Spragg's age level would become immersed too. Easily shelved - Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

A Knight wrote 1041 days ago

Historical fiction for children is something you don't see very often, and you really have something amazing here. There's a real sense of the era, volatile and thrilling, and I adore seeing something that has such a firm foundation of research to hold up what promises to be a thrilling plot!

Backed with pleasure
Abi xxx

Muggins100 wrote 1041 days ago

Thanks Missy
Much appreciated. I will check your work out too. Hope you do manage more than three chapters as the action picks up!
Cheers
Paul

I'm a huge fan of historical fiction and this is detailed and well researched. I don't know much about English history so I also felt like I was learning something and it was fascinating. You've done a wonderful job, this had such a nice feel to it. Great job and I'm going to try and come back to read past the 3rd chapter.

Missy

missyfleming_22 wrote 1042 days ago

I'm a huge fan of historical fiction and this is detailed and well researched. I don't know much about English history so I also felt like I was learning something and it was fascinating. You've done a wonderful job, this had such a nice feel to it. Great job and I'm going to try and come back to read past the 3rd chapter.

Missy

Muggins100 wrote 1042 days ago

Chris
Really appreciate your comments and support. I Also love history and, like you, feel Wat Tyler deserves wider recognition and if my humble offering does this in a minor way then that will be very satisfying, I am a bit busy with many things right now but hope to return and repay comments such as yours with a serious consideration of their work. Once again, many thanks.
Paul

Paul, this is a great story and one that is hardly touched on by historical writers. Wat Tyler and the Peasant's Revolt is a period of history barely touched upon by storytellers OR historians and it's easy to see why. It was a near-revolution ahead of its time and nearly put paid to feudalism. Wat Tyler is one of the great unsung heroes of British history in my view and it's good that someone has marked him out. He was three centuries ahead of Cromwell, as were John Ball and the Lollards. Tyler was Trotsky to Ball's Lenin if you like. It was only because of the objective conditions of the time that they didn't succeed - it was, after all, a peasants' revolt. The peasantry were tied to the land and its seasons and could never sustain a campaign to any great length, but they came so close to giving history a shove. Thank you.
The writing is storytelling of the highest order and, I think, is accessible to ALL ages (I'm 54 and I liked it). The plot and characters are believable and fit the time period. The dialogue is great. It's on my shelf. Hope it gets published. Chris1

Chris 1 wrote 1043 days ago

Paul, this is a great story and one that is hardly touched on by historical writers. Wat Tyler and the Peasant's Revolt is a period of history barely touched upon by storytellers OR historians and it's easy to see why. It was a near-revolution ahead of its time and nearly put paid to feudalism. Wat Tyler is one of the great unsung heroes of British history in my view and it's good that someone has marked him out. He was three centuries ahead of Cromwell, as were John Ball and the Lollards. Tyler was Trotsky to Ball's Lenin if you like. It was only because of the objective conditions of the time that they didn't succeed - it was, after all, a peasants' revolt. The peasantry were tied to the land and its seasons and could never sustain a campaign to any great length, but they came so close to giving history a shove. Thank you.
The writing is storytelling of the highest order and, I think, is accessible to ALL ages (I'm 54 and I liked it). The plot and characters are believable and fit the time period. The dialogue is great. It's on my shelf. Hope it gets published. Chris1

mvw888 wrote 1043 days ago

Expertly done. You give the broader context, then you reel us in with your characters and place the story at a personal level. Great pacing, great descriptions and dialogue. Really enjoyed this.

---Mary
The Qualities of Wood

Craig Ellis wrote 1043 days ago

Beautifully written in a period context. Excellent description of the world and the plight of the MC within it (Spragg).Good hook with the package that was flung by the soldier, and the subsequent appearance of the boy looking for it.

Just a note: "peasants'" is spelled wrong in your short pitch.

Backed.

Craig Ellis
The Sun and the Saber

cutley wrote 1044 days ago

Welcome. I hope this thread on the forum helps: http://www.authonomy.com/Forum/posts_new.aspx?threadId=58801

Charles

Niobrara Kardnova wrote 1044 days ago

I think Peasant Rebel is a book that should do well with older children and young adult readers. You've assembled a colorful set of characters (Mad Magda's my favorite so far), constructed an adventurous plot line, and added bits of mystery to each section--Why were the soldiers attacked? What was in the leather case? Where do John Ball and the Lollards fit into the political alliances that are forming?, etc. I'd never heard of the Peasant's Revolt before, so any historical tidbits you could scour out were news to me. I also liked the setting you created--the facts about folk medicine, damp soil used as insulation and the like mixed in with the elements of fable, such as the wolves and, if one could call her such, Magda the witch gave a scary but convincing mood to the piece. Backed with pleasure.
Niobrara Kardnova (The Trouble with Wives)

SammySutton wrote 1044 days ago


Clever, Interesting, Very High Energy!

It doesn't feel as if you were tired when you wrote it.
Great imagery!
Spragg is an incredible character.

Paul,
...'beads of sweat oozed from his pores'... Love That!
Great Job!
Backed!
Good Luck!
Sammy Sutton
King Solomon's '13'

Jack Hughes wrote 1044 days ago

Fantastic! I studied the Peasant Revolt on 1381 on my history degree but this is the first story I have ever come across about Wat Tyler. You have a great style and excellent pace and a highly original story. Brilliant. Backed without hesitation, best of luck my friend.

Jack Hughes
Dawn of Shadows

Craig Phoenix wrote 1044 days ago

I liked this, good style and characters.

Backed

If you get the time could you take a look at 'Soulshadow' or 'Toby'

Craig Phoenix

Burgio wrote 1044 days ago

PEASANT REBEL
This is a good story. The opening scene is dramatic: the boar . . . the soldiers . . . the injured boy . . . Spragg is a good character; he’s both likable and sympathetic. The kind of character who is interesting to follow to see how everything plays out for him. Your writing style is good for this genre. You have a lot of things that need described but you know to keep descriptions to a minimum so your story keeps moving. Makes this an enjoyable read. I’m adding this to my shelf. Burgio (Grain of Salt).

name falied moderation wrote 1044 days ago

Dear Paul
You have done a lot of work for this book with regard to research I feel sure. CONGRATS on a really good read. Well crafted with a story that is so gripping and it is impossible to put down. I have not read it all but will carry on. Both your pitches are so good and the very thing that grabbed me and would not let me go till i read on.
BACKED BY ME FOR SURE
I do hope you will review my book, comment and most of all BACK it. but either way the BEST of luck with yours
Denise
The Letter

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