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date submitted 14.07.2010
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PEASANT REBEL

Paul McGuire

A fourteenth century peasant youth is catapulted into the centre of the Peasants' Revolt, one of the most dramatic episodes of British history.

 

Set in late 14th C England, this is an all-action, fast-moving middle-grade historical tale that will also appeal to adults.

Readers will identify with Spragg, a peasant youth who takes a literal and metaphorical journey beyond his traditional boundaries that simultaneously stretches his view of the world and challenges- and then confirms - his convictions and beliefs. On the way his story unfolds at the very heart of social and economic forces that changed England for ever.

Tthe young Page of a rebel Lord, monks, villagers and vagabonds join forces to confront the most powerful forces of the middle ages with little more than their wits and simple weaponry.

Within the main plot are sub-plots of romance and political intrigue woven around what is left of the historical record. The central question remains: will the rebellion succeed for each of the main characters?

 
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“We must move quickly,” Guy advised.  “While I was in the Tower I overheard the King being urged to break all his promises, betray the rebels, and execute as many as he pleases.  He intends to march any survivors out of London.” 

A whiff of incense drifted from inside the church as the boys disentangled themselves from the hedge.  Both laughed at the sight of each other covered in scratches. Thin rivulets of blood ran, like dribbling streams, across every inch of their exposed skin. 

I’ve seen enough excitement, thought Spragg.  Witnessing so much violence in a short time made him realise being a knight would not solve the world’s problems.  Again he yearned for home and long days hunting in the forest with his father, far from bloodshed and chaos.  Working the fields in all weathers might be dull in comparison, but it was a life worth fighting for. If only the battle could be won without killing. But how?

Guy’s heart was also in Moldwood with Maewynn. Nothing would prevent him going back for her.  He trembled at the memory of her. 

    “To my mind, Richard be no real king to treat folk so bad,” said Spragg.  “Can we warn the rebels of what he plans to do?” 

“No, it’s too late. Our only hope is to slip away. The King is desperate for the names of the nobles who were behind the rebellion, so I must not be caught. Cramper will surely have his murderous hands on me next time.”

“Don’t worry.  We be looking more like we have the plague than be recognised as rebels,” Spragg joked as he wiped a dock leaf across Guy’s face to clean the blood smears before setting off. 

Montfort beat them to the village by five hours.  He jogged his war-horse onto the common. The scene was exactly as Spragg had described it to him. No stranger to poor villages in foreign lands, the whiff of neglect and desperation in his own country tore at his heart.  Tying his horse to a sycamore tree, he ambled towards the only house with a pig tied up outside where he spied a handsome woman and, sitting next to her, a pretty maiden weaving yarn on a simple loom. However, there was no sign of the man he had come to see.  Reluctant to disturb their work, he approached quietly.

“Good day to you, ladies.”  Orla and Maewynn looked quizzically at the stranger.  “I am a friend to the boy Spragg, and I seek his father. Am I addressing his mother?”

Orla grabbed Montfort by the arm, shouting wildly.  “Why speak you thus? “ she screamed. “Don’t talk of my husband, he be dead. Where’s my son?” Montfort pushed Orla away.  He looked into her deep, brown eyes and thought her attractive even when she was angry.

“I’m truly sorry to hear of your husband’s death,” he began when Orla was calm. “He will be in my prayers,”  Montfort signed himself with the mark of the cross.  “Your son was with me in London and when I left him he was safe and in good health.  I plan to meet him here and expect him at any time.”

  “What be your business here,” Maewynn demanded.

“Forgive my poor manners.  My name is Beaufort de Montfort of Guisedale, Guy is my page.”  Both women stared in surprise.

“But you are dressed ….” Maewynn spluttered.

Montfort chuckled at his baker’s disguise. 

“Believe me madam, I am who I say I am. I have had no chance these last days to change back into my own clothing.” Maewynn pouted, her eyebrows drawn close over suspicious eyes. 

“You speak well of my brother, but what news of Guy? Be quick to tell.”      Montfort was not used to being treated such, especially by a girl, but he took no offense.

“He is a prisoner of King Richard and I fear for his safety and my own,” he revealed.

Maewynn stamped her feet.  “Then you be a coward if you abandoned him.”     

“Would that things were so simple,” Montfort countered.  “The rebellion has failed, and anyone involved is now in grave danger.  It seems the King has betrayed us.”

Maewynn fought back tears.  She rushed into the house and curled onto the bed in a tight ball.  First her father and now Guy.  It was too much to bear.

“Do anybody know of Spragg’s part in the revolt?” asked Orla in a quivering voice.

“No madam.  Though I must tell you his involvement was small and of no consequence,” he lied. “When we met in London he was much afraid and hiding away from trouble. The Regent’s men will most likely return to Moldwood for revenge.  The King is certain that it was Guy that escaped them and that he rested somewhere near. I myself saw twenty rebels hanged this morning as a warning to anyone thinking of fighting on.”

Orla shuddered. “My daughter grew fond of Guy while he stayed here. Very fond.  We be poor, and though it’s true she must wed a local boy if we’re to survive, her heart lies with your page, I fancy.”

“Worry not gentle lady.  Your daughter knows her own mind I am sure.  You also have a fine son who will return. Then he will answer to me as he must.”  Montfort stood up and Orla sensed something amiss in his thin, strained smile. 

“I need to attend to an urgent errand and will return within two days.”  He bowed politely and held Orla’s eyes for several seconds more than was polite or necessary, before striding towards his horse.

An hour later, Seth arrived to find Orla more distant than usual.  She had grown tired of his daily visits.  Angry at her coldness, he slammed the door at this latest rebuff.  Orla kneaded a ball of dough oblivious to his moodiness.  She had more important things than village gossip to care about. 

Still distracted, she ignored the voice that greeted her from the doorway. 

“Mother, it’s me. I’m back,” Spragg shouted.  Orla blinked and, at first, did not register the evidence of her eyes.  When she realised she wasn’t dreaming, she rushed to hug her son, squeezing him so tightly his faced turned puce.  When she realised Guy was standing outside, she waved him in and embraced them both.  Every muscle in her face shone with joy.

Orla led her son outside.  Guy listened as she told Spragg the news of his father’s death at the hands of the tax collector and the terrible tale of how other villagers were also butchered.  She kept her daughter’s suspicions about Seth to herself.

Orla held Spragg’s hand as the look of grim determination on her son’s face turned to rage.  He pulled away from her and punched the wall of the hut until his knuckles bled, barely noticing the pain.

“I’ve had my fill of killin’.  No good comes of it,” he howled.  Pushing his mother away, his eyes blurred with tears and he ran as far as the reed beds protecting the banks of the stream.  There he scrambled high onto a sturdy branch of a sycamore and pictured the times he had sat in similar trees watching his father scything and binding.  Great rasping sobs shook his whole body. 

It took Guy nearly an hour to find his friend.  He approached cautiously and sat beneath the tree to wait. He thought his friend had not noticed him until he suddenly spoke.

“Why do people kill each other?” asked Spragg.  “I make no sense of it.”

“My master told me there will always be war and sometimes you must fight for something you believe in. You may think nothing has changed these last weeks, but those who care about fairness and freedom have lit a spark across England that will not be doused until justice is done. You have played your part and can be proud. I will fight on if needs be and won’t rest until people like you get what they deserve.”

“Hah,” Spragg rasped. “Tyler promised we’d get just reward and look what happened to him.  We be worse for it, far as I can see, and now my father’s dead.  I wish I’d never met you or your kind. Just leave me alone.”  His grief blinded him to Guy’s look of anguish. No more adventure, thought Spragg, no more blood.  He jumped nimbly from the branch and stamped off.

Guy was anxious to see Maewynn again and when he found Orla filling a pigskin from the stream, he asked where her daughter might be.

“She’ll be out in the west meadow where I sent her,” she told him.  Guy thanked her and ran as fast as he could and when he spotted Maewynn she was leaning over her basket filling it with thyme and dock leaves. The lilting melody of a merry ditty she was warbling reminded him of when he first heard her singing on the day of the fair. She was even more beautiful than he remembered, and his pulse quickened as he crept up behind her and gently tugged her hair. 

“You came back,” she squealed.

“The Devil himself would not have kept me away. I do not want to leave you ever again.”

“And you still wear my token,”  she purred.  Guy fingered the amulet she had given him then pulled his love toward him.

Moments later, their lips met, softly at first, and then with passionate urgency.  They were so lost in each other that they failed to notice the ground tremble beneath their feet. The noise grew louder.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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iandsmith wrote 474 days ago

Paul, As far as I can tell, this novel should, "engage the mind of young readers". Seems like a good effort to me. The action's well written, I can picture Spragg, the Wat Tyler revolt is as relevant as it's ever been, and there aren't any grammar errors. Not much to comment on really. Well done - Ian

GriffinsMustFly wrote 752 days ago

Nice...very nice...from the first chapter you weave an intricate tale already. Keep it up, and keep promoting, and you'll have a publishing contract sooner or later, I think :)

hockgtjoa wrote 816 days ago

I enjoyed this very much despite an occasional lapse in agreement between who was speaking and who was spoken tow (I suggest you proof read by reading aloud to some one else or vice versa). I would also make sure to have each chapter tell enough of the story to make it a satisfying episode--think of TV episodes. Some of the chapters currently fall short. Four stars.

RonParker wrote 910 days ago

Hi Paul,

I'm not a fan of historical fiction, but this is good and I shall certainly be returning to read more when I have the time. You have obviously spent a consierable amount of time on research.

There are, espeially in chapter 3, a few pov issues, but I'm sure you can sor these out in a re-draft.

One small continuity point, in chapter one, you give sprags age as 15, but in a later chapter he says he is four years older than 12, which would make him 16. A minor point but the kind of thing readers pick up on.

Ron

WendyB wrote 975 days ago

Your pedantic pitch and first chapter heading don't do your work justice.
This is an appealing book for young people and adults alike.
It has an attractive, familiar period voice, and the subject is an interesting one.
Well done.

Wendy Bertsch
(Once More...From the Beginning)

TuesdaysChild wrote 983 days ago

The writing is clear, crisp, gives the reader something to wrap their mind around. If I had more time, I'd read more, but I'm trying to catch up with dozens of requests! Good writing here. Backed.

shornexe wrote 988 days ago

A strong opening chapter. Nice touches with the historical details that do just enough to set the scene without becoming overtly instructional. I suspect Spragg will prove to be a witty, resourceful and likeable character.
Well written stuff, backed with pleasure.
Shaun
The Six Acts

Joanna Carter wrote 989 days ago

I found this engaging, atmospheric and well written. On my shelf.
Joanna
Fossil Farm

lj reads wrote 989 days ago

It seems scary. You're obviously not afraid to write about anything. Descriptive. Good for you Paul!

Sly80 wrote 993 days ago

Spragg encounters one of the 'fancy folk' but in dire circumstances. Having taken him to the healer, he's off again the next day to see the results. Instead he finds another wounded creature, and by helping the she-wolf, has perhaps earnt himself some dangerous allies. He shows even more cunning when covering for the injured page. But the friar finds them with the message, and young Guy must decide who to trust...

Lively, colourful writing of the kind that will engage any child's imagination: 'his white naked backside as flabby as a vat of baker's dough', 'scraggly hair exploding in random directions', 'seven snarling shapes ghosted into view'. This is an authentic introduction to a time and place in history which comes alive through the various characters, and in particular, Spragg, a street-wise kid in a time before 'streets' as we know them. There's a slight flourish of fantasy with his helping of the wolf, but that just adds to the thrills that children will get from this absorbing and exciting story ... backed.

Possible nits: 'pushing towards the morning light ... pushed through a tangle ... pushed these thoughts'. There's no sign or mention of Magda when the boys meet again at her hut. There are quite a few M names: Magda, Modrag, Moldwood, Mayweather; the first 2 being particularly easy to confuse.

mvw888 wrote 996 days ago

Wonderful sense of time and place, and a plot that begins in the middle of the action, right from the start. You have a direct yet descriptive style that moves along at a pleasing pace. The discovery of the injured boy is an intriguing start, and you hint at Spragg's past in a way that leaves us wanting more, in a good way. (Although I couldn't help but think that that early wolf bite may lead to some werewolf type of plot--I think that's a result of reading so many books here on authonomy :-).) Well done. Really enjoyed this.

---Mary
The Qualtiies of Wood

paperbat wrote 997 days ago

Good afternoon Paul.
I read half a dozen chapters of your book and found it very easy to the eye. The pcae was good, as was the characterisation of young Spagg. You obviously know and researched your medieval history, so you could paint a realistic picture for the reader to enter.
The best comment you have, however, is when you say as an introduction '' The central question remains: will the rebellion succeed for each of the main characters''. Now this is key, because as we know the actual outcome, one can not expect a surpise there. However for the individuals, we must weight and see or sohould I say read the whole book!
Excellent. BACKED.

I would really appreciate if you could reciprocate and read some of my childrens' book called Adventures of the Paperbats''.
Many thanks. Jerry [paperbat]

Daniel Manning wrote 1000 days ago

Lord Moldwood sends out an urgent coded message, but its intercepted by the regents men, leaving only one assigned to do the job still alive. A peasant boy helps the high born to safety, and together they set out to deliver the message.
Treminology such as high born and tax coin means the class system and money were unknown entities but issues such as taxation are the causes of friction between those of the noble class, and the peasantry. Lets hope the message triggers another poll tax riot. We see the peasant boy benevolent of all living things, while the high born is trained for adventure and war, so the story is as informative as it is entertaining.
Nicely written period piece that endeavours to retain authenticity, crucial if the object is to educate as well as entertain which I think the story does so successfully, so for that reason it has my backing.
Daniel Manning
No Compatibility.
Minor typos Chapter two: The path fmeandered through abandoned fields covered in weeds and corn stubble.
Chapter four: Spragg hesitated but he remained determined to act 'You'll need to k...'

CarolinaAl wrote 1006 days ago

Your brilliant, dynamic story grabbed me and kept me riveted. Credible characters. Crisp dialogue that evokes the era. Vital writing. I absolutely love this thoughtfully composed story. Backed.

nsllee wrote 1007 days ago

sorry, I meant Monty Python and the Holy Grail, of course.

Nicole

nsllee wrote 1007 days ago

Hi Paul

I enjoyed this. I don't usually go for mediaeval tales with everyone wandering around covered in mud and rough homespun like extras from Life of Brian, but you manage to pull it off and engage the reader. Spragg is a very sympathetic hero and it's great the way you introduce new introduce into each chapter - Magda, the wolves, the political element. Very nicely done. Backed.

Nicole
Chosen

John Warren-Anderson wrote 1011 days ago

Great opening chapter, full of action, suspense, and attmosphere. And it finishes with a laugh.
That reminded me of a Dave Alan joke.
"If you don't suck the poison out your friend will die."
"What did the doctor say?"
"He said you're going to die."
Backed

Lisa Scullard wrote 1013 days ago

Peasant Rebel is a really good Young Adult historical read - immediately involving, shows the author's writing experience straight away. Would appeal to fans of the 'Robin Hood' genre era.

All the best (and sorry for the wait returning the read),
Lisa (Death And The City)

homewriter wrote 1014 days ago

What a gripping start. I love historical fiction and you write it so well. Brilliant. I reall like Spragg already! Well worth returning for more! Gordon - The Harpist of Madrid, also an historical novel

homewriter wrote 1014 days ago

What a gripping start. I love historical fiction and you write it so well. Brilliant. I reall like Spragg already! Well worth returning for more! Gordon - The Harpist of Madrid, also an historical novel

theweed wrote 1015 days ago

PEASANT REBEL - 8/11/2010

The pitch does not do justice to the story. It could be much more effective by reflecting the suspense and action. The story does start out with a bang and keeps going. I like the imagery and descriptions, but the details of the plant life might be a bit overdone. The MC is a good anchor for the story, appealing to the young adult and full of pride and defiance. But, the "mud-brown eyes" are not exactly a good complement for him. Mud just doesn't inspire likability.

Dialogue is well done, just enough of the vernacular to place the story in the time frame, but no to the point of rendering it unreadable. The plot is sound and includes enough twists and complications to keeps a reader's interest. A good young adult read. Good luck with it.

Marc - Where's The Ivy

Wilma1 wrote 1021 days ago

There is something highly engaging about your book. Chapter one sets us a challenge to find out what’s in the pouch and who it is to be delivered to. Spragg’s encounter with the wolves is both magical and scary at the same time. We are left in no doubt that Spragg is special and will encounter many challenges. If my shelf were not so full I would read more than the two chapters as your book promises a gifted story

Wilma1
Knowing Liam Riley – I hope you can spare a moment to take a look

Walden Carrington wrote 1023 days ago

Paul,
Peasant Rebel is a well-researched and riveting historical with universal appeal. Backed with pleasure.

Eveleen wrote 1027 days ago

Backed
Lenny Harry
(Like a dot on the horizon)

Benjamin Dancer wrote 1028 days ago

I backed your book a few days ago based on chapter one, came back and read through chapter five. I'll to come back for more tomorrow. Great job with names and evoking a sense of place. Good luck!

Benjamin Dancer

Muggins100 wrote 1032 days ago

Thanks so much for your kind message. Much appreciated.
Paul M.

Peasant Rebel
A must read for historical fiction fans,young and old! Reminiscent of Ken Follett's "Pillars of the Earth". Well researched and great pace. Loved it.
Alison Butler

Butler's Girl wrote 1032 days ago

Peasant Rebel
A must read for historical fiction fans,young and old! Reminiscent of Ken Follett's "Pillars of the Earth". Well researched and great pace. Loved it.
Alison Butler

andrew skaife wrote 1034 days ago

HI. I really enjoyed this and I can see it having a wider audience than just YA. I have been a teacher of English for many years and would have appreciated writing of this quality to engage my students, too many of whom are fading away from reading altogether. This would certainly have been a welcome addition to my lesson plan resources but would also have been something the students could have taken home for themselves.

You manage to create a strong and vibrant character in Spragg that will carry the narrative easily along. I am also a father of four who actively sought to turn the kids to reading. They would have loved this.

Excellent stuff and you set your time period in stone.

BACKED.

Elizabeth Wolfe wrote 1034 days ago

You have an exceptionally beautiful cover and a good pitch. These elements make the reader want more. I enjoy this historical period. You've done an excellent writing job here.

BACKED
Elizabeth Wolfe
Would you consider backing MEMORIES OF GLORY? I thank you for taking a look.

mariecapri wrote 1036 days ago

Hi Paul. You flash out your characters really well. Spragg is really great and Magda a great contrast. You have caught the era in a contemporary way through your writing, which lows well. Backed and best of luck! Maria (Cosmic Linx)

LintonWood wrote 1037 days ago

As a fan and writer of historical fiction, it was only right and proper that I looked in. I like your contemporary style, which manages to maintain period authenticity in its words. I also like Spragg, I reckon he might just grow up into my kind of scum! One or two parts could be trimmed a little, but I reckon you can pick those up yourself. I am all for the idea of historical fiction for children.
Best wishes and good luck,
Linton

DP Walker wrote 1037 days ago

Hi Paul
A charming piece of writing with some wonderful visual imagery. This is entertaining and educational as well - quite original. I wasn't sure which age group it was aimed as some of the language might be tricky for younger children. Overall, I loved it and I'm sure my kids would too.
DP Walker
Five Dares

celticwriter wrote 1037 days ago

Hey Paul, love the genre. Nice story telling. Backed.

blessings,
jim
jack & charmian london

name falied moderation wrote 1037 days ago

Dear Paul
I did, yes comment and back this book a few days ago, however I cannot find the backing. I believe this book is worth taking the trouble to do it again, so I am. BEST OF LUCK

Denise
The Letter

Paul_aucuparius wrote 1037 days ago

Hi Paul
I'm enjoying your writing - an unusual genre.

klouholmes wrote 1037 days ago

Hi Paul, This took me right to the time and the action began swiftly. You've incorporated Spragg's background, his being no stranger to death, easily into the developing plot. Interesting characters, the messenger and Morag. It's vivid and written so that Spragg's age level would become immersed too. Easily shelved - Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

A Knight wrote 1038 days ago

Historical fiction for children is something you don't see very often, and you really have something amazing here. There's a real sense of the era, volatile and thrilling, and I adore seeing something that has such a firm foundation of research to hold up what promises to be a thrilling plot!

Backed with pleasure
Abi xxx

Muggins100 wrote 1038 days ago

Thanks Missy
Much appreciated. I will check your work out too. Hope you do manage more than three chapters as the action picks up!
Cheers
Paul

I'm a huge fan of historical fiction and this is detailed and well researched. I don't know much about English history so I also felt like I was learning something and it was fascinating. You've done a wonderful job, this had such a nice feel to it. Great job and I'm going to try and come back to read past the 3rd chapter.

Missy

missyfleming_22 wrote 1039 days ago

I'm a huge fan of historical fiction and this is detailed and well researched. I don't know much about English history so I also felt like I was learning something and it was fascinating. You've done a wonderful job, this had such a nice feel to it. Great job and I'm going to try and come back to read past the 3rd chapter.

Missy

Muggins100 wrote 1039 days ago

Chris
Really appreciate your comments and support. I Also love history and, like you, feel Wat Tyler deserves wider recognition and if my humble offering does this in a minor way then that will be very satisfying, I am a bit busy with many things right now but hope to return and repay comments such as yours with a serious consideration of their work. Once again, many thanks.
Paul

Paul, this is a great story and one that is hardly touched on by historical writers. Wat Tyler and the Peasant's Revolt is a period of history barely touched upon by storytellers OR historians and it's easy to see why. It was a near-revolution ahead of its time and nearly put paid to feudalism. Wat Tyler is one of the great unsung heroes of British history in my view and it's good that someone has marked him out. He was three centuries ahead of Cromwell, as were John Ball and the Lollards. Tyler was Trotsky to Ball's Lenin if you like. It was only because of the objective conditions of the time that they didn't succeed - it was, after all, a peasants' revolt. The peasantry were tied to the land and its seasons and could never sustain a campaign to any great length, but they came so close to giving history a shove. Thank you.
The writing is storytelling of the highest order and, I think, is accessible to ALL ages (I'm 54 and I liked it). The plot and characters are believable and fit the time period. The dialogue is great. It's on my shelf. Hope it gets published. Chris1

Chris 1 wrote 1040 days ago

Paul, this is a great story and one that is hardly touched on by historical writers. Wat Tyler and the Peasant's Revolt is a period of history barely touched upon by storytellers OR historians and it's easy to see why. It was a near-revolution ahead of its time and nearly put paid to feudalism. Wat Tyler is one of the great unsung heroes of British history in my view and it's good that someone has marked him out. He was three centuries ahead of Cromwell, as were John Ball and the Lollards. Tyler was Trotsky to Ball's Lenin if you like. It was only because of the objective conditions of the time that they didn't succeed - it was, after all, a peasants' revolt. The peasantry were tied to the land and its seasons and could never sustain a campaign to any great length, but they came so close to giving history a shove. Thank you.
The writing is storytelling of the highest order and, I think, is accessible to ALL ages (I'm 54 and I liked it). The plot and characters are believable and fit the time period. The dialogue is great. It's on my shelf. Hope it gets published. Chris1

mvw888 wrote 1040 days ago

Expertly done. You give the broader context, then you reel us in with your characters and place the story at a personal level. Great pacing, great descriptions and dialogue. Really enjoyed this.

---Mary
The Qualities of Wood

Craig Ellis wrote 1040 days ago

Beautifully written in a period context. Excellent description of the world and the plight of the MC within it (Spragg).Good hook with the package that was flung by the soldier, and the subsequent appearance of the boy looking for it.

Just a note: "peasants'" is spelled wrong in your short pitch.

Backed.

Craig Ellis
The Sun and the Saber

cutley wrote 1041 days ago

Welcome. I hope this thread on the forum helps: http://www.authonomy.com/Forum/posts_new.aspx?threadId=58801

Charles

Niobrara Kardnova wrote 1041 days ago

I think Peasant Rebel is a book that should do well with older children and young adult readers. You've assembled a colorful set of characters (Mad Magda's my favorite so far), constructed an adventurous plot line, and added bits of mystery to each section--Why were the soldiers attacked? What was in the leather case? Where do John Ball and the Lollards fit into the political alliances that are forming?, etc. I'd never heard of the Peasant's Revolt before, so any historical tidbits you could scour out were news to me. I also liked the setting you created--the facts about folk medicine, damp soil used as insulation and the like mixed in with the elements of fable, such as the wolves and, if one could call her such, Magda the witch gave a scary but convincing mood to the piece. Backed with pleasure.
Niobrara Kardnova (The Trouble with Wives)

SammySutton wrote 1041 days ago


Clever, Interesting, Very High Energy!

It doesn't feel as if you were tired when you wrote it.
Great imagery!
Spragg is an incredible character.

Paul,
...'beads of sweat oozed from his pores'... Love That!
Great Job!
Backed!
Good Luck!
Sammy Sutton
King Solomon's '13'

Jack Hughes wrote 1041 days ago

Fantastic! I studied the Peasant Revolt on 1381 on my history degree but this is the first story I have ever come across about Wat Tyler. You have a great style and excellent pace and a highly original story. Brilliant. Backed without hesitation, best of luck my friend.

Jack Hughes
Dawn of Shadows

Craig Phoenix wrote 1041 days ago

I liked this, good style and characters.

Backed

If you get the time could you take a look at 'Soulshadow' or 'Toby'

Craig Phoenix

Burgio wrote 1041 days ago

PEASANT REBEL
This is a good story. The opening scene is dramatic: the boar . . . the soldiers . . . the injured boy . . . Spragg is a good character; he’s both likable and sympathetic. The kind of character who is interesting to follow to see how everything plays out for him. Your writing style is good for this genre. You have a lot of things that need described but you know to keep descriptions to a minimum so your story keeps moving. Makes this an enjoyable read. I’m adding this to my shelf. Burgio (Grain of Salt).

name falied moderation wrote 1041 days ago

Dear Paul
You have done a lot of work for this book with regard to research I feel sure. CONGRATS on a really good read. Well crafted with a story that is so gripping and it is impossible to put down. I have not read it all but will carry on. Both your pitches are so good and the very thing that grabbed me and would not let me go till i read on.
BACKED BY ME FOR SURE
I do hope you will review my book, comment and most of all BACK it. but either way the BEST of luck with yours
Denise
The Letter

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