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rank 5873
word count 14626
date submitted 27.07.2010
date updated 27.07.2010
genres: Historical Fiction, Christian, Reli...
classification: universal
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Delia

Jeanette Struchen Buys

Delia is the story of Cordelia Hadom based on family journals, passed down in an unbroken chain over the last One Hundred and Fifty Years.

 

"Delia" is based on the true and inspiring story of a woman of character who lived her entire life on the same prairie farm in the late 1800's and the first years of the twentieth century. As described in the book, a family heritage of pioneering country people tempered in the divided neighborhoods of the Civil War was passed to Delia as attributes that surmounted the personal challenges presented by crop failures, World War I, and the Great Depression. Jeanette Struchen Buys sketches the fading scenes of rural Illinois and the people who created their community of neighbors which formed a treasured bit of sectional U.S. History.

 
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michaeltc wrote 1042 days ago

Would be happy to do a read swap w/ you.
My book, "Inquity Shall Abound" is about what life could be like on Earth during the seven year Tribulation.
It is my first attempt at fiction.
I am slow, but I will read !
Best,
Michael
"Inquity Shall Abound"

lynn clayton wrote 1055 days ago

You introduce us to this time and these people with skill, not over-powering us with rushed information but gradually describing the place and the people within it.
There's a lot of excellent imagery - eg -'...a lot of love had poured over the forty acres ' and it's continuing with the tree, both actual and as an emblem of the family.
I noticed a typo early on - 'Her excitement today was AS high as...'
The sort of family saga which should be very popular. Best for it. Backed. Lynn

yasmin esack wrote 1055 days ago

Truly written with depth and marvellous characterization.

Many thnaks

soutexmex wrote 1056 days ago

Jeanette: I read your first posted chapter. I'm gonna be honest: thought I would hate this but I actually liked it. The character seem compelling I could visualize the situations. But you really need to do some better formatting. The way you have posted it. Well, I think it can benefit by condensing the sentences as opposed to expanding them. On the bright side, both pitches worked for me and I'm usually hardest on those. BACKED!

I can use your comments on my book when you get the chance. Cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

Tom Bye wrote 1056 days ago

hello JEANETTE 'DELIA'

after reading the first chapter i'm impressed with the story telling, its well constructed and beautifully written.
nice sense of pace to it, as it describes the pioneering town of Rantoul Ilonois in them darn days as they say.
like it , real cowboy stuff, the setting as described at the station is creative and lays out nicelly for what to come,
there is a lot of research gone into this book and it shows. well done/
notice that you have no tags mentioned. that would help a lot and get people interested in the read/.
backed,
TOM BYE ' FROM HUGS TO KISSES'
please read mine if time and comment and back if you like it . thanks
I

Bocri wrote 1056 days ago

T.L. Bartush has a valid point and corrective action should be taken as soon as you can. I persevered with your novel to a degree and found it to have a potency that fulfils the promise of the pitch. To lose impetus and viewers due to a format failing would be sad in the extreme. However, since essentially good writing is what counts I have backed Delia. BACKED. Robert Davidson. The Tuzla Run

T. L. Bartush wrote 1057 days ago

If you're marketing a book on behalf of an unpublished author as you state you are please do something about the format of the text so it can be read.

T. L. Bartush

Burgio wrote 1057 days ago

DELIA
This is an interesting story. It’s a little hard to read because the sentences are so broken up but the struggle to do that is worth it. Delia is an interesting character; I wanted to see how her life turned out after the terrible sorrow of having a baby die. This is the kind of book I would buy to take on vacation when I’d know I had lots of time to really sink into it. I’m adding it to my shelf. If you have a moment, would you look at mine (Grain of Salt)? I’m in 8th place but only holding on by my teeth. Burgio

Despinas1 wrote 1057 days ago

Dear Jeanette,
This is such a beautiful poignant piece, it sent shivers down my spine. I'm so convinced this one's going to rise up the charts in no time. Delia story is bound to make an impact, she already has, and I'm sure others will agree that this one needs to be read with a box of tissues on hand.
Congratulations on posting it. All the best of luck and much success.
Backed with pleasure
Helen
The Last Dream

name falied moderation wrote 1057 days ago

Dear Jeanette,
Wow this is a good read so far, and much research has gone into it i would think. this is ka captivating era and so far you have depicted both the sotryline and the characters so well...... have not read it all but will carry on and comment down the road when done. the VERY best of luck with this and i want to back it now so that i can assist your climb to the top
BACKED FOR SURE BY ME
If you would take the time to look at my book, make some comments ( positive i hope ha!) and BACK it, that would be great , if not that is |OK also
Denise
The Letter

andrew skaife wrote 1057 days ago

I am backing this book on the strength of the read which I found impressive enough to back. The problem is that while my Talent spotter ranking sank below one hundred I have been inundated with requests to read. If you require detailed comments please message me otherwise I was proud to back you and will watch with interest. Cheers for now. BACKED.

Neville wrote 1057 days ago

Hi Jeannette, you have a good book here but what's happened to the format?
It looks like you uploaded chapters with the paragraphs numbered and with double spacing.
Your book is ok though and I back it.SHELVED.

Neville (The Secrets Of The Forest)

Jason Morte wrote 1057 days ago

I'm sure you already figured this out but you're going to have to reformat your text and update your book. Nonetheless, I read it and liked what I saw so far. Very interesting, keeping the character in one location and having her observe the events as time passes over her. World Wars, epidemics, the Depression and everything else can all be described as they happened to this one woman. Good idea.

lizjrnm wrote 1057 days ago

It is obvious that you have spent much time and research on this historical novel! Easy to back.

Liz
The Cheech Room

SusieGulick wrote 1057 days ago

Dear Jeannette, I love your large lettering & wide spaces - what a joyous easy read - the best ever!! :) What a work of art you have done to pass along all of the journal contents - amazing. Thank you for taking me along & putting me right there with you in your story. :) Your pitch is excellent, so set the hook for me to read your book. :) When you use short paragraphs & lots of dialogue, it makes me want to keep reading to find out what's going to happen next. I'm backing your book. :) Could you please take a moment to back my 2 memoir books? Thanks. :) Love, Susie :)

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backed :)
Love, Susie :)

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