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Mezzanota Perpetua

Aya S

What happens if your mind matures but your body never does? Meet Veranese De Luca, child vampire and feline interpreter extraordinaire.

 

Considered a child of unfortunate circumstances in life, Vera's situation is unquestionably exacerbated after death simply by virtue of the nature of immortality itself. In love with the vampire who turned her, though forever cursed to remain in the body of a twelve year old girl, there was a reason the prohibition against child vampires was set in place all those centuries ago. Abhorred by her own kind and spiteful to humans herself, for decades Veranese relied only on her own survival instinct and the companionship of a few choice feline friends. Now what's a girl to do when a fifteen year old human boy begins to take an interest? What's a girl to do if she happens to be interested back? (N.B. This is a shortened version of Veranese's full story, broken up into short, easy to read chapters that end before Vera's human love interest enters the scene. If there's enough interest, I can upload more full-length chapters and continue her story. It promises to be an interesting ride.)

 
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Conte Manor - Nicola's Secret

Chapter 4: Conte Manor - Nicola's Secret

 

Veranese said nothing and did not move as the man approached her. She had a sudden urge to bare her teeth at the blue-eyed man, although the notion in and of itself seemed silly to her. Strangely enough, the young girl no longer felt any fear at the man's presence and, in fact, she felt inexplicably drawn to him in a way that she did not altogether like.

 

Once nearer to her, the man took a seat at the edge of the bed. Again, Veranese remained stoic but watched him warily. His attire was different from the last time she had seen him, but it was just as lavish as the last garments he had worn, if not made more so by the complimenting elegance of the room itself. He was holding a crystal glass in one hand, filled with a thick dark liquid that Veranese could smell even from a few feet away. It only further incited her hunger, but still she remained silent, almost instinctively knowing it was not her place to speak.

 

The man stole a quick glance at her, and Veranese locked her eyes with his own. She felt connected with him in an indescribable sense and almost longed for him to touch her. The feeling was altogether disconcerting and entirely unexpected. And then he spoke.

 

"My name is Nicola Marico Conte," he started haltingly in a manner that Veranese easily interpreted to be discomfort. It seemed he liked her just about as much as she liked him, and that clearly was not saying much for either of them. She returned his gaze with one of her own. He seemed to be expecting something from her, to be waiting for some form of response or acknowledgement. If he expected her to know his name, however, he would be sadly mistaken. Veranese was, for all intents and purposes, a peasant girl. She and Marietta tried their best to pay their debts and stay out of trouble, but they certainly were not at all acquainted with the nobility of the Calabrian region in the slightest.

 

Straightening her back as much as was possible with her arms still wrapped around her knees, the small girl looked him over once more before speaking. "Veranese Eliana De Luca," she responded. Typical of all peasant children, her surname was not an ancient family name but rather that of her father, Luca Giannan Rossi, and she knew it would not tell the man much by way of background about her. Marietta had always meant to change their surname, but it was required so infrequently of them by others in everyday life that she had soon forgotten about it.

 

The nobleman's discomfort was palpable and, although Veranese could not possibly fathom why her twelve year old self would make him nervous, she felt a mildly savage pleasure in it all, and thus remained silent, simply watching. It was he, after all, who had brought her to this place, away from her sister and everything with which she was familiar. And it would have to be he who initiated any sort of conversation between the two of them, she thought stubbornly. As far as she was concerned, she had been kidnapped, and she had no intention of cooperating with her captor.

 

The man, this Nicola Conte, shifted slightly to face her and extended the glass and its contents toward her. "Drink. You need nourishment," he said in what to Veranese seemed a rather stiff manner. She wanted to refuse out of principle. Despite her hunger, why should she gratefully accept anything from someone who had caused her fright and pain only just the night before? Her neck still burned, and she could almost feel his strong hands against her face and shoulder, pinning her to the wall of her small home.

 

But Nicola seemed to have some inexplicable form of power over her. She watched almost in disbelief as her hands seemed to reach of their own accord and take the glass he extended out to her. Never allowing her gaze to leave his own, Veranese slowly and obediently lifted the glass with both hands to her lips as he had asked. She took a small sip, but just as quickly wrinkled her nose in disgust and set the cup on a nearby bed-side table, pushing it away from herself, a small frown gracing her tiny features. It was a strange feeling for her. She wanted nothing to do with the liquid and yet undeniably wanted more at the very same time.

 

"It is stale," she said accusingly as she turned back to the man at the edge of the bed, her eyes flashing indignantly. Even after the words left her lips, Veranese was still quite unsure what exactly she meant by them. She had gathered that the liquid was blood, which in and of itself would have thoroughly disgusted her only a few hours ago, but now a feeling of indignation at the notion that the man had insulted her tastes flooded through her instead.

 

Whatever she expected in the form of a reaction from this Nicola, it certainly was not the light chuckle and jovial expression she received. He looked at her with amusement and, for the first time this evening, the man's stance became more relaxed. "Less than twelve hours and you've already developed a sophisticated taste, my dear," he commented with a wry smile. He seemed friendly enough, but the man's eyes still held a cautious uncertainty that made Veranese wonder just what exactly was intimidating him. It couldn't possibly be her, she thought.

 

"Come here, child," he spoke once more and, despite her deepest reservations, Veranese found herself obeying without protest. Slowly she slid onto her knees, mindful of the delicate material of the dress she now wore, and scooted to her left until she was at Nicola's side. She had the peculiar urge to hug the man and wished that he would embrace her in return, for although she no longer felt any fear in his presence, Veranese desperately wanted to be comforted. For a moment, her eyes shifted back to the goblet on the bedside table. She hadn't liked it at all, but now she looked at it longingly. It held her attention as if it were speaking to her, and in a way she realized it was.

 

So intent was she on the heavy, crimson liquid now resting motionless in the crystal glass that Veranese failed to notice Nicola's slight movement beside her. "Veranese." At the sound of her name, she turned in surprise and met the gaze of the nobleman at her side. He seemed to be watching her with cold calculation behind his deep blue eyes, but a moment later, Nicola's eyes shifted downward and Veranese followed his gaze almost automatically. It appeared that he had rolled up the sleeve of one of his expensive shirts to the middle of his forearm. Her eyes were immediately drawn to his wrist, and she watched keenly, seeing the red and blue veins of his arm reveal themselves invitingly to her.

 

Unconsciously, Veranese licked her dry lips but froze in surprise as she felt her tongue run over an unfamiliarly sharp edge of tooth in her mouth. She looked at Nicola questioningly, but he said nothing, merely returning her gaze with one of his own. Slowly he raised his arm up to her and without thinking, she took it and quickly buried her teeth in the underside of his wrist. A small sound escaped the man's mouth, but Veranese hardly noticed it, for at that moment, blood filled her mouth, much like it had the previous night. This time, however, it was intoxicating to her, and Veranese closed her eyes almost dreamily in order to better savor the taste and the feelings that were washing over her.

 

It was Nicola's blood, yes, but she could taste another in it, as well. A woman, she thought without the need for much effort or debate. Nicola had been with a woman, had fed off her probably not long before he had arrived in this room. The thought was strangely pleasing to Veranese's senses, and she found she still wanted more as she felt Nicola gently pull away from her.

 

"Better, yes?" It seemed to be asked rhetorically, but nonetheless, Veranese nodded silently as she watched the man beside her remove a handkerchief from one of the pockets of his shirt and gently press it and tie it to the bleeding wound at his arm. She wanted more but dared not ask at the moment, for despite the satisfied smile Nicola was directing at her, Veranese saw a hint of pain behind his eyes and watched it curiously, unaware that her own eyes had turned an eerie shade of yellow as a result of her first feeding.

 

He returned her gaze calmly and reached for her with his now bandaged arm, sliding it around her small shoulders and pulling her toward him in a gentle embrace. "This is nothing, my dear," he said, speaking so softly it was almost inaudible. "Soon, I will take you with me and show you what it is truly meant to taste like." Veranese listened intently, finding she no longer held much anger for him. Instead, a peculiar sense of connection with the man, this Nicola Conte, was welling up within her. She had an acute sense of awareness that she was his and he hers. Nicola would protect her now if Marietta would not. Veranese sighed contently into his chest and closed her eyes once more, allowing Nicola to rock her gently in his arms. All the while, a black cat sat watching, curiously still at the scene it had just witnessed, its dark yellow eyes appearing to dance illuminated in the room's dim candlelight.

 

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SarahJill wrote 932 days ago

Hi. I've added your book to my watchlist and hope to get to it very soon, but I have a quick question - what does Mezzanota mean?

I know the word mezza, the word notá, and the word mezzanotte, but not the one you use. Is it Italian? Don't get me wrong, I'm not a fluent italian speaker, it is perfectly possible that it is not a word I know! I tried to translate it as "eternal middle note" but that didn't seem right. Sorry if I am missing the point!

SarahJill

Linda Lou wrote 988 days ago

MEZZANOTA PERPETUA-Aya S.
hullo Aya. I enjoyed the way you wrapped history around the reality of your charecters. Very good. Already shelved and backed.
Please take a look at my book if you have not and thanks for that.
Linda Lou Long
Southern dis-Comfort
http://www.authonomy.com/ViewBook.aspx?bookid=11421

ccpup wrote 997 days ago

This is eerie and entertaining and creepy and quite wonderful. You give us a strong sense of time and place without burdening us with a ton of Research (with a capital R). And your characters have that blood and bones reality to them many stories often lack. We can feel the resignation, the doubt, the tiny glimmers of happiness as well as the confusion and fear. This really is very nicely done.

Happy to give it a spin on my shelf.

Jonathan
MARTUK ... THE HOLY

Lara wrote 998 days ago

This is interesting reading. Your premise intrigues and then the first chapter draws us in to the vampire tale. I think your actual novel will read more smoothly with the longer chapters that you've chopped to upload here. Backed
Lara
Good for Him

Tom Bye wrote 1000 days ago

HI AYA S.
MEZZOTA PEPPETUA'

i think that i'm starting to get hooked on these vampire book appearing on my screen'
i do like this one, so very well written with the underlining sense of intrigue always there.
poor Vanessa i feel for her as the man in the fine tailored garments sizes her up for the attack on her throat
i like it and it has the premise with more of this to come, well done
backed
TOM BYE ' FROM HUGS TO KISSES'
please read mine and back if time thanks

soutexmex wrote 1000 days ago

Aya: do apologize for this spam comment but I did BACK your book. Though my book is currently on the Ed's Desk, I can still use your comments on my book before the end of this month. Thanks - cheers!

JC
The Obergemau Key

KW wrote 1000 days ago

It sounds a little like The Picture of Dorian Grey" for young female vampires. A very nice opening sentence: "It started with a betrayal." Wow, being very young and having to walk on foot to the nearest town to start a new life. A life as a vampire. I'm intrigued and will return when I get a little more time. Backed for now.

zrinka wrote 1001 days ago

I like your narrative voice, it is quite difficult to get that right and not lose your reader, but you succeeded in this. The story is so well told that one can't put it down. Loved the historical facts you weaved in your story and how you presented it. The Veranese's character is developed nicelly. Backed.

CarolinaAl wrote 1002 days ago

You provide us a poignant vampire tale with an intelligent plot and fascinating characters. Rich imagery. Polished writing. A compelling read. Backed.

Lynne Ellison wrote 1003 days ago

Interesting exploration of the problems of vampirism

missyfleming_22 wrote 1003 days ago

This was excellent! We've done the vampires over and over but now you've given us something new. What is it like to be immortal in the body of a child. It makes for a very interesting story. I love your main character, she's engaging and wise for her years. I like her alot. It was hard to stop reading this and I need to have a hard copy! Thank you for giving us something new for vampires!

Missy

Scott Foley wrote 1004 days ago

Bewitching, brings back memories of reading Interview with the Vampire. Compelling story well written, and it's on my shelf right now.

Kind regards

Scott Foley (Warlords of The Dreaming God)

DP Walker wrote 1004 days ago

Hi Aya
A great story line and a real mixture of genres which makes this especially interesting. The relationships Veranese strikes up are also well though out and cleverly done. Stands out from the regular vampire stories in my opinion.
DP Walker
Five Dares

Scott Toney wrote 1004 days ago

I really like the first chapter and love the premise. It reads smoothly and gives good background for setting. As you may have noticed by reading my work, I am a detail fiend, so I could have used a smidge more description. I also would have liked to see something about vampires in the first chapter.
I'll read on to get to the vamprillic writing and am really enjoying what I'm reading thus far.
Have a great day!

- Scott, The Ark of Humanity

lisawb wrote 1005 days ago

My daughter loves Twilight and has the whole set she would really like this, your mc has such a great character and you have a very good story. This compelling read is backed easily.

Lisa

Francene Stanley wrote 1005 days ago

Rivetting story. I could hardlky drag myself away.

I'll back it with pleasure.

Francene. Still Rock Water.

Nythawk wrote 1005 days ago

Interesting story. Backed

Jason
Gateway to the World of Light and Shadow

klouholmes wrote 1006 days ago

Hi Aya, Swift pace and the setting is told as the aristocrat’s presence is questioned. The whole scene of Veranese’s growing fear of the vampire has tension and kept me reading. That he had intended on finding an older girl makes this unique in the vampire plots. He must have been desperate to have landed on a girl. What happens to a girl vampire is a challenging and different storyline. Shelved – Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

Andrew Burans wrote 1006 days ago

You have written a most intesting and compelling storyline and created a very memorable main character in Vera. The pace of your story flows well, your use of imagery is excellent and this along with your imaginative writing style makes your work a pleasure to read. And yes I think that you should upload more of your story - your work is too good not to. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

Tari wrote 1006 days ago

This is an enchanting story. One is immediately mystified, the attention held. How will Veranese treat this young boy? Onlhy twelve years old herself the plot is intriguing as to the outcome.

I tried to edit typos out of my earlier comment but the edit button is not working. So I have written this again for you.

Backed with pleasure.

Katy
Phobic Dawn.

homewriter wrote 1006 days ago

What an incredible story. You bring vampires into the realm of reality! Backed. Gordon - The Harpist of Madrid

Elizabeth Wolfe wrote 1006 days ago

Dear Aya,
You have a wonderful pitch and a very intriguing theme. Most vampire books have a lot of sexuality, so keeping the girl at age 12 is quite an interesting twist.

BACKED
Elizabeth Wolfe (MEMORIES OF GLORY)

Craig Ellis wrote 1006 days ago

Great characters, old school vampires. You definiely have an easy flow to your work.

I would have put more of a hook at the end of the first chapter. Also, your long pitch needs to be broken down into separate paragraphs. It will read better.

Already backed.

Craig Ellis
The Sun and the Saber

Walden Carrington wrote 1007 days ago

Mezzanota Perpetua has an original and enthralling plot. It's a lovely and romantic vampire tale. Backed.

Daniel Delacy wrote 1007 days ago

Teenage love, a taboo vampire and a beautifully portrayed 19th century setting. This is clever in that it picks up themes others have touched on and explores them further. I shall be reading on. Backed.

name falied moderation wrote 1007 days ago

Dear Aya
I would like to commend you on the skill you have applied, the imagination and the talent you have in writing this work of art of yours. I feel sure you feel like me that it is your baby and you so want to see it succeed. I do wish you all the best in rising and also getting this book of your published

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Please take a moment to look, comment which is important to me, and back my book. if not that is OK also

The VERY best of luck to you

Denise
The Letter

Aya S wrote 1007 days ago

Thank you to everyone who has commented thus far. I will try to respond to all of you in turn, time permitting.

Additionally, I will also strive to look through everyone's own projects who has commented on mine and give you feedback (and back the book, as well, if I enjoy it).

Thank you again. I wrote this two years ago during a time when Twilight was a relatively big hit with teens. Ironically enough, I'd never heard of the Twilight saga until after I completed what I've uploaded onto Authonomy a few days ago. My goal with Vera was to create a strong-willed, quirky character who's emotionally old enough for adult relationships but physically will never be able to engage in them. Again, depending on interest, I might upload the prologue and some other chapters. We'll see.

And thank you all for the comments. I'll get to them ASAP!

Cheers (very humbled by all the nice responses),
Aya

Tim Hawken wrote 1007 days ago

I love the romantic take you have on the vampire here. Not the poppy sickening trash that's on the shelves in most book stores at the moment. You've brough back the beauty that Anne Rice so beautifully instilled in this creature. Well done and backed.

Christian Piatt wrote 1008 days ago

Aya:
Now THIS is an original vampire concept; perpetual adolescence. What a true horror story!! :-)
Seriously, you have a great concept here and present it compellingly and clearly up front. I think the characters have fresh, distinctive voices and the premise sets up so many scenarios that could be funny, touching and even a little creepy. Nice work!
Best of luck with your book. Backed.
Peace,
Christian Piatt
PULLING THE GOALIE

CamilleS wrote 1008 days ago

I read the first three chapters and I'm totally engrossed in the story. Polished, well written, and a great storyline. I have to keep reading this! Well done! Backing with pleasure.

Camille
Curse of the Golden Fly

Tari wrote 1008 days ago

This is enchanting. The characters are quite original. Loved the theme of the v the young boy's attracton to Veranese. The narrative is clear and concise makes for [pleasurable read.

Backed with pleasure,

Katy,
Phobic Dawn.

childenticing.

Danielle Gin wrote 1008 days ago

This entire premise reminds me of Claudia in Anne Rice's Interview with the Vampire. The combination of history with childlike innocence is beautifully depicted in the narrative. And paired with the lush diction the scenes were truely set. When time allows I'll definately read more! Great work!

Danielle Gin
An Angel in New York

TalulaJane wrote 1008 days ago

Magical. Your detail goes a long way here. I like the mix of romance/fiction...I also think it would do well in a fantasy genre!
Carrie
The Darkwood Tales: Demouri's Defeat

Burgio wrote 1008 days ago

MEZZANOTA PERPETUA
This is an unusual vampire story because the vampire isn’t a swashbuckling, sword swinging guy or an all-too-beautiful to believe woman; the vampire is a 12 year old who talks to cats. I don’t believe in vampires but I do believe cats know more than they let on so I enjoyed reading this. You have an engaging writing style; some readers will tell you to get to the action sooner but I enjoyed the rich back story you provide on Vera. Made this a good read. I’m happy to add it to my shelf. If you have a moment, would you look at mine (Grain of Salt)? I’m in 3rd place but only holding on by my teeth. Burgio

lizjrnm wrote 1008 days ago

You have a gifted imagination and certainly the talent for putting it into the written word. Excellent job and easy to back this one.

Liz
The Cheech Room

SusieGulick wrote 1008 days ago

Dear Aya, I love that there is no such things as vampires or I'd be scared to death. :) Nice write with lots of fantasy. :) Your pitch was totally well done & all inclusive. :) I've backed your book :) - hope you'll take a moment to back my 2 memoir books. :) Thanks. :) Love, Susie :)

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zan wrote 1008 days ago

Mezzanota Perpetua

Aya S



"What happens if your mind matures but your body never does?" Interesting question. Imaginative plot. "Celico- Childhood" set the scene well. If I were Veranese I would wonder too why my father did not come searching for us when we were still so very close to the old village. Looking forward to reading more about the grand scheme in her new life. Best of luck.

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 1008 days ago

Still having trouble uploading this but I will try to get back to it. Paula Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

Barry Wenlock wrote 1008 days ago

Hi Aya, yes, I agree, it promises to be an interesting ride. The prohibitory age of the child is intriguing as it reeks of unfulfilment and perpetual conflict and denial. Interesting stuff.
Backed with pleasure, Barry
LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS

SusieGulick wrote 1008 days ago

:) comment to follow - 2 hours later :)

Jim Darcy wrote 1008 days ago

This is a stylish read but, just IMO, I would start with the girl rushing in to tell the news about Napoleon and then do the back story? Nevertheless, an intriguing read with a fresh take on a popular genre.
Jim Darcy
The Firelord's Crown

J.S.Watts wrote 1008 days ago

A slowish start, but an interesting read and a different take on the vampire fable.

J.S.Watts
A DARKER MOON

Cariad wrote 1008 days ago

I always had a fascination for Claudia in 'Interview with the vampire' so I think its an interesting idea. I like your style of writing, and if I have any negative comments it would be: Using the word 'pub' is out of place in your time and setting. Pub being the shortening of the English 'public house' And maybe you could zwhoosh the beginning up a little - a bit more show/dialgoue/action? to break up a long 'tell.' That sounds worse than it is - they are only points to consider. I enjoyed the read overall (only read two chapters but will read more.)
Polly.
STONES.

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