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rank 1551
word count 18751
date submitted 16.09.2010
date updated 11.12.2010
genres: Fiction, Thriller, Science Fiction,...
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Binary Boys

Joshua M. Young

The Shogun's right hand man investigates an impossible murder and stumbles across a conspiracy that threatens to undermine galactic society.

 

Centuries from now, society has found a more humane way of dealing with murderers and rapists: Rather than execution, the criminals are given implants that allow a benevolent AI, Amida-Buddha, to control their bodies and counsel their minds inside the timeless reality of Dainichi, the cosmic buddha. The system has long thought to be foolproof, and the control of Amida absolute, until a former criminal-turned-monk murders one of his fellows in cold blood on a backwater world. Ellison, the Shogunate's top agent, is a man who has exposed countless conspiracies and thwarted dozens of rebellions before they began. A natural choice for the investigation, Ellison arrives on site to find that the murder is really only incidental to far more disturbing events.

 
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Part One, Chapter Three

 

I didn't say anything at first. I gazed upon the flawlessly raked gravel. Meditated a little on the boulders and the moss living on them. Briefly contemplated life and the universe and the product of six times seven. Mostly I just stared like a sun-sick miner who'd been stuck on Mercury too long. “You've been hacked,” I said. The absurdity had worn off by then and I felt up to tackling it.

That is the only logical conclusion,” Amida said. “There is a lapse in my memory of one hundred ninety-two minutes and forty-seven seconds.” He unfolded from his meditation pose and stood. His body was still perfect and he still had the same aura of golden sunlight about him, but the whole situation ruined the image. The concern on those flawless features of his did the most damage. He didn't seem very divine right then.

Aren't self-aware programs impervious to that sort of thing?”

You are self-aware, yet I breached your protective kami and your own mind in order to initiate this simulation.”

But I'm not a buddha.”

Rose-colored lips twitched into a slight smile. “You understand.”

Part of the buddha-nature is encryption.”

The buddha-nature is encryption.” And transparency, and nothing at all, I'm sure. He might have been correcting me and he might have been confirming. Who knows. I hopped down off my boulder. The gravel crunched under my feet. My earlier footprints were gone, the stones smoothed again by Amida's Pure Land immersion algorithms.

So then,” I said, “Someone hacked you, a buddha. The buddha, as far as a lot of people are concerned. Biggest and most complex. A self-aware encryption and data transfer protocol. I didn't think that was even possible, Amida-buddy.”

For you, it is not.”

Even with the boss' words?”

Amida folded his hands. Seconds passed by like quiet little monks off to morning prayer. “No. I predate the current iteration of dataspace. The shogun's passwords would cause me some difficulty due to a handful of modern program modules, but I would be able to overcome them.”

And if I were a top-grade hacker?”

No.”

Who could?”

In certainty, another buddha of equal or greater complexity.”

The sun was warm. Not uncomfortably warm, but warm enough that I was sweating a little. I yanked off my hat and wiped away the sweat on my forehead. “Which doesn't exist,” I said. “Not of human make, at any rate.”

Amida inclined his head just a little.

There aren't any little green men out there, Amida-buddy. Unless you're holding out on us.”

I am not.”

Then who could theoretically hack you?”

Satou Itsuki-sensei is familiar enough with my base code. The potential exists that he may have left a back door in my original program.”

Is there a back door?”

Sapphire eyes closed and rose lips pressed together. Amida said nothing.

Is that a yes?”

There is no back door of which I am aware, Investigator.”

I really wanted a smoke right then. I fidgeted with my hat instead. Turned it about, examined the brim. Amida's story was so out there that I was just as likely to find my answers tucked into the hatband as anywhere else.

Hey, Amida-buddy.”

Investigator.”

One last thing-- When I was trying to contact you, none of the protocols I used worked. Why is that?”

Jiriki, Investigator.” Amida clasped his hands into a half-familiar gesture. A kami would have told me what it was, but I couldn't manage to call up any sort of dataspace programs. Funny, that. Stuck in the Pure Land and not a kami to be seen. “You cannot come to the Pure Land through self-power. Only tariki, the power of another, can save you.”

I wasn't looking for salvation.”

Not yet.”

I cocked an eyebrow.

All men seek after salvation in time.”

The Pure Land washed away, the perfect pixels fading into otherworldly obscurity.

 

I used to be good at waiting. Back when I was one of Alexander's boys in fatigues, waiting was all we did. There was a bit of action every now and then. A little bit, but not much.  When it comes down to it, waiting is a soldier's primary skill.

These days, I'm not so good at it. I'm spoiled. I've got the heft to cut through just about any line I like, and the Shogun's words to back it up. Problem is, on a world like Susanou, there's no infrastructure for travel. No lines to cut. No suborbitals to commandeer.  There was Alexandria's monorail with its perpetual four or five passengers, and not much else. Certainly nothing that ran out into the woods and to Amida's temple.

I sat in the back of the armored car-slash-police cruiser and brooded.  We'd knocked out about an hour of the trip and with two more to go, I had plenty of time for my brooding. Amida's story hadn't made me happy. No pat answers and a pair of leads that made me feel more than a little ill.

I took off my hat and pressed my temple up against the window. Not quite like a cold glass of alcohol, but it'd do. I spun off two search kami and let them do their thing. I expected some decent hits on Itsuki Satou and just about nothing on alien buddhas. Maybe some crackpot conspiracy sites, if anything.

Search results spilled out in the air into front of me. Not my new searches. Hits on the geisha that I'd been to exhausted to go over the night before and forgotten about this morning. Not that there was much of interest. Some personal data. Her name, Hestia Kawamori; her place and date of birth, Thrace City, Seven-Eighteen-Fifty-eight, which made her a solid decade younger than me. Measurements. Blood type. Geisha's union documents and training certificates. She'd had lots of musical training.  First rank shakuhachi and flute, first rank shamisen, second rank koto. Big yawn. Nothing explained the funny little look last night, except maybe my overwhelming sex appeal.

Yeah. I wouldn't put any bets on that one.

I fiddled with my smokes. The package was empty. Spirited away by Amida, maybe. More likely that I'd finished and not noticed, I guess, but it was a nice idea. The noble buddha helping my unwilling soul towards enlightenment. I leaned forward and said, “You kids smoke?”

Thornhill grunted. Lambert produced a pack and aimed the open end at me over his shoulder. I plucked one out and lit up. It wasn't much better than Hestia's offering, but it had nicotine. All that matters in the end. “Thanks.”

Ieie,” Lambert muttered. He was clearly channeling Thornhill for enthusiasm.

The cruiser hit a pothole and I leaned back. One of the search kami came back, waving its metaphorical arms and hollering for attention.

Satou Itsuki-sensei, creator of the nembutsu, architect of Dainichi, father to the buddhas and one of the very few immortal mugen, was on Susanou and had been on Susanou for nearly a month. “Huh.”

Thornhill flicked his eyes towards the rear view mirror.  I shooed him off. Or tried to, anyways. The eyes in the mirror narrowed and said, “We share information with you.”

Yup.” I didn't point out that they had to, legally. I didn't point out that I could have found any information they had stored away. I wanted to, but I was a good little boy.

“You,” said Thornhill, “are not an easy man to help.”

“I never asked for help.”

Lambert made a noise. That was all. Neither one of them said anything until we hit the city limits. Fine by me. I didn't want to talk about it. Didn't trust them enough, even if I did. I'm a suspicious bastard, in case you hadn't figured it out.

 

Thornhill dropped me off in front of the hotel. My request. The trip out to the boondocks had eaten up most of the day. I was hungry and tired and wanted a chance to clear my head. Get caught up on the sleep I hadn't had the night before. Tackle this all tomorrow morning. Bright eyed, bushy tailed, all that jazz.

The hotel was a lot like the city. Bigger than it needed to be and mostly empty. I'd seen maybe five other guests during the last day, and not a one of them was the guy who stepped into the elevator with me at the lobby.

There were a lot of funny things about the man. He was sweating a lot. Obviously nervous. Very nervous. His hands clenched and unclenched, keeping time with his breath. Rapid and shallow and not very effective. Funniest thing of all were the kami hanging around him. Privacy models that made his face indistinct and would leave his voice vague.

I wasn't entirely surprised when I felt the gun poke into the small of my back. It was smooth and rounded and most probably a  pulse thrower. I stuck my hands up and sighed.

“You're in over your head.” The voice as I heard it was modulated and inhuman. A kami stripped the effects out and fed the guy's real voice through. It shook.

“I'm sorry?”

The gun dug in a little deeper. “Lay off the Rankin thing.”

I laughed. I tried not to, but I couldn't help it. “You've gotta be kidding me. Who do you think I am? Some local PI?”

“Knock it off. You're not in a good spot for smartass cracks.”

“I think I probably am, but hey. It's the first time anyone's tried to send me a message like this in a long time. I might just be out of practice. So let's hear it.” I pulled up a rear view window and watched as the kami worked to counter the privacy screening.  The guy blinked and the gun slipped a little bit. “Rankin. The dead monk. Lay off. Get out of here.”

“That's it?”

“You heard me.” There was a short, high pitched whine. The pulse gun's equivalent of a hammer cocking back.

I wasn't all that worried about the gun. My coat would wick off most of the pulse.  I stood there and watched the indicator on the elevator count off floors and waited for him to act. “Well? This is getting a little old, kid.”

Yeah. The coat absorbed the blast. The wicks woven into the fabric carried off the energy and discharged it safely into the air. Just the way they were supposed to work. Burned like all of Enma's hells. I didn't go down, though, and the guy clearly thought I would. He froze for a heartbeat when I didn't crumble. Long enough; I dropped my hands fast. Drove the edge of my right hand into his crotch. Whatever wetware he had in his head must've been good about blocking pain. It was a solid blow and he should have at least flinched. Hell, I would've been on the floor, whimpering like a little kid. He didn't whimper and he sure as hell didn't go down.

Right. Plan B. I felt my buddy bringing the pulse gun up. He'd obviously got smart and was looking for a target that wouldn't be hiding any armor, like the back of my neck. I threw my weight backwards and drove him against the elevator wall. The pulse gun was pinned between my shoulder blades and his chest. He could still pull the trigger, but my coat would soak up the blast. I'm not sure he could say the same about his shirt.

There was a soft chime. The elevator door slid open. As luck would have it, one of the other half-dozen guests in the hotel was waiting for the lift.

She didn't join us. Funny, that. We even gave it a rest for a second so she could get herself situated. The elevator sealed up again and when she didn't get on, we went back to trying to beat the hell out of each other.

I drove my elbow into the guy's face. Something crunched. Wetware and pain-blocking kami or no, the guy stiffened.  I got my hands around his arm, threw my weight forward and made damn sure he came with me. An extra tug and he went over my shoulder and onto the floor, face up. Blood poured from his nose. He tried to bring the pulse gun to bear, but his arm was shaky. I kicked the thing out of his hand and then kicked him a couple of times to get my point across. It wasn't exactly polite, but it worked. He stopped struggling.

Warnings popped up in dataspace and on the hardscreens in the walls. The Hoteru no Susanou had a zero-tolerance policy on violence. Kami were contacting authorities even now, stand down, cease and desist, assume the position, blah blah. I soothed it by uploading my ID to the hotel dataspace. The real one, with all the permissions and authentication codes and authority that Alexander and the bakufu could issue.

So,” I said, crouching down next to my him, “Can we try this again? The talk, I mean. I don't really need to work you over again. Not unless you really want me to.”

He said something. I couldn't make heads or tails of it. Neither could any of my kami. It was possible that I had kicked him a little too hard one time too many. There was a soft whistle in his breath.

I asked a kami to establish a link with the fellow's wetware. His eyes darted around. Panic. The kami I sent wasn't being too gentle about bringing down his firewall kami. Recent experience told me that it wasn't a pleasant feeling at all.

Hey. Listen to me.” I smacked him just hard enough to get him to focus. “I'm just checkin' your vitals, kid. Calm down. I don't have the hardware with me to strip mine your head. So... How about this. You talk. You give me a nice, solid hit on what's going on here, and I won't have a kami index your brain cells. Wakatta?”

Silence. His lips didn't even twitch, but his eyes stopped jerking around and settled on mine.

Good deal,” I said. “There's no reason any of this has to be....”

I rocked back on my heels. His eyes weren't calm, they were empty. He had nirvana eyes. I checked the back of his head for a nembutsu. I didn't find one and I wasn't all that surprised about it. The nembutsu took time. The on-board kami was careful about what it did. This, though. Whatever was going on in his head, it was quick. It didn't need to take its time. It wasn't intended to preserve a mind inside Amida. It was meant to erase a mind.

Well done, Ellison. Nicely played. You were busy being a smart ass while black market software fed the guy's brain through a shredder.

I heard a faint pop and smelled burning meat. His eyes lost what little bit of life they still had and the fragile connection with his wetware vanished. I felt his jugular for a pulse that I knew wouldn't be there.

I turned down the body. The guy didn't carry much in the way of interesting stuff on him. Not outside of his skin, anyways. Whatever had just torched his brain was definitely interesting. Not exactly the kind of thing I could get my hands on just then.

I got the gun from the corner of the elevator and gave it a once over. Pretty standard piece of equipment. A mark five DuPont-Beretta pulse gun. Nothing custom. Nothing illegal. The safety was a perfectly legit kami that locked and unlocked on command just the way it was supposed to. It would've even closed up shop for the night if I had asked it to. That'll make you feel stupid for letting someone shoot you in the back.

I stared into the kid's vacant eyes and pined for a smoke.

An idea stirred in my head. I didn't like it. It was an ugly little idea and it didn't do much to make me feel very safe. It didn't have anything to do with the kid, really, but I was thinking it all the same. I sat alone in an elevator with a fresh corpse. There were no sirens outside. There were no sirens outside because I had told the hotel not to call the cops. The hotel didn't call the cops because I had a dataspace certificate that said I was allowed to do pretty much whatever the hell I wanted to do. I was trusted. More importantly, the certificate was trusted because top-level encryption made it unalterable. It was encrypted by the best encryption and data handling software that existed, just like every other government document in existence. It was encrypted by Amida.

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missyfleming_22 wrote 971 days ago

Quite an exciting thriller you've got going here! I wasn't sure I would like it to be honest but you have a great writing style that made your story come to life. While I don't read many books that take place in space, you got me invested in the plot and the characters. Nicely done! You have a wonderful imagination!

Missy

CarolinaAl wrote 972 days ago

You provide us an outstanding science fiction thriller with an intelligent, thought provoking plot and fascinating characters. Awesome world builfing. Rich imagery. Punchy narrative. Superb dramatic tension. Polished writing. A remarkable read. Backed.

Christian Piatt wrote 974 days ago

You present an interesting concept in a time when government's role in the private sector is a hot topic.
Best of luck with your book. BACKED.
Peace,
Christian Piatt
PULLING THE GOALIE

Su Dan wrote 974 days ago

very good writing- original style; thriller type atmosphere= on my watchlist...
read SEASONS...

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 974 days ago

There is something immediate about your writing and the reader is soon absorbed in the tale. Well done. Paula Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

NMGriffis wrote 631 days ago

Okay. I've got to say that I don't normally go for 1st person novels, but you caught me good! I love the noir feeling and how you integrated the Japanese culture into a western styled novel. That's how it appeared to me, anyhow. You've also integrated all the scifi references very well so that the matter-of-fact delivery presents, and the delivers, like we already know what you're talking about. I had no problem with figuring out what the kamis are or dataspace or anything else and that's an accomplishment. Worldbuilding on the fly is nothing to sneeze at.

There are some minor mis-words here and there that someone should catch on the next pass, but nothing that took me out of the story.

The pacing is pretty slow, but then, I'm enjoying that too. This isn't a movie or tv, it's something a reader can delve into, which is really great.

I'm really looking forward to more! Hope it's coming soon!

Riggs Bombay wrote 932 days ago

The premise is compelling and I love the blend of Jap motifs with sci-fi. The noir voice does its job, and when it hits the net it scores big. There are moments that bounce off the rim, and unfortunately these tend ring more flat than they should on account of just how hot the good moments are. Reign in your prose a bit. Don't try to be clever quite so often--save it to savor it. I predict this baby's gonna be smokin' after a rewrite.

Josh Wagner
Deadwind Sea

Becca wrote 959 days ago

Sci-Fi is not my cup of tea, but your characters were well drawn and your writing was clean and polished. The dialogue is taught and fast paced, and even your punctuation is in order. You bring in the essence of the story early on,a sure way to hook your target audience early on.
-Backed-

xBeccaX
The Forever Girl

Tamara G wrote 962 days ago

A really good story that's fresh. The characters are well thought out and inventive. Backed.

Tam G

Owen Quinn wrote 967 days ago

A cracking scifi concept that is right up my street and a fresh take on perfect tech gone bad, very believable world with solid characterisation, just shows man's arrogance will always fall to hos darker side. Nicely done

Chean wrote 967 days ago

Fascinating read.....you have a natural talent and a style that resonates with the soul. Keep it up!

Chean wrote 967 days ago

Fascinating read.....you have a natural talent and a style that resonates with the soul. Keep it up!

Pia wrote 967 days ago

Joshua -

Binary Boys - Great Title. I like the film noire atmosphere. And the Shogonate's top agent, Ellison, a cool, Bogart type, makes an excellent MC in a binary world. Plus, the foolproof Amida Buddha who controlls the implanted criminals is obviously missing something. I'd enjoy reading this.

Backed, Pia (Course of Mirrors)

BadgerSensei wrote 967 days ago

Hi, Joshua,
Binary Boys provides an interesting combination of old mixed with new. We have the old-fashioned voice of the private eye, which adds wonderful humor. There are the old habits, the old vices, and a blend of various oldies into something new. I was trying to figure out what a kami is. I think that could stand some clarification. This looks like a fun read.
Backed.
Gloria
Finnegan's Quest



Thank you!

In the context of the book, kami are computer programs that run around dataspace doing things for people. It's just sort of a catch-all term. They do searches, like google, or help run cybernetic implants, or any number of things. Hopefully, over the course of the book, it'll become clear, but I'll keep it in mind. :)

In the context of reality, they're the Shinto equivalent of gods and spirits and ghosts. Shinto's had a weird sort of relationship with Buddhism since pretty much the first moment Buddhist missionaries came to Japan, and I hope to play with that later on in the book.

gloria piper wrote 968 days ago

Hi, Joshua,
Binary Boys provides an interesting combination of old mixed with new. We have the old-fashioned voice of the private eye, which adds wonderful humor. There are the old habits, the old vices, and a blend of various oldies into something new. I was trying to figure out what a kami is. I think that could stand some clarification. This looks like a fun read.
Backed.
Gloria
Finnegan's Quest

Justis Call wrote 968 days ago

Hmmm.....interesting work here.......it skillfully takes the "real" of today's world and slides it into a future galaxy resplendent with rough landings, planetary police, and meeting in a bar. It will be fascinating to get more into the nitty-gritty of it all!

Backed,
Justis Call
Prestidigitations

Linda Lou wrote 968 days ago

BINARY BOYS-Joshua M. Young
hullo Joshua. I am not all that familiar with the sci fi genre but it seems like we, humanity, will never get away from those with the inclination to kill. Already shelved and backed.
Please take a look at my book if you have not and thanks for that.
Linda Lou Long
Southern dis-Comfort
http://www.authonomy.com/ViewBook.aspx?bookid=11421

Justis Call wrote 969 days ago

LOVE this pitch - it is more than intriguing, the idea of controlling human behavior mixed with the appearance of potential 'conspiracy' (". . .far more disturbing events. . ." holds my interest. On my WL!

Justis Call
Prestidigitations

lizjrnm wrote 969 days ago

Talented writing with an intriguing storyline makes this easy to back!

Liz
The Cheech Room
A Fine Pickle

Tom Balderston wrote 969 days ago

Akin to implanting pre-cogs in the mind-of-man. A Buddist Minority Report. Has potential. Will read more.
Tom Balderston
The Wonder of Terra

Alex Ryan wrote 970 days ago

From what I've read this has the bones of something really good. The structure, narrative and premise all get ticks from me, for what that's worth. I hope it continues to do well for you. Good luck with it. Cheers

Barry Wenlock wrote 970 days ago

Hi Josh,
Excellent work. I loved 'the stout that wasn't', '...a tie that hung around because...' 'and i appreciated that more than the (very fancy) smoke' etc etc.
Hugely entertaining, great use of language, consistent and gritty voice with more than a taste of dry wit.
Backed with pleasure.
Best wishes,
Barry
LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS

Elizabeth Wolfe wrote 971 days ago

Dear Joshua,
This is destined to be a classic a la 1984 by George Orwell or The Giver by Lois Lowry. What an interesting topic, mind control. Well done!

BACKED
Elizabeth Wolfe (MEMORIES OF GLORY)

Geordy Grayson Reid wrote 971 days ago

Love the Buddha. Well done. Please check out TRANSIT THERAPY. Thanks.

missyfleming_22 wrote 971 days ago

Quite an exciting thriller you've got going here! I wasn't sure I would like it to be honest but you have a great writing style that made your story come to life. While I don't read many books that take place in space, you got me invested in the plot and the characters. Nicely done! You have a wonderful imagination!

Missy

zan wrote 972 days ago

Binary Boys

Joshua M. Young

The main appeal to me when I read your pitches was the idea of a cosmic Buddha. Your alternative world is an exciting, intriguing one. That criminal-turned-monk murdering one of his fellows is predictable - you have a nice juicy plot. I love a good conspiracy story and this one has all the right ingredients to thrill and feed the imagination, as well as the emotions and intellect. The writing is also well handled and eases the reader effortlessly into the thick of things. "The system is foolproof." I hate when people say this. That's what they said about the Titanic; no doubt, that's what HC originally thought when they developed Authonomy. You have an impressive piece of writing here. Move over Dan Brown - and I'm not joking!

CarolinaAl wrote 972 days ago

You provide us an outstanding science fiction thriller with an intelligent, thought provoking plot and fascinating characters. Awesome world builfing. Rich imagery. Punchy narrative. Superb dramatic tension. Polished writing. A remarkable read. Backed.

Gary Wedlund wrote 973 days ago

Excellent work. I like the attitude of this piece. Keep up the excellent work. I wanna know lots more about the geisha. I backed this good stuff right away.

Gary Wedlund

BadgerSensei wrote 973 days ago

Sci Fi is not my ‘take’ but I liked the human interest twist here, ie. The idea of controlling the minds of the evil. It’s a cracking premise, and fairly original. I’ve read quite a few books in this genre on the site, and I don’t think I’ve come across anything similar....So kudos for that.
Be frugal with the use of ‘that’
Right now, all (that )meant (that) I was wide awake.......Right now, that meant I was wide awake.
Except (that ) neither had briefcases.......except neither had briefcases.
In the same sort of way (that) a six year old is cute.....In the same sort of way a six year old is cute.
I spotted others but you may not agree. We all have a different writing voice.
Shelved with best wishes.
Wilma1
Knowing Liam Riley – I hope you enjoy reading it



Thank you for point "that" out to me, I'll keep it in mind :)

Wilma1 wrote 974 days ago

Sci Fi is not my ‘take’ but I liked the human interest twist here, ie. The idea of controlling the minds of the evil. It’s a cracking premise, and fairly original. I’ve read quite a few books in this genre on the site, and I don’t think I’ve come across anything similar....So kudos for that.
Be frugal with the use of ‘that’
Right now, all (that )meant (that) I was wide awake.......Right now, that meant I was wide awake.
Except (that ) neither had briefcases.......except neither had briefcases.
In the same sort of way (that) a six year old is cute.....In the same sort of way a six year old is cute.
I spotted others but you may not agree. We all have a different writing voice.
Shelved with best wishes.
Wilma1
Knowing Liam Riley – I hope you enjoy reading it

Stark Silvercoin wrote 974 days ago

I loved Binary Boys. The imagery and the matter of fact way that author Joshua M. Young talks about the space-based empire is great. I like how he calls a space elevator a beanstalk right at the beginning. I was pulled right into the excellent writing and snappy dialog. I kept thinking about Blade Runner while I was reading. It’s really that good. Only seven chapters are posted as of this review and backing, but I sincerely hope that Young will put more up soon.

name falied moderation wrote 974 days ago

Dear Joshua
This is so weird....I wrote you a comment and cannot find it but I saw it there....anyways
I have not read it all but will carry on. I loved your short pitch it grabbed me and your long pitch truly enticed me to read on. Original storyline so far and very well crafted. I am not an expert in grammar nor punctuation etc, but I love the flow and I am really getting a true appreciation of Science fiction. this is especially with regard to writers such as yourself. I am aspiring to write, you have honed a natural talent CONGRATS

Please take a moment to look, COMMENT which is

important to me, and BACK my book. if not that is OK

also

The VERY best of luck to you

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE
Denise
The Letter

Christian Piatt wrote 974 days ago

You present an interesting concept in a time when government's role in the private sector is a hot topic.
Best of luck with your book. BACKED.
Peace,
Christian Piatt
PULLING THE GOALIE

Rusty Bernard wrote 974 days ago

Hi Joshua,

I have backed your book because I was hooked by the pitch, loved the introduction and read on. How much more I read depends on time and commitment.

Enjoy everything and good luck.

Rusty Bernard
The Mental Pause

Bocri wrote 974 days ago

The pitch for Binary Boys not only hooked, but lined and sinkered me. The blend of sci-fi, fantasy, detective in a thriller, while not a thoroughbred, is certainly an intriguing mix. The cynical, world weary 'voice' of the narrator is pitched just right and the 'technical' detail sounds feasible. The plot is original and develops without deviation or padding. Nice! BACKED. Robert Davidson. The Tuzla Run

Andrew Burans wrote 974 days ago

You have written a very interesting and unique storyline, which I do like, and created a most memorable main character in Ellison. I also really like your use of the first person narrative voice. The dialogue is realistic and well written and the pace of your story flows well. All of this along with your descriptive writing makes your science fiction thriller a pleasure to read. Backed.

Andrew Burans
The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

Su Dan wrote 974 days ago

very good writing- original style; thriller type atmosphere= on my watchlist...
read SEASONS...

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 974 days ago

There is something immediate about your writing and the reader is soon absorbed in the tale. Well done. Paula Barrett (Cuthbert-how mean is my valley)

scorselo wrote 975 days ago

An interesting twist from the usual Sci-Fi, nice title, criminal mind controled by benvolent buddha. the writing pulls us into and through this tale. Nice use of innovative futuristic slang.

Backed

Scorselo

Despinas1 wrote 975 days ago

Great work Joshua,
Backed with pleasure
Helen
The Last Dream

fh wrote 975 days ago

BINARY BOYS
Oh I enjoyed this! This is somewhat different from the majority of Sci fi.You have a mix of intelligent culture and technology.
I particularly enjoyed reading about your main characters. They interact together well with some very believable dialogue. This is a well crafted and put together book and a nicely executed piece of writing.
I am happy to back this as I think it will do well in the right market and targeted at the right audience.
When you have a moment I would be really pleased if you could take a look at my own book; The Assassins Village. Very good luck on here.
Faith
THE ASSASSINS’ VILLAGE

celticwriter wrote 975 days ago

Hi Joshua, nice, consistent flow. Interesting stuff. Backed.

sincerely,
jim
jack & charmian london

Jack Hughes wrote 975 days ago

This is an outstandingly inventive story, blending culture and mysticism with technology. Like The Matrix, this is hugely original, superbly written and with dynamic individual characters. Science fiction at its finest.

Backed with pleasure, best of luck Joshua.

Jack Hughes
Dawn of Shadows

Fred Le Grand wrote 975 days ago

Superb!
Fluent writing (a few wee typo's at the start) but captivating narrative prose and descriptive prose which is vivid and brief enough to keep interest.
The pace is excellent and the MC's voice shines clear from the start.
Very good writing - can't judge the plot because only read the first chapter, but I can tell you this is one of the better books on this site (and I've been here for 18 months!).
Backed with pleasure.

SusieGulick wrote 975 days ago

Dear Joshua, I love your intriguing suspensebul story. :) The geisha & Ellison & 2 yipping dogs in chapter 7 made me laugh. :) What an amazing creative mind you have for this story. :) I love Termnator movie & tv series & it reminds me of the chip in the head. :) Yours is like a continuation of that. :) Greatest write, ever! :) Your pitch was excellent because it prepared me for my read & your crisp paragraphs & dialogue sped my reading right along. :) I've backed your book :) - could you please take a moment to back my memoir book? :) Thanks so very much. :) Love, Susie :)

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KW wrote 975 days ago

This is a fascinating idea for a SF thriller. I love the idea of putting implants into the minds of dangerous criminals so that they can be controlled by Dainichi Nyorai. Of course, this is eventually manipulated and all hell breaks lose. The mixing of cultures in your future world is intriguing: a Nordic-skinned geisha named Hestia who is getting drunk in a hotel bar near a starport called Alexandria. Simply, I love it. It has a hybrid feel like a fantasy manga mixed with a detective novel. Your balance of dialogue and description is about right. The idea of protective kami is very interesting as well and the line: "Dataspace would be buzzing like Shibuya on a Friday night . . ." Shogun Alexander, indeed! "Shavelings don't kill people . . . They do before they become monks . . . the nembutsu implant and Amida-Buddha liberates you from all that squishy physicality stuff." I guess something has gone wrong with the system.

I'm enjoying this and will come back to read more. Backed for now.

SusieGulick wrote 975 days ago

:) comment to follow - read & comment on 1 hour later :)

R.A. Battles wrote 975 days ago

Love the title and the pitches, but your voice sold me. Backed!

Rodney B.

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