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Dear T.P.B, I love your pitch & laughed when my mind became romantic & I thought that Kathy & Jim would end up being life-long friends & getting married & living happily ever after, eventually :) - this is what raced through my mind :) - as I smiled. :) Then, as I read chapters 1,2,&3, I loved how you put each of their points of view :) - this made me smile more, because I was feeling what they were feeling. :) So much emotions in your story & totally well written & what a creative way to write it! :) I just love it. :) Also, your crisp paragraphs & dialogue & large print made for a really smooth read. :) "I hate when people don't understand what I'm saying," struck me & I feel that way, too :) - what a great line!! :) I have read, commented on, & put your book on my watchlist, to back when a space opens on my bookshelf. :) I have also ******-rated your book :) - could you please ****** & back my memoirs book? :) Thank you from the bottom my heart. :) Love, Susie :) p.s. every ******-ing & backing moves our books closer to the editor's desk :)

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Why are all three chapters the same?

Jim and Kathy are both memorable characters, and very relate able. You write well and I would love to see more of this if you put any more up
Nicely done