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rank 5847
word count 12953
date submitted 08.11.2010
date updated 28.12.2010
genres: Fiction, Thriller, Science Fiction,...
classification: moderate
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Euthan Palace

Simon Verde

Pass through Euthan Palace for The Protectorate's greatest gift - immortality. Just be really sure you want it.

 

A pinch of madness, a drop of dark technology and a liberal dose of religious fervour combine in a deliciously twisted dish.

The war has run its course, although Protectorate expansionism continues under the guise of religious converson. Mankind can have everything for the right price, even immortality. That, at least, is what is on offer at Euthan Palace. Not everyone believes. Not everyone is happy, and The Protectorate can't have that...can they?

Cover Art by Manolo Guerrero.

 
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Jan’s Place

Euthan Palace

 

The chime rang, reverberated, rose to a crescendo and slowly died away. It was loud. Jan Olsen hated that chime. Another customer had entered his private place and that could only mean one thing, work. Grudgingly he rose from his disorganised desk, knocking the half-full glass of brandy over with a twitch of his hand. It was only ever half-full; a magical state which money and perseverance ensured.
 

 
He had not meant to be rich. Retirement from the Protectorate left him with a modest sum, which he had invested in the facilities here. War carried on; each day the Protectorate expanded its zone of influence and this innocuous rock quietly turned into a gold mine. A jump point had been found nearby, an unusual confluence of physics and impossibility. It was a nexus; warp space folded strangely here, allowing a myriad of connections and it had become depressingly important overnight.
 

 
Little men in grey suits tried to buy him out, he had refused. Next followed threats, but Jan was not easily cowed. His aggressive demeanour, backed up by a heavy blaster and too many old friends made them go away. That, of course, and the remains of an overzealous politician whom he nailed to the front entrance. 
 

 
Eventually he agreed to lease some of his spare land and the Protectorate had installed their research facility nearby. Things ran smoothly for a couple of years until there was no need, militarily speaking, for the nexus point. Battle fronts change, after all; a circumstance which Jan was comfortable with. He was granted the use of the assets now on his land, with only one condition; he must continue providing the service. This time his truculent nature was of no use, the Protectorate reminding him of exactly what they could do to him if they wished. So, he opened his new business, with his less than silent partner and the money just kept rolling in.
 

 
Trade was brisk. It was incredible the amount of people who were willing to pay for what, essentially was a one-way trip. They signed over all of their worldly goods to Jan, and his partner, knowing that there was no guarantee. To arrive here, they at least needed a referral and of course to be rich. All were old, many diseased, but with one thing in common; they did not want to die. The Protectorate’s facility gave them an option; die on paper and wait for the possibility of rebirth. No guarantee was given, no refund ever discussed and once you entered the facilitiy’s double doors there was absolutely no way back.
 

 
Jan did not ask what went on behind those doors; the staff was Protectorate recruited, as far as he knew military, and he just did not care. He had an unlimited supply of brandy, his own space, with only occasional interruptions. One of course was too many, but he could endure. The chime had signalled just such a disturbance and with bad grace he entered the reception area.
 

 
“Welcome. Please be seated. There are just a few formalities...” he began to slur before his brandy-fogged mind recognized the unusualness of the scene before him.
 

 
Something hard, metallic, wavered in his vision. He recognised and did not like it. There were too many people, at least six and all dressed the same. Jan recognised their uniforms and facial features and began to sober quickly. He tried again.
 

 
“Welcome...ugh”
 

 
The pain resulting from the harsh blow sharpened his senses. This was not how it was supposed to be.
 

 
“Be quiet!” This came from their leader, a harsh-faced woman. She was the one who had slapped him.
 

 
“Marti,” she continued, “are you sure that the cameras are off?”
 

 
“Sure.”
 

 
“Good,” she returned to Jan, grasping his brandy-stained shirt and pulling him towards her, “now where is it?”
 

 
“Here,” he mumbled, his knee slamming up between her legs, as his right hand curled round her throat, “but you’re not going to be happy...”
 

 
Her hair was long, tied in a pony-tail which he used to good effect, tearing hair painfully as he dragged her round. Drunk no longer, reactions took over. Changing his grip, his hand dropped to her belt, drawing her pistol in a fluid movement. His first shot took a startled Marti right between the eyes, his second blew a hole in another’s chest. They had begun to move, but shock had given him an edge. Jan booted his angry captive towards the tight clump of his remaining attackers; part of his brain laughing at the stupidity of huddling up so close together, even whilst he killed them.
 

 
As quickly as it had started, it was over, Jan standing over his first aggressor whose pitiful cries did not move him.
 

 
“You’ll be sorry,” she gasped.
 

 
“I already am,” he said, as he calmly squeezed the trigger.
 

 
The report had barely died away when the front door exploded inwards, throwing Jan back towards his office. Armour-clad figures raced in, spraying the area liberally with weapons fire. Half-conscious, Jan heard the snapped, “Take him!” just before a rifle-butt slammed into his head, relieving him of all the troublesome questions running through his mind.

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Laura Kline wrote 428 days ago

I like the opening. I'll be reading on.

ajmigdal wrote 856 days ago

Plenty of action. Plenty of suspense. Think I'll be settling in to this one for a while.

Bill Carrigan wrote 873 days ago

Hi Simon,

Bill again. Now that I've read all you show of "Euthan Palace" and have browsed your other three, I can hardly decide which I prefer. Probably "Euthan Palace," since it's strongest in bringing to life its protagonist and seems the best edited. My only suggestions are to make all weaponry futuristic for any critters capable of space travel, clarify the motives for the warfare, and see that the heroes and main villains stand out. It would strengthen the prose if phrases like "did not" and "would not" were contracted ("didn't," "wouldn't") and would make for smoother reading if you used a comma in compound sentences, as in "eventually he agreed to lease some of his spare land and the Protectorate" (comma after "land"). All in all, I like your crisp style and hard action. Tonight I'll shelve "Euthan Palace." Best of luck and Happy New Year!

Bill Carrigan
"The Doctor of Summitville"

Bill Carrigan wrote 874 days ago

Strong writing. Packed with action and hard to put down. I've learned, though, that the last book edited is the first one shown, so this may not be the one I should focus on. No matter, I'll sample them all and choose the one I like best for comments. So on to 2, 3, and 4.

Meanwhile, I wish you'd take a look at "The Doctor of Summitville"--not your genre, but judging by your economical style, I think you'll like it.

Colin Normanshaw wrote 879 days ago

Great start and an engaging style. Azimov it isn't, but there is a simplistic style that entices the reader to want more. Backed with pleasure. Colin

Steven J Pemberton wrote 899 days ago

This does what it says on the tin. It could do with some more careful proofreading - watch out for confusion of homophones, such as its/it's and there/their. This is not network TV - you don't have to asterisk out swearwords. It's particularly not Battlestar Galactica - if you can't bring yourself to write "fuck," think of your own replacement for it.

Steven J Pemberton / A Wizard's Daughter

ClaireLouise wrote 901 days ago

On my W/L. Interesting and good synopsis.

I've starred and look forward to reading more.

Claire-Curious Cooper and the Screaming Skulls

Su Dan wrote 913 days ago

great style- good story, interesting, and easy to follow. l would buy this if published...on my watchlist...
read SEASONS...

hellsbelles wrote 923 days ago

"Cutting off both.." nice seguay. The writing flows in a nice easy-to-read style, with the dialogue divulging what we need to know. Sometimes this genre gets carried away with too much story. This is crisp and clear, no beating around the bush. Backed.

Andrew Burans wrote 927 days ago

I really liked your first book "A Guiding Light" and I do like this, your second offering on this site, just as much. It is well written, your use of imagery is excellent and the dialogue is excellent. I have given you a high star rating. Space should open up on my shelf in the next couple of weeks or so and I will back your book then.

Cheers,
Andrew Burans
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