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date submitted 03.01.2011
date updated 03.02.2011
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If I Were God -A Journey

Kay Block

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I wanted to tell some friends and family about what i know of Jesus. I write better than I talk. It is an honest way to witness by a nobody, that is me. I send along Chapter One for your review.

 
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christian, how to tell people you love about jesus, layman, short and sweet everyday language

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Cruiser wrote 857 days ago

Hi Kay,
Thank you for being a good witness

:)

Thank you very much for your comments. I struggled with was or were a lot. I changed it twice. I guess I should have changed it three times! Life is my only "altering substance!"

Blessings to you and yours.

Kay

Lorne F. Thompson wrote 858 days ago

Hi Kay:

As a retired English teacher, I notice "things" that others miss. Your title should read IF I WERE GOD. Sometimes the plural verb should be used with a singular nown. This is one of those incidences. To make yourself comfortable in changing it, check with a used grammar book.

This is not a criticism but an observation.

Hope you are well and flying high naturally (without mind altering substances -- chuckle, chuckle)

Seriously, may our Lord bless you and your family.

Lorne

SChamblee wrote 868 days ago

Hi Kay,
Thank you for being a good witness

:)

David Kidd wrote 871 days ago

Hi Kay I intend to back this, but this computer is not allowing me, so I will get on my other one later. I think your way of bringing your message is fantastic. It's so plain, direct, caring and real. This is great and I am sure will be well supported here. regards David

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