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FINDING LAURIE

Michael Schwed

When you lose something you make an effort to find it. When the something you lost is your precious child you will search forever.

 

In 1977 my beautiful five year old daughter died suddenly. There were signs signalling the coming tragedy, signs I failed to recognize. Following her death there were other signs telling me she was not gone forever but would somehow return. This book spans the thirty three years it took for me to find her. Some might call this a book about reincarnation, but, I call it finding Laurie..

 
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HIDDEN TALENTS

    It was in the spring of 1984 that I got a call from my Mother wondering whether I would be interested in taking a class with her entitled “how to develop your ESP”, which of course stands for “extra sensory perception”.  The class was being given in the local high school. I told her okay.  I didn’t much care if it worked or not, I thought it would be a nice Mother and Son thing to do. I had to register for the course which included disclosure of my name and address as well as pay a fee of $150.00.  This left me extremely skeptical with regard to the value of the course.  The teacher was obviously making money from the participants and she had sufficient information about her students to check into their backgrounds.

    On the first night of the class our teacher, Marilyn, gave us a brief introduction into the world of “ESP.”  She told us that reality was a mental realm rather than a physical one.  She also told us that the ability to access information beyond that normally gained through our five senses was something that we all could develop.  She told us her particular specialty was “psychometry”, or “psychic touch” as it is called today. She claimed that by touching an object she was able to gain insight into the person who possessed it, such as the type of person he or she was, their talents and fears, and sometimes information about their futures.

    To make her point, she offered a brief demonstration.  She called for a volunteer to give her one of their possessions.  A fellow classmate quickly stood up and handed over his watch.  Marilyn took it and held it in both hands.  She closed her eyes as if she were searching for some other worldly channel of communication.  After two or three minutes of silence she began to tell the class some facts about our classmate.  I don’t remember what she said but, I do recall it was essentially generalities; like “he’s an intelligent thoughtful person.”  One would not expect our volunteer to contradict Marilyn by confessing that on the contrary he was a stupid shallow person.  I was certainly not impressed by the demonstration, but, my mom enjoyed the class and so I agreed to continue coming with her.

    Marilyn suggested that for the next class we each bring a personal object that we have possessed for many years and she will demonstrate her ability further. I decided to test her by bringing my father’s watch with me and pass it off as mine.  If she was any good at all she should be able to realize that I was not the owner of that watch.  I, in skeptic mode, was convincing myself that she was a total fraud and I planned to use my father’s watch as a way of outing her. I did not tell my Mother what I was up to and relished, to some extent, tripping her up in front of the class.  I suppose I was doing it not so much as to embarrass her but rather showing the class how clever I was.

    When, during the second class, the time came for Marilyn to ask for volunteers, I immediately jumped up and rushed to hand her the watch. She again took it in her hands and closed her eyes seeking again to establish some connection to an unknown source of knowledge. She then turned to me and said “This is not your watch.”  She said it in the form of an accusation.  I felt exposed and belittled.  I tried to explain that I was seeking to connect to my Father, but, she wasn’t buying it.  However, she let me off easy and turned to another volunteer to continue her demonstration.

    Well, I thought to myself, she’s either the real deal or smarter than I am, and at the present I felt really dumb. At this point I was forced to concede ground to her and set aside some of my skepticism. Her continued demonstration did not bring about any great revelations about my other classmates as she again spoke more in generalities than specifics.  Nevertheless the class was impressed and, grudgingly, I was too.

The class continued for the next twelve weeks ending in June.  I did not learn much from my attendance, but, it was pleasant and sociable and, I enjoyed it. On the last day, Marilyn told us she was going to conduct private classes in her home during the summer and if any of us wanted to attend to let her know.  My Mother was very excited about the prospect of continuing the class and urged me to go with her. Again, more for my Mother’s sake than mine, I agreed to join Marilyn’s summer seminar.  

The class she conducted in her home was much the same as the one in the classroom, at least in the beginning.  We would discuss aspects of “esp” and Marilyn would demonstrate her talents. However, after a couple of weeks she began an exercise intended to awaken our latent psychic abilities, including mine and my Mother’s.

We spent the first fifteen minutes doing meditation.  We closed our eyes, took deep breaths and let our minds picture the imagery she conjured up. It was relaxing I remembered thinking, and also a clever way to kill fifteen minutes of an hour class. My Mother though was really into it.  She told me that during these exercises she saw visions of people’s faces.

“What people?” I asked. And she said “just faces of people I’ve never met.” 

“Do they say anything” I wondered.

“Nope, they just look at me.” She responded.

At the last class for the summer Marilyn told us that she would attempt to open a channel within us.  What channel that was she didn’t say.  I was game and willing to cooperate.  Again we began with a meditation, only this time the meditation was lasting more than 30 minutes.

At that point she said that she would be touching us gently in order to open that channel.  Shortly thereafter I felt her hands resting on my shoulders.

“Allow yourself to go with the flow.” She said. As I heard her words I could feel a deepening in my meditative state. There seemed to be a feeling of numbness coming over me as if a detachment was beginning between my mind and body. After a few minutes I actually could not sense my body.  Then, quite suddenly, I could see in front of me Laurie’s coffin.  It was open and slowly came closer to me as if I was walking toward it except I was not walking.

I looked in the coffin and saw my Laurie.  She was dressed as she was the day I buried her.  However, she seemed more alive.  She slowly opened her eyes and smiled.  It was startling but I wasn’t startled.  I seemed to expect what was happening.  It was like I knew she would open her eyes and smile.

    Then she sat up.  I leaned over and embraced her. I could feel her pressed up against me.  I gently kissed her on the cheek and told her I loved her. Then slowly the imaged faded and I felt the sense of my body returning. I opened my eyes and took a deep breath.  I could see that others in the class were responding in a similar way.  There was a look on their faces of a kind of wonderment. I looked at my Mother.  Her eyes were closed and she was smiling.  Her head was moving slightly from side to side in a kind of rhythm.

    In a few minutes she too opened her eyes taking and took a deep breath as she did that.

    “Did you see anything?” I asked her.

    “I saw Dad.” She smiled.

    At that point all my classmates were wide eyed and Marilyn began asking them to share their experiences.  There wasn’t anything interesting in what I heard, or rather I was distracted by my own vision and was not really paying attention to what the others had to say until my Mother starting sharing hers.

    She said that her vision was of a dance hall, the kind she remembered during World War II where soldiers would bring their wives or girlfriends for an evening’s entertainment when they had time off from their base.  She saw my Dad there.  He approached her took her in his arms and they began to dance.  She danced with him the entire time.  Nothing was said. She rested her head on his shoulder and danced.

    “It was wonderful.” She concluded.

    I was happy to see her so elated.  She was very loyal to my Father and never entertained the thought of being with another man since his death.

    “Your Father was the love of my life and no one could ever replace him.” She told me many times.

    I did not share my vision with the class.  It was very personal to me and I keep it to myself.  I did tell my Mother about it after the class was over.  She felt she would miss being at the class and hoped that Marilyn continued with a class in the fall. I agreed with her and felt, in the end, the experience was well worth it.

    A few weeks later, while at my Mother’s home, I suggested an experiment.  I felt that my Mother might have some psychic ability and thought we might try some automatic writing. So I put a pen in her hand and a piece of paper underneath it and told her to close her eyes and see what happens.

    “What’s supposed to happen?” She wanted to know.

    I told her that sometimes other worldly spirits can gain control of your hand and write messages on the paper. It was kind of like a Ouija Board without the board. She was more than a bit hesitant, I think, primarily afraid that it might actually work.

    She sat there for about 40 to 45 minutes waiting for something to happen, which didn’t. I took the pen from her and told her we would try again some other time, which for me was the following week.  Again I stuck a pen in her hand and again she closed her eyes and we waited for something to happen.  After about 20 minutes her hand began to move.  The pen moved in an up and down vertical pattern which looked like the markings on a cardiogram. When her hand neared the end of the paper I lifted it and placed it below the line she had just written.  Again she continued writing in the same manner.  This went on for about fifteen minutes until her fingers began to twitch and she dropped the pen.

    “Well, this is progress at least.” I told her.  I was convinced something was happening and so was she.  We continued to try for the next five or six weeks without any greater success.  Then I decided to place my hand on her right shoulder, her writing arm, and suddenly the scribble turned into letters. The first words she wrote were:

    “Michael my son I miss you.”  The words were all in script and there was no separation between words as the pen wrote a continuous stream of letters.  The first words that came out of my mouth were:

    “Is Laurie with you?” And, in answer to that, the pen wrote, “Yes.”

    My heart leapt when I saw that answer.  I knew my Mother was not out to trick me.  I knew she would not consciously move that pen.  I felt this was in fact my Father writing.  I felt my daughter was safe.

    My Father wrote how he was concerned about all of us.  How he wanted only good things to happen in our lives.  Then my Mother’s fingers twitched and the pen fell and the session, if you want to call it that, was over.

    We talked for hours about what happened.  I was convinced it was my Father, my Mother was bewildered by it and Sandy was skeptical.  We all however wanted to continue with it on a weekly basis to see what would develop.  Over the next few months the writings continued and I continued to place my hand on my Mothers right shoulder.  There weren’t any great revelations about the hereafter nor were there predictions of our futures.  My Father did tell my Mother that one day they would be together again and that he was waiting for her.  He told me not to worry about the future and said that I would not need for money.  In regard to Laurie, there were not much added other than he was with her and she was alright. However, my Mother began to develop a cyst on the shoulder I touch and as time passed the cyst grew to the size of a grapefruit. 

    It was then that an interesting communication came through.  My Father expressed concern about his brother who was scheduled for a heart by-pass surgery the next day.  He kept writing that he must not have the operation in the morning or things would not turn out right.  We were somewhat perplexed by his warning and did not know what to do about it.  I didn’t want to scare my Uncle or his family by communicating the warning to them but, on the other hand, if we didn’t and something went wrong we would never forgive ourselves. Finally we decided that the call had to be made and My Mother called my Aunt.  She tried not to alarm her and told her about the writing and what the person we thought was my Father had said.  My Aunt told my Mother that he was scheduled for surgery at 8:00 in the morning and there was nothing she could do to change the time.

    We hoped my Father was wrong and yet if he was, then a form of validation would fail.  I was torn between wanting my Father to be right, and at the same time wanting him to be wrong. We waited for word from my Aunt as to which way it would go.

    In the early afternoon of the day of his surgery my Aunt called to tell my Mother that everything had gone well.  However, she said that at 8:00 in the morning he was brought into surgery and then suddenly they came and took him out because an emergency patient had been admitted to the hospital and attention to him was immediately required.  My Uncle’s surgery was postponed to noon.

    I could see the hand of my Father in what happened.  For whatever reason he did not want my Uncle under the knife in the morning, and, it was prevented. I don’t purport to know how or why it was brought about, but, to me, it solidified my belief that my Father was writing through my Mother.

    The next session would turn out to be our last.  My Father began by writing “Michael my son write the book write the book now.”  He then repeated that sentence over and over again an entire page’s worth.  When my Mother got to the end of the page her fingers did their usual twitch dropping the pen and ending the session.  The next day she went to the doctor to have him look at the cyst on her shoulder.  He immediately lanced the cyst and removed it.  He told her that the cyst could have had serious consequences if she had waited any longer.  This scared her quite a bit and she decided not to continue with the writing. I was upset but understood her fear. I did not push her to continue hoping that some other avenue of communication would open up.  It didn’t.

    I thought about the book my Father wanted me to write.  Was it something connected to my work?  I just didn’t feel there was a book in me that wanted to come out.  I didn’t realize what he meant at the time, but, I do now.

 

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rastafolux wrote 2 days ago

Thanks for your encouraging remarks. I will give your book a look over the weekend.

This is a very interesting and heart-warming story. I have some knowledge of the work of Dr Ian Stevenson (and Dr Jim Tucker) of Virginia University with children who seem to have memories of previous lives, and can recognise this account as authentic. If it were not, there is plenty of scope for the imagination to make the "evidence" all the more striking and convincing.

There are some typos in the book, and some technical flaws - for example, using a period instead of a comma at the end of speech and before the "he said, she said" bit. These are all quite minor but I feel that the book would be much improved by their fixing. But I really enjoyed the read and wish the author well with his writing and his life.

Ralderlan wrote 2 days ago

This is a very interesting and heart-warming story. I have some knowledge of the work of Dr Ian Stevenson (and Dr Jim Tucker) of Virginia University with children who seem to have memories of previous lives, and can recognise this account as authentic. If it were not, there is plenty of scope for the imagination to make the "evidence" all the more striking and convincing.

There are some typos in the book, and some technical flaws - for example, using a period instead of a comma at the end of speech and before the "he said, she said" bit. These are all quite minor but I feel that the book would be much improved by their fixing. But I really enjoyed the read and wish the author well with his writing and his life.

Beverley-Rose wrote 11 days ago

Hi Michael I have recently uploaded my Book Peering through the Past the Museum of Hurt, would appreciate if you could have a look at it and maybe leave me your feedback much obliged. Beverley-Rose

Salley wrote 19 days ago

Michael, I just read the first two chapters of your book, and I am riveted to your story. Your writing is extremely clear and concise. I can't stop with just the first couple of chapters, so I will add your book to my watchlist and return for more!

Best regards,
Sara Alley
Ghost Town

tim templer wrote 37 days ago

Hi Michael

This is a lovely story i was glue to it from the on set. I've only manage to read the first chapter and i really liked it. The way you describe your feelings, emotions and expectations are good. You are on my WL now will come back for more.

Tim Templer

The Journey

Beverley-Rose wrote 38 days ago

When I saw the title I was immediately drawn to read your book and I like it very much from the first chapter that I read, I was in suspense for awhile and waiting to know more but I felt that you were talking at me rather than to me, personally but other than that I liked it very much.

Alice Kahrmann wrote 105 days ago

Hi Michael,

God I was really gripped by this, and touched and it really taps into that universal fear of losing a child - yet it is not self indulgent either... I'll definitely be back for more - in the interim have backed.

A

emarie wrote 125 days ago

Michael, this is such an interesting read. You tell the story so the reader is with you feeling the anxiety as you go through it. You give this story an emotionally real feeling to it. Good job with this.
--emarie
Jackson Jacob Henry Brown, III

HLauren wrote 134 days ago

I believe in signs. And now I believe even more that the veil to the other side is thinner than we imagine, that we are not lost in death, but simply relocated. We are all seeking comfort in what we do not know. Thank you for sharing such beautiful examples. God bless your family.

Best,

Hilary
Killing Karl

Seringapatam wrote 139 days ago

Michael, This is the firsts book on hear that I have not been able to walk away from. it is told in a way that held me right to the last minute and I commend you for writing it. Not only did it feel real as it was, but you told it in a way that I was right there with you. Its a superb account and I am sorry for the loss. I will be supporting this book as its a cracker and with some pushing could go far. Good luck.
Sean Connolly. British Army on the Rampage. (B.A.O.R) Please consider me for a read or Watch List wont you? Happy New Year. Sean

Grace Lyssett wrote 139 days ago

Hello Michael. I have read through your entire book, eager to know how you found Laurie. Within minutes of reading the first chapter I was tingling with what I guess was a similar feeling that you had. Then I became carried away by the story and forgot the earlier feelings, just as you probably did as life did its thing. Your first few chapters are compelling yet there’s a kind of emptiness between the words. We know what that emptiness was.

I cried throughout chapter 4 as your precious Laurie finally died. It is beautifully written with a fast pace, running at the rate that matched my own desire to know what was happening. Then the pace slowed, the spelling and punctuation mistakes jarred my concentration.

In such a stirring true life account it seems pedantic to give feedback on writing style. And yet, as I’m aware in my own true life story, the text needs to be readable. When you have poured out your heart so bravely, it can hurt when someone challenges you on technique. However, in order to be true to you, I will tell you some of my observations. I hope that is OK with you.

Having started with such poignancy it felt to me that you slipped into ‘legal language’, writing a brief for reincarnation, listing rules for consulting mediums, defending the case for research. These paragraphs kept getting in the way of the story of finding Laurie.

I liked the conversational style, yet there are several spelling mistakes, grammatical hiccups, spacing issues, inappropriate capital letters, and punctuation mishaps, which interrupted the flow. Yet, in a way, it seems forgivable that in the moment of distress this is just how we are. As a completed manuscript it would be a good idea to correct them, or get someone else who isn’t involved emotionally to sieve through and put all those niggling little pieces right.

Regarding the chapter GOD THOUGHTS, as you said, ‘you need not read it.’ Why include it then? It doesn’t add to the storyline and is a shame that there is a part of your beautiful story that can be skipped over. Can you not make it all count? I feel drawn to honour Laurie’s life and make EVERYTHING count. She is now dear to my own heart.

As fascinated as I was and am about synchronistic events, the word ‘synchronistic’ began to get on my nerves eventually. You debated it so much. I was already convinced and waiting for the signs and would have liked a chance to make up my own mind.

However, “Goodbye Mom,” brought the tears again, and so did the ending.

I know that we all react according to our own experiences and my reactions may not tally with yours. I wanted to be honest with you Michael, to thank you for sharing your deepest feelings and touching story, and to reassure you, as a psychic myself, that Laurie is indeed part of your life. She has obviously touched many other lives too and I will recommend this book to others.

With Love,
Grace Lyssett

D. A. Quigley wrote 145 days ago

I am very impressed you were able to tell this story. Last year I almost lost my wife three times during a hospital stay: MRSA, blood clots and spinal meningitis. Looking death in the face is not something you ever forget. Telling the story is much harder even. I wish you luck in your journey.

evermoore wrote 153 days ago

Oh, Michael...I ache for all of you, and am so very sorry for your loss. You have shared the pain of that tragedy to honor the love you hold for Laurie. It took so much strength for you to manage it...and you've shared it all in a way that touches me deeply. Six stars and God bless you and yours...and absolutely you found Laurie again!
Linda

Celine Zabel wrote 160 days ago

Michael,

I have read your story. Congratulations on being able to put all of those emotions into words. Your writing is clear and inviting. I could not stop reading. High marks from me.

Best to you and your family,
Celine Zabel
Lives Shattered: One Mother's Loss at the Hands of the Legal System

ella85 wrote 164 days ago

So, I started your book last night, and I came back this afternoon to finish it because I was anxious to finish. There are many things I appreciated about it. First, the writing flowed nicely. I didn't get tripped up in your style, which was genuine and conversational. Your sincerity shone brightly throughout, and I applaud your willingness to let us into some of the darkest times of your life. Even through the darkness, you managed to make it a hopeful book. I could easily see this as a movie. I'm excited to see where this goes for you. Peace to you and your family :)
Lori

Helen Laycock wrote 169 days ago

Michael, you have gone through a trauma that every parent dreads. Once I began reading, I became lost in your book and read right through to the end in one sitting. I had meant to make notes about any slips that you might have made, but they were long-forgotten as you took me with you from the day Laurie was born until the day Lara rode on your foot. Through everything, you have managed to find the positive and I feel surprisingly uplifted by the ending. 'Write the book' you had been told. I am so glad you did! I shall be backing this and awarding a full set of shiny stars!

Helen
Glass Dreams

Lourdes wrote 170 days ago

Michael,
After nine chapters, i still want to know what else you've got to say. The death of your beautiful Laurie was heart- wrenching and i shed a few tears. I don't think there could ever be any worst pain than that of losing a child, and the way you describe all the events puts the reader there, suffering along with you.
I want to know what your later endeavours lead to, so i continue enjoying this inspirational book.
All six stars and placing Finding Laurie in line for the shelf.
Maria
The Path to Survival

Aspiring author wrote 177 days ago

Dear Michael,
First and foremost I am terribly sorry for the loss you suffered. I have just finished reading chapter 4 and am, in this moment, unable to continue, as my son's birthday is July 16th and my Grandmother, who passed away this year, leaving me somewhat of an emotional mess, was born on September 14th. "Coincidence"? But I will continue. You are telling your family's story in such an open, honest and courageous way and everything that you have related is unnervingly familiar. I need to know what happens next. When I can relate to what I am reading, I know that I am reading it for a reason. I believe that this is a book that should be out there for everyone who needs to find it and that your loss, and the fact that you are sharing it, was not for nothing.

CATHERINE SHAW wrote 186 days ago

Your have expressed your tragedies and fears so eloquently that is is heart wrenching and a pleasure to read. I have your book on my watch list and will put it on my shelf as soon as I am able.

Cathy

Green H wrote 189 days ago

The title sounded interesting, and your Prologue even more. Cannot wait to dig in and comment.

regards
green h

carol jefferies wrote 190 days ago

Hi Michael,

I read your first chapter and feel sorry that you experienced such anxiety and the morbid fear of death which overshadowed your life spoiling the two joys of receiving your healthy daughters into the world.

I have witnessed much death and suffering, and births too, as I have been a midwife and a nurse. Providing the person was old and frail and not in pain, the experience of death I thought as miraculous as a birth. Old people often die of pneumonia often referred to as 'the old person's friend,' as the person seems to fade away in a completely serene way. Never had the world seemed so glorious as the coming of the beautiful dawn after such a dignified death just as much any birth.

Good luck with the book,

Carol



YGPAC wrote 192 days ago

What can I say, nicely written as it reads with ease and keeps you hooked at all times. Still, a very deep touching story and I thank you for sharing it with us and allow us to take this memory trip with you which I feel and understand how hard it must have been for you to write this. Excellent work and once again thanks for this touchingstory

Lara wrote 209 days ago

I read your first five chapters and was riveted. I know this is a true story and comes totally from the heart but instinctively you have written it like a good novel with the hook at the beginning and with increasing pace. Your loving ness shows through all your fluent writing. It is a heartfelt story. I hope it was some help to you in the writing for it is a terrible tragedy for you all to live through. Lara
A RELATIVE INVASION

Christine May wrote 224 days ago

I finished your book today. Being a true believer in Christ, and having had a number of things happen to me to acknowledge the power of a spirtual God I have learned the most impotant thing is love.
You have given a great account of finding the meaning of life. Your book covers so many questions. I am sure that when you die, you will be found again.
Christine

Christine May wrote 225 days ago

Finished the second chapter, I can see now why you would have these anxiety attacks, Grandfather and your father dying so young. I like the way you introduce certain facts that tie into the story.
Christine

Christine May wrote 225 days ago

Read your first chapter, you sound so much like my son, super energetic and sensitive. Your book is well written. Glad I found it.
Christine

susieparker wrote 234 days ago

Michael,

Finding Laurie is a well written but painful story of loss and love and synchronocity. My heart goes out to you.

Backed,
Susie Parker

Odette67 wrote 237 days ago

What a devastating and uplifting story all in one. it has been written very sensitively but honestly. I am sorry for your loos, but what a wonderful piece of writing you have unfolded here.

I wish you the best of luck.

Kate off the rails

Kathie Bondar wrote 252 days ago

Telepathy is the universal means of communication. This is how the fetus in the vomb communicates with his mother, this is how god communicates. Dreams are telepathy in the sleeping state. Freud got himself sidetracked early on, that is why he never got to where I arrived at, but I do need to pay homage to him, he got me started and what a journey it has become.
My study of telepathy/dream interpretation is titled "Voices from the parallel universe". I think it will give you the answers you are seeking.
All the best
Kathie Bondar

Kirrily Whatman wrote 282 days ago

Well, I have just finished your wonderful book. What a tribute to your daughter(s), your parents, your family... your lovely wife! (I have a skeptic husband who keeps me grounded!) .

Michael, I was most definitely meant to read your book. Thank you so much for the confirmations in it for me, someone at least 30 years your junior, as I also put my beliefs and my realisations on the line in my own book about my daughter (Ellanor) and my experiences that could not be seen but usually only happened to me - who would they be believed by??

Honoured to have read this. Good health and long life to you xxxxx

Kirrily
(Into The Bliss: Having & Holding Ellanor)

Kirrily Whatman wrote 282 days ago

Michael, I sit here riveted to your book. So many parallels to my story with my daughter! I'm gobsmacked. Here lies another synchronistic moment, that I should happen across your (and Laurie's) story on Authonomy in the same week I first upload mine for review. As I read, my healthy second child sits (age 6) colouring in, blissfully unaware of what I am reading. She has the same shoe size as Laurie and the black pumps. Ah, heartache. I understand the impact of the death of a child. I understand the yearning to make sense of the only things you are given (dreams, messages, things so noticeable they can't not be taken as important!). You've done a brilliant job conveying this so far to chapter 6.

I'm up to chapter 6 and want to keep reading. What a pace you have set. The way you have woven in your practical thinking and how you try and look at the signs/messages from every which way - like a riddle - is masterful and commands the reader to continue turning the pages.

I look forward immensely to seeing how your journey unfolds and look forward to reading more. Thank you so much for... well, being here! I hope one day you have some time to dip in to my book as well ("Into The Bliss: Having & Holding Ellanor") mainly because I would be interested, from one bereaved parent to another, to see if you can hear any similarities.

There are a number of places I could alert you to changes/typo's needing to be looked at, but I will leave that to commenters who I am sure have already helped you.

Finding Laurie is on my bookshelf already. Best of luck with wherever you hope to take it.

All the best to your family.
Kirrily

Lynne Heffner Ferrante wrote 298 days ago

A very real and profound journey into the devastating world of loss and love, dealing with the awful curves that life throws our way. This is a tender and loving story that is universal in scope and full of insight. It touched me on a very visceral level.

Lynne Heffner Ferrante
An Untenable Fragrance of Violets

Cheryl_Shepherd wrote 301 days ago

I was touched deeply by your book. I have enjoyed it immensely.
Thank you for writing such a wonderful story to share with the world.

Please do come by and take a look at mine some time.

Bless you.

Cheryl.

Keith Gilbey wrote 304 days ago

Michael,

Wow! Honest and true. It takes a long time to heal - but living is what keeps those we have lost alive.
Keith
Peppermint.

mansoor murtuza wrote 312 days ago

Dear Michael Schwed
I will love to hear further unfolding of events. with best regards manesiro@gmail.com

Jane Mauret wrote 320 days ago

Hello, Michael
Stories like this are difficult to tell but I think the distance of time helps with putting it down on paper. You have of course remembered so much of what happened all those years ago. That adds to the emotion in a subtle way as the reader realises, naturally, how such events are impressed on us forever. I am wondering if the book could do with more dialogue rather than reportage which is the only point I could try and make in terms of improving the text.
Jane Mauret

rastafolux wrote 327 days ago

Thanks for your support.

I was sucked in by your pitch and I am so glad I clicked the link to read. This first chapter really captures your attention. It is raw and powerful. I look forward to reading the rest.

Danielle_Boo wrote 327 days ago

I was sucked in by your pitch and I am so glad I clicked the link to read. This first chapter really captures your attention. It is raw and powerful. I look forward to reading the rest.

Tod Schneider wrote 339 days ago

This is a very moving story, well told. Your writing style is smooth, and of course the story is quite emotional and compelling. So sorry you had to go through the loss of a child -- I can't imagine anything more devastating.
Best of luck with this.
Tod
http://authonomy.com/books/40646/the-lost-wink/

rastafolux wrote 386 days ago

Thanks for your kind thoughts they are greatly appreciated. MIke

How utterly heartbreaking. I have to say like all the others I am sorry for your loss and I imagine the pain never goes away. My friend lost her little boy at 8 years old and I will never forget the sound of her wails as she walked behind the coffin in the church. I believe in everything you said with regards to the coincidences: I have experienced this myself, and I guess some people are more intuitive than others. I am guessing that you are a deeply sensitive man, and that's why you pick up on the subtleties that others don't. This area of life has always been of great interest to me having had an experience when I thought of my granddad (who I hadn't seen for 4 years after he fell out with the family & I was a young girl, just out of college when I last saw him, so obviously was getting on with my own life, as youngsters do!) and then receiving a call about an hour later saying he'd died. Wow, your book brings me to tears. So moved.
KC

writerchick11 wrote 386 days ago

How utterly heartbreaking. I have to say like all the others I am sorry for your loss and I imagine the pain never goes away. My friend lost her little boy at 8 years old and I will never forget the sound of her wails as she walked behind the coffin in the church. I believe in everything you said with regards to the coincidences: I have experienced this myself, and I guess some people are more intuitive than others. I am guessing that you are a deeply sensitive man, and that's why you pick up on the subtleties that others don't. This area of life has always been of great interest to me having had an experience when I thought of my granddad (who I hadn't seen for 4 years after he fell out with the family & I was a young girl, just out of college when I last saw him, so obviously was getting on with my own life, as youngsters do!) and then receiving a call about an hour later saying he'd died. Wow, your book brings me to tears. So moved.
KC

rastafolux wrote 392 days ago

Thank you so much.

An extraordinary account, written in such a sensitive and sensible way, using words and expressions which few of us could hope to find.

Philip John

philip john wrote 392 days ago

An extraordinary account, written in such a sensitive and sensible way, using words and expressions which few of us could hope to find.

Philip John

Karamak wrote 400 days ago

Hi Michael, I am so sorry for your loss. My beloved son Matthew died tragically and I have written about it in my book; I hadn't intended to but my friend helping me to edit my book made me - it was so painful and now I still skip that chapter as you say writing about it forces you to relieve that day all over again. It is a hard subject to broach, but so many have lost little ones and there is hardly any advise books out there to help you cope, I pray yours may bring comfort to the many bereaved families out there.
Thankyou for sharing Lauries life with us she will always be with you.
Karen Faking it in France.

mistybrooke wrote 401 days ago

The pitch of this book draws the reader in. I am so sorry for your loss. I hope "Finding Laurie" helps others to heal.

Cariad wrote 405 days ago

I've read almost all of this. It made me in turns, sad, curious, interested, upset, and empathetic. I share a lot of what you feared and what you began to consider as true, and I really 'enjoyed' (not really the word for it) reading this account. I've given it stars and will keep an eye on its progress.

rastafolux wrote 409 days ago

Thank you for you kind remarks. I will take a look at your book and let you know what I think. Mike

This is an extremely moving story, told clearly and honestly. It also resonates with me 100%. Synchronicity, premonition, precognitive events, reincarnation - I've met them regularly throughout my own life. This is a book that should be on every editor's desk. Thank you for putting into words your very personal and life-changing experience. Laurie was clearly born to teach you about life and death. Warmest wishes, Natalie (The Diary of John Crow)

Natalie1 wrote 409 days ago

This is an extremely moving story, told clearly and honestly. It also resonates with me 100%. Synchronicity, premonition, precognitive events, reincarnation - I've met them regularly throughout my own life. This is a book that should be on every editor's desk. Thank you for putting into words your very personal and life-changing experience. Laurie was clearly born to teach you about life and death. Warmest wishes, Natalie (The Diary of John Crow)

KoriBates wrote 412 days ago

I read the whole thing at one time. I couldn't help it. When I read your pitch, I wasn't sure what to expect. I thought maybe a crazed person, but this is completely logical and everything was completely analyzed. It's such a heartwarming story, though I don't think story is the word I'm looking for. I'm very sorry for your loss, but I'm also proud of you for coming as far as you have and finding joy in your grandchildren. It touched my heart and also made me think along the way and I think that's important as a writer to be able to do. Yet, in your circumstance, it's a very real and raw book and you wrote from definite experience. Throughout, I felt like I was right there with you; experiencing it as you and your family did. I hope to see more from you in the future. I am starring this 6 stars and adding to my watch list. As soon as I have shelf room, it will definitely be on there. Thank you for sharing your life with us. It was a wonderful read.

Wanttobeawriter wrote 412 days ago

FINDING LAURIE
This is a heart-breaking story because you say in the very beginning; this wonderful little girl is going to die. I can sympathize with the anxiety attacks and how they control your life; I used to have those in highschool and spent a lot of time taking my pulse too. The string of warning signs like the question about death, the photo falling off the wall . . . are eerie. How much wiser we all would be if we could recognize them when they occur, not retroactively. All in all, this is a good read. Highly starred and added to my shelf. Wanttobeawriter: Who Killed the President?

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