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rank 5921
word count 26947
date submitted 17.02.2011
date updated 17.02.2011
genres: Fiction, Literary Fiction, Fantasy
classification: universal
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Sticks - A Golfer's Tale

WALT SAUTTER

"Sticks" - The ultimate golf fantasy.


 

Bob Andrews, the book's central character has just bought a new set of golf clubs and he expects big things to happen to his game! And big things do happen, but not what he expects!
When you read "Sticks" you won't believe what happens - but maybe - you'll just want to believe!

 
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emarie wrote 444 days ago

Walt, Generally I don't know how much to critique a story, when I'm not told. But I generally give it as I would want it given to me. So here goes......When Bob first start talking you have him saying two different things back to back. If it really is Bob both times, then take out one because he wouldn't say it twice and if he did, he wouldn't say it two different ways. The same for Maryann. Thoughts are italicized. Use the quotation marks for dialogue only. Your pitch has potential, but it doesn't draw the reader in until the last sentence. You have to hit the reader early, otherwise they won't read your work.
--emarie
Jackson Jacob Henry Brown, III

SusieGulick wrote 1162 days ago

:) I will comment on your book as soon as I have read it :) - let me know. :) Love, Susie :) p.s. I have gold ******-rated your book because I love golf & I used to work for Lynx Golf. :)

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