Jenny’s new neighbours aren’t human, her new friend is a witch, and her little brother is just not himself. Half-term is going to be different.
Strange things have been happening since Jenny and her family moved to the countryside. To think that she was worried about being bored. Not any more.
The worst of it is her little brother. Jake hasn’t pulled Jenny’s hair or glued her slippers to the floor for over a week now. Jenny thinks the fairies might have taken him and left something nice in his place. She thinks it might be her fault, and she wants him back before her mum notices. So, what to do?
Simple, crash Fairyland, find brother, return. How difficult can it be?
This is (almost totally) unedited first draft material, so there will be many errors of punctuation, because punctuation is not something I do naturally. I am more interested in what you think of the 'feel' of the tale and what doesn't work for you than I am in the vagaries of my apostrophes, but if the punctuation kippers it for you, I guess I need to be told that, as well.