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date submitted 09.05.2008
date updated 07.02.2013
genres: Travel, Christian, Comedy, Gay
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A TRIP TO TERESA

Michael Dickinson

A pot-smoking gay Catholic makes an overland pilgrimage from England to India in 1979 to work as a volunteer for Mother Teresa's Missionaries of Charity.

 

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"..the most gripping piece of writing I have so far encountered on this site... seems to capture the very essence of the narrator's experience... fresh and immediate...

"... maintains the interest throughout, with suspense and a wealth of fascinating and sometimes gruesome detail.. The sexual, spiritual, drug and foreign-place themes are very well handled; there is something to think about, vicarious experience to enjoy, if perhaps with a shudder sometimes."

"...well worth publishing.. "

"... interested me hugely.. ..a good read."




 
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Father Vinander finally agrees to let me give the brothers an English lesson, and if it goes okay to make it a part of their regular timetable, substituting with one of their afternoon Divinity lessons. They can speak English of course, but their grammar is generally all over the place, a strange stilted pidgin mixture, and I thought I’d do them the favor of straightening it out.

The first lesson is after Siesta-hour, and I’ve deliberately avoided my spliff-break. The brothers are in a festive mood, having been released from a period of dry catechism class. They sit cross-legged on the floor with eager attentive faces. We’ve only been allotted half an hour and the lesson I planned begins with a song - “What Shall We do with the Drunken Sailor?”

They enjoy that, particularly when I get them on their feet, miming the hauling of the anchor with “Hooray, and up she rises!” although I notice Brother Jerome avoids sharing eye contact with me.

The mini-dialogue I devised also goes down well. – ‘A robber comes into a shop with a gun, demanding money.  The shopkeeper hasn’t got any, so the robber settles for a coke’.

I write the words on the lumpy old blackboard, and they practice in pairs. Then I choose a couple to perform, to the great amusement of all. They’re like kids at a party.

Next, I’d decided on a free improvised dialogue in pairs, an interview between the shopkeeper and a detective about the robbery. I tell them they have five minutes to plan the conversation, and then we’ll listen to a couple of pairs before we call it a day.

They begin, and the room is filled with the babble of voices. I walk round the room, trying to listen to different pairs, but it’s impossible to distinguish what they’re saying. After a while I check my watch and discover that they’ve been practicing for seven minutes, so I tell them to wind up their conversation, but they don’t hear me, lost as they are in excited conversation. I raise my voice.

“Could we stop now please? We’re running out of time!”

The din only seems to increase. I look around at them all jabbering away and ignoring me – not a word in English. They’re simply gossiping in their own language, enjoying an excuse to get off a boring Divinity lesson. I have no control.

“Be quiet!” I shout. They chatter on.

“SHUT UP!” I bawl.

That does the trick. They stop and stare at me in silent amazement, never having been spoken to in such a manner within these walls. Class is dismissed.

It’s been decided that English lessons will not be continued. I can’t say I’m sorry - but I’m embarrassed by my loss of temper. Well, at least I learned something. I definitely don’t have the patience of a Saint!

 

Alone.

John has gone to Delhi for a couple of weeks to stay with some old friends of his mother who live there; Gunter has been struck down by amoebic dysentery and removed to the sick-bay, where he languishes as stoically as a Christian can.

Their absence has increased my morning workload; more piss-bottles and bedpans to wash out, and more patients to hose down. I’m using this as an excuse not to change the bandage on my old gentleman’s elbow wounds, convinced that they might heal by being left alone for a while.

I’ve also taken over Gunter’s pet patient - the young man who lies on the floor mattress next to the T.B. ward with the shattered leg and hip, his beautiful dark eyes staring despondently at the ceiling. I kneel beside him, confronted by the tiny encrusted hole in the swollen pus-filled thigh and hip, remembering Gunter’s words that the poison must come out.

Without really knowing what to do, I press my fingers around the little crater and begin to knead.  After a few minutes there’s a sudden eruption, and a thick, yellow, foul-smelling cream oozes out. Fountains of liquid follow, becoming more transparent with each press and spurt. I am jubilant. The dam has broken. The patient is surprised and pleased, nodding as I work. I milk on to get as much of the infection out as possible; it seems a never ending task, but lunchtime comes, and as I wash my hands I remind myself that no matter how much poison is removed from the leg, the shattered bones can not re-knit, and he will never be able to stand on it again.

With John and Gunter gone, I have the volunteer dormitory to myself. Tempted by the privacy, I commit an act of self-abuse while soaping myself down in the washroom - trying not to think of anyone in particular. It’s enjoyable while it lasts, but afterwards I don’t feel particularly proud of myself. Not guilty or ashamed though, which is important. Just a minor lack of self-control.

The Catholic Church has been one of the most outspoken groups condemning masturbation. Catholic teaching is that sexual activity is intended for conception, thus masturbation is an immoral sexual practice because it does not permit conception. In addition, the Catholic Church teaches that masturbation breeds lust and selfishness, which takes one further from God.

On Dec 29th 1975 Pope Paul wrote this in his Persona Humana - Declaration on Certain Questions Concerning Sexual Ethics: “...masturbation is an intrinsically and seriously disordered act...the deliberate use of the sexual faculty outside normal conjugal relations essentially contradicts the finality of the faculty. For it lacks the sexual relationship called for by the moral order, namely the relationship which realizes ‘the full sense of mutual self-giving and human procreation in the context of true love.’ All deliberate exercise of sexuality must be reserved to this regular relationship.”

John is back after only four days, and has joined Gunter in the sickbay with the same illness - amoebic dysentery - the shits with a vengeance, completely debilitating.  I suppose I could also be struck at any time too, but I can’t believe it’s the fault of the food here, which is carefully chosen and cooked.

I wake with a sharp pain in my chest in the middle of the night and think I must have contracted T.B. I decide not to tell anyone, to wait till I’m coughing up blood like a proper Romantic poet, and gently fade away. I go back to sleep feeling very noble, but the pain hasn’t returned since.

The symptoms of TB include a low-grade fever, night sweats, fatigue, weight loss and a persistent cough. Some people may not have obvious symptoms.

Among eminent personalities who were victims of the disease which John Bunyan called ‘the Captain of the Men of Death’ were Voltaire, John Keats, Edgar Allan Poe, R.L. Stevenson and D.H.Lawrence.

Someone dies of tuberculosis every 10 seconds. The death toll is equivalent to the crash of one jumbo jet every hour of every day. Virtually every one of these deaths is preventable.

 

Shakespeare and grass on the roof at siesta time has become a revelation, a mystical experience! Rather than watching them performed, reading the plays gives me time to savor and enjoy. I think that the antipathy I had towards them before was because of the ‘Shakespearean Voice’ affected by such worthies as Gielgud, Richardson and Olivier – that quavering bass or falsetto, warping and obfuscating the words to distraction.

With the book on my lap under the lapis lazuli bowl of sky, the sun on my skin, I savor the sentences like sips of vintage wine.

Gunter is up and amazingly sparky after his week in the sick-bay.  But a sad decision - after inspecting the patient I’ve been looking after for him, he announces that he must be sent to the nearest hospital without delay to have his leg amputated.

“Gangrene is spreading,” he explains. “Without the operation he will surely die.”

The situation is explained to the young man. He nods silently and is carried away sobbing on a stretcher to the ambulance waiting outside.

Back to my normal duties, Brother Zachary reminds me that I haven’t changed the bandage on the old man’s elbow for about three days. I don’t have the courage to tell him that I’ve been conducting an experiment, but obediently unwind the bandage and discover that I’d been right in my surmise - wafery scabs have formed over the wounds. Brother Zachary stands and watches as I daub fresh ointment on them and wrap the elbow up again with fresh gauze, before taking me aside and scolding me for giving bidis to patients. I protest weakly that it’s unkind to deprive addicts of their nicotine when the relief is available.

“Don’t yield to their wheedling!” he says. “Show them who is boss!”

That’s something he does very well. I’ve seen him dragging weeping patients to the washroom and forcing them to take a shower. Hygiene is all very well, but a little politeness wouldn’t go amiss!

Towards lunchtime I notice a group of brothers and patients gathered by a window in the corner, sighing and cooing in admiration. I go to see what’s happening. The center of attention is a beautiful little boy with a beaming smile, two or three years old, prattling away in the arms of his mother, another woman by their side. The child is a ray of sunshine in the dingy, miserable ward, and I find myself smiling, until I notice one of his thumbs, wrapped in an old encrusted bandage. I learn that several weeks ago his thumbnail had been smashed in a slamming door; his mother had bound it up; but now she thought it time for the dressing to be removed, and because it had dried so hard, she had decided to bring the boy here to have it taken off.

“And off it will come!” cries Brother Zachary as he unpicks the imbedded knot and begins to unwind the cocoon. The frightened child glances at his mother in alarm and starts to squirm, but she holds him tight. As the bandage jerkingly unpeels, his whimper rises to a cry, to a wail, to a scream, while from all sides soothing voices try vainly to placate him. It’s too much for me. I have to get away, and I flee to the roof with my grass, my only anodyne.

The Catholic graveyard has been transformed. The graves I look down on from my sentinel are now a scatter of luminous lozenges. Tomorrow being All Souls Day, relatives and friends have come and painted the mounds of hardened earth in glorious colors – pink, turquoise, lime, and sherbet yellow. Planted candles flicker on them, surrounded by garlands of red and orange blossoms. Each tomb looks like a birthday cake that could be sliced into and devoured. A drowsy cow meanders among them, pausing to crop here and there. My heart rejoices at the sight. This is beauty. This is poetry – no doubt accentuated by the heady, aromatic smoke of my joint that has banished the cares of the day. If only for a short while, I have found peace.

Brother Amit Prem sits opposite me at lunch and after a few curious glances, leans across and asks what’s wrong with my eyes.

“Nothing,” I stonily reply. “Why do you ask?”

“But they are red,” he smiles cheekily. “Why should your eyes be so red?”

I say it was probably due to a cold coming on, but it’s the grass of course. Dope has that effect sometimes, especially that heavy Bombay black I was smoking in Kuwait, which made my eyes look like moist roses. Brother Amit Prem has such a saucy way of looking and questioning, that I think sometimes he suspects all sorts of things about me, and only asks to stoke a little paranoia.

The yoga teacher visited our room this evening to have a chat with Gunter before the lesson. During their conversation, in order to demonstrate a particularly difficult posture, the teacher suddenly strips down to his pristine underpants, gets into full lotus position, and to our astonishment, supports his body on the palms of his hands and balances there for a full minute.

“The conquest and training of the physical body is the least difficult part of yoga,” he announces, as he pulls his clothes back on. “Most of the obstacles to enlightenment I have managed to overcome – Pride and Self Love; Mistake; Wrong Faith; Doubt; Love of the World; Desire for Heaven – these I have conquered. But Lust – that carnal craving – remains to be defeated.  I find Lust the most difficult of all the temptations to wrestle with.”

Gunter grins and shrugs, and the teacher leaves to report to Father Vinander before the lesson.

It makes me think. If Lust is so difficult for him to overcome, shouldn’t it be harder for me, a gay man in an all-male commune? But in fact, although many of the brothers are handsome and desirable, all are off-limits, and their boyish wholesomeness makes the very idea of dalliance absurd. My mind rarely strays to thoughts of sex nowadays, but I can’t say I’m safe, for it is out there and Lust can attack at any time.

For instance, alone in the dorm the other afternoon, aware of a repeated thudding sound, I look out of the window and see a worker in a scant loincloth breaking coal with a pickaxe in the neighboring compound. His skin is dark and glaucous; the sharply defined muscles tauten and relax as he pounds. His back is to me, and he’s totally unaware of my scrutiny. With shock and disappointment, I feel desire. I try to deny it and walk away from the sight, but am drawn back despite myself to secretly admire his physical beauty. 

 

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Ma Fu-ning wrote 1808 days ago

Have just reached the end. I was worried that the conclusion would be unsatisfactory, an anticlimax. But it wasn't so. You have produced a work which maintains the interest throughout, with suspense and a wealth of fascinating and sometimes gruesome detail.. The sexual, spiritual, drug and foreign-place themes are very well handled; and I think that no matter what the reader's attitude to each of these, there is something to think about, vicarious experience to enjoy, if perhaps with a shudder sometimes.

There are all sorts of minor things that need the assistance of an editor, but in my amateur opinion, your work is well worth publishing and I look forward to hearing of its commercial success.

Ma Fu-ning wrote 1808 days ago

Michael, this is the most gripping piece of writing I have so far encountered on this site. By that I mean that I was ready to give up on most of them after a paragraph or a chapter without curiosity to read further. This one seems to capture the very essence of the narrator's experience, which engages me to the point of apprehension: not just as to his safety, but whether I will be repelled by the rawness of his revelations. It's a world I don't quite know at first hand, as my own freewheeling journeyings took place in 1963 mainly, in France and Italy.

Nevertheless, the type of adventure you relate is familiar enough to me from other sources as "the hippie trail". Your writing is fresh and immediate, with, I feel, some maturer reflection thrown in unobtrusively. It's an appealing style.

The only caution I have is with your paragraphs in bold. They are interesting in themselves but some are a little long. For example, your little section about Mount Ararat found me for the first time skipping lines - and eventually the whole section; because it had a different story to tell, one whose relevance to your main narration didn't seem obvious to me. My skipping was not because I was bored by the side-tracking anecdote but because I wanted to resume the main narrative of your trip.

I would like to make more comments as I continue to work through your chapters.

Michelle Brussard wrote 52 days ago

Really enjoying it so far, and I concur that it's a fascinating story and really well told. And actually I have a recommendation based on just that - I think you might want to "grab" your reader sooner. The chapter breakdowns are probably great for someone reading it in parts (as I am now), but making it the first page means that your first-time reader is seeing that before the story begins. I would also humbly suggest moving the explanation of Gracie Fields a little further down for the same reason. The story is so good and gripping, but especially on a site like this I think you need to grip people a little sooner. :)
Best of luck, and again, awesome read so far!

Michael Dickinson wrote 888 days ago

Thanks. I need to fix that formatting and space problem.


I love your story. You do seem to have a formatting problem, too many spaces here there and everywhere, to the point it's a little distracting to me. but the story telling, first two chapters at least, is great. Shades of "The
Dharma Bums or something" but of course, with its own settings and its own mystique. Clever setup, such unlikely persons, it would seem, to be on some kind of spiritual "mission," if it may be called that.

FEL

EltopiaAuthor wrote 889 days ago

So many entertaining and interesting turns, such as when Ahmet turns to reveal his erection ... I mean, it's so unexpected and incongruous, and yet, somehow it does not seem out of place with all the other oddities that are quickly adding up to one very idiosyncratic tale.

FEL

EltopiaAuthor wrote 889 days ago

I love your story. You do seem to have a formatting problem, too many spaces here there and everywhere, to the point it's a little distracting to me. but the story telling, first two chapters at least, is great. Shades of "The
Dharma Bums or something" but of course, with its own settings and its own mystique. Clever setup, such unlikely persons, it would seem, to be on some kind of spiritual "mission," if it may be called that.

FEL

nsllee wrote 920 days ago

Hi Michael

I read this all and really enjoyed its honesty and openness. If you do not find a publisher, I hope you will decide to self-publish as I believe you will find (and well deserve) a wide audience. Backed.

Nicole
Chosen

Eunice Attwood wrote 963 days ago

What a wonderful story and fascinating life. Thank you for sharing it with us. The homage to Gracie in the desert, brought a tear to my eye, and a lump to my throat. Very sensitive writing indeed. I grew up with her music.
There is such a lot of living packed into such a short period - if we consider eternity. You seem to have lived more than most of us, and experienced horrors that many of us will never have to face. I have never been witness to such poverty and sickness etc. You are to be congratulated at portraying so powerfully, a life well lived. I have backed your book with pleasure. Eunice - The Temple Dancer.

Orlando Furioso wrote 975 days ago

Arf, arf, I like your brief pitch ... the notion of a pot smoking catholic in 1979 is amusing and suggests all manner of possble conflicts ... as to going off to MT, that is laudable and laughable in equal measure ... your pitch says a lot in a lot less time than many take in their crazed intensity to sell, sell, sell ... it is also far more enjoyable to volunteer comments to someone who is not outrageously pimping their imagined worth

Tom Bye wrote 987 days ago

hi michael 'A TRIP TO TERESA'

THIS IS ONE VERY GOOD BOOK, well written and a page turner. love the cov er by the way and the pitch sell itself. the thief in the train is described so very well and almost matter of fact , great stuff, the book appears to be full of it, can see it on film some day' good luck;
oh. how can one go wrong with the mention of mother teresa, one great walking and modern day saint
TOM BYE ' FROM HUGS TO KISSES'
please look at mine and back comment it time thanks

name falied moderation wrote 988 days ago

Dear MIchael

I have started to read your writing and must say that it is compelling. very well crafted and totally original, which is refreshing. Animated and quite addictive really as you take me on the same journey as yourself quite effectively. I feel strongly to back your book now. I do wish to be part of your climb to the top on this site. CONGRATS and I will comment more as I read more

BACKED BY ME FOR SURE.
Please take a moment to look, COMMENT which is important to me, and BACK my book. if not that is OK also

The VERY best of luck to you

Denise
The Letter

SusieGulick wrote 988 days ago

Dear Michael, I love that you end your story with the lyrics of, "To Dream the Impossible Dream," then a scripture & Walt Whitman's quote. :) What an adventure! :) Great pitch to draw me in to read & nice tight dialogue & paragraphs. :) I've backed your book :) - could you please take a moment to back my memoir book? :) Thanks so very much. :) Love, Susie :)

memphisgirl wrote 988 days ago

I love this. I have no suggestions for your writing, because I am still savoring your story line, your diction, the history, travelogue, odyssey, philosophy, spiritual outlook and the party. Is it possible we have a modern-day Homerian piece here? My only concern is your rank on the site and the fact that more people aren't tuning in and reading. Do you think your cover puts people in mind of a religious treatise or some kind of biographical non-fiction work? If I were in your shoes, I might change the cover and re-launch, see what happens. I realize "rank" position isn't everything, but now that I've found this book, I want others to know about it. Kudos.

Memphisgirl
Ashes By Now

lizjrnm wrote 1163 days ago

Absolutely brilliant writing and a real life story without dragons and vampires - how refreshing and down to earth. BACKED with pleasure!

Liz
The Cheech Room

Bamboo Promise wrote 1177 days ago

Worth Publishing. Backed with pleasure.

nillan wrote 1257 days ago

Michael,
I have now read the first four chapters plus some random chapters of A Trip to Teresa. I really like your book very much. Your descriptions come so naturally and hippie-like. My son has also worked with Mother Teresa as a barber and he has told me a lot about that time. Good luck with your book.
I will put your book up on my shelf as soon as I have received your comment on my book.
Nillan
Blue-eyed in Luhya-land

Valley Woman wrote 1265 days ago

Ah, so that's what random Bible passages is called, Sorte. St. Francis of Assisi and his colleagues practiced sorte before they formed the brotherhood of friars. The passages that came up led them to start the first Franciscan Order of Minor Friars.

I'll read further and see what interesting things come up.

Patricia

Andy M. Potter wrote 1268 days ago

Hiya Michael, as others have noted, a fine read. on my shelf. i've read my share of this kind of tale and often find the writing too self-indulgent. yours, however, is spot on, a judicious mix of the personal and the universal, with an engaging tone and a rollicking pace. this is one "travelin' man" i want to follow.
best, andy

Andrew W. wrote 1269 days ago

A Trip to See Mother Teresa

Hi Michael,

I kept on reading this. You have captured this experience so completely, rendering the everyday with the energy and seamlessness of a piece of fiction. There is all I would expect from a fiction novel here, there is character, description and narrative, along with intrigue and tension. You show us this slice of life in technicolor detail, what an interesting vicarious experience for any reader. Your narrative voice is strong and engaging throughout and you capture the essence of those people around you with quick, bold descriptions. Each chapter encourages as to read deeper, this is a definite contender as far as I am concerned for Harper Collins to publish under their True tag.

Thank you for offering us an insight into this world. Best wishes and good luck with this
Andrew W
(Sanctuary's Loss)

Andrew W. wrote 1269 days ago

A Trip To Teresa

Hi Michael

This is great, so readable, not what I was expecting at all, more comments to follow in the morning but onto my shelf right now -Andrew W
(Sanctuary's Loss)

J&M JENSEN wrote 1423 days ago

"The glowing ends of the joint float in the air like fireflies" - how gorgeous! And there are so many other lovely depictions I confess I am too lazy to type them out again - but this is jam-packed with interesting tit-bits and little bits of history that I can't stop reading. It's also rammed with fantastic descriptions of India and the middle east . An absolute must-read for any one who is spiritually minded and loves exploring different cultures.

Backed and highly recommended!

M&J

Lisa-Marya wrote 1667 days ago

Just read your first 2 chaps & enjoyed them. I'd like to discover more. You handle dialogue well & the graphic factual detail brings the settings to life. I'm bookshelving this.

Nix wrote 1713 days ago

Hello Michael,
Your travels interested me hugely. I have never been to the places you passed through, so all the descriptions, events and people you met on the way fascinated me. I liked the unusual slant of you being stoned rather than an earnest traveller. (Fancy your mate smoking crushed scorpion tails, yuk!) I also liked the asides in bold, each one a nugget of information which I did not find intrusive to the body of the book as a whole.
I have put it on my shelf, and as I have only reached Ch 5 so far, will come back to it.
Thanks for a good read. Nicky (Chickens and Churchbells)

Michael Dickinson wrote 1730 days ago

Thanks, Hermoine. Maybe I should have another go at querying publishers/agents. But, oh, the futility of it!

Michael Dickinson wrote 1807 days ago

Hey, thanks very much for the positive comments, Ma! Hope you're right about its commercial success! I'm stony. Broke, that is.

On reading the account of your own recent nightmarish Meditteranean trip on your blog, I really liked your observation and tone.

Ma Fu-ning wrote 1808 days ago

Have just reached the end. I was worried that the conclusion would be unsatisfactory, an anticlimax. But it wasn't so. You have produced a work which maintains the interest throughout, with suspense and a wealth of fascinating and sometimes gruesome detail.. The sexual, spiritual, drug and foreign-place themes are very well handled; and I think that no matter what the reader's attitude to each of these, there is something to think about, vicarious experience to enjoy, if perhaps with a shudder sometimes.

There are all sorts of minor things that need the assistance of an editor, but in my amateur opinion, your work is well worth publishing and I look forward to hearing of its commercial success.

Ma Fu-ning wrote 1808 days ago

comments on chap. 3: same as before with the paras in bold. I could not see what was added to the overall narrative by the details about the film Ryan's Daughter, even though, in another way, I was glad to learn something new!

It was rather astonishing, when you had entered the cinema, to be suddenly told, without even a change of tense to the pluperfect, or some indication of relevance, about an incident which had occurred in Istanbul. I had to check back to see if I had missed something. No, we are still in Lahore, so why this?

Ma Fu-ning wrote 1808 days ago

Michael, this is the most gripping piece of writing I have so far encountered on this site. By that I mean that I was ready to give up on most of them after a paragraph or a chapter without curiosity to read further. This one seems to capture the very essence of the narrator's experience, which engages me to the point of apprehension: not just as to his safety, but whether I will be repelled by the rawness of his revelations. It's a world I don't quite know at first hand, as my own freewheeling journeyings took place in 1963 mainly, in France and Italy.

Nevertheless, the type of adventure you relate is familiar enough to me from other sources as "the hippie trail". Your writing is fresh and immediate, with, I feel, some maturer reflection thrown in unobtrusively. It's an appealing style.

The only caution I have is with your paragraphs in bold. They are interesting in themselves but some are a little long. For example, your little section about Mount Ararat found me for the first time skipping lines - and eventually the whole section; because it had a different story to tell, one whose relevance to your main narration didn't seem obvious to me. My skipping was not because I was bored by the side-tracking anecdote but because I wanted to resume the main narrative of your trip.

I would like to make more comments as I continue to work through your chapters.

Michael Dickinson wrote 1834 days ago

I'm sure that the experiences I had in India in 1979 are quite different to the precious ones you experienced yourself there last year.

Maybe I should give a brief introduction before the story.


"This is the story of a conscience-stricken Westener, raised a Catholic. who decided to work as a volunteer with Mother Teresa' s Missionaries of Charity in Calcutta in 1979.

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