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date submitted 22.05.2011
date updated 28.02.2013
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Meditative Musings

James Revoir

Musings about Faith and Life

 

This is a personal collection of poetry, borne out of twenty years of life experience.

 
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all ages, alone, autobiographical, bible, biblical, bizarre, bles, christ, christian, christian living, christianity, church, comedic, comedy, compass...

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Driftwood

I am a piece of driftwood:
 
smoothed, weathered, and grayed
 
by the complementary elements
 
of heat, cold, water, and time;
 
at times finding myself
 
hurled and at the complete mercy
 
of the frothing, angry sea,
 
churned by the tempests of life
 
like a football that is snatched
 
and sadistically tossed back and forth
 
over the head of a ninety pound weakling
 
in a mean-spirited game of keep-away
 
between two playground bullies;
 
yet I never sink nor drown;
 
but always indomitable,
 
awaken the morning after
 
to find myself
 
peacefully bobbing up and down
 
in still, glassy waters,
 
or safely washed ashore
 
on the sands of a desolate beachhead
 
from which human eyes
 
will never gaze wonderously
 
at a Divinely painted
 
sunrise or sunset gloriously blazing
 
in the distant horizon
 
where the sea kisses the sky
 
in the resplendent glory of heaven;
 
nor human footprints ever leave
 
even the slightest fleeting impression;
 
where the eternal, rhythmic ticking
 
of the surf licking and lapping the sand,
 
the gentle, soothing whisper
 
of the breeze fanning the lazy palm fronds,
 
the lonely cries of the hungry gulls,
 
and tickling of the sandcrabs
 
as they kick up sand
 
in their forage for food and shelter
 
beneath my underbelly,
 
are my faithful companions,
 
never interrupting,
 
never judging,
 
but always allowing me
 
the courtesy of dialoguing with myself
 
and taking solace in the ever-flowing
 
rivers of my consciousness,
 
eternally fed by fresh waters
 
bubbling to the surface
 
from somewhere deep within
 
the cavernous wellspring of my spirit.

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alphamomma wrote 185 days ago

I am finally publishing my book of poems. I took your advice about the arrangement. I would like to include your comments in the front of the book along with the other "reviews."

“As your name means "like Christ" so your poetry beautifully reflects your passion and intimacy with Him.” James Revoir

If I have your approval, please leave a permission message on my Facebook page - Christine Gail Garcia.

Thank you.

Peter B wrote 199 days ago

Yeah, we all wanted to marry Audrey! Super collection of musings, that is a good assessment. This is not just one afternoons jotting down notes speculating on so many different topics and aspects of who knows what's to come next. Nice job buddy Jim. Peter B.

evermoore wrote 235 days ago

Such insight...depth...pain...hurt...laughter..love...and such a gift you've shared. From the first...Grampa's Hands...the descriptive way you spoke of his life, comparing it to the rings of a tree...how he used that axe making you bring up Adam in the Garden...and his comment...ohhhhhhhhh, James...I laughed. I knew your poetry would be a delight to read and I was right.

God bless...Linda
Children Walking With Jesus

patio wrote 247 days ago

Gloomy Gladness read like a song
I love poems, hence I love this book
MAX STARS

patio wrote 330 days ago

You done a good story on Hitler

Cara Gold wrote 339 days ago

{Meditative Musings} – James Revoir
I read the first five of your musings; ‘Blackberries’, ‘Grampa’s Hands’, ‘Hitler’, ‘Mouses and Houses’ and ‘Rush Hour.’
What a lovely collection you have here! In these five short chapters, you have already shown such diversity and given me a great deal of enjoyment.

I like ‘Blackberries’ for the way you explore the relationship between mother and child. The last three lines truly touched me ‘There is mother and child and no one else/And the quiet sanctuary of their home/Is their entire universe.’ Mother/child relationships are something I like to explore too in my writing, so this really touched me!

‘Grampa’s Hands’ was very different, more personal because of the use of the first person. It made me pause for a moment and think – nice shift from the Adam in the ‘Garden of Eden’ and the old man, Adam Smith. Interesting… this made me think…

‘Hitler’ – your writing is powerful here, to capture the brutal nature of what Hitler did. The link to devil and fallen angels is very strong.

‘Mouses and Houses’ – such a light contrast from the previous chapter! Enjoyable with its comic undercurrents :)

‘Rush Hour’ – lots of terrific images to capture the feeling, indeed, of rush hour. The very structuring of the poem itself is ‘loose’ and rolls fluidly along, keeping the reading pace fast, and making us feel like we’re caught in the rush.

Thank you so much for sharing these, they are delightful to read and I hope to come back soon! Thank you also for your lovely comment on ‘Dawn of Destruction’, it means a lot to me that you like my writing :)
Sincerely
Cara

hadley wrote 382 days ago

Hi James I am finally making my way down my very large list of books to read and I have found yours to be quite delightful. Whether you are describing situations from high school, watching the News or going off to summer camp you obviously have a very poetic way of expressing your thoughts. I love how in the last chapter you sum it all up as being a choice as to how one decides to think feel etc no matter what life throws at you. God is still in control and we just need to trust. Thank you for your honesty and biblical creativity. This would be a great daily devotioinal and benefit many. Nice job, high stars and watch list,
Mary ann
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JamesRevoir wrote 562 days ago

Hello Bridget:

Thank you for your kind comments and for backing Meditative Musings.

Bless you!

James

I enjoyed reading your poems. I think you are a great poet.
Blessing,
Bridget

Bridget Sherman wrote 562 days ago

I enjoyed reading your poems. I think you are a great poet.
Blessing,
Bridget

John Page wrote 624 days ago

Beautiful poetry...meditative indeed. Clearly your life is one of wonder, musing, and reflection, and humor. Best wishes.

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