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date submitted 22.05.2011
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Meditative Musings

James Revoir

Musings about Faith and Life

 

This is a personal collection of poetry, borne out of twenty years of life experience.

 
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all ages, alone, autobiographical, bible, biblical, bizarre, bles, christ, christian, christian living, christianity, church, comedic, comedy, compass...

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Christmas Lights

Christmas lights are the sedative of the season.
 
Like a psychedelic drug, they calm the senses,
 
while at the same time filling the theater of my mind
 
with a kaleidoscope of vibrant, visual images.
 
Like adolescent girls at a high school football game,
 
they giggle and whisper inaudible secrets to one another,
 
occasionally busting out in spontaneous laughter.
 
As I stare vacantly at the blinking lights,
 
my mind wanders to another time and another place:
 
a sultry, summer night in Mexico years earlier,
 
when, during the blackness of a citywide blackout,
 
I could hear the commotion of barking dogs -
 
first in the distance, then spreading across the city
 
like people doing The Wave at a sporting event,
 
a crescendo of canine communication
 
increasing and then decreasing,
 
passing through the neighborhood
 
like the Doppler yell of a passing train.
 
In the midst of the torrid Mexican heat,
 
I had awakened thoroughly drenched in a bed of
 
hot, sticky, smelly sweat.
 
A nickel alloy in a gold plated cross
 
around my neck met the salty perspiration of my body,
 
and a curious allergic reaction occurred:
 
Wincing in utter agony at a painful physical irritation
 
produced by the strange chemical reaction,
 
I violently grabbed the chain and threw it across the room.
 
In spite of the ensuing guilt of such a sacrilegious deed,
 
I found myself physically relieved of the searing pain,
 
and for the remainder of the night slept quite well.
 
Caught up in a strange, incoherent stream of consciousness,
 
my mind is transported forward to a time
 
I stepped onto a city bus,
 
and my nose was assaulted by the stench
 
of a million offensive odors:
 
to the right, stale urine.
 
to the left, thirty days worth of unbathed body odor.
 
Forced by convenience's sake
 
to accept a third alternative no less torturous,
 
I occupied a seat still reeking
 
of the remnants of yesterday's vomiting episode.
 
I was reminded of a previous
 
night's dinner of liver and onions:
 
like a line of police in full riot gear,
 
every taste bud in my mouth,
 
seeing the repulsive, desiccated substance,
 
had stubbornly refused to allow one morsel
 
to pass beyond the police line
 
at the rear of the pallet.
 
As a second line of defense,
 
an automatic gagging reflex had forcefully
 
hurled the bone dry intruder back to the plate
 
from whence it came.
 
Having been virtually vomited upon,
 
the receiving plate pleaded that I bathe him immediately,
 
in order that the foul taste, rank odor, and slimy consistency
 
of half-consumed bovine organ
 
might be removed from his sight without delay.
 
Unlike the oyster stew that Aunt Betty
 
used to serve every Thanksgiving
 
at her home in Lansing, Michigan,
 
The dried out consistency of liver is not
 
an acquired taste that comes with one's age and maturity.
 
But I suppose that the taste isn't that bad, after all.
 
Looking out my window across the way,
 
a "Griswold" display
 
of blinding, blinking, flashing, flickering white lights
 
and shining, shimmering, illuminated icicles
 
causes my own multicolored winter wonderland
 
to pale sadly in comparison to such a delightful display.
 
Stinkin' show off!
 
Undeniable proof that my neighbors
 
have more Christmas spirit than I. 
 
Each day when I come home from a long day's work,
 
the trials and tribulations of the day ended,
 
I find shelter in the refuge of my apartment.
 
Flashbacks of the workday
 
like Post-Traumatic Stress Syndrome,
 
mercilessly torture my mind and rack my brain,
 
sapping every remaining ounce of
 
the little that remains of my exhausted reserves of
 
emotional and physical strength.
 
Desiring to create an escapist form of reality,
 
I plug in the friendly blinking lights,
 
plop down on the plush blue velvet sectional
 
and instinctively hunt for the remote.
 
Like A.J. Foyt on a Sunday drive,
 
having no particular destination in mind,
 
I race through a hundred channels in record speed,
 
clicking from one end of the television spectrum to the other:
 
past late breaking repeats of the day's news on CNN;
 
past low-budget basement-made programming on public access TV;
 
past the 100th showing of the Seinfeld Soup Nazi rerun on Fox;
 
past those wacky, syrupy seventies-era problems
 
faced by the Brady Bunch on Nick at Night;
 
past sensational, gory, news videos
 
of death and carnage on Spanish TV;
 
past angry, hateful, anarchist rapsters
 
uttering strange mantras no less foreign,
 
like, "I can tell that you're trying to see the 'W'";
 
and, "Gangsta...I just wanna be...federal agent...on a P" on MTV;
 
I am as energized as a lazy dog
 
lying around on a hot summer day;
 
and before long a misty cloud of slumber
 
gently fogs my wearied mind:
 
my heavy eyelids succumbing
 
to a welcome, peaceful rest.
 
After a few minutes of fitful sleep,
 
I slowly drift back to life
 
to find three hours have passed,
 
(The new math makes perfect
 
sense in Mad Dogg's world,
 
which has always existed
 
on a slightly skewed dimension,
 
and perhaps always will)
 
awakening to find the vigilant Christmas tree,
 
standing just a few feet away,
 
watching over me like a guardian angel,
 
its ever-flickering, ever-flashing lights
 
silently dancing in synchronous harmony
 
to the ticking of the clock on the wall-
 
like a watchdog and lightshow rolled up into one.
 
Jesús es la luz del mundo.
 
After the holidays the tree will come down
 
and the lights will be packed away in hibernation,
 
ushering the start of the cold, inhospitable,
 
gloomy, dreary, darkness of winter.
 
Months hence they will finally emerge
 
to evoke the sentiments of the season once again.

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alphamomma wrote 179 days ago

I am finally publishing my book of poems. I took your advice about the arrangement. I would like to include your comments in the front of the book along with the other "reviews."

“As your name means "like Christ" so your poetry beautifully reflects your passion and intimacy with Him.” James Revoir

If I have your approval, please leave a permission message on my Facebook page - Christine Gail Garcia.

Thank you.

Peter B wrote 194 days ago

Yeah, we all wanted to marry Audrey! Super collection of musings, that is a good assessment. This is not just one afternoons jotting down notes speculating on so many different topics and aspects of who knows what's to come next. Nice job buddy Jim. Peter B.

evermoore wrote 230 days ago

Such insight...depth...pain...hurt...laughter..love...and such a gift you've shared. From the first...Grampa's Hands...the descriptive way you spoke of his life, comparing it to the rings of a tree...how he used that axe making you bring up Adam in the Garden...and his comment...ohhhhhhhhh, James...I laughed. I knew your poetry would be a delight to read and I was right.

God bless...Linda
Children Walking With Jesus

patio wrote 242 days ago

Gloomy Gladness read like a song
I love poems, hence I love this book
MAX STARS

patio wrote 324 days ago

You done a good story on Hitler

Cara Gold wrote 334 days ago

{Meditative Musings} – James Revoir
I read the first five of your musings; ‘Blackberries’, ‘Grampa’s Hands’, ‘Hitler’, ‘Mouses and Houses’ and ‘Rush Hour.’
What a lovely collection you have here! In these five short chapters, you have already shown such diversity and given me a great deal of enjoyment.

I like ‘Blackberries’ for the way you explore the relationship between mother and child. The last three lines truly touched me ‘There is mother and child and no one else/And the quiet sanctuary of their home/Is their entire universe.’ Mother/child relationships are something I like to explore too in my writing, so this really touched me!

‘Grampa’s Hands’ was very different, more personal because of the use of the first person. It made me pause for a moment and think – nice shift from the Adam in the ‘Garden of Eden’ and the old man, Adam Smith. Interesting… this made me think…

‘Hitler’ – your writing is powerful here, to capture the brutal nature of what Hitler did. The link to devil and fallen angels is very strong.

‘Mouses and Houses’ – such a light contrast from the previous chapter! Enjoyable with its comic undercurrents :)

‘Rush Hour’ – lots of terrific images to capture the feeling, indeed, of rush hour. The very structuring of the poem itself is ‘loose’ and rolls fluidly along, keeping the reading pace fast, and making us feel like we’re caught in the rush.

Thank you so much for sharing these, they are delightful to read and I hope to come back soon! Thank you also for your lovely comment on ‘Dawn of Destruction’, it means a lot to me that you like my writing :)
Sincerely
Cara

hadley wrote 376 days ago

Hi James I am finally making my way down my very large list of books to read and I have found yours to be quite delightful. Whether you are describing situations from high school, watching the News or going off to summer camp you obviously have a very poetic way of expressing your thoughts. I love how in the last chapter you sum it all up as being a choice as to how one decides to think feel etc no matter what life throws at you. God is still in control and we just need to trust. Thank you for your honesty and biblical creativity. This would be a great daily devotioinal and benefit many. Nice job, high stars and watch list,
Mary ann
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JamesRevoir wrote 556 days ago

Hello Bridget:

Thank you for your kind comments and for backing Meditative Musings.

Bless you!

James

I enjoyed reading your poems. I think you are a great poet.
Blessing,
Bridget

Bridget Sherman wrote 556 days ago

I enjoyed reading your poems. I think you are a great poet.
Blessing,
Bridget

John Page wrote 619 days ago

Beautiful poetry...meditative indeed. Clearly your life is one of wonder, musing, and reflection, and humor. Best wishes.

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