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rank 5877
word count 11361
date submitted 22.05.2011
date updated 23.05.2011
genres: Fiction, Thriller, Science Fiction,...
classification: moderate
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Dying felt so Goddamned good today

Dan Henk

A vacation in the Scottish highlands. A visit to the famous Loch Ness. A little edgy, but stable and predictable. Until everything goes horribly wrong.

 

A sightseeing vacation in the Scottish highlands, capped by a visit to the famous Loch Ness, goes south when tragedy strikes on the Loch. Things only get worse back on dry land. A dead crew behind, lost in the wilderness, and strange cabin in the mountains. Events continue to spiral downward, until all hell breaks loose and an ancient horror is brought back to life.

 
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Never leave the trail

 

I was beginning to doubt this was even a trail, and cursing myself for venturing off what looked like a good chance to return to civilization. Half an hour had passed, I wasn't entirely sure this was even a trail, and I was even more worried that I wouldn't be able to make it back to the path I had left!. Stupid! Stupid! Stupid! I couldn't leave well enough alone, I had to try and be the explorer!

I stopped and looked around. This definitely wasn't a path! I had no idea where I was in the woods, no working phone, and if I died out here, it would be my own fault!

I noticed the trees just ahead of me opened up into a small meadow. A short, rocky outcropping anchored the middle. I wandered forward, more out of disgust and resignation than anything.

The mound of rock was a little weird. Large boulders shouldered the sides, a rough chunk of granite graced the top, and a single, scraggly tree, dwarfish and little more than a sapling in appearance, wriggled up from a thin layer of peat and moss on top. It roots, however, were huge and monstrous, twisting and swarming in a mass of crusty organic cables across the moss and down the sides of rock. The center was a large, squarish black hole. Curiosity got the best of me, and I wandered over, stooping my head to peer in. Nothing I could see inside , just absolute darkness. I wondered how deep it went? A cold shiver passed across my back, and I realized how uneasy I was growing. That weird sense that something I couldn't see was close by was back again. The feeling grew so intense, I spun around and shouted:

Who's there!”

Nothing answered me back. Just the whistling wind, heightened by a slight sense of vertigo. It was probably the result of the last twenty four or so hours. A gust of wind buffeted me, my right foot lost it's hold in the loose dirt, and I tripped sideways. As I turned to brace myself, I realized I was falling into the hole! It was like a slow motion disaster. I was screaming No! No! No! In my mind, my hands moving out in front of me far too slowly... Blackness... Dark...

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Dan Henk wrote 751 days ago

Very Lovecraftian, and with a real nightmarish quality to it.


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Ariom Dahl wrote 751 days ago

Very Lovecraftian, and with a real nightmarish quality to it.

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