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date submitted 16.07.2011
date updated 05.07.2012
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Invisible Child

Mary hayward

Child begger, graduates as Counsellor to help others, like herself.

 

When Mary is eight the burden of begging for food begins. When her mother suffers TB, her father falls into drunkenness and she is left to starve with her little four year old sister.
As a teenager she is raped and betrayed by her best friend. She marries and then life falls apart when her best friend shoots herself.. She is betrayed with her child, alone and cast out onto the streets once more. Yet when she needs help she is turned away. She gets a check list, and finally she finds a love, so powerful that it took her breath away. Climbing out of poverty becomes her mission so that she can help children like herself.

 
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Boat People

Boat People

 

With the money from Tom, I was now looking for a home for my eight-year-old son Colin who was still living in his Dad’s flat in Brentwood, along with two other strange lodgers; it was far from ideal. I found it heartbreaking to be separated from Colin, always wondering what was happening to him, and I so desperately wanted him to be with me. 

I applied for Local Authority Housing immediately after leaving the flat, and since I hadn’t heard anything about my application, I decided to visit the council offices in Silver Street, Enfield. They told me to go to Redlingtons, a once proud building that stood alone in Baker Street. Humbled, and black with soot from the chimneys nearby, it served as the Housing Department.

I walked up to reception. They told me to wait. The lady’s brown hair had a fringe, flickup’s and butterfly glasses. She called me into a stuffy little office. Dressed in a twin set with pearls, and high heels, she sat down behind her smart modern wooden desk. I judged her shoes more expensive than my entire wardrobe. I didn’t have a good feeling about this meeting. She was young, and inexperienced; and then she spoke.

“My name is Felicity Ursula Carlin-Kent.”

“Hello, can you tell me what’s happening to my application please?” I gave her my name.

“Well, you are far down the list, I’m afraid.” She spoke as if sitting on her horse. “If only you had more points it would help you a great deal.”

It wasn’t a surprise to me. As soon as she opened her plumy mouth something told me this was going to be about as helpful as a pickaxe in a china shop. In fact, I couldn’t think what town she might have come from, but it certainly wasn’t anywhere near Edmonton!

“So how do I get more points?”

“We have to give priority to thousands of homeless people first, you know. The Vietnamese Boat People are coming over to the country, and they have a much greater housing need. Did you know they have fled their country in fishing boats with nothing but the clothes they were standing up in?”

“Very commendable, but how does that affect me?”

“Well, there is a war on in the East, you know. Vietnam has attacked Cambodia, China has attacked Vietnam, and now thousands of refugees are fleeing their country, some drowning and others sold as slaves. A British Oil Tanker has picked up fifty-three from the open sea. It’s very dreadful, you know, and we have a duty to house anyone who is homeless. Mr Callaghan, the Prime Minister, has agreed to take over twenty thousand, and of course they will be homeless; you at least have somewhere to live.”

She spoke as if I didn’t know who the Prime Minister was. I looked at the ceiling and sighed.

I didn’t know what to say to that. I felt humiliated. I didn’t understand how my social deprivation and the psychological hardship that I suffered separated from my son, was somehow insignificant, or, worse, unimportant.  Didn’t I pay my rates and taxes like everyone else? Hadn’t I earned my right to some sort of support when the chips were down?

“So what do you suggest I do then, go to Vietnam and throw myself into a boat, tossing my son in the water for good measure?”

“There’s no need to be sarcastic!” She looked down her nose at me. “It is a humanitarian need of vast proportions and I think we all need to do our bit for the world’s people, don’t you?”

No, I didn’t think so. I had known enough hardship in my own country and I certainly wasn’t too happy about the response I was getting.

“How do I get more points and increase my chances of getting housed?” I asked again. “I am lodging in one room, my eight-year-old son is living in the flat with his father, and two other strange men. He lives miles away over in Brentwood, and my son Colin is picking up all sorts of ideas and language that I don’t approve of.”

“Well, you need to have more babies,” she trotted out bluntly.

“More babies?” I screamed. “Oh, that’s a great idea, that is! I have just got divorced!”

She looked surprised at my onslaught.

“Do you know what that is like?” I continued. “My best friend has just died and I am living in one grotty room as a lodger, desperately trying to keep myself alive. I am in no position to start having more children. What do you want me to do?” I said, “Go on the streets, pick up someone like a common prostitute, get myself pregnant and live in a tent down the Blackwall Tunnel, just so as I can get more points on your bloody housing list!”

She stiffened. “Well, if that’s the way you want to look at it, then I’m afraid I cannot help you!” She got up from her chair and pointed to the door.

“Well, you haven’t been very helpful, have you?” I turned on my heels, held my head high, and made a brisk exit from the office.

I walked out past the reception, through the swing doors into the bright sunshine, but I couldn’t hold back the tears. They burst onto my cheeks as I reached the steps. I stopped and searched for a hanky.

Walking into a phone box at the end of the road I spoke to a friend of Andrea’s, a girl called Janet, who lived nearby. I needed to take shelter in her house and have a cup of coffee, and I hoped she might be able to help me.

I was crying when I knocked on her door.

“Hello Janet,” I said. 

“Mary, look love, I don’t have time at the moment for coffee, but just tell me what’s happened.” She invited me in and we sat on her sofa.

I explained what had happened at the Housing Department.

“Right,” she said, “here is a direct line for Mrs Amy Emsden. She used to be the Mayor of Enfield; she is the Chair of the Housing Committee now.” She scribbled on an old envelope. “Phone her now, mention my name, explain what happened at the Council Housing Office.”

I looked up at her, hesitant. She thrust the note in my hand.

“Do it now,” she insisted. “Phone them straight away and see if she might be able to help.”

She got up to leave.

“Thank you, you have been such a help. I’ll do it as soon as I get home.” I left it at that.

I rang Mrs Emsden as soon as I got home. I managed to speak to her over the phone, as Janet had told me.  I blurted out exactly what had happened at the Housing Department. She asked some questions about where I was living and what access I had to Colin. I told her I was living at my mum’s, only seeing my son at the weekend.

She said that it sounded like I was overcrowded.  I asked her if she knew what it was like to be living like a single woman, only seeing your son for the weekend. She told me she fully understood the pain of it and the difficulties I was suffering. She was due to attend a Housing Committee Meeting shortly after and promised to raise the matter on my behalf. In the meantime, someone would be sent to talk to me and get some details.

A lady called a few days later. I gave all the details, and then it all went quiet and I didn’t hear any more.

Mum telephoned me at work to tell me there was a letter for me. She had opened it and told me that it offered me a place at Dendridge Close, in Enfield.

“It’s lovely, Mary.”  She sounded excited.

I caught my breath for a moment.

“How do you know?”

“I’ve got the keys, and me and Jane had a look. It is so clean Mary, bright and lovely. Just decorated. You will love it.”

“What do you mean, you have been round there and had a look? Before me?”

“Yer, me and Jane got the keys.”

“You should have waited until I got there, Mum.”

I was a bit upset that Mum had gone round there without me, nosing, before I had really had a chance to see it myself, but at the same time I was so elated that I had managed to get a home; because it was now only Colin and I, and the long wait to get back to a family was over.

I dashed round there on the bus and let myself in. It was a little two-bedroom end of terrace maisonette in a quiet cul-de-sac just off Turkey Street, Enfield. I ran up and down the stairs, thinking how bright and airy it was, and the wallpaper so tastefully decorated, with pastel colours—perfect, just perfect. There was a train station just five minutes’ walk away, direct to London. A little green for Colin to play. It was my little piece of heaven.

I phoned Janet and Andrea and asked them to meet me at Janet’s house on Saturday. I went to the baker’s on my way and bought some fresh cream cakes. It was my way of thanking them both for all the help they had given me. I was overjoyed.

I ordered a new single bed for Colin, a double for myself, a new chocolate brown carpet for the hallway and stairs, and a rich deep piled claret carpet for the living room. Now the cash from Tom had made it all worthwhile. I rang Terry straight away, and arranged for him to bring Colin over at the weekend to see his new home.

It was the first sign of my independence. I felt so good! I was ready to start building a life for myself. I found a reliable babysitter for Colin nearby, and he enjoyed playing with their children. It all worked out very well, for both Colin and myself.

I took driving lessons and passed my driving test, although I couldn’t afford a car.

Despite all the joy of having my own home at last, one problem seemed to dominate my life; I was still terrified of the dark. It had been there since losing Les in 1957, left over from my childhood, and now it all came flooding back to me. The way the electric would cut off when you least expected it, and then crawling round the walls, searching for the cupboard, fiddling with a coin to put in the meter. The trauma of it was tattooed on my mind. It was all there.
 
    

I hadn’t been able to shake it off no matter how hard I had tried. I just couldn’t get to sleep at nights. I would sit up with the light on, drinking endless cups of tea, and checking all the windows and doors. It became an obsession.

 

Andrea called me and we met up with another friend, Vaz, a tall, slim, elegant Greek woman. We went to Martha’s Wine Bar, in Cricklewood to celebrate my new home. The three of us were chatting away in the bar while a musician, Billy his name was, sat playing his guitar and singing. He was Scottish, and his accent reminded me of Joyce. He could be found singing his quiet casual songs in the wine bar most nights, and when he wasn’t singing his songs, he would be found up against the bar chatting to the manager and his wife about tales at university and life in Edinburgh.

Billy was pleasant and easy going enough. He seemed to enjoy chatting with our little group between songs, buying us drinks and joining in on our jokes, with saucy comments. It seemed that we were all having a great time. The wine bar became a regular haunt, meeting with the girls and enjoying their company. It was such a relief to be able to get out and put all my troubles behind me.

Now that I had a stable house and friends to share my worries, my mood lifted. I saw hope in my life once more.

The last thing I was looking for was a relationship, though. I just wasn’t ready. But soon Billy started to single me out from the rest of the group, talking to me more frequently whilst we waited for the others to arrive.

 

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Neville wrote 302 days ago

Invisible Child.
By Mary Hayward.


This is such a harrowing account of your early years in Edmonton, North London.
The constant rows between your mum and dad, not forgetting the lack of a decent meal, or proper warmth of a fire.
You certainly did go through it, so to speak.
Things got worse when Les is forced out of the home, you were just a drudge—shame on your parents!
To have to go begging to shop keepers for food on tick with no intention of paying them back must have been heart breaking for you.
If it’s any consolation to you, I would say that you’ve been fortunate to have come through it all with dignity and the ability to write—you are a good writer, there’s no doubt in my mind.
To have put pen to paper like you have done here has brought out your inner resources…you have a lot going for you.
You have good description and dialogue running through what I see as a very excellent read, it takes a lot of courage to write a true story of a miserable upbringing…you’ve done it well.
I would recommend your book to anyone to read…and learn from as well.
Childhood is never forgotten, nor time diminish the severity of your upbringing to a point where forgiveness is acceptable.
Many stars and I will shelve your book as soon as I can!

Best wishes to you,

Neville. The Secrets of the Forest – The Time Zone.

jessicajones wrote 303 days ago

Hi Mary,
This is a very sad story to read (so far), you write in a very expressive and informative way, making it easy to empathise. Very easy to get sucked in and just keep reading.
After the first couple of chapters, I felt I knew the characters and their 'story's' well.

I will keep you on my WL and read more later. High stars.

Best wishes
Jessica

The world through my eyes

GCleare wrote 310 days ago

Invisible Child

This is very evocative and contains some great mood-setting phrases:…”panda eyes”…”as long as I held my cup firmly when the train went by”…”suck the black damp from the air”. You are an interesting writer, with an inspiring story to tell.

But I found the beginning confusing, with a lot of characters and data presented very quickly. It was hard to sink into the story. Do you really need four dates in a row in the first three paragraphs? The story really starts when she was nine, so you might think about starting the book in 1957 with the line “I was just nine years old…” and folding the backstory about her parents and half brother into her thoughts afterwards. You can deal with Joyce when you get to her, that first sentence leads us nowhere in this chapter. Better to plunge into the drama soon as possible, I think.

Your story is intense and moving, and your use of language is very strong.

~Gail SECRETS WE KEEP

patio wrote 322 days ago

This a moving story

Tod Schneider wrote 323 days ago

This is certainly an interesting, heart-felt story. It is so brave to write memoir! In my opinion, your strongest suit is when you bring us into the action, showing instead of telling. This really starts, for me, with the dialog well into chapter 2, and if I was to do anything radically different here, that's where I'd suggest starting. There are many parts up until then that could be enlivened by showing us through dialog rather than catching us up on dad's history, etc.
But overall your writing is both moving and professional. I wish you well with this!

Tod
http://authonomy.com/books/40646/the-lost-wink/

MaryHayward wrote 324 days ago

Is this 'your' story, Mary? I hope not. I hope this is fiction.


Ellise, Yes, Invisible Child is the true story of my life. I have researched the details to confirm timescales, visited locations, established facts reported in the newspapers of the time so as I could be sure that things happened as I described. I have spoken to ex husband Terry and he has filled in some gaps, and also contacted some family and friends of the time. I have set up a website, www.maryhayward.co.uk and there you will find the pictures of me and places mentioned in the book.

Mary Hayward

Weaver Reads wrote 325 days ago

Is this 'your' story, Mary? I hope not. I hope this is fiction.

TDonna wrote 398 days ago

Gripping first chapter for me. Great start. It flowed so well and your writing so smooth, the scenes were powerful and visual. You definitely intrigued. I like the chapter ending as well, for it made me want to read on, which I will do very soon.
T.Donna
(No Kiss Good-bye)

Adeel wrote 403 days ago

Writing Biography is not an easy thing but you have done it so fantastically that makes me to read more of it. A hooking story which deserves to be termed as excellent. Highly starred.

Six Foot Bonsai wrote 404 days ago

Hello Mary. I've skipped around reading several chapters. It's not the way most folks read books, but honestly I have so many I want to check out and a job that takes too many of my personal hours.

First of all, the struggles of being poor and trying to raise childre- find love are relatable topics to many. That's good. Your cador also is a strong feature of your writing.

My suggestions (and I'm not a professional) would be to shorten the word count. When I first sat down to write my story of becoming a Japanse wife, I included practically everything I could remember. A grad student did me a favor and read my 2nd major draft and told me to take out scenes that didn't make the main premise move forward- then fluff up the remainder with better descrptions. Generally your descriptions are strong, but I would think about what is not adding value. I hope this make sense.

So many people on this site give only praise. Personally I prefer the good and bad. I hope you are cool with my short commentary. Keep crafting your story! It is totally worth it.

Sincerely. Stacy Gleiss

Davidmauriceware wrote 455 days ago

Excellent written story. very intriguing and that makes me want to read more and more. You have a story that will do very ,very well here on authonomy.Highly starred and placed on my w/l list.I will be keeping an eye on this 1. Great job.

MaryHayward wrote 541 days ago

Thank you for reading Invisible Child, and for your observations on the first chapter. I guess that the first chapter has so much to say about the impact of the death of Joyce, that perhaps I get lost in my words. The other chapters are dealing with me as a child and perhaps I know myself with more understanding.

I really appreciate your candour. Thank you so much.

Mary

FRAN MACILVEY wrote 541 days ago

I have read the first three chapters of your story. The first chapter I struggled with because parts of the text could do with a good edit, a tidy up, to it easier to read and in parts, less repetitive.

Then I read chapters two and three and something changed. In the dialogue passages your writing is natural, unforced, it flows well and pulls the reader along effortlessly - much better! You have a good ear for convincing dialogue, between you and your mother for example. The words speak for themselves. You hardly need to point out your hardships to us, you see, because in the story you tell, they are obvious to us. This is the style of writing that would suit you best, I feel.

You are a good writer, and with a sympathetic editor there is no reason why this book cannot be a gripping read. Parts of it already are.

All the best,

Fran Macilvey, "Trapped"

Melissa Koehler wrote 595 days ago

wow this is... hard, yet amazing to read. its different from other books and i think thats whats going to keep people reading this. your pitches are both really good- made me want to read more, and i love your cover too. i dont really have anything bad to say about this... how can you critique something that is YOUR life? i dont think you can, its written the way your story happened. i wish you the very best of luck with this.
melissa :)
Gut Instincts

Beth Tasker wrote 597 days ago

Mary

It took courage and strength to write this. I admire you and your work.

I have only read the first few chapers but want to read on even though it is very difficult to live what you went through.

Beth

missmaria wrote 618 days ago

Dear Mary,
Your story is heartbreaking and before i knew it, i was well into chapter five. So many children around the world suffer in silence, and as you grow into adulthood, you pretend it never happened, you try to forget the pain and the tears and carry on as best as you can, but the sadness never goes away, does it? No, you'll never get your childhood back, but reading your words i feel your strength, you're a survivor.
I pray for God's guidance all the time, and i pray He keep you well, Mary.
Six stars and on my shelf.
Maria
"Angelina"

strachan gordon wrote 622 days ago

A very dramatic start , that's the way to do it - hook the reader straight away , you don't have much time to get them in the book store and you also are writing out of personal experience , which gives your writing force and veracity . I look forward to reading thed rest of it . I don't know if you have the time , but I wonder if you would be able to look at the first chapter of my novel 'A Buccaneer' ,which is an historical adventure romance set inj the 17th century and includes Pirates , lost love , the Great Plague of London , Sir Henry Morgan , beautiful Spanish ladies and much more . watchlisted and starred. With best wishes from Strachan Gordon

MaryHayward wrote 624 days ago

Hi Leni

Just posted a few more chapters. I don't know if you get notified? Mary

This book is so hard to put down. It keeps nagging to know what's next. Oh, to be held in suspense.

MaryHayward wrote 628 days ago

hi Leni,

This book is so hard to put down. It keeps nagging to know what's next. Oh, to be held in suspense.


It is so lovely to hear that you are reading my work yet at the same time I am ashamed that this all happened to me. The remaining chapters have not yet been uploaded. If you think that childhood was difficult, and my early life painful, then you have yet to read the rest. My life takes some dramatic twists and turns, and some frightful downs, and yet there is an unexpected period of truly inspiring fighting back. Finally finding a love that comes but once in a lifetime, so powerful that it took my breath away.
I will try and upload some more chapters in the next few days. Thank you so much, regards, Mary

leni roman wrote 628 days ago

This book is so hard to put down. It keeps nagging to know what's next. Oh, to be held in suspense.

MaryHayward wrote 635 days ago

Hi Tom

Thank you so much for reading my book. I am touched by your insight. You understand the feelings so well that I am compelled to look at your book, and will do so tomorrow.

Thank you. I will post some more chapters if I get a chance in the next few days. My journey has much to travel, and although childhood is nearing a close, my adult life becomes even more surprising, with many twists and turns.

Thank you once again, Mary


Hello Mary-
book -Invisible Child'

Read all 23 chapters of this book in one sitting last night and made notes.
Wow! what a read it is, hear-breaking or should say heart-wrenching, it's a story that need to be read over and over to get the true depth of the life you have suffered, Mary. I \understand ever page of it, as i can relate to your story., read my book for similarities.
the story related to the convalescent home is so convincing and not to mention the horror of the rape scend in chapter 22.
you are indeed a very brave woman to have told this story, it is obvious that it comes straight from the heart.
How can one forget, those like yourself who had to go to the shop with a note, looking for food on tick.
I found this book as i read it , so hard to put down and glad i did not. it certainly conjures up the smells and sounds of living in those conditions. and all of the people so real as you describe the situations.

i wish you good luck with this book and its gets my six stars as one of the better in it's genre

Tom Bye Dublin Ireland
please read mine for comparisons and hopefully you might back or comment, thanks

Tom Bye wrote 635 days ago

Hello Mary-
book -Invisible Child'

Read all 23 chapters of this book in one sitting last night and made notes.
Wow! what a read it is, hear-breaking or should say heart-wrenching, it's a story that need to be read over and over to get the true depth of the life you have suffered, Mary. I \understand ever page of it, as i can relate to your story., read my book for similarities.
the story related to the convalescent home is so convincing and not to mention the horror of the rape scend in chapter 22.
you are indeed a very brave woman to have told this story, it is obvious that it comes straight from the heart.
How can one forget, those like yourself who had to go to the shop with a note, looking for food on tick.
I found this book as i read it , so hard to put down and glad i did not. it certainly conjures up the smells and sounds of living in those conditions. and all of the people so real as you describe the situations.

i wish you good luck with this book and its gets my six stars as one of the better in it's genre

Tom Bye Dublin Ireland
please read mine for comparisons and hopefully you might back or comment, thanks

MaryHayward wrote 638 days ago

Dean, Thank you for your kind words.

Mary

I really admire your courage alongside you skill as a writer to address and highlight some very painfull topics. My childhood because of whatt I had to go through, would not be percieved as a "normal" childhood and prehaps that qualifies me somewhat to comment on your story.

I'll be giving you 5 stars - only because it deserves it and I love your pacey, fast moving writng

well done

Dean

judoman wrote 638 days ago

Mary

I really admire your courage alongside you skill as a writer to address and highlight some very painfull topics. My childhood because of whatt I had to go through, would not be percieved as a "normal" childhood and prehaps that qualifies me somewhat to comment on your story.

I'll be giving you 5 stars - only because it deserves it and I love your pacey, fast moving writng

well done

Dean

Michael Croucher wrote 646 days ago

A gripping start and lots of pull to this story. These are difficult topics to write about and you've done a really good job of bringing the reader into tragic reality and keeping their interest. Nicely done.
Michael Croucher (Bravo's Veil)

David Price wrote 659 days ago

Mary,

Chapter 3 is heart-breaking, and it confirms your gift for story-telling. I was right there with you on those grocery door-steps, feeling your pain, hunger and the injustice of your circumstances.

People who are lucky enough to have 'normal' childhoods can never truly appreciate the damage done to innocent minds by such appalling neglect and abuse, a situation you address well in the final paragraph of this chapter. How on earth do survivors like you and me tell our stories without alienating our readers? In this respect, you are doing a marvellous job.

I'm not the fastest reader, and your work demands my full attention, so I will finish it as and when I can. But it is definitely a book worthy of support.

David

David Price wrote 661 days ago

Have read the first two chapters Mary. You write with clarity and purpose, and I think your story is well-constructed and compelling. I look forward to reading more.

And thanks again for backing 'Master Act'.

David

s stocker wrote 665 days ago

Really a provocative story to read. I gave you a five star rating and will continue to read the chapters.

Susan Stocker
Kissing Your Elbow

strachan gordon wrote 665 days ago

Hello Mary , welcome to authonomy , I hope you will find it as I have, a fascinating experience. I think you have a fascinating story to tell, in what is becoming an increasingly popular genre. you write extremely well and very vividly and i think you are right to begin with the death of your friend. Starred and watchlisted, I wonder if you would have the time to look at my novel 'A Buccaneer' which is an historical , adventure romance which includes lost love, the Great Plague of London , Sir Henry Morgan, the attack on Panama 1671 , Spanish ladies and much more , with best wishes, Strachan Gordon

mrsdfwt wrote 676 days ago

Dear Mary,
A very intense and emotional story. Poverty and children ring a sad note in my heart, and Invisible Child is no exception. The characters are so painfully real, and the circumstances heartbreaking. It angers me when parents starve their children and use the little money they have for alcohol and fags. It seems the fifties and sixties were agonizing times for many children in this world, but i am so proud that we prevailed, and lived to tell the stories.
Five stars and some shelf space for sure, when possible.
God bless you Mary.
Maria
Dark of the Moon

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