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Georgina's Family

Maria Constantine

Georgina reaches a crossroad in her life and needs to make changes; will her decision act as a catalyst for change within her family?

 

There has to be more to life; I am alive, but not living - these are the thoughts that torment Georgina as she prepares to celebrate her thirtieth birthday. Taking stock of her life would require challenging some of the Greek values and traditions she has been raised with.

'Georgina's Family' is a novel which centres on Georgina and her eldest sister, Katherina. Professionally they are both doing well - one as a teacher, the other as a City broker, but on a personal level they need to resolve inner conflicts if they are to find happiness.

Katherina's life changes as a new broker enters her team and she is forced to face a secret that she has kept buried for many years. Their younger sister, Sophia, is regarded as the rebel of the family and life in the Andreou household is full of love, conflict and laughter.

Relationships are challenged and secrets revealed as the sisters go on holiday to Greece. Georgina needs to find the courage to lead the life she wants to lead as opposed to the life she is expected to lead.

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‘Come on Gina, hurry up,’ Dimitri called from outside the bathroom door. ‘I need to have a shower too before everyone gets here.’

Georgina heard her brother rapping on the door and lifted a damp hand to wipe away tears as she stood in a steam-filled room. ‘I’m just drying myself. I’ll be out in a sec.’

‘Dry yourself in your room. If it’s not you locked in there, it’s one of the other two. The curse of having three sisters!’

‘More like a blessing – and if you hadn’t stayed in bed all day you’d be ready by now,’ she countered while catching her hazy reflection in a lopsided mirror hanging above the washbasin.

‘I got in at six in the morning.’ 

Georgina exhaled with irritation at the sound of his body slumping against the door. When she was ready, she flung the bathroom door open, sidestepping Dimitri’s stumbling form. Wrapped in a frayed bathrobe, with a towel swathed around her piled, wet hair she rushed past.

‘Hey, what was that for? You could’ve warned me.’

‘I’ll remember to knock next time, before I open the door.’

‘Funny.’

Georgina was halfway up the stairs when she heard Dimitri slam the bathroom door. She had been careful to avoid her brother’s gaze, fixing her tear-reddened eyes on the floral patterned carpet - though she doubted he would have noticed anything amiss: unlike her sisters, perceptiveness was not Dimitri’s strong point.

It was time to get ready for her thirtieth birthday party, organised by her mother for the benefit of bringing together every member of the family residing north of the Thames. Cousin Peter alone had not been invited: he lived in south London and surfaced for weddings and funerals. Anything else and it would have been too far for him to travel. He had called late last night above the sound of jazz music and, with a chorus of his friends, sung happy birthday. Georgina appreciated the call, but the party mood evaded her.

Pattering towards the large pane window, she drew the curtains before switching on the single bulb in its mint-green shade. Her bedroom overlooked their well-kept garden, which backed on to an undeveloped small plot of land. The owner, Mr Macaroni, lived on the parallel road. He had initially hoped to build a few flats on the plot, but local residents had objected. Behind the plot of land stood a chain of Edwardian houses, all relatively close. If someone happened to have a handy pair of binoculars, they could conceivably see more of Georgina than she dared expose. She had learnt to be alert and not let her guard down, like a soldier protecting the crown jewels.

Discretion had been instilled in Georgina, together with a generous dose of social conditioning and family expectations; Georgina was only too aware that her aging singleness was not something her parents had bargained on. She was planning on getting through the day by neither feeling nor thinking – just functioning.

Everything was in place; laid on the brilliant white duvet was a top in subtle hues of green and a chocolate-brown skirt. Tan shoes stood to attention at the foot of her bed. The only problem was that the cloak of I’m-doing-just-fine was proving to be a challenge to wear. Her body trembled and goose pimples travelled up her legs, even though the room was warm. Her breaths were coming in short sharp succession and her eyes felt sore from the sobs she had not been able to hold back as the showerhead sliced hot water over her face.

‘Come on, you can do it.’ She gave herself a pep talk.

Moving in front of a full-length mirror, Georgina unwound the turban-style towel and light brown hair cascaded over her shoulders. Critical green eyes challenged the direction her life was following, but she was jolted out of her thoughts by Sophia hobbling in; she had pedicure pads between her toes to separate them for drying.

‘I should have done this at work, but Roulla, the stupid cow, fully booked me and I didn’t even have time to go to the loo, let alone have a pedicure.’

Georgina glanced at her younger sister’s scarlet-varnished toenails and then at the shiny pearl tips of her own toes. ‘I’ve never had a professional pedicure done.’

‘That’s your own fault because you think it’s a waste of time - and you think you can do it as well as a professional beautician.’ Sophia angled her head speculatively, ‘Your eyes are red and puffy.’

Georgina shrugged. ‘I’ve got an eye gel I can use. It’s soothing.’ She noticed Sophia gripping an empty bottle of frizz-easing spray and used the little bottle to deflect attention from herself.  ‘Oh, are you out? I’ve run out too. I wanted to buy some last week, but I didn’t have time.’

There was a moment of silence; Georgina was fully aware of Sophia’s probing stare, but she wasn’t about to open up.

‘Great, now I’m going to look like Bernie if Katherina doesn’t have any either.’ Mrs Bernly had been their chemistry teacher at school and was notorious for having unruly frizzy hair.

Georgina was grateful that Sophia had dropped the subject. ‘I doubt Katherina will have any. Her hair is naturally glossy without any spray,’ she said, as Sophia swivelled on her heels. ‘But you can try.’  Georgina could hear the sound of the choking vacuum cleaner and felt sorry for her sister being lumbered with the task of vacuuming with the dated appliance.

                        

‘Mum … Mum,’ Katherina bellowed, slamming her foot on the off button and calling out again. ‘This vacuum cleaner is useless, it’s not picking up properly. I thought Uncle Kyriaco fixed it!’

‘Kyriaco fix it last week and change button. Move it around,’ her mother called out from the kitchen, above the din of the working extractor.

Katherina wiped the perspiration from her forehead and looked down at the changed switch, as Sophia’s freshly varnished toenails appeared before her. ‘Nice colour.’

‘Thanks. Not working again?’

Katherina regretted not using Sophia’s excuse for avoiding vacuuming by arguing that it doesn’t do the job properly; she was right. ‘Uncle Kyriaco apparently fixed it last week, but I can’t say it has helped. I’m finding it difficult to see what temperature I should put it on.’

Sophia smiled broadly. ‘He’s taken that button from an old cooker. I’ve had enough fights with that vacuum cleaner to know to keep away! Do you remember when he used an old radio button on the toaster Mum had given him to fix?  I don’t know how many times I burnt my toast trying to figure it out!’

‘Dad bought a new one in the end. But I think he still gave the old one to Uncle Kyriaco – just in case he could use any of the parts.’

‘There you go – lucky you didn’t get the radio control again, then you would’ve had to choose between FM or AM.’ Sophia giggled and Katherina reluctantly joined in as she gazed at the incongruous jutting switch. ‘Listen, do you have any of that frizz-easing hair spray left? I’ve run out.’

‘Not sure, I hardly use it. Check in the top drawer of my dressing table. ’

‘Thanks.’ Sophia turned towards Katherina’s bedroom. ‘Hope you’ll work as hard for my thirtieth birthday,’ she joked as she hobbled away.

‘You’ve still got a few years to go. And by then I hope to God I won’t be living at home.’

‘As Mum would say, your words in God’s ear,’ Dimitri pronounced in a heavy accent imitating his mother as he caught the tail end of the conversation.

‘Glad to see you’re out of the shower, Adonis. Someone else needs to use it too.’

‘I know, I can smell you from here,’ he jeered, strutting to his room with an exaggerated swagger. 

‘Thanks,’ Katherina retorted with a huff as she bent down to drag the vacuum cleaner, which resisted movement like a stubborn mule. ‘Glad it’s not my thirtieth birthday.’

Katherina remembered the months leading up to her thirtieth birthday and how it had been filled with a frenzy of prospective Greek husbands. Her parents had worked relentlessly to have a ring put on her finger by anyone who fit the bill: Greek, educated, not a gambler, not a smoker, not a drinker … the requirements changed, as she got older. Sophia had teased that as long as he was Greek and did not have a criminal record, their parents would find him an acceptable suitor.

‘Good, you finish. I go and tidy bathroom after Dimitri and then you go in.’ Christina had switched off the rings on the gas hob in the kitchen and had come upstairs to do a last minute tidy-up.

‘It’s your fault you know, that he’s going to be a nightmare for some woman one day.’ Katherina could not help the criticism spurting out. ‘It shouldn’t be your job to tidy up after him.’

‘Any girl who have Dimitri will be very lucky,’ Christina said proudly, increasing a few inches in height as she spoke. She opened the bathroom door and stepped back from the pool of water that floated on the aqua-tiled floor.

‘He’s not careful, because he doesn’t have to be. You let him get away with so much.’ Exasperated, Katherina watched her mother bend down and pick up Dimitri’s discarded towel to wipe away the excess water. ‘Look at the mess he’s left behind!’

There was no reply as her mother turned her attention to the washbasin and rinsed dark stubble from the white ceramic surface. Katherina walked away, knowing there was no point in trying to change her mother’s attitude towards Dimitri: he was a boy and expectations were different.

 

Georgina sighed heavily as she heard the sound of marching footsteps approaching. She knew her mother meant well, but today her nerves were taut. As expected her mother did not knock before entering. Her mother would knock only before entering Dimitri’s bedroom; she had started knocking on his door ever since he was fourteen, after an embarrassing encounter.  

‘Gina, why you not ready?’ she asked while collecting laundry, which Georgina had left neatly on the chintz-upholstered armchair by the window.

Resentment rushed up Georgina’s chest and into her throat, but she pushed it down again: it was pointless to argue about being left to do things for herself, so she confined her response to a curt, ‘I will be, soon.’

Christina glanced at the clothes laid out on her daughter’s single bed and nodded with approval. Her lips then drew into a rigid line. ‘I go see what Sophia wear.’ Her brow furrowed, leaving lines like a railway track running across her forehead.

‘I’ll be downstairs soon.’

Georgina liberally applied moisturiser over her defined cheekbones and along her neck. Did she look her age? She stared dispassionately into misty green eyes and felt a sense of detachment from the woman who looked back at her. She was thirty and alive but not living. The last rush of adrenalin she had felt was after a forty-five-minute group cycle class at the gym. Perhaps she did not even know how to let go and enjoy life. Having fun was something her younger sister was better at.

 

Walking into a large bedroom with music blaring out of two small speakers, Christina tutted and grumbled, ‘I donno who you take afta.’ She laboriously bent down to pick up the discarded garments.

Sophia was sprawled on the unmade bed, browsing through a hair magazine. She did not bother looking up; her mother’s stare could be as penetrating as a laser boring through someone’s eyeball during retinal surgery.

‘You not ready, Sophia - and they here soon.’

‘I am. This is what I’m going to wear.’ Turning a page in her glossy magazine, Sophia studied the picture with a quirk of a well-delineated eyebrow. She was in the mood for a change. There was an interesting jagged crop on the centre page, but she was not sure she was ready to chop her salon-coloured auburn hair to that extent yet.

‘You canno wear jeans to your sister’s party! And they looking so old.’  The colour seeped through every vessel and artery in Christina’s body to gather on her rounded cheeks. ‘Change, Sophia, you not come with those clothes,’ was all that Christina said as she threw a black lacy bra on top of the pile of laundry she was carrying.

The finality in her mother’s tone fuelled Sophia’s sense of injustice and she gnawed her lower lip. ‘There is nothing wrong with the way I look, it’s called fashion and …’ Christina strode out, closing the door on Sophia’s indignant outburst. ‘Fine, have it your way, I’ll change, but not the jeans. I’ll dress up with my glitzy top. I don’t care if I don’t fit into your picture of a how a good Greek girl should look!’

Sophia paused as she heard the shrill of the phone ringing in the hallway and then a resounding shout from the bottom of the stairs; the call wasn’t for her.

 

‘Gina, telephone!’ the voice bellowed again.  

‘Who is it?’ Georgina was not sure she wanted to speak to anyone. There just had to be more to life - the thought kept tormenting her like a mirage in the desert.

‘Frankie.’ Her colleague’s name had initially been a source of confusion for her mother, as she did not know if it was a male or female colleague.

Georgina picked up the cordless phone from the upstairs hallway and leapt up the final flight of stairs before closing the door and sinking into her armchair. ‘Frankie, I’m not sure you want to speak to me today.’ 

‘That bad, is it?’ 

‘I feel so ungrateful. Mum’s been working hard getting everything ready - even Dimitri was roped into helping yesterday but …’ her voice trailed off as she gazed out of the window.

Mr Macaroni was busy inspecting his vegetable patch while balancing on planks of wood that had been strategically placed to avoid soiling his shoes. Georgina was struck by how light-footed he appeared for a man of his solid frame. He seemed as agile as a sprinting hare. No doubt, they would soon be seeing him leaning over the fence and exchanging homegrown vegetables with her mother; both would be careful to select the best ones to illustrate their success.

‘It’s probably the last family birthday party you will have.’ Frankie’s optimistic voice drew Georgina back. ‘How about going to see the new romantic comedy that’s come out? We can get a bite to eat after work tomorrow - and then go to the cinema?’

‘Okay, that’s something to look forward to.’ She watched with amusement as Mr Macaroni leapt across wobbly planks of wood to chase away Rambo, the neighbourhood cat, who was making his way towards the spinach patch. No wonder her mother washed the spinach thoroughly before cooking it.

‘I’m sure we can both do with a bit of escapism after work on a Monday.’ 

‘Mondays,’ Georgina groaned as she remembered the Year Team meeting tomorrow with all the Year Nine form tutors; she should go in early and prepare some of the points she needed to address in the meeting. There was also a pile of essays on Romeo and Juliet waiting to be marked. 

‘When is your governors’ meeting? It’s not tomorrow?’

Georgina closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Why had she chosen to be a teacher governor as well as a head of year? It was just another responsibility and more meetings to attend. ‘No, it’s on Tuesday evening. I’d really appreciate some fundraising ideas. One of the parent governors raised it at the last meeting and it’s on the agenda.’

‘Sure. We can talk about it at lunchtime.’

‘See you tomorrow then, I better go now before the first guests arrive.’

It was approaching four o’clock. There was no more time to waste on thinking about her life. It was time to get into family-party mode. Her mind was like an enormous rug with lots of things swept under it and now was not the time to spring clean.

You can do it, Gina, she repeated like a mantra to align her mind with what she had to do. It had worked in the past. I am strong and in control, she told herself, as she strode down the stairs with a cream cardigan in the crook of her arm.

‘Are you okay? You look like you’re going into battle.’ Katherina’s tone was laced with concern.

‘Do I? I was just gearing myself up for the big event.’

‘Don’t worry, I don’t think Mum has got thirty candles for you to blow out.’

‘No, but she has got thirty guys!’ Dimitri taunted, closing his bedroom door before Georgina or Katherina had a chance to reply.

Katherina smiled with resignation, showing dimpled cheeks. ‘I wonder if you can take out insurance policies against brothers. They certainly are a liability.’

‘You could always find out at work tomorrow.’

‘We could be the first to make a claim.’

‘That amongst other family claims! Seriously, I don’t know how I’m going to get through another family birthday with everyone giving Mum and Dad the pitying you-have-three-unmarried-daughters look.

‘What other people think is not our responsibility. And you can’t stop people gossiping. It takes away the attention from their problems.’

‘I guess you’re right.’ Georgina stroked down the flowing fabric of her skirt and wondered if she was overdressed.

‘You look nice. I haven’t seen that outfit before.’ 

Her sister always knew the right thing to say. Georgina breathed out slowly, easing the constriction she had been feeling all day in her chest. ‘Thanks. I splashed out in a boutique that’s opened up in Muswell Hill.’

‘It suits you. Don’t put the cardigan on - it hides the whole look.’

‘Okay, I guess I don’t need it now.’

‘I’ve got to rush before they come, otherwise …’ the sound of the doorbell ringing echoed around the house.

‘I better go and get it.’

The formidable frame behind the stained-glass door belonged to Uncle Theo, Christina’s older brother and Georgina’s godfather. Uncle Theo was known for his amusing stories and old Greek anecdotes. Some he would impart in a hushed tone when his wife, Aunt Thelma, was not within earshot as they were X-rated.

An unavoidable grin spread across Georgina’s face. At least it was an entertaining start to the evening; soon she would be weaving in and out of conversations, avoiding prying questions by uncles and aunties and hoping that no one would mention the “b” word.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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TDonna wrote 288 days ago

This is totally delightful! It reminded me of my family. Wonderful flow, you went right into the story, the characters came to life one by one. You made me smile and shake my head how mom treats the son differently just because he's a son. Great paragraph that starts with "Katherine remembered the months leading to . . ." I almost wanted that to be the intro para, because it pulled me right to the character's mind -- it's where you connected me to your character. And then I laughed aloud at not 30 candles, but 30 guys. The descriptions were great. When she sees her father in the garden balancing on wood planks, I saw my own dad in that image. Absolutely a delightful read, easy flowing, interesting insight into the family. It resonated with me, including some of the expressions, like "your words in God's ear." Beautiful! I loved it, it was such an enjoyable read. I wish I had time for more, but I will return, Maria. Excellent!
Donna
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Bart Jahn wrote 300 days ago

Dear Maria...this is my CCRG and CLF reviews (way ahead of time but I will look again at your book when it comes time in CLF...hopefully more will be uploaded then...or better yet published). I won't post this in the CLF thread because it is so out ahead of time, but I will mention it in the CCRG thread.

First of all, I absolutely love this book. The quality of writing on Authonomy is so incredibly high. I read chapters 1 and 2, then read chapters 3 through 6 in one sitting because I could not put it down. Had to read the next chapter to see what would happen next. Wish the whole book was here on Authonomy.

I do not think this book falls within a women's literature category. It has broad universal appeal that I think would be of interest to adult men and women of all ages. I did not previously know anything about Greek family culture. I can see some wonderful positives to it but some negative restrictions as well. That is part of the appeal of the book...you take me into an interesting world that is foreign to my Southern California diluted German/Scottish/English/Norwegian/American roots. Your characters, dialogue, and plot are first-rate, and the story has a very wholesome feel to it but with a lot of depth to consider in the issues covered.

I like the title and the book cover. It reminded me of books I see in the "recent fiction" display at my local Barnes & Noble bookstore showing current New York Times bestsellers. I have no idea why this book is at 310 on Authonomy...sometimes this system is hard to figure. Should be in the single-digit teens heading for the ED. I don't know the ending to the story, but based upon the smoothness of your writing and the way it pulled me into the story, I can see this book becoming very successful with a word-of-mouth popular support among general readers. Georgina's Family is currently on my watchlist, and on my bookshelf in the near future, as books now on my bookshelf make it to the ED. Congratulations on an excellent book, thanks for the very pleasant read, and God bless you. Bart Jahn.

How Dear wrote 373 days ago

I love what I have read so far! It moves quickly, and the characters are easy to relate to, no matter what kind of family you are from. This is one of my favorite stories thus far since joining this site. You are a very talented writer and your style is really refreshing. I was caught up in the emotions of the characters, without it being too heavy. I could sympathize with your characters and feel their feelings and still be laughing. It's really well written and deserves to be printed in hard copy for the general public to enjoy. Very highly backed and starred.

Laura A. D. wrote 479 days ago

I really enjoyed reading what you have uploaded here. You are most certainly a very talented writer who will be going places for sure!:)
What a story! Even your pitch had me!
"Alive but not living..." Wow! Just wow! That is only a sample of the MANY unique and well turned phrases that just flow throughout your work! I only WISH I had HALF the talent that flows from your pen! Highly starred.
Blessings and best wishes,
Laura A. Diaz
"They Call Me Blanca"

Tina3 wrote 15 days ago

Hi Maria,

I love your realistic and lively characters. Have read all 7 chapters and want more! Looking forward to reading the rest. Your writing is refreshing, positive, perceptive and a delight. Thank you!! Tina

Maria Constantine wrote 21 days ago

Thank you for taking the time to comment on 'Georgina's Family'; I value all feedback. It has been a challenge starting the book with a family party because it invariably means introducing 'the family'. I have contemplated not starting the book with a Greek family party so as to ease the reader into the story - but I have remained with the party and worked with a professional editor to tighten the manuscript. There have been countless edits of the manuscript, with particular focus on the first two chapters - but I do appreciate the fact that while some readers will love the family dynamics, others will not.
I will also like to say a massive thank you for adding 'Georgina's Family' to your bookshelf.



Opening pitch....the word 'change' and 'changes' sounds repetitive I would replace one. I would delete the line 'professionals they are both doing well' because you then go on to tell me what their professions are. Either tell me that they are professionals and leave it at that, or tell me what they do.

I'm going to be brutally honest. Your first chapter didn't work for me at all. I've totally lost the plot. You have
Dimitri, Georgina, Mr Marconi, Cousin Peter, Christina, Sophia, Mum, Roulla, Mrs Bernly, Uncle Kyriaco, Katharina, Uncle Theo and Aunt Thelma . . .And as if that's not confusing enough you've done little to nothing to help me visualise any of these characters. If a characters presence is not meaningful in the initial stages then introduce them later, for example Mr Marconi, do I really need a rundown on his vegetable patch in the middle of the main characters telephone call ? I want the dialogue between the characters to bounce off each other, to keep me interested. I don't care about the neighbours garden at this point. And if cousin Peter is not coming to the birthday party, then why mention him. Introduce him to me when he enters the story and I need to get to know him.

The premise and plot is good, and I'm interested to know what happens to the girls on holiday. But I think the opening is too slack.

A reader assumes that identifying with a named character is important to help them understand the plot as it develops, and so I found myself reading this three times to help me slot everyone into some sort of family tree. Subsequently I haven't really profiled or related to anyone. I personally think you need to re-think your opening. Maybe shave it to feature just the three girls, the mother and brother. Keep it tight.

This is just my personal view, I'm no expert I'm just telling you what I think.

Good luck with this.

Mallie wrote 21 days ago

Opening pitch....the word 'change' and 'changes' sounds repetitive I would replace one. I would delete the line 'professionals they are both doing well' because you then go on to tell me what their professions are. Either tell me that they are professionals and leave it at that, or tell me what they do.

I'm going to be brutally honest. Your first chapter didn't work for me at all. I've totally lost the plot. You have
Dimitri, Georgina, Mr Marconi, Cousin Peter, Christina, Sophia, Mum, Roulla, Mrs Bernly, Uncle Kyriaco, Katharina, Uncle Theo and Aunt Thelma . . .And as if that's not confusing enough you've done little to nothing to help me visualise any of these characters. If a characters presence is not meaningful in the initial stages then introduce them later, for example Mr Marconi, do I really need a rundown on his vegetable patch in the middle of the main characters telephone call ? I want the dialogue between the characters to bounce off each other, to keep me interested. I don't care about the neighbours garden at this point. And if cousin Peter is not coming to the birthday party, then why mention him. Introduce him to me when he enters the story and I need to get to know him.

The premise and plot is good, and I'm interested to know what happens to the girls on holiday. But I think the opening is too slack.

A reader assumes that identifying with a named character is important to help them understand the plot as it develops, and so I found myself reading this three times to help me slot everyone into some sort of family tree. Subsequently I haven't really profiled or related to anyone. I personally think you need to re-think your opening. Maybe shave it to feature just the three girls, the mother and brother. Keep it tight.

This is just my personal view, I'm no expert I'm just telling you what I think.

Good luck with this.

Maria Constantine wrote 35 days ago

Happy to shed some light. :-)

It's a strange feeling when you read through a book and remember conversations you've had with your female cousins that never really made sense.

Well, now they do!

Thanks!

KAlexopoulos wrote 36 days ago

It's a strange feeling when you read through a book and remember conversations you've had with your female cousins that never really made sense.

Well, now they do!

Thanks!

Christine May wrote 84 days ago

Maria,
I have read two of your chapters. Delightful! The party, the food, the family, how things used to be. How things still should be, and hopefully will be again. That is real living.
You have a great talent for pulling the reader into the life af a Greek family.
Look forward to reading more.
Christine

MC Storm wrote 87 days ago

although I've only read 2 chapters i thoroughly enjoyed it. The battle over the washroom brings back fond memories when a house had but one bathroom. I also picked up how mother treats the differently than she does with the girls. All in all well done!
MC
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Seringapatam wrote 102 days ago

Maria. what a nice read for my last book for the day to review. Its a strong read and one I found really really buried in. I struggle with books that arent my genre as a rule, but this was no problem. I have sussed out why,,,,A brilliant story, a great descriptive voice that not only rolls of your tongue and onto the page, but also the flow that matches it. You balance the two so well. Mix that with the correct pace of the book and you have a brilliant MS. I loved it and so well done. You are nearly there now like me so I am going to be watching this all the way. It gets big stars from me.
Sean Connolly. British Army on the Rampage. (B.A.O.R) Please consider me for a read or watch list wont you?? Many thanks. Sean

LCF Quartet wrote 106 days ago

Hi Maria,
After only having read the first three chapters of Georgina's family, I can easily say that you have a personal style when it comes to tell a story. I liked the dialogue parts and you have balanced your manuscript with sufficient description without being wordy.

I haven't noticed any glaring issues with grammar, punctuation or syntax so far, and I believe this story will be a favorite read among the genre's enthusiasts.

Highly starred for character development and personal writing style,
Best wishes,
Lucette- Ten Deep Footprints

D. S. Hale wrote 108 days ago

I love the three unmarried sisters---and they're greek! all the better! It makes me think of that popular greek movie that came out a couple of years ago. Your writing is smooth and carefree, and without any errors that I saw---great editing! I love the ladies, and am hoping they find the love they deserve! Great job creating well rounded characters. Gave you high stars and put you on my WL! I'm going to watch you climb the charts, girl!

sincerely,

Donna
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Lourdes wrote 112 days ago

Maria,
Memories of one of one of my favourite movies echoed in my mind, as I read the first two chapters of this fabulous story. I could picture Gina's birth day as she walked through the house dealing with her sisters and brother while trying to come to terms with the fact that she was turning thirty. Amusingly enough, that's the one birthday that left me with similar feelings, as if my youth was over and middle age was setting in. I've grown much older since then, but turning thirty will always be one of my now fondest birthdays.
A pleasure to read, high starred and WLed.
Maria
ThePath to Survival

Lourdes wrote 112 days ago

Maria,
Memories of one of one of my favourite movies echoed in my mind, as I read the first two chapters of this fabulous story. I could picture Gina's birth day as she walked through the house dealing with her sisters and brother while trying to come to terms with the fact that she was turning thirty. Amusingly enough, that's the one birthday that left me with similar feelings, as if my youth was over and middle age was setting in. I've grown much older since then, but turning thirty will always be one of my now fondest birthdays.
A pleasure to read, high starred and WLed.
Maria
A Path to Survival

Padmavathi wrote 120 days ago

I should say " There is a Georgina in every household in every country, adjusting, accommodating..." . I felt as if I am rewinding life's experiences, rather than reading a book. Highly starred and backed with pleasure.

padmavathi

CATHERINE SHAW wrote 121 days ago

I am at a point where I am basically looking at books that my friends are reading on my news feed, because so many pop up that I would otherwise, probably miss. Some are not my cup of tea, but your story is remarkable. I love the feel of family and of course there is hardly a family without a tale, a tryst or a secret. Childhood, adolescence and growing in general is imperative to what shapes us, which I have become aware of in more recent years. This is an amazing example, in your story of what influences youngsters and I give your book the highest stars.

Truth One Note In wrote 129 days ago

Smooth as silk writing.
The characters are very well developed with their own quirks.
The story isn't completely my thing, but the skill of writing is so easy that I was lost in it's depth.
There were no flaws as far as I could see, but then I was enjoying your story.
I think in the Christian book market this would do very well. It is a bit like Karen Kingsbury, but yours is more uplifting. :)
Toni

Jaclyn Aurore wrote 135 days ago

in a very scary way, this could be my life... this could be my story...

i have the same siblings... though mine are far different and the age ranges are quite stretched... but ya... i could be your MC... same age... same troubles... same tears...

well done!

Jaclyn x
It Never Happened

Dianna Lanser wrote 140 days ago

CLF Review

Hi Maria,

I am enjoying your book so much. You have done a wonderful job bringing your characters to life. Through natural sounding conversations and authentic inward thoughts I’ve picked up interesting details about the Andreou family, some of which include their clothing preferences, the size of heirloom potted plants, and telling childhood memories. They all combine to show the peculiar family dynamics and expectations that the Andreaou siblings know as loving and normal.

You’ve built your story upon believable events and that’s what makes this so enjoyable and addicting. I can easily place myself within each scene and I find myself hoping along with Katherina and Georgina that one of these days, life is going to be surprisingly different.

I love how you introduce the male counterparts, leading the reader along with optimistic expectation. And then Petra conveniently gets food poisoning. How perfect! And Marcus seems jealous at the mention of Dimitri’s name. Very telling -- I mean showing. :-)

Maria, I’m so impress with your writing. You use great humor as well as some wonderfully creative figurative language. You also have done well to fix up the head-hopping. I did notice at the end of chapter five you bordered on jumping into Marcus’ thoughts when you were describing Georgina’s hair. But other than that, I think you’ve got it!

I’ll be back to read more and I’ve bumped my five stars to six. :-)

Dianna

David Olawoyin wrote 142 days ago

Christian Lit Forum Review:

An interesting and inviting concept. There’s an aura about the title that rouses the curiosity of the reader. Coming to the book itself, the writing is top shelf – good work. Evidently, a lot of painstaking work has gone into it. It shows promise and I can imagine it going places.

From how much I’ve read, there’s not much to pick on, save to say that you could make the book even better by watching out for and tweaking those spots that sound academic rather than literary. I hope you understand what I mean. Take for instance where you write “unlike her sisters, perceptiveness was not Dimitri’s strong point.” To me, that sounds a bit like a high school teacher. Think I would rather write “it was unlike Dimitiri to be perceptive, as her sisters were.” I mean, let the book sing some more.

Having said that, I would add that the pitch can do with some honing to strengthen the impact. I suggest that you tighten the prose and focus on the core of the book. At the moment, it seems to be going too many ways and the prose is a bit loose. Remember, the pitch is not so much about giving away the plot of the story, but highlighting the concept and direction, rousing curiosity, and drawing in the reader. Here, too, remember to sing some more.

All said: nice work and wishing you God’s blessings.

Kerrie Price wrote 146 days ago

CLF Review. A wonderful, richly descriptive glimpse into the life of a Greek family. The hop of finding out who Georgina will marry keeps the reader turning pages, and the relationships of her siblings add interest. Beautifully written, with well-defined characters. The conversational tone and pace make it a comfortable read.

Just one correction needed, which I found in ch.6. "You never phoned in the morning, usually you phone in the morning, she accused."

KMac23 wrote 148 days ago

CLF and CCRG Review for Georgina’s Family

This is a warm, rich story of family traditions and values colliding with the modern world. Georgina wishes to respect her mother and father, and yet feels trapped by their duty to find her a husband through ‘arranged marriages’. Her mother seeks to find husbands for her ‘aging’ daughters, and can be a bit aggressive for the girl’s tastes. I get the feeling that this is a very close-knit family, yet there is some strain in the relationships most families deal with.

The plot is well developed with multiple story lines. Not only is Georgina feeling smothered by well-meaning relatives and their unsuccessful attempts to marry her off, Katherina is also uncomfortable in love due to some past experience where she was hurt, and Dimitri is playing the field with women, unable to settle down.

The mother in this story is an absolutely precious character, looking at the prospective men’s hand size and how much hair they have on their heads as reason for their suitability, sewing up the holes in the jeans without asking, etc. She is the consummate loving, yet meddling mother, with high hopes for her children.

This is the second time I’ve read through this story and enjoyed it just as much or more this time through. This family feels very comfortable and real. The plot is fun with bits of romantic tension in the mix. I gave this story high stars the first time I read it, and still feel the same. I enjoyed the read very much.

Kara
A Gate Called Beautiful

A couple edits:
Ch. 4
‘What they find important…and what I regard as important are not usually the same… and the older (I) get, they less they look into it.
‘I don’t want him to feel I’m (pressuring) him into anything.’

Bart Jahn wrote 149 days ago

Maria...this is my CLF review.

I read this book 5 months ago, and did a CLF and CCRG critique then...way ahead of time...but the book caught my interest, I read it, and liked it very much. Georgina's Family has been on my watchlist and bookshelf ever since.

Since then you have added two more chapters, and did some "point-of-view" revisions. I wish I had an English-studies background, and could offer some helpful writing suggestions and comments. For a book of this type my perspective is only as an avid reader and as a Christian on the two Christian writers forums. As such I can say that I enjoyed this book very much...my only complaint is that I would like to read the entire book and see how all of this potential romance and Greek culture works itself out.

I think Maria has done a wonderful job of painting an interesting, true, and insightful portrait of life. The characters are very real...these are people we know or would like to know in real life. The cultural influences are eye-opening in that they reveal one particular social approach to the age-old female problem of trying to find a "good man," following the Greek model of arranged introductions. This creates the conflict of the story between the imperitive to maintain the purity of Greek culture through intermarriage between Greeks, and the very practical reality that there are very suitable men out there as potential candidates for marriage who are not Greek! Maria writes with humor, depth, and a high quality of literary art that makes the book a fascinating read.

I like the fact that this is a dedicated Christian author writing about the real-life issues of family, romance, and culture. The notion from our modern skeptical society that Christians use God as a crutch is way off-base. If we will faithfully follow Jesus, if anything God will lead us right into the middle of the most honest and clear-sighted evaluation of ourselves and of life. What I admire so much about Maria's book is that it takes us into Georgina's world in a clean-cut, elevated, yet deeply insightful and honest way. This is good storytelling, good writing, and in my opinion a good worldview to bring to writing fiction. God bless you. Bart Jahn.

Keiran Proffer wrote 151 days ago

CLF review:

Maria,

I've read the first three chapters and think this is definitely a woman's book, very much based on the relations between the sisters and the mother in Georgina's family. It is obvious that the women commentators like your work. I prefer action, so I am not really qualified to comment. I did make some notes: see below.

Generally your style is good, and did not intrude on the story. Not true of all the books I have read! Your main fault is to over-state things: too many unneeded adjectives, labouring the emotional states, when a hint will do, explaining everything, when the reader could see it for him or herself, or did not even need to know.

Chap 1:
1. Change from "Wrapped in...she rushed past" to "She rushed past, wrapped..." The rushing follows from the previous sentence.
2. Over-use of adjectives breaks the action: Do we need to know that the carpet was floral patterned? Or that the bulb had a mint-green shade? General rule: Add adjectives when they contribute to the main point of the sentence, otherwise leave out.
3. "fully booked me" add comma.
4. The conversation between the 3 sisters seemed a little forced to me. They were telling each other things they already knew. Can it be trimmed a bit, while still letting the reader know what is going on?
5. K. with he mother in the bathroom: K had said she was going to tidy it without any sign of annoyance or resignation, then gets exasperated. Bring in the annoyance earlier.
6. Generally the family seem to overreact to situations they would be used to by now. "Resentment rushed up G's chest.."; "The colour seeped through every vessel and artery...". I think you are over-doing it. It is less dramatic, but in reality the family would have settled down to a more dull resentment. In chap 2 "Mario's eyes narrowed into slits": again slightly over-doing the reaction. "Narrowed slightly" would have been better. (N.B. I am not Greek, but an Englishman, and we don't behave like that. Make allowances.)
7. "penetrating as a laser" is enough; no need to add "boring...surgery".

Chap 2:
No further comments.

Chap 3:
1. Again conversations seem to be going on too long with not much being said. E.g. Between G and Bill, and G and Darsham. Not quite realistic.
2. If D's hair is too short, why does it fall in his face? Too long surely?

PTingen wrote 154 days ago

CLF and CCRG review:

Maria,

I just read the first 3 chapters of your wondertful book. I'm sorry that I can't offer much in the way of critique or suggestions. Your character descriptions are great and it's easy for the reader to visualize the scenes with this delightful family. Love the humor! Also, great job with showing the accents through the spelling and word choices. That would seem to be very difficult to do but it's very effective - well done!

Every blessing to you!

Patti

James Workman wrote 159 days ago

Maria--For CLF--I enjoyed chapter 1, but now my dog is insisting on a walk. Georgina's big Greek birthday party is looking eventful--judging by the characters who are taking shape.

A couple of thoughts. I feel that the sentence: "It was time to get ready for her thirtieth birthday party...." should be broken into two. And the word "benefit" doesn't seem quite right here unless you mean that her mother made this plan for some special good purpose. Maybe I will discover that as I read on.

"The cloak of I'm doing just fine..." is great.

With the uneven English of the mother, I would love to read some Greek word of exclamation. And surely we will hear some of that at the party.

I'll be back.

Jim

evermoore wrote 173 days ago

Maria...There are books one reads and soon forgets...or wishes they hadn't wasted the time reading it. Yours is definitely not one of those. I loved the way you opened with a family scene that is so realistic. I felt for Dimitri, having three sisters to battle for a chance in the bathroom...and the natural banter between siblings is dead on. I found myself thinking of them long after I finished reading...you have such an easy flow as you share their lives. If they lived next door to me, I'd be among them often. You've come up with a rich tale of family...the ups and downs and the things kept to themselves until the time comes for sharing. I'd already given you six stars for I'd started this book earlier....and I knew I'd be back. I'm back to say I hope you write a sequel. Beautiful...really.
God bless...
Linda

Patty Apostolides wrote 184 days ago

Hi Maria,

I read all the chapters and enjoyed this delightful story about a Greek family with three daughters and a son. Being a Greek, I felt the story was written in an authentic manner and displayed the family environment accurately. The character descriptions were superb and several funny moments were priceless.

The pace is quick and the story flows well, focusing primarily on Georgina and Katherine, the two eldest daughters. The story begins with Georgina celebrating her thirtieth birthday with family. There is lots of gaiety and activity in the background, reminding me of a Frank Capra style movie. The emphasis on Georgina getting married has made her tense on the subject yet she is tired of her mundane life as a teacher. When she meets Jake, an old friend while swimming, her feelings for him change subtly. She is now seeing him in a different light and he appears interested in her. I sense a love interest forming here.

Katherine works in the insurance industry and her job requires her to travel. She meets a handsome colleague Markus and it appears he is interested in her. He joins her on the trip and they bond during the airplane ride when she becomes ill and rests her head on his shoulder. She hesitates with him because her family is arranging for her to meet a Greek man and she does not want to lead him on.

It is apparent that both girls are meeting non-Greeks who seem to be interested in them, while their parents are busy with parties and dinners trying to match them with Greek men. I sense that there will be conflict if the two women continue seeing their love interests, and eventually make their feelings known to their
family.


Suggestion/Nitpicks:
One that stood out in my mind was the pacing. At times I felt you had packed too much material into one chapter. I had been told that it is not necessary to write every little detail that a person does, as if we are watching a movie.

Also, by starting the first chapter with a birthday party at times felt overwhelming as I tried to keep track of all the characters in it.

I gave it six stars and deserves to make the Editor's Desk! Will back also.

Best,
Patty
The Greek Maiden and the English Lord

Blancherose wrote 186 days ago

Maria, This is a wonderful book and I can see your characters come to life. I lived in Toronto in a Greek neighborhood for a few years and the people are wonderful, like your story, very full of life and celebrate it that way.
The way you described family meetings, food and people in general really made you story come to life. the only suggestion i might have is that you narrate the quirks of speaking English for Greek families so readers don't think they are errors. I did catch on to that after the first page or so but it might lend to an easier read?
Good Work, high stars
Blessings Roslyn
"I Am" Through the Ages, for your seeking heart
Scribe-Lings, for your child like heart

Patricia Laster wrote 193 days ago

I gave myself the gift of an afternoon of pleasure reading. Even though this is the second time I've read your book, I enjoyed it even more than the first time. There was no confusion about characters during this reading - either they stuck in my mind from the first reading or you've done some polishing and identified them better. This is unusually good work - well written, full of life, wonderful characters. I love character-driven stories and this one is perfect for me. This will eventually go on my bookshelf. Just hang in there because, as good as this book is, it's bound to climb the ranks again. Be sure to keep reviewing other's works and they will, hopefully, return the read (in most cases) and anyone who reads this book is going to rate it highly.

Shelby Z. wrote 200 days ago

Georgina's Family by Maria Constantine
Such a well designed book and story.
Everything about the plot and characters will draw you through the book.
The writing is smooth and the plot is captivating.
You will find few errors in such a wonderful book.
I enjoyed this book and Maria's skill at writing so much. I hope you will too.

Shelby Z./Driving Winds

Charlotte12 wrote 216 days ago

Hi!
I liked chapter one a lot. The writing is very smooth and easy to read, and the characters are well described so that I could picture every one of them. Gina's emotional state is clear and it carries through the entire chapter, eventhough we meet many different people and situations as we wind our way through to its end. There is also a good mix of dialogue to text.

Great start! Will star and back when I get a chance to shuffle my shelf. :)

Dyane
The Purple Morrow

snave wrote 226 days ago

Great descriptive writing at its best. You have the ability to craft your words to life which brings with it a reality that draws the reader into the story. The characters I suspect must have been modelled on people you have met in some way as they are so perfectly moulded and spring to life as I read more and more.
I wish you all the luck you deserve with this fantastic read.
Andy

Keith Gilbey wrote 228 days ago

Maria,

A lovely story. Soft, gentle - looking forward to reading some more over the coming week.

keith
Peppermint

Verse_Artiste wrote 229 days ago

This is a charming and intriguing story. Your characters are warm and realistic and you give lots of insight into the mind of your MC. I look forward to reading on and maybe commenting further.
Lilian.

faith rose wrote 275 days ago

Dear Maria,

I just wanted to stop by and let you know how much I love the line in your long pitch that encompasses Georgina's thoughts... "I am alive, but not living." Wow. You have the ability to say so much in very few words. I love that. :)

~Faith

faith rose wrote 281 days ago

Dear Maria,

Just stopped by for another peek at chapter two. Your writing is beautiful! I love your sensory images and rich characterization. With Uncle Theo and his "prickly kiss" to Aunt Thelma's sweet "envelope padded with crisp notes," you have given the reader so much to adore in these deeply authentic people. I'm loving it....still!

All the very best,
Faith Rose
Now To Him

Sara Stinson wrote 285 days ago

Maria,
What a delightful story about a Greek family coming together for a party. The description of the characters and names you have given them were perfect for your story. What drama you twined into the story to build the plot. The reading was easy and flowed nicely. I loved the mother in the story and her authentic voice. I am glad I had the chance to read this enjoyable book!
Excellent!
Best wishes,
Sara Stinson
Finger Bones

TDonna wrote 288 days ago

This is totally delightful! It reminded me of my family. Wonderful flow, you went right into the story, the characters came to life one by one. You made me smile and shake my head how mom treats the son differently just because he's a son. Great paragraph that starts with "Katherine remembered the months leading to . . ." I almost wanted that to be the intro para, because it pulled me right to the character's mind -- it's where you connected me to your character. And then I laughed aloud at not 30 candles, but 30 guys. The descriptions were great. When she sees her father in the garden balancing on wood planks, I saw my own dad in that image. Absolutely a delightful read, easy flowing, interesting insight into the family. It resonated with me, including some of the expressions, like "your words in God's ear." Beautiful! I loved it, it was such an enjoyable read. I wish I had time for more, but I will return, Maria. Excellent!
Donna
No Kiss Good-bye

KMac23 wrote 288 days ago

I've read the first couple chapters, and am truly enjoying this story and the type of genre. I am interested to find out what the secret is that Georgina is carrying around with her and why it is so painful to her that she doesn't want to reveal it to anyone. I think the characters are realistic. For some odd reason, I love the name 'Mr. Macaroni', the neighbor next door. The mother is adorable with her Greek accent and the things she keeps telling everyone. I'm not seeing errors in your text and think this is very well-written!

Kara
A Gate Called Beautiful

MayaThomson wrote 292 days ago

This is such an engaging read. I found it very difficult to put down once I was started. The characters are all very warm and I love the ease of your writing when describing the family setup. Your writing is superb and thoroughly absorbing. The pace of the story is just right and I love your front cover picture.
Well done and good luck with this.
Regards
Maya
"Away With The Mountains"

Bart Jahn wrote 300 days ago

Dear Maria...this is my CCRG and CLF reviews (way ahead of time but I will look again at your book when it comes time in CLF...hopefully more will be uploaded then...or better yet published). I won't post this in the CLF thread because it is so out ahead of time, but I will mention it in the CCRG thread.

First of all, I absolutely love this book. The quality of writing on Authonomy is so incredibly high. I read chapters 1 and 2, then read chapters 3 through 6 in one sitting because I could not put it down. Had to read the next chapter to see what would happen next. Wish the whole book was here on Authonomy.

I do not think this book falls within a women's literature category. It has broad universal appeal that I think would be of interest to adult men and women of all ages. I did not previously know anything about Greek family culture. I can see some wonderful positives to it but some negative restrictions as well. That is part of the appeal of the book...you take me into an interesting world that is foreign to my Southern California diluted German/Scottish/English/Norwegian/American roots. Your characters, dialogue, and plot are first-rate, and the story has a very wholesome feel to it but with a lot of depth to consider in the issues covered.

I like the title and the book cover. It reminded me of books I see in the "recent fiction" display at my local Barnes & Noble bookstore showing current New York Times bestsellers. I have no idea why this book is at 310 on Authonomy...sometimes this system is hard to figure. Should be in the single-digit teens heading for the ED. I don't know the ending to the story, but based upon the smoothness of your writing and the way it pulled me into the story, I can see this book becoming very successful with a word-of-mouth popular support among general readers. Georgina's Family is currently on my watchlist, and on my bookshelf in the near future, as books now on my bookshelf make it to the ED. Congratulations on an excellent book, thanks for the very pleasant read, and God bless you. Bart Jahn.

Lenny Banks wrote 301 days ago

Hi Maria, I read chapter 4. This is not my usual kind of read, I walways wondered what young ladies were talking about when they were socialising, thanks for sharing it with everyone. I found the flow of the story was very smooth and relaxing, the characters were believable and your descriptiosn of the flowers wonderful. I found myself aware you used 'had' a lot in the narator voice. Someone told me sometimes you don't even need the word, but 'she had' easily moves to 'she'd' and doesn't devalue the work. Hope you are not offended.
An excellent story and window into someone's life.

Kindest Regards and Best Wishes
Lenny Banks - Tide and Time: At The Rock.
I would appreciate a return read, if you are able to find the time.

Bart Jahn wrote 303 days ago

Hello Maria...I have read the first two chapters of your book and really like it. The writing is so smooth and effortless that I feel like I am part of the family and mixing-in at the birthday party. The food sounds great. One of the nice things about Authonomy is that it has allowed me to become exposed to genres I might not come in contact with. Your book pulled me into the story and the characters immediately. Even though I have no space on my bookshelf right now, I would like to add yours in the future after some of my current choices make it to the ED. Looking forward to reading some more tomorrow. Bart Jahn

Elizabeth Kathleen wrote 303 days ago

Maria I'm glad I got to read this. You've done a great job of making your characters real. You've woven a wonderful story as well! I enjoyed it. Thank you for using the skills God blessed you with to entertain those who will read it.
God bless you!!!
Elizableth Kathleen
"If Children Are Cheaper by the Dozen, Can I Get a Discount on Six?"

AudreyB wrote 305 days ago

I am perfectly awful at spamming. I stopped by to ask you to have a look at my book, but when I saw some of the comments on yours I couldn’t resist.

Is it possible that all the Old World moms are alike? My mom picked up after my brother exactly the same way Christina picks up after Dimitri! I also chuckled at the way the vacuum had been fixed; for about twenty years the toilet in my mother’s bathroom was flushed with the pull from some old drapes after he’d repaired the broken handle. And my mother cares more for her plants than for me.

The way you’ve written this first chapter gives the reader a feel for the chaos of living with a large family in small quarters. I love they way they tease one another. As the party begins the sense of chaos or ‘busy-ness’ continues. It helps to emphasize Georgina’s feeling of dissatisfaction.

I finished two chapters and found the whole story to be a delight. You present the numerous characters well, each with a small vignette, so I wasn’t once confused by the many players. I like the way you did that.

I am often accompanied by my English-teacher alter-ego, The Grammar Hag. She sometimes finds things she doesn’t like.

For example, she wonders about the wording “…her aging singleness was not something her parents had bargained on.” It’s awkward. What about, “…her aging singleness gave her parents hives.” OK, that’s dumb, but structurally better: her aging singleness, a verb, a description.

Other than that, she just mumbled and went away.

Hope you see this continue to rise!
~AudreyB
Forgiveness Fits

Patricia Laster wrote 307 days ago

This is a lovely family story made up of a strong plot, interesting characters, and good food. The imagery of the food is so good that I broke my reading up into two settings in order to go to a local Greek restaurant - wow, was that good! smile. Seriously, you do an awesome job of describing a family party: all the anticipation, tension, good times, and great food that were a part of it.

Wonderful characters in Sophia, youngest sister; Georgina, middle sister; Katherine, eldest sister; Dimitri, brother spoiled by all the women in the family, and the mother, Christina. Great imagery of many aspects of the life of this family: shared meals, "broxenia" or "the Greek version of a blind date with marriage being the expectation." (I laughed out loud at that). Beyond the family, I enjoyed the description of Georgina's day at school - as the teacher. It reminded me a lot of my own public school teaching days.

I have no suggestions for your story. I was going to make some grammatical suggestions until I realized that you were keeping the dialogue authentic and natural for a second-language speaker which only makes the story more charming. As a reader, the only suggestion I have is that you identify your characters a bit more as you introduce them. I was a little confused about one or two of them - but it soon became clear who they were, so really there's no problem.

Vivid story of the glorious, colorful, full-of-life, participants in a Greek family drama. This is a delightful, charming look at a warm, loving domestic culture and customs with which most of us are unfamiliar. Best wishes for the success of your lovely book. :-) Pat Many stars

QuinnYA wrote 311 days ago

This is a really fun, easy to read book! I love the family dynamics, it felt so real. Your interactions and dialogue certainly bring this story to life. The pacing is nice, it kept me interested and reading. There wasn't anything to stumble on. I try to find something to critique or at least give advice on in the first couple chapters but nothing jumped out at me. I'm certainly going to keep this close to my shelf and back it when I have a chance. I felt this story, it wasn't just a read. Thanks for that.

Missy

Stephanie Mortimer wrote 319 days ago

So sorry it has taken me so long to get to this read swap!

I instantly warmed to Georgina, she's a very likeable main character. I could relate to being nearly thirty something and single, I dodged questions about the 'b' word for years.

You have an easy way with words, and your story flows effortlessly, with fabulous descriptive writing, and great dialogue.

I love the line ' her mind was like an enormous rug with lots of things swept under it and now was not the time for spring cleaning.'

Really enjoyed reading Georgina's family. I will definitely be back to read the last few chapters. On my watch list and highly starred.

Stephanie - Feathers

scargirl wrote 323 days ago

women will identify with this. great cover. exceptional chick lit....
j
what every woman should know

Maria Constantine wrote 325 days ago

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on 'Georgina's Family'. There will appear to be grammatical errors when Christina (the mother) speaks; this reflects the fact that it is not her first language and she does not have an accurate command of the english language. It did feel strange when I was writing it and I had to stop myself from correcting her!

Interesting storyline and very well written. I haven't read many on here with so few mistakes. good writing. good premise. Reminds me of Big Fat Greek Wedding in a way...
Any girl who have Demitri will be very lucky; I suggest changing to any girl who'll have....

DWBrown wrote 325 days ago


Interesting storyline and very well written. I haven't read many on here with so few mistakes. good writing. good premise. Reminds me of Big Fat Greek Wedding in a way...
Any girl who have Demitri will be very lucky; I suggest changing to any girl who'll have....

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