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date submitted 22.12.2011
date updated 10.01.2013
genres: Fiction, Literary Fiction, Thriller...
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Posthuman

Chavonne Brown

In 2100, humanity will be destroyed. In 2100, humanity will be reborn, the most fortunate will retain their sanity.

 

Marcus Sewell had a wife and child, he had friends, he had a loving father that adored his only son's family.

The Flash brought the Ragnarok Virus, and with that his world ended. Marcus lost everything he ever knew, he could not bare to stay in a place where his dreams had died. He moved to the other side of America, he lives a life without real friends and where he has not spoken to what remains of his family in years.

In 2100, Providence comes to America, bringing with them the hope for a tomorrow not so filled with desperation. Where everyone else sees a beacon to lead them out of the darkness, Marcus sees a mysterious power whose highest workings are shrouded in secrecy. He enlists with them, to find out for himself what is in the belly of this smiling beast.

The feral tribes and mindless necrophids which haunt the edges of this fragile world will turn out to be the smallest challenge, hiding the much more immense task of deciphering Providence.

Marcus must be careful to not lose himself; in a world like this, his principles are all he has.

 
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Chapter Twenty-four

Legacy stood in a huge, white space; he stared up at one of the room's cameras. He actually sensed a presence so similar to his that it gave him pause, though he did not feel an affinity, he felt fear, the power that watched him was what he hoped to never become: merciless.

The door opened and Barnes strode into the room, accompanied by several DIGA agents suited up in heavy ballistic vests and caged Kevlar helmets (reminiscent of those used for hockey); each man, Barnes included carried an extendible electroshock batons – shock prods. As Barnes strode further into the room, he activated his shock prod, the room filled with agents who began to activate their prods. Legacy counted fifteen men with his teacher, he knew what was about to happen but did not want it to happen.

“Legacy, your combat imprints held well against one opponent. I need to see you face multiple hostiles,” explained Barnes.

“I don't know what to do father. What am I supposed to do? I don't know how to fight these people,” Legacy spoke directly to Barnes, the doctor winced when the boy called him father, which was something they had not been able to work out of his student.

“It's there, inside your mind, what you need to beat them. You just need to be given the chance...Begin,” Barnes gestured at his protégée with the prod. Two men charged at Legacy, he effortlessly dodged their swipes and jabs – perhaps this would not be as hard as he had anticipated. A third man joined them; Legacy ducked under the swing of a prod but did not watch the attacker on his left. Searing pain shot through his side and he fumbled, that minor loss of balance was all another agent needed to get him in the solar plexus. He lashed out and caught that man on the jaw but he stumbled backwards, desperate to put space between himself and the agents. “Legacy, you were there for a moment, all you have to do is let instinct take over. I know your mind is a powerful weapon, you must allow it to act without interfering or thinking about the pain you will experience if you fail. You won't fail – trust me, trust yourself,” instructed the doctor, Legacy's pain was awful to watch.

The psychic listened to the words of his creator and took them to heart, let instinct take over and trust his father's counsel. He drew himself up to his full height and waited for the next round. This time, four men thundered at him. The fight was peculiar when he stopped fixating on the cost of failure, the world slowed down and it was as if he was on auto-pilot. A prod sailed towards his forehead, he caught the assailant's wrist and easily flipped the man over his shoulder but still managed to wrest the prod from him. He jabbed the next man in the gut and caught the agent's falling prod. The prod was tossed over the fitting agent's collapsing body and into chest of the man to his left. Legacy swung around in time to duck, the last man's prod swiped at the air above him. Legacy barged the man in the gut with shoulder then delivered a satisfying uppercut.

Legacy looked up and smiled at Barnes, the doctor smiled back and then ordered five men to assault the psychic.

Legacy leapt into the air and kicked a man in the head; he turned mid-air and closed his thighs around the back of another agent's neck. He somersaulted backwards, aided by his telekinesis, and slammed the man beneath him into the ground. The psychic sprang up from his crouched position above the unconscious man; he scissor kicked another agent in the stomach and face. He sensed another attacker approach, and swept the man's legs from under him then span around to fire a tightly wound coil of force into his gut. The floor beneath the agent cracked. He levitated the man and launched him at his final ally. Both men crashed into the far wall.

Barnes did not give any warning for this bout of seven versus one. He joined in the charge as the last agent passed him. The results of this were fascinating; Legacy had really engaged every aspect of those powers.

Legacy swatted aside two men with a motion of his hand, this time into the opposite wall to the one already plastered with his attackers. He motioned his arms inwards and two more men were yanked towards him as if dragged by an unseen rope. When they were about two feet away from him, Legacy threw his arms up and the pair was blasted into the ceiling. The agents to either side of Barnes were plucked away from him and towards Legacy. The boy span them three times around him in a circle behind before he launched them at the walls to his left and right. Barnes was close enough to lunge at his student. The doctor's arm was stuck; he had connected with something solid in the air, an invisible barrier that Legacy had thrown up when he had spotted this father out of the corner of his eye. Worse still, the prod was still discharging charge but it did so backwards, stuck in a feedback loop. The doctor shocked himself over and over again for about five seconds before Legacy channelled all of the energy in the barrier down the prod. The prod exploded with more power than it should have been capable of and Barnes was flung upwards.

When the doctor stopped skidding along the ground, Legacy went over to him and offered his father a hand. Barnes took it and hauled himself up off the ground. He was filled with pride as he surveyed the carnage before him, as he listened to the pained breaths of injured men; Legacy was so much better than he could ever have imagined. “You see, all you have to do is let instinct take over,” Barnes patted Legacy on the back, an action which would not help teach Legacy that he was not in fact his father.

`“No, I also I had to trust you, remember?” replied Legacy, voice devoid of any guile or sarcasm. Barnes' hand had still not left his student's back; he may very well have hugged his protégée if they were not being observed. Barnes knew then that he could never get Legacy to stop calling him father now.

Epoch watched the entire delightful scene unfold via video link from his vantage point, high up in a state-of-the-art office at the centre of London's beating heart. He had just witnessed all of his hopes for humanity play out in moments. Emmerich smiled.

 

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A month now, he had been here a month and yet the place never ceased to amaze him. The children were the most amazing part about all of this, he was still surprised that every now and then a half-remembered face would appear and tell him how grateful they were that he found them. Marcus had just left such an encounter on the steps of the meeting house where a short Mexican girl had recounted her tale of rescue by the daring Commandant Sewell. Marcus bumped into Ioelu outside of the north-western quad and asked where he could find Philip. Ioelu motioned to the most north-western longhouse and then pointed down. Typical, the doctor was in the lab, Philip never seemed to be away from that lab, and this would be the first time that Marcus had to see him there though.

Marcus stepped behind the teacher's desk in the longhouse and Ioelu pressed a button under the drawer. The entire rectangular area covered by the rug which the desk sat on top of began to smoothly descend. As his surroundings vanished, the earthy colours of the classroom with its wooden furniture dropped out of sight, and was replaced by a world of chrome, steel, whites and a plethora of scientific equipment. “How the hell have you funded all of this?” Marcus was astounded, for an entire month he had been blithely accepting the fact that Philip was always in some laboratory. This was not just some laboratory; this was the nerve centre of the Feral Zone.

Providence-aligned nations need to work up the courage to ask The Providence about funds it extracts. I mean really, how many miscellaneous expenses can one organisation have?” chuckled Ioelu. He led them through the colossal laboratory which covered the entire area beneath the longhouses and the airfield. They looked to have descended about eleven metres down on that lift, which had since risen back up. Everywhere Marcus looked there were people in lab coats and test subjects in suites, this grand laboratory had to be divided into just over a dozen suites. The number of scientists here could clearly not be housed above ground; Marcus considered just how far underground this complex stretched. Ioelu guided him onto what he could only describe as an airport buggy; a couple of them had passed them by loaded up with equipment. The buggy was at the end of a row of identical vehicles inside of an area marked out by a yellow box.

Ioelu reversed the buggy, there was no steering wheel or pedals, you hardly ever saw those any more unless someone insisted on using the manual steering, just a holographic display above the buggy's glass dashboard. “Dr Albion is in Suite 10 with Dr Sefu's team, we should be there soon,” remarked Ioelu. Marcus nodded his head, he only half-listened to the pilot. Instead he absorbed everything he saw with the time he had. People far smarter than him tapped away at hovering screens and glass tablets, squinted at bubbling chemicals, tinkered with complex machines or prodded at advanced weaponry. At fairly regular intervals a buggy would go past, and a group of scientists on board would be busy discussing something too technical for the old soldier to grasp or they would be there to watch over fragile cargo. This was real progress, not the distasteful, morally grey progress that The Providence heralded which needed to start its infancy where no one could see its ugliness. What Marcus saw actually gave him hope for a world he would be sad to leave behind. The buggy slowed to a stop outside Suite 10, and Ioelu waved goodbye to Marcus as the agent hopped off, he said he had a combat class he was supposed to be teaching in ten minutes on the east course.

As Ioelu departed, Philip opened the door to the suite for him, Marcus had no idea what the key codes were for down here. The doctor was in a lab coat, he hadn't seen him wear one in Africa. Philip had always been shorter than most people and had looked much too young to a doctor in Kinshasa, he still did. That was something Marcus had noticed about Philip, he aged extremely well, better than even Judah had. Beyond his friend was the bespectacled and statuesque Dr Nuanua Sefu, and her team of international scientists – this would help to explain where quite a few of those dissidents had ended up. They were all gathered around to watch a student climb into what looked like a huge Van de Graaff generator. The scientists stepped back and several of them held up devices similar to Geiger counters, all around the generator there were chrome tubes on tripods with a screen on the end facing away from the generator and a mesh at the other. “I'd say a quarter of the innovations here are thanks to my light fingers. Though when I lifted this research from the computers of friends and family members, it was theoretical. Here it is, helping to save lives,” Philip smiled broadly and waved at the experiment before them, “Those tubes are being tested out for the first time today; they give a false colour visualisation of free psions.”

“Huh, I saved these kids and you made sure they stayed safe, and neither of us ever knew what the other was doing. That seems...neat,” Marcus shrugged, his attention had moved to the screens on one of the free psion detection tubes. There was nothing there.

“Neat?” puzzled Philip.

“As in, how we seem to be linked. It's neat, in a universal sense. By the way, are they meant to not be doing anything?” Marcus tapped at the screen.

“Give it a second,” was all Philip said in reply. The definite buzz of electronics washed over the room as the door to dome was closed and the generator activated. Suddenly, the counters and tubes sprang to life in a symphony of clicks and beeps. A flood of little blue circles rushed across the tube's screen, Philip faced the mesh away from the generator and behind them the flood was a gentle stream of blue circles. “Those, Marcus, are psions. Those are what make psionics such extraordinary people. They're the reason Providence technology goes mad when it enters the Feral Zone. Free psions mess with the functioning of most electronic devices, these detectors in here are designed to cope with them – but Providence does not have this advantage.

“Passive psionics create huge fields of free psions in a cloud of electrical charge. I think if we sent a stream of psions at a psionic when they're in this concentrated state, they would become active, like Angelene or Subject 324. Try looking at where we are using the map on your SuperCom,” Philip was happiest when he had a complex problem that needed resolution, his first passion had always been physics but his parents had insisted he study medicine; he had had two doctorates before the age of thirty. Marcus started up his SuperCom, and expected to the see the plain desktop. Instead he saw a blank blue screen and heard an irritating whine. Marcus switched off his SuperCom and grinned at Philip, “The Providence will never figure that out, they think the Feral Zone is inhabited by idiots. I'd love to see the look on Morgan's arrogant face if he knew his beloved nanomachine attacks aren't worth shit out here.”

“Take a picture when you find out, I've never liked that man,” said Philip as he swivelled the tube to face the generator again.

“Phil, you need combat training, there's no way in hell I'm letting you go on that mission back to London without it. I'll be your teacher when you aren't busy trying to figure out how to fire psion streams at some poor kid,” joked Marcus, he paused when Philip's face lit up.

“That's it! I've been so blind! Marcus, I could kiss you!” the doctor threw his arms up and everyone in the room thought he was about to shout 'eureka'.

“That'd be really weird, but I appreciate the sentiment,” laughed Marcus.

“You don't understand! ‘Fire psion streams' is particle acceleration! This place has a bunch of particle accelerators we just need another one in here. We've been working with a bloody Van de Graaff and it hadn't once crossed our minds to get another accelerator in. Dr Sefu! Call the other team leaders, we need to borrow someone's particle accelerators,” Philip dashed over to Nuanua and both doctors began to make notes at blinding speed, soon they were joined by the rest of the team, and the chorus of incredulity at their own stupidity rather amused Marcus. He shook his head and laughed as let himself out of Suite 10, he would not get anything out of Philip today that was below dissertation-level physics.

 

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mdws77 wrote 222 days ago

I like your novel very much and hope to read more later. For now, Chapter 1 was all I could read due to time constraints. Overall, you story flows well and you do a very good job of describing your characters. One thing to watch out for are the long sentences and long paragraphs. They seem to take away from the story. I hope this novel goes well for you.
Here are some grammar issues:
Chapter 1:
"-never" -- Starting your story with a dash, even in a quote, seems awkward. I would just go with "I've never".
"out of the ether; he" -- Not sure "ether" is the right word for here. Ether is a gas that can be used to make people unconscience. I would use "out of the heavens. He", or "out of the atmosphere. He". Notice you need to end the sentence there also.
"would allow, he had the ball" -- Period/new sentence after "allow".
"He was determined to not lose to a ten year old boy, he jumped at the home plate, sure he had Will." -- Period/new sentence after "boy". Also, I would reword "sure he had Will". I think you mean "knowing for sure that he had Will".

Neville wrote 287 days ago

Post Human.
By Chavonne Brown.


Good description and a feeling or warmth as the story opens.
George Sewell, son, Marcus and grandson, Will, all enjoying a ball game.
Lovely how you bring out the happiness of this particular scene, it really is nice writing.
We’re brought down to earth by a sudden flash on the horizon—the Ragnarok Virus has landed destroying all within its luminous range.
Very good cover and both pitches draw any potential reader into opening the book.
A most exciting read so far, one that I’ll return to (problems with the site).
Many stars for a brilliant read up to now.
Well done!

Best wishes,

Neville. ‘The Secrets of the Forest –Cosmos 501’ (Series) Book Two.

Tod Schneider wrote 305 days ago

You do a great job establishing setting and characters in the ordinary world in chapter one -- the classic middle American family, easy to root for, and good dialogue that rings true.
Critique-wise I found a few things to nitpick in chapter one as follows:
The paragraph "he was determined to not lose..." was hard for me to follow, not quite clear who was where, and it tended to run on, with too many phrases in one sentence separated just by commas. I'd clarify and break this into smaller pieces.
"but time gets away from him and he still had plenty" was a little awkward, switching tenses.
after the sentence that ends "...why stay here?" I think you can drop "Marcus decided to keep up this vein of discussion" . It's stating the obvious, and its telling when you've already done a perfectly good job showing.
The other thing I noticed was quite a few run on sentences. I'd say look for any sentence with two or more commas and consider making them into multiple sentences. A couple examples: "...excuse to drink this weekend (cut comma, insert period)" and "brighter and brighter (cut comma, insert period.)
Just my opinion of course. These are little things, and the rest of it is really nice writing that rolls along smoothly.Best of luck with this!
Tod
And if you have any interest in children's literature, you are invited to check out my novel, the Lost Wink.
Thanks!
http://authonomy.com/books/40646/the-lost-wink/

Searcher wrote 357 days ago

Chapt 8 ..can't figure out how you did the 1st & 2nd ..nice

Chapt 8 .. 9th para starting Chihuahua looked to be .. etc .. 2nd sentence ...etc ..New York had been given a new lease of (on?) life ..I think should be new lease on life .. (Oops! just found out British say "of life" Americans "on life" per online dictionary ..interesting!

Authonomy Chapt 11 (Book Chapt 9) .. 5th para .. Starting You were stabbed .. etc .. No one expected the rebels to have venoms from foreign snakes to (on) hand

writing is excellent .. just watch using Marcus's name so often .. looking at bottom of Chapt 11 .. Marcus starts off last 3 paras ... 3 in a row on Chapt 10 too. Be back to read more later!

Hi Chavonne, I'm going to go out on a limb here & ignore this if you don't like it. Chapter 1 (Opening-Marcus Sewell) is important. It shows Marcus's family life ...but .. the real story begins next Chapter. People quite often open to the first page & stop if it doesn't appeal to them. What do you think of cutting Chapter 1 down to get to the "guts" of the story quicker. Keep all of it down to Amen brother, I'll drink to that ..etc .. and you need that last paragraph but the four above the last para could be condensed into 2 fairly small ones... I think. Starting with "Come on Will! ...(then skip to next paragraph and keep it all ... next paragraph start with 2nd sentence "The Sewell's headed home after the game so they could get ready for a well deserved victory party. George had the grill going and lazily flipped burgers. Soon Marcus heard the honking bus horn, signaling the arrival of ten incredibly happy young baseball players, followed by several cars of proud parents.

Now all of last paragraph ... He drew Amy close and they both watched ...etc..

(Just a thought & if you don't like it .. don't do it!)

The world as it is now .. Good job! .. only this .."The survivors came in three varieties; for some, death would have been easier."

Chapt 1 .. Only this .. Someone knocked three times at the front door. (period) A few moments ...etc

Chapt 2 .. love that "Gossip spread it's wings and flew all about the streets"

New paragraph? As Marcus understood it, he was Homo sapiens ..etc (you love those big paragraphs lol)
New paragraph? Marcus was still a member of the National Guard ..etc

Your writing is absolutely incredible! Only one thought here .. At times the name Marcus stands out too often. I wonder if that's because you start out lots of sentences with his name. Perhaps if you rearrange "some" (just a few) of the sentences so his name appears later it might help (I do understand you need to say his name so we know who the sentence is referring to.) For instance Chapt 2 .. 2nd para Mayor D'Amico liaised extensively ..etc .. 2nd time you use Marcus was still a member of the National Guard ..etc.. Instead maybe .. "Still a member of the National Guard, Marcus was obliged to be .. etc...

Will read more later ... I think you have an incredible story going! Whew! ..I need to get out a dictionary to keep up with you!

One question?? How do you look cruel in a very special way? Interesting .. made me think! Nice line!

Jane

scargirl wrote 363 days ago

engaging premise here. in the short pitch the last sentence would benefit from a semi-colon, making it stronger.
j
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Kenneth Edward Lim wrote 366 days ago

Chevonne,
What a concept, an apocalyptic event wipes out most of humanity, the suvivors transhumans, and two hostile subspecies. Your protagonist Marcus is faced with major challenges, the latest of wehich is the appearance of another group of morphed humans called "daemons." Your prose is casual and direct, your dialogue clear and unaffected. Thank you for the intriguing read.

Kenneth Edward Lim
The North Korean

Searcher wrote 366 days ago

Wow! Forget everything I said ... Loving it!

Oh yes, that's so much easier to read! Nice job! Now I feel like I'm watching baseball ..! You have really nice word choices ... very descriptive! Your phrases makes the reader feel comfortable and easy to identify with your characters. I love that "a big, dumb smile on his face."

Another suggestion .. This is something I have trouble with too and am currently trying to fix in my book. Be careful using redundant or repetitive words .. extra words slow the story down. At least that's what I've been told & finding it to be true. Unless, of course, it's something you're emphasizing in the story. I don't see it much in your story but occasionally.

For instance, "Sure I will, just listen out for the guy cheering ... etc ... I think if you leave the word "out" out, the sentence will read smoother. Sure I will, just listen for the guy cheering ..etc... but that's just my own personal taste. That sentence may have been a bad example. You may like out there but you get the idea.

Further down in Chapt 1 you have leapt up ... since leapt implies up .. the word "up" is redundant. You don't need it.

Watch your periods too. In that 1st paragraph the 1st sentence should end .. took his dad's suitcase from him. (period) .. new sentence ------> George would never admit it ...etc ...

Just a few thoughts from a novice ... I think it may help polish your story!

I'm off to read a little more of your story!

Jane

Searcher wrote 367 days ago

Hi Chavonne, Your hook caught me! I've glanced at a few different chapters of your story. I think it might be a good idea to break up your larger paragraphs into smaller ones. It would make them easier to read. In your 1st paragraph at the beginning of your book ... I think you could begin a new paragraph with the sentence, .. Will, Marcus' son, bounced up ... etc ...

I don't understand the beginning sentence in your 2nd paragraph .. Marcus found himself stood some .. maybe a missing word? I do that sometimes when I don't like a word ... take it out & sometimes forget to replace it.

I like the story's idea. I just wish your paragraphs weren't so large. It would make it easier for my old eyes to read.

Jane Lawry
The Genealogist: On Holy Ground

scargirl wrote 432 days ago

the pitch needs some work here. you have developed a good base. now make it larger than life instead of reading like a newsclip.
j

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