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rank 3454
word count 25427
date submitted 08.01.2012
date updated 21.04.2012
genres: Fiction, Popular Culture, Comedy
classification: adult
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The So-Called Mr McFeiss

Jack Rigg

Unhinged but endearing dairy-cleaner keeps diary of 2007’s major comings and goings, whilst stumbling towards friendship, love and an understanding of his true identity.

 

Archibald McFeiss is lost in 2007. He keeps a diary of the year to make sense of the times he’s trying to exist in. Archie is an intelligent but bewildered man who spends his days cleaning a crumbling dairy and absorbing the tireless and contradictory output of the media. The latter, combined with his avid reading and what he’s learned from a past life, provide a comical and controversial commentary on an extremely eventful year. .

The diary also chronicles Archie’s relationships with some similarly forlorn, but endearing characters. These include Roger, a 50-year ex-con with a big heart but struggling brain, and their uniquely attractive colleague, Wendy, who recognises a side to Archie others fails to.

With the year progressing, there’s a growing sense of Archie’s past catching up with him. There are thoughts and dreams of familiar and loving faces and an increasing number of apparent strangers asking where they know him from. Even Roger, his faithful and mostly oblivious sidekick, questions Archie’s true identity, calling him the So-Called Mr McFeiss.

As New Year’s Eve approaches, is it possible that the lost diarist of 2007 – Britain’s first 21st Century working class philosopher – is about to be uncovered? .

 
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Lucy Maj wrote 494 days ago

This is very, very funny. Please post more - I think Archie is adorable and mysterious. I am giving it loads of stars based on an assumption that the rest will as good.

beckylou wrote 494 days ago

I agree that this might not be everyone's cup of tea, but I thought it was the funniest thing I've read in ages. Please put more up as I'm keen to find out what's going to happen to Archie.

JLS9000 wrote 503 days ago

First thing to say is this: this is laugh-out-loud funny...and this is from someone who does not read comedic novels. Jonathan Lee suggests that the book doesn't ring true as a genuine diary...and he's right. But why does it have to be a diary anyway? Loads of novels use the first person narrative as a literary conceit: many of which wouldn't really make sense if you deconstructed them. I would just say this is a novel: simple as that.

Having only only read the first three chapters, this might be an unfair criticism - because it might be coming later - but I didn't get enough of Archie as a fleshed-out character. I would have liked insights into his past. I would have also have liked more dialogue. I understand if it was written as a diary, there wouldn't be much dialogue. But I'd go back and rectify that.

But the biggest praise I can give it is simply this: I read all 3 chapters in one sitting and wanted to read on. It also had some interesting insights into that period of history. And I'll say again: it was bloody funny!

If I was a publisher, I wouldn't necessarily see this an international best-seller...but I would certainly take a punt on it considering a lot of the dross that gets published.

Troodle wrote 503 days ago

Laughed out loud through most of this. Mad, mental, extremely funny. Hope the following chapters live up to the first.

Jonathan Lee wrote 511 days ago

I was interested in the premise of this and thus have read though the first ten or so days. Mr McFeiss certainly appears to be a little unhinged. What I did find difficult was that although I was supposed to reading a diary it didn't somehow read like one. I thought that the descriptions used would be too much in depth to be a diary entry. This could be really good and I like the style but i think a decision needs to be made whether its a novel or a diary. Read The Timewaster Diaries for some tips to get it more diary style if it helps. I am not being critical just honest. Have some stars....

Su Dan wrote 516 days ago

great writing, enchanting, and clever. your narrative style is descriptive, and a joy...this is a good book...
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