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rank 5854
word count 60455
date submitted 09.02.2012
date updated 06.03.2012
genres: Fiction, Science Fiction, Fantasy, ...
classification: universal
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Children of Anthea

D. James Hawley

Thousands aboard Anthea are succumbing to a strange new disease. Will a solution be found in time to save them?

 

For 17 generations of man, Anthea, the sixth and smallest of the living bioships to leave mother earth in search of new planets, had been travelling through space without incident. However, now thousands of people are succumbing to an unexplainable disease.

As curious mutations in the plant life of the rear part of the bioship are also discovered, a series of severe quakes begin threatening the structure of the ship itself. While officials struggle with the task of finding solutions, a small group of students working on their term project discover a possible link between the disease and the changes occurring to the plants and the bioship. But, will they be able to help find a solution in time to save Anthea and the population?

The first of a three part series, the 60,000 words of CHILDREN OF ANTHEA will appeal to the Young Adult audience through its detailed new world, while touching on subjects such as telekinesis through mental abilities, spiritual growth, coming of age, evolution and environmentalism.

 
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butterflies, conservation, dolphins, environmental, fantasy, magic, science, science fiction, space, telekinesis, ya, young adult

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EldonRouge wrote 446 days ago

Thank you very much for the feedback! I appreciate it very much and is exactly why I am here.

liberscriptus wrote 467 days ago

Hi James,
I read the introduction and the first chapter of your book, and I think you have an interesting premise here. However, I feel like the story gets bogged down in the details of your universe, which I understand are important but would perhaps be better off being revealed gradually when they become relevant. Or even just waiting another chapter or two - after the reader has become thoroughly hooked by the story itself and wants to know more about the world it's taking place in. Otherwise, it feels a little like reading a textbook about Anthea with anecdotes sprinkled in. Of course, these are just my personal opinions, and perhaps you're going for a "harder" sci-fi than I'm used to, so feel free to ignore me :-)

Cheers,
M.
Astral Sea: The Pandora Project (http://authonomy.com/books/41618/astral-sea-the-pandora-project/)

Warrick Mayes wrote 467 days ago

James,

I skipped out intro and went straight to chapter one.
I'm not sure if there was anything important in the intro, but I was able to build a nice picture of what was going on from the story as it unfolded. The little clues from your pitch also helped.

I liked what I read, the leisurely stroll through the fields as the girls make their way to one of the costals.

I spotted one small niggly bit "...and exclaimed through a half a mouthful..." feels a bit clunky. Do you need both "a"'s? Why not just "...and exclaimed through half a mouthful..."

Best regards
Warrick

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