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Into Light

Denys Leclerc and Tarri Hall

I was small, deaf and spastic. Labeled retarded and hopeless, yet I became a senior chemist and linguist. That makes me smile.

 

I was a skinny, nerdy kid - spastic and deaf. For many years, that didn't change. Suddenly I am changing and really scared. My body is messed up, in constant pain and memory failing.

Parts of my childhood were magical. I explored the forests, built kingdoms in the snow and played on the beaches of distant planets. And then I started school. There I learned that I was different and that pain wasn’t always in my body - it was in my heart. With the label "retarded," I was made to go to handicapped school where I was bullied, beaten and frightened every day.

Until one day, I realized that other kids were scared, too. We fought back together. For every foot that kicked me or tripped me, there was a hand to help me, a friend to face down bigotry, bullying and discrimination. All my life, those hands have been there.

They say I am a renaissance man – but I am just Denys in a small, pain-filled body with a curious mind, open eyes and wonder in my heart.

 
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Chapter 4

Middle School

 

Dr. Petersen placed us in a hold pattern.  He recommended some additional laboratory work related to genetics, including a spinal tap, which we agreed to do.  It would take about two weeks after the tests for Mayo to complete their evaluation. We reviewed the progress and notes from the other doctors.  At least three of the potential problems were ruled out and there was a startling suggestion.  The tests proved I did not have MCI (Mild Cognitive Impairment – the precursor to Alzheimer’s), Parkinson’s Disease or Multiple Sclerosis.  They, also, ruled out depression.  In addition, they wondered if I might not have cerebral palsy. 

 

I was blindsided.  My life, as I understood it, had been somewhat dictated by the effects of CP.  It seemed impossible anyone could draw that conclusion in only five days when I’d been dealing with it for 50 years.  Dr. Petersen clearly did not want to discuss my issues further, except to assure me I did not have a brain tumor or mass.  We made an appointment to return in two weeks to review the progress and proffer a diagnosis, along with recommendations. 

 

Sometimes the silence is overwhelming.  Everyone who has been hearing enabled and becomes deaf is familiar with that hopeless feeling.  While being acutely relieved that I did not have a form of dementia or early-onset Alzheimer’s, the possible diagnoses were quite limited.  At least, from my perspective, there were few possibilities remaining. 

 

We returned to our hotel, packed and checked out.  Our destination for the day was Tarri’s brother and sister-in-law’s home in Fargo, ND.   John and Annette had met us in Winnipeg, Manitoba, on our way from Vancouver to Ottawa and I was looking forward to seeing them again. John is big – not as big as Jeremy, our son from Tarri’s first marriage – but big enough.  Both men are near six and one-half feet tall, and both about 220 pounds or more.  For a skinny guy at 5’9”, I could have been intimidated.  But they are similar in disposition and attitude – both easy-going and kind at heart. 

 

If there is one common trait among the people that Tarri loves, it has to be kindness.  Just like any family, they can be mean to each other upon occasion so “family” is not in the root of their spirit.  Rather, it seems to spring from some deep well in generosity of thought.  That is perhaps the most wonderful trait of our daughters Joy and Rebecca. 

 

I have learned through the years that kindness is not an afterthought.  Kindness, that generosity of mind and heart, is a core value.  So it is with Joy and Rebecca.  Knowing the personal battles each has faced and overcome, their generosity is truly humbling.  Never confuse kindness with weakness.  Neither woman is weak – both are more than willing to share their opinions, no matter how seemingly outrageous.  No, their kindnesses come from the heart. 

 

Joy and Rebecca came into my life, with Tarri, when our children from my first marriage were ten and eight.  Sébastien and Chloé were confused and tired from the multiple stresses of my divorce, weekend sleepovers at their mother’s, new childcare and, now, a new family.  Joy and Rebecca made it easier than any of us had hoped.  As my mind slipped into forgetfulness, anger and confusion, Joy stepped in as big sister to both children. She is the one who explained to Chloé how Papa’s brain was changing – using small bowls and jelly beans, she showed her how tossing those candies into the bowls sometimes worked and sometimes missed.  She explained how the netting between the bowls wasn’t complete.  In addition, she gave her hope and understanding. 

 

She played with Sébastien, talked to him, listened to his halting words with extraordinary patience.  Sébastien is an introvert who struggles with communication in a very loud world.  Rebecca stepped up for Sébastien on many occasions, making sure he was able to express his thoughts without interruption, drawing out his ideas and feelings, and giving him safety to express himself.  At a time when my precious children could have been completely lost to me, Joy and Rebecca picked up the ball and made sure Sébastien and Chloé had a comfortable and comforting safety net of their own. 

 

Joy and Rebecca – how can I ever express my gratitude to them?  How can I ever let them know what their kindness means to me?  For not only have they shown this generosity with my children but have extended it to me, as well.  They have been there for Tarri, letting her weep and holding her when she needed a gentle touch.  Through all the confusion, they were like a needle on a compass keeping us focused on our direction, not our problems. 

 

Perhaps the very best people I have ever known are like this, for Joy and Rebecca came into our lives the years Sébastien and Chloé most needed them.  And my children were the same age then as I was when my life reached its next step of painful evolution. 

 

In 1965, my parents received a referral to a school for disabled students, the École Cardinal-Villeneuve; I changed to the École beginning with Grade 7.  The school was accredited with the Québec City school board and offered Grades 1-9.  Most handicapped children did not proceed past Grade 9 and were then encouraged to train for a trade, if possible.  The cramped but cheerful four-story building was high up in the Upper Town of the old city, nestled between the Citadelle and the Château Frontenac, on 7 Rue Sainte-Geneviève.

 

Even now, forty-five years later, I recall my nervousness and anxiety.  It consumed me that summer.  And it was all so unfair … brought about by one man’s bias against a handicap.  It hurt so bad that I could be pushed down so hard.  Here I was facing the worst possible scenario, a dramatic change where I would know no one, while my brother, my best friend, moved to another school, a normal school.  I really hate change but was especially frightened back then.

 

I couldn’t imagine what would happen to my life in a school where I was entering under the label “physically handicapped” with a speech impairment and movement disorder; and under the stigma of being mentally retarded. Although these characteristics are not inherently a mental handicap, all too often people characterize an individual with movement and speech impediments as mentally challenged.  The problem is one of society and education. And I was terrified that, once out of the mainstream school system, I would not get the help to progress any further due to perceived difficulties of integrating handicapped or diverse children into the normal children’s school rooms. 

 

I was very nervous and watched carefully the events of the first few days in my new school. 

 

The first day at the École, most of the students arrived by taxis.   There were about 90 students and it took some time for all of them to get into the school. Delivery of the kids was often very difficult for the drivers since many of the children were carried in wheelchairs or lifted from low-lying cars.  Obviously, I was entering a whole new world where I had little insight into coping skills, even when dealing with my own disabilities. After the first year, it was arranged for the school to have access to Dodge RAM mini-buses that were higher and equipped with a lift at the back.  For two years I took what Americans used to call “the short bus.” 

 

It was the fall of 1965 and during those rides to school, I read the 12-volume, French edition of Carl Grimberg’s History of the World.  

 

. Once inside, there were six classrooms and one supervisor for the halls.  There were about ten kids per grade and two grades per classroom.  The first graders had their own classroom but the other classes doubled up.  There was a teacher for each classroom.  During recess and lunch, the supervisor monitored the halls and helped the kids who weren’t being moved by a teacher. In other words, the situation was very chaotic except in the classroom.  I don’t remember having problems in the classroom with the teachers or the other kids but recess and lunchtime were hard for me. 

 

Students at the École were from all levels of society and discipline at recess was very poor.   There was a lot of shoving and pushing in the hallways.  The courtyard playground area, which had a magnificent view of the Saint-Lawrence River, had cursory adult supervision at best and bullies ran the show, especially in Grades 6 and 7. One young thug, in particular, bullied his way into being class president of Grade 7.  His best friend was vice-president. A lot of students were intimidated and scared of these two kids, one of which was quite tall.

 

Being very skinny, I was regularly beaten up during recess by those guys and I had painful black bruises on my upper arms to show for it. The smaller of us often got knuckle punches that are very painful and hurt deeply into the tissue.  It was autumn and quite cool so I no doubt wore long-sleeved shirts, which might explain why no one at home noticed my bruises. The bullying went on for about three months.  I was very scared.  Finally, one day (I do not remember how I surmounted my fear) I got a group of my friends together and we decided that enough was enough.  We led a rebellion, went to the teacher, told her that those guys were bullying us, and demanded new elections. I put my name up and was surprisingly elected class president. Whether it was the teachers or the elections, or some combination of the both, the bullies left everybody alone after that.  The rest of the students, including me, were able to finish school with a real sense of accomplishment and camaraderie.

 

For the first time in a non-family setting, I was able to bridge the gap between my abilities and disabilities.  This was a tremendous triumph for me, personally.  From such a low point, I was elected class President.  That was such an amazing feeling.  I was truly overjoyed to feel I belonged; that I had a place; that I fit.  This fueled my self-confidence and was one of the first and most important steps in securing my path. 

 

It was around this time that my recurring falling nightmares finally stopped. I suspect that, by this time in my life, I felt secure and confident enough to stop worrying about personal failure and being alone.

 

Upon reflection, having overcome a lot of anxiety at the École, I am still somewhat hampered by infrequent, but never dismissed, fears of rejection, loss and failure.  As a result, I don’t believe I could have made the trip to Mayo alone.  Every day a new doctor, a new test, and a new set of tasks to achieve.  Every day brings another build-up in the stress as we wait.  And to see no visible progress for two weeks is very hard.  I continue the medications Dr. Sheldon began and rest as needed.  I wonder if two weeks will be enough.  Will they ask for more time?  Will they need more tests?  Will we have an answer or evasions?  I believe in Mayo and its staff but it has been so hard and so much is at stake. 

 

Meanwhile, we will be in Fargo in the dead of winter visiting family.  It could be a good break as there is not much one can do when it is that cold.  It seems almost ludicrous to be going from Winchester, Ontario to Fargo, North Dakota in March.  If there’s an inch of ground not covered in snow and ice, I haven’t seen it.  The temperatures in this area are routinely -20 to -30 degrees F.  The winds can easily drive them to the -40 degree F/C crossing point. 

 

Whatever we do, it will be different and that is good.  We will wait but, this time, with hope.  There is a lot of reason to hope and feel good about Mayo’s direction.  The more diseases they eliminate, the fewer options that remain, the more we can reasonably hope for an answer. 

 

For the first time in my life, I truly understand why people want an answer; more than they even want something back.  They want to know why – they want closure.  That’s what we want: to know the name of the monster and then move on with our lives.   That in itself will be a gift beyond belief. 

 

I believe that if we can find the answer, I can follow a regimen (whatever it is) and we can begin to move forward again.  Knowledge provides opportunities for exploration and discovery.  It has been my experience many times in my life and I believe that this pattern will continue in the future.  That is certainly how things happened at the École.  Once I got into the program, I was able to find my way and begin to grow. 

 

The École’s curriculum combined normal schooling with physical therapy. Physical therapy was very good for me.  We practiced not only painful rhythmic exercises to improve the strength and control of our bodies, but were given opportunities to develop skills necessary to further our education.  We learned penmanship and typing on an electric typewriter, the IBM Selectric™.  The Selectric™ was great because I could get a lot done very quickly.  Half the students in my class regularly used a typewriter for dictation and exams.   I thrived at that school because the teachers really cared about the kids and the curriculum was designed to maximize our use of tools as well as our own potential.  I was able to maintain a 95% average or better and my self-confidence soared.

 

In Grade 8, most of the kids engaged in numerous practical jokes: it was fun even when I was the target.  An anonymous classmate once pulled my pants down once during recess.  I was so skinny then that my underwear came down with my pants, to the general hilarity of the class. Fortunately, I was wearing a long shirt.  And even though the brunt of the joke, I thought it was pretty funny. 

 

Spring 1967: the Stanley Cup playoff finals were between the Toronto Maple Leafs and the Montréal Canadiens. I was the only one in the class betting for the Leafs, with everybody else rooting for Montréal.  For Americans, that’s a little like living in San Francisco and rooting for the Raiders.  When the Leafs won, I collected almost fifty dollars.  Nobody resented the money but I had to take a few more knuckle punches that week!

 

1967 was also Canada’s Centennial year and we had Expo 67 in Montreal. Several major cruise liners visited the harbor that year.  One of these, the France, (now the S.S. Norway) arrived in May with much fanfare. On the appointed day, at about 11:30 am, the ship let out a mighty blast of its horn, saluting the city. Upon hearing that loud salute, most of the students left class (some in wheelchairs, some on crutches) and stormed down the incline to the courtyard, just in time to see the enormous ship glide majestically to its berth, all 66,000 tons of it. We stood there in the breeze, looking down in awe from our high position above the river.  It was an incredible sight and I remember it as if I were standing there today. 

 

In Grade 9, we once had a kissing contest.  I wasn’t surprised to place dead last.  One of the girls I kissed mischievously told me: “You’ve got a long way to go, Denys Leclerc...” Forty years later, I’m still working on it, according to my wife!

 

Unfortunately, or so it seemed then, Grade 9 was to be my last year at the school for disabled children.  At the time, very few of them pursued their studies beyond that level. Most were encouraged to pursue a trade, if they could. So, with no other options, I had to transfer to yet another school at the end of the year.

 

My parents were pleased with my grades and progress at the École and believed I could continue my education.  With their support, we began looking for a new school where I could complete a college preparatory program. 

 

Most children change schools into Grades 9 or 10.  It is an expected transition in growing from a child into a young adult.  For a disabled child, changing schools is a nightmare from which one does not quickly awaken.  And so it was with me.  Where together we had learned how to succeed in an environment geared to our needs, now we would face the “real world” and the environment provided by people with no reason to empathize with our special needs.  We would possibly, or perhaps probably, have to deal with bullying, abuse and denigration.  Making friends with “normal” kids might or might not happen, and it was unlikely many of our friends would be going on with us. 

 

I would not be elected class president ever again; I would not be selected for sports teams; I would not even know if I would be allowed to succeed until I had done so or failed. 

 

Even so, with all the fear and doubts scampering through my mind, I had to go forward.  I couldn’t go into a trade because there was so much more I wanted to learn.  In any case, a trade wouldn’t have been feasible given my physical limitations.  But that wasn’t the issue:  I wanted to be a scientist and, in order to do that, I had to get an education that prepared me for college.  I believed I would succeed if I could get an opportunity. 

 

My opportunity came in the form of Mlle. Madeleine Bergeron, the Director of the École.  Together with my parents, Mademoiselle Bergeron resolved to get me accepted into a Jesuit-run, top, academic, local private high school, the Collège Saint-Charles-Garnier. 

 

 

Interview (December 1967) with Mlle. Madeleine Bergeron, Order of Canada (1972)

Principal, École Cardinal-Villeneuve (Translated from the French)

 

Q:    How did the idea of founding a school for physically disabled students occur to you?

A:    I was a member of the Women’s League for Youth.  We met quite frequently and we were introduced to Doctor Irma Levasseur[1], the first woman to become a medical doctor in Canada. She suggested we create a school for physically handicapped children. We accepted her proposal with joy and proceeded to open a facility.

Q:    Was this the first location of the school?

A:    We started at another house.  Later the school was moved to this location on Rue Sainte Geneviève.

Q.:    Who suggested the name for the school?

A.:    In those times, one had to consult the archbishop to seek permission for various things. Back then, the archbishop of Québec was Cardinal Villeneuve, whom we had met before. We informed him of our project, which he was happy to support. Upon our request to name the school after him, he joyfully accepted, adding: “It will be the most beautiful monument to my memory”.  

Q:    When was the school started?

A:    In 1934.

Q:    Do you accept mentally disabled children?

A:    No.  We only accept children with IQs which are quite above average.  Our school curriculum is similar to that found in ordinary schools.  Also, one has to be of average intelligence to follow the physical rehabilitation program.

Q:    What is the school’s mission?

A:    To physically rehabilitate children so that they can integrate into ordinary schools.

Q:    How many staff members do you have? [At the time the school had ninety students]

A:    We have twenty full-time people and a bit fewer as part-time staff.

Q:    What qualifications are required to be hired here?

A:    The people we hire here must be competent professionals with a sense of humor; and must be able to handle or identify subtleties in the community of students and faculty; to work as a member of a team; have a strong personality and character; and a vision to strongly help these people succeed.

Q:    I have frequently heard about your project to build a new school.  Will it happen?

A:    Yes.  It will be a new building featuring many more rooms, which will be accessible to wheelchairs and will enable us to accept more children.  Our project is eagerly supported by many organizations.

 

We hope that Mademoiselle Bergeron’s dream will come true.  For this woman of character, nothing will make her happier than the well-being of handicapped children. Don’t you think that she excels in this capacity for a person of the weaker sex?

 

By Micheline Pelletier, Grade 9, published December 1967 in the student newspaper “Le Sourire” (The Smile)

The Age of the Earth

(Translated from the French)

How old is the Earth? Here is a question that all geologists have asked themselves for a long time.

 

Some years ago, they found the answer thanks to the presence of lead in radioactive uranium. How so? Since uranium takes eight billion years to turn into lead, they found that the answer could be found by using this fact as a starting point.

 

There are several types of lead: some samples have an atomic weight of 204 times that of hydrogen, the lightest of the elements, while some others weigh 206, 207 or 208 atomic units. Lead 204 is stable and was already there when the Earth was formed. The other types of lead are derived from the decomposition of radioactive uranium.

 

As the Earth got older, the initial uranium would emit radiation. Slowly, very slowly, the uranium would decompose into lead. Geologists came to the conclusion that, by taking into account the initial quantity of lead present initially, there is currently an equal amount of lead derived from uranium and still-radioactive uranium.

 

Therefore, since approximately half the uranium present at the Earth’s formation has changed into lead, geologists concluded that the Earth is now about 4.5 billion years old!

 

By Denys Leclerc, Grade 9, published December 1967

in the student newspaper “Le Sourire” (The Smile)

 

 


 

[1]     http://www.collectionscanada.gc.ca/women/002026-408-e.html

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Tarri wrote 117 days ago

Thank you for your comment and insight, Catherine. Denys is indeed quite unique and somewhat an old fashioned gentleman, in a weirdly French style. We both appreciate your remarks about style as it was very difficult to do and I nearly snatched myself bald in the process. Thanks again. Take care, Tarri

CATHERINE SHAW wrote 118 days ago

What a wonderful, touching story. Denys is a brave man and I applaud him. Beautifully written and very informative. High stars!!

Tarri wrote 118 days ago

Thank you so much foryour comments and support. Denys and I have been really busy with family and some health issues he's having. We really appreciate our friends here who represent some of the best writers of the next decade. Our book took over five years to write and Denys is trying, as he is able, to translate it into French. Living in Canada and being born in Quebec, a release in French is almost a requirement. Unfortunately, he is having some of the old executive function problems and that makes translations very difficult. But we are plugging through and encouragement keeps us going. Thank you, again, for your interest and positive input. All the best, Tarri

superostah wrote 120 days ago

I have to be honest here, I can't seem to get enough of true-life stories of people fighting through adversity. I'm happy to say, however, that this is one of the better examples I've read of such tales. I'm only a few chapters in at this point, but your writing style is very strong and thorough. I really like the idea of your footnotes, as it allows the reader to know more about the specific details of your story without needing to bog down the narrative for those who just want to get into the meat.
All in all, this is a very interesting, and motivating, read. I'm adding you to my watchlist and will be back to read more as time permits. High stars!

Tarri wrote 354 days ago

This is a moving story, and one I hope would raise the spirits of anyone wrestling with any kind of disability, and feeling alone. I think it takes tremendous courage to lay out your life story for the world to see. Best of luck with this!
-- Tod
http://authonomy.com/books/40646/the-lost-wink/



Hi Tod:

Thank you so much for your kind words and comments. It is great to hear these from someone who deals daily with the challenges kids have while growing up, integrating into society and becoming contributors.

Tarri and Denys

Tod Schneider wrote 356 days ago

This is a moving story, and one I hope would raise the spirits of anyone wrestling with any kind of disability, and feeling alone. I think it takes tremendous courage to lay out your life story for the world to see. Best of luck with this!
-- Tod
http://authonomy.com/books/40646/the-lost-wink/

Tarri wrote 362 days ago

Hi Denys and Tarri,

I've read the opening sections and first chapter or so of your book and was drawn in. It is great to hear such a strong voice telling a story that could easily remain untold. I think you describe the situation you find yourself in simply but effectively. I love that simplicity.

Thank you.

Sally

Four Movements.



Hi Sally:

This is Denys. Tarri is away for a few days. Thank you for your feedback and encouragement. We really like to hear from people that understand what we went through as a couple, and, before I met Tarri, my life as a disabled individual.

However, for some reason, we have had trouble getting people to back the book for extended periods of time. Any suggestions?

Take care,

Denys

BTW, I will return the read sometimes this week.

SallyXB wrote 362 days ago

Hi Denys and Tarri,

I've read the opening sections and first chapter or so of your book and was drawn in. It is great to hear such a strong voice telling a story that could easily remain untold. I think you describe the situation you find yourself in simply but effectively. I love that simplicity.

Thank you.

Sally

Four Movements.

Tarri wrote 385 days ago

Thank you for your comments, Terences. Denys loves that story, even as an adult. It is rather the foundation of his life and his faith. We appreciate your encouragement and support. Good luck and safe journeys,
Tarri

have to agree with Patio. i thought the bit at the start about the tree was amazing. More amazing when you say you wrote it at 12. glad i got told to read this, it's moving but very interesting . Don't think i noticed anything wrong with it at all.
Terence

Tarri wrote 385 days ago

Your book reflects a life with too much sorrow and relatives but no family. I am so sorry, Patio, that your life was that souless but so very glad you found the light in your own soul. You have friends - you have made friends with your words and heart. Safe journeys,
Tarri

very moving story.

I knew already but your story confirmed that family can be like enemy

Terence Brumpton wrote 386 days ago

have to agree with Patio. i thought the bit at the start about the tree was amazing. More amazing when you say you wrote it at 12. glad i got told to read this, it's moving but very interesting . Don't think i noticed anything wrong with it at all.
Terence

patio wrote 387 days ago

very moving story.

I knew already but your story confirmed that family can be like enemy

pompeiia wrote 389 days ago

This book is pretty much amazing. It's very easy to read and relevant to so many issues kids face today. It is sad that many adults will still face these problems. Parts of this book are very sad, as I knew they would be. To see them in black and white, starkly written, where they cannot be ignored, is difficult but it is good that we must all acknowledge them. We must bridge the boundaries that marginalize members of our society for simply being different. I like the gentle way you dealt with the issues you faced but, also, that you did not compromise in focusing on the problems and where people contributed to those problems. The language and style are excellent. The content excels. All in all, a wonderful book for any age reader. Good luck, Rebecca

Tarri wrote 389 days ago

Dear Fran,

You have read so far!! Yeah!! Your comments are always refreshing because your perspective is unique and yet somehow has the insight of a life similar to Denys, even though widely disparate. Yes, I do agree that as a disabled person Denys did not notice how his family disregarded him until he saw similar treatment visited on others.

This week Denys did a swan dive through the passway from the breakfast nook to the kitchen and landed on his knees. He has been calling himself all kinds of idiot for two days. It's so frustrating because he did nothing wrong but he really knocks himself about for mistakes, especially physical bumbles. From the outside looking in, it's hard to accept that his family was focused on his limitations instead of his abilities. And they still do it when they talk to him - talk down to him as though his physical limitations are somehow mental. He is happier not speaking to them though he has that heartache of a desire missed. He and his cousin Bernard are great friends and people really like Denys so that is a great joy for him.

Thank you for being so supportive. Poetry - hmm - uhmm - you do realize that 85% of our readership are very happy that it's at the end of the chapters so they can skip it and get to the next page, yeah? Love you, Fran, but your more optomistic about modern literary interests than I am. :D

We are delighted with your position on the list! Yeah, Franny! I have to read more and more and more. I'm so very proud of you and hope we get to meet some day. You are always welcome here. And since I'm a Robertson and a Turner of clan Lamont, may meet you there some day.

Thanks again, Fran. Take care,
Tarri

FRAN MACILVEY wrote 390 days ago

Dear Denys and Tarri

I have just finished reading most of chapter 16 and the preceding chapters.

From an editorial point of view, I do not have much to add to my earlier comments: the tone of your narrative is warm, gentle and careful. I thought perhaps that Denys' poems might come at the beginning, rather than at the end of the chapters. So that they can set the scene, and in a way inform the narrative that follows? Would that work?

It occurs to me that what disabled people put up with when they are with their birth families, sometimes only strikes them as unacceptable when they see the same treatment being visited on outsiders whom they love. Only then, do we see how far our compromise to fit, makes a mess of normal human relationships. It is easy then, to be painted as the paranoid one, the one who exaggerates or who is attention seeking, because of the familiar conspiracy of silence. In fact, the reaction appears to be unconscious, a way of coping that develops over time, which is not seen as uncharitable.

Perhaps your family invented the mythos of CP for you, because they felt an attendant guilt arising from your childhood illnesses. That impulse would be easily forgotten, of course, with the passage of time.

I am very sorry that your birth family now do not contact you, and I hope you find company and comfort with your true friends. Their reaction to your independent choices seems to me to be blinkered and extremely unreasonable, given your palpable love, affection and tolerance for a wide range of others. I would have thought, also, that your obvious brilliance would reconcile them to your chosen path.

You have my understanding, respect and friendship. Your warm and gently amusing account is eminently readable. Thank you for posting it. Please keep in touch.

Fran :-))

Tarri wrote 398 days ago

Dear Fran, what continues to amaze me as Denys moves through life is that educated people still treat him the same way, people whom I would assume know better. Though it has improved, part of the reason we wrote the story was to inspire people who are marginalized but, also, to challenge people who have the bully complex. Whether they're physicians who won't listen, educators with preconceived ideas, or people in service industries who are impatient, it's amazing how many times he faces this as he moves through the day. I know you are aware of it. The world is hardly safe. How much safer if we extended a hand instead of withdrawing it.

Oh yeah, thank you for your comments. I had given up on Into Light about 2.5 years ago - I called Chuck when I was convinced I couldn't do it. He was so supporitive and encouraging, reminding me there was no one else. Denys' dream was to leave this book as a testimony to his life. I was laying on my bed, tears leaking down my face, in absolute despair about what a dismal failure I was as a writer - I couldn't figure out how to make it happen. Then, poof, it was kind of there - the current story with the retrospective - Mayo, the past, the back and forth. I ran in and started typing and then got Denys and we started working on it together. He was so happy. He could remember the past but was having so much trouble with the present so it was much easier to write this way than the other.

And you're amazing, Fran. You have so much courage and heart. Thanks for your friendship. Be safe,
Tarri

Dear Denys and Tarri

I love the way you have weaved professional and personal reminiscences into this account, so that we can see different aspects of Denys together. It really works, as a way of validating the account of his experiences, for example, with academic prejudice. I was so shocked that a tutor was instructed to find a way to fail Denys in inorganic chemistry! Outrageous! Playing god.

All the best to you both.

Fran XX :-))

FRAN MACILVEY wrote 398 days ago

Dear Denys and Tarri

I love the way you have weaved professional and personal reminiscences into this account, so that we can see different aspects of Denys together. It really works, as a way of validating the account of his experiences, for example, with academic prejudice. I was so shocked that a tutor was instructed to find a way to fail Denys in inorganic chemistry! Outrageous! Playing god.

All the best to you both.

Fran XX :-))

Tarri wrote 399 days ago

Thank you so much for your comments, Katie. It does seems that not many would normally read non-fiction and yet people have been wonderfully supportive. And you have remembered such delicious little stories from Denys' life. So, I do thank you for writing because each note means a lot.

Denys and I have placed your book on our watchlist and will comment soon. I am not available to read as much at the moment as he is so you will see his comments first but we will both get there! I promise.

All the best. Take care,
Tarri
INTO LIGHT


So far I have read to the end of chapter three with intense interest. I am not a great reader of non-fiction but I really enjoyed everything I've read here. There are a couple of stories - the two boys left outside tethered to the house but throwing bricks, learning to hit the baseball and then walking away (and there are others) - that could be great short stories just in themselves.

I like your structure. The mix of the present challenge and mystery of Denys' deterioration or perhaps complete misdiagnosis and the prolonged back story works in nonfiction. I like the explanation of CP at the beginning and the quotes from friends and family (which surprised me - but I do like them!). The only piece which I felt was slightly out of joint so far was the laundry chute story. Not that I didn't like it, but that I am expecting a linear backstory.

Love the really sensitive way your relationship is described. Very light yet powerful.

That's it so far!
Kate

katemb wrote 399 days ago

So far I have read to the end of chapter three with intense interest. I am not a great reader of non-fiction but I really enjoyed everything I've read here. There are a couple of stories - the two boys left outside tethered to the house but throwing bricks, learning to hit the baseball and then walking away (and there are others) - that could be great short stories just in themselves.

I like your structure. The mix of the present challenge and mystery of Denys' deterioration or perhaps complete misdiagnosis and the prolonged back story works in nonfiction. I like the explanation of CP at the beginning and the quotes from friends and family (which surprised me - but I do like them!). The only piece which I felt was slightly out of joint so far was the laundry chute story. Not that I didn't like it, but that I am expecting a linear backstory.

Love the really sensitive way your relationship is described. Very light yet powerful.

That's it so far!
Kate

Tarri wrote 401 days ago

Thank you so much for your comments and support, Jo! Denys story is amazing and it has been my delight to be the storyteller! I asked Denys to read your book because he is such a history afficianado and he started it right away. I haven't started yet but he was on it first thing this morning! And once he starts historical documents, he doesn't stop until it's complete. He has an eidetic memory so if he notices anything out of place to the time period, he will be a great resource for you. I will try to get to it myself next week as promised.

I do thank you again for your encouragement. Due to his illness and the struggle we had obtaining a diagnosis and the correct medications, this book took nearly seven years to write. Always the struggle is what to leave in and what to omit but, for us, it was important that Denys have the opportunity to include the hands he held, the memories that sustained them. He did not do this in a vacuum. It was a tapestry and without the field, Denys doesn't feel his tapestry is complete. When we met, it was a burning thing in his soul to tell his story. He loves this story - he truly sees his life withint the completed framework of the others who helped and inspired him through the years. And yes, what he has accomplished has gotten me through those past seven years! :D

All the best,
Tarri

INTO LIGHT
What a wonderful story. It’s great to learn about a 4 and ½ pound deaf cerebral palsy baby growing up to achieve as much as Denys. I’m sure some people will tell you to move the story faster, but I enjoyed the details of all the family members and how Denys fits in with those people. The visit to the Mayo Clinic was a good way to begin this. Allowed you to supply back story in an interesting way. I think you’ll find a large audience for this among people who have a disability of some sort . Your biggest audience, tho, will be people like me who find the story inspirational: if someone with so many handicaps can achieve this way, why can’t I? Highly starred and added to my shelf. Wanttobeawriter: Who Killed the President?

Wanttobeawriter wrote 401 days ago

INTO LIGHT
What a wonderful story. It’s great to learn about a 4 and ½ pound deaf cerebral palsy baby growing up to achieve as much as Denys. I’m sure some people will tell you to move the story faster, but I enjoyed the details of all the family members and how Denys fits in with those people. The visit to the Mayo Clinic was a good way to begin this. Allowed you to supply back story in an interesting way. I think you’ll find a large audience for this among people who have a disability of some sort . Your biggest audience, tho, will be people like me who find the story inspirational: if someone with so many handicaps can achieve this way, why can’t I? Highly starred and added to my shelf. Wanttobeawriter: Who Killed the President?

Tarri wrote 402 days ago

Hi Andrew,

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and to comment! Score and score. Denys is the 1:1 guy so he will look for and find the typos for me. I would so have loved to have met his Grandmaman; she sounds very much like my great-grandma Robertson, who was 4'11 and kept us all together until her 95th birthday. She was our soul, our conscience and my inspiriation, too.

Denys is always and ever the gentleman. I was raised in northern California and nothing pisses me off more than run-around. Dr. Sheldon, blonde hair, sticky-out from every direction, un-made bed appearance, is brilliant, direct and caring. We could communicate. The rest of Denys' early docs wasted space getting out of bed, IMO. They were that arachic. I would protect Denys with my life. He is worth it and I hope his story inspires people.

I am so hurt by the number of kids and adutls who give up each year simply because they are different - because the world is not big enough for them. We want to help change that.

Thank you for your support. It means a lot to us. You can have pie with Denys some day. He gets 2/3 and we share the rest! :)

BTW, Chuck and Jenny celebrated her birthday in Kenmare a few years ago and invited us to join them. It was our first trip. We flew into Shannon and spent a week driving around western / southern Ireland. Made it up to Dublin for a couple of days but I am all about country and the out of the way places so Kenmare and the Rings were more my style. I loved my trip ... it was so peaceful, so delightful.
Take care,
Tarri
INTO LIGHT


Hi Tarri and Denys,

I’ve read the prologue and first two chapters.

It’s a beautiful dedication, and a touching allegory from one so young. The description of the maple tree in the back yard is so vivid that the reader is assured Denys’s life will be shown to us in excellent detail.

Framing the first chapter with a trip to the Mayo clinic is a good idea. I found learning about Denys’s condition very interesting (such as the calorie burning of his muscular tension).

I thought the use of the word current to describe Dr Sheldon was slightly odd. I presume you mean up-you-date and modern in his outlook? Perhaps it’s a Canadian/American usage.

What a great way to describe Tarri’s character by her reactions to prevaricating doctors!

It’s also a lovely portrait of Grandmaman Leclerc. A feisty woman by the sound of it.
I like how the story of Denys’s family is interspersed with his tests in the hospital. A good way to maintain interest in both. But then the narrative is rather taken over by short biographies of his forebears. It is good to see the character traits that Denys inherited, but perhaps it would work better if you concentrated on Grandmaman Leclerc as the chief inspiration in his life.

I really like the line that he was born tiny but also stubborn. And the need to capture memories before that bit of light was lost is a beautiful and tragic idea. (I think you’ve a typo in that line – through for thought)

Here, the interspersing of Chuck’s voice I think works well. You have a bold documentary-like approach to the narrative, but it all adds to the story.

The possibility of being sent to an institution when still a baby is quite chilling. His life could have been very different. Such places had a terrible reputation in Ireland.

It’s a lovely description of three year old Denys trying to maintain visual contact with his mother’s face because of a deafness he must have assumed normal.

There are many insightful lines throughout, like how people respond to disability is purely within their own control.

Denys and Yves were quite the rogues and escapologists! It was also interesting to see how Denys’s deafness was diagnosed. It seems incredible he could have gone so long without anyone suspecting.

It’s a very touching end to chapter two.

Overall it’s an excellent start. Highly starred and I hope to read more soon.
Best of luck to you both,
Andrew.

Andrew Hughes wrote 402 days ago

Hi Tarri and Denys,

I’ve read the prologue and first two chapters.

It’s a beautiful dedication, and a touching allegory from one so young. The description of the maple tree in the back yard is so vivid that the reader is assured Denys’s life will be shown to us in excellent detail.

Framing the first chapter with a trip to the Mayo clinic is a good idea. I found learning about Denys’s condition very interesting (such as the calorie burning of his muscular tension).

I thought the use of the word current to describe Dr Sheldon was slightly odd. I presume you mean up-you-date and modern in his outlook? Perhaps it’s a Canadian/American usage.

What a great way to describe Tarri’s character by her reactions to prevaricating doctors!

It’s also a lovely portrait of Grandmaman Leclerc. A feisty woman by the sound of it.
I like how the story of Denys’s family is interspersed with his tests in the hospital. A good way to maintain interest in both. But then the narrative is rather taken over by short biographies of his forebears. It is good to see the character traits that Denys inherited, but perhaps it would work better if you concentrated on Grandmaman Leclerc as the chief inspiration in his life.

I really like the line that he was born tiny but also stubborn. And the need to capture memories before that bit of light was lost is a beautiful and tragic idea. (I think you’ve a typo in that line – through for thought)

Here, the interspersing of Chuck’s voice I think works well. You have a bold documentary-like approach to the narrative, but it all adds to the story.

The possibility of being sent to an institution when still a baby is quite chilling. His life could have been very different. Such places had a terrible reputation in Ireland.

It’s a lovely description of three year old Denys trying to maintain visual contact with his mother’s face because of a deafness he must have assumed normal.

There are many insightful lines throughout, like how people respond to disability is purely within their own control.

Denys and Yves were quite the rogues and escapologists! It was also interesting to see how Denys’s deafness was diagnosed. It seems incredible he could have gone so long without anyone suspecting.

It’s a very touching end to chapter two.

Overall it’s an excellent start. Highly starred and I hope to read more soon.
Best of luck to you both,
Andrew.

Tarri wrote 403 days ago

Hi Mark - done and done! As I told Fran, rev 79, xxx.86c is uploaded. I have integrated the reflections into the narrative of the chapters. It was a lot of work but I think the flow works and the initial tests of family and close friends have been positive. So try a chapter, Mark, and see what you think! I did add a short overview of CP to give the reader an idea of what Denys' symptoms were, as suggeste. There are so many variations that it is difficult to cover it briefly without minimizing the disease but at least there is a baseline. So thank you for your perspective. I appreciate your insight.

I hope we are on your watchlist! I am not pulling your book off our bookshelf - unless you come up with another one and tell me too. It is simply too marvelously funny! But watchlists are easy peasy, yes?

My daughter Rebecca (Pompeiia) and been in whoops over Hell's Super. Periodically I get a note via email about a line here, a witty remark, a concept that causes her to LOL and she pops it off to me. She has been so positive about your book. She's a tech writer and swamped with multiple deadlines but She loves your book and will just chuckle sometimes when we're talking about some absurdity that tips her over. Thanks for that!

All the best going forward. Take care,
Tarri
Into Light


Denys and Tarri,

I have read almost half of the manuscript, all I have time for at present. I wish that were not so, because I have been engaged from the very beginning. So your book definitely hooks the reader.

The writing is good. This biography rings with truth in a way that fiction never quite manages. I'm a Yank, so I enjoyed reading a bit about someone growing up in Canada. Funny. I know so much and so little about Canada, and the French portion of the country I know even less about.

A couple of suggestions. We have all heard about Cerebral Palsy, but I think a quick description of the disease, near the front, would be appropriate. I had to go to Wikipedia to really help me understand. My memory of the CP left me with an image of people more profoundly affected, in terms of coordination, speech, etc. than Denys sounds to be, which probably means I'm confusing it with something else. If I can do that, so can other readers. Don't assume your reader knows.

Second comment: the vignettes at the ends of many chapters--I'm not quite certain why you didn't just weave these more into the narrative, rather than have them sitting off separate as they are.

Regardless, although I am not a reader of biographies or memoirs generally, I find this a very compelling narrative. Five stars on an excellent job! Best. Mark

Tarri wrote 403 days ago

Dear Fran, thank you for your encouragement. I have used most of my recuperative time to incorporate the thoughts of Denys' friends into the story, removing them as independent refelections. It was a time-intensive effort but I hope it has made his story more full-bodied. The people that contributed to Denys' life are pretty amazing - I have met many of them and they would capture your heart, as they have mine.

The chemistry! I thought I would lose my mind. Day after day, session after session, we tried again and again to develop analogies that made it possible for me to understand Denys' work. Yes, he has a Ph.D. but I have an MA and I figured there had to be a way to make me understand - and if I could understand, then I could tell the story. Eventually, with the intervention of our children, we did figure out analogies that worked and what I could understand, even mariginally, I could write.

That stubborn determination is one thing Denys and I have in common. People that meet us say we have something special, a link - a unique bond. I suspect it's that sheer bullheadedness. ;D

Thanks again, Fran. You've been marvelous. We love you, sister.
Tarri
Into Light.

Dear Denys and Tarri

I have been concentrating on the subject matter of this book, but your writing is wonderful too. Warm, informed, witty and wise, I would just like to sit here and read everything you have uploaded. How refreshing to find a book that does not patronise the reader by assuming you should use words of one syllable!

Your reflections are of interest to me in many ways, not just because I find your discussions around chemistry interesting - and I am no chemist! - but because your attitude to being refused is so like mine. If someone says, "You can't do that" or "I don't think you can" I will always answer, "Watch me do it!" but if my personal doubts dominate, the story is very different. How well you articulate that split in self confidence.

Thank you, thank you for writing. This book is a marvelous blend of humour, information and discernment. On my shelf again soon, probably at the start of next month.

Best regards

Fran Macilvey, "Trapped" :-)

FRAN MACILVEY wrote 417 days ago

Dear Denys and Tarri

I have been concentrating on the subject matter of this book, but your writing is wonderful too. Warm, informed, witty and wise, I would just like to sit here and read everything you have uploaded. How refreshing to find a book that does not patronise the reader by assuming you should use words of one syllable!

Your reflections are of interest to me in many ways, not just because I find your discussions around chemistry interesting - and I am no chemist! - but because your attitude to being refused is so like mine. If someone says, "You can't do that" or "I don't think you can" I will always answer, "Watch me do it!" but if my personal doubts dominate, the story is very different. How well you articulate that split in self confidence.

Thank you, thank you for writing. This book is a marvelous blend of humour, information and discernment. On my shelf again soon, probably at the start of next month.

Best regards

Fran Macilvey, "Trapped" :-)

Mark Cain wrote 442 days ago

Denys and Tarri,

I have read almost half of the manuscript, all I have time for at present. I wish that were not so, because I have been engaged from the very beginning. So your book definitely hooks the reader.

The writing is good. This biography rings with truth in a way that fiction never quite manages. I'm a Yank, so I enjoyed reading a bit about someone growing up in Canada. Funny. I know so much and so little about Canada, and the French portion of the country I know even less about.

A couple of suggestions. We have all heard about Cerebral Palsy, but I think a quick description of the disease, near the front, would be appropriate. I had to go to Wikipedia to really help me understand. My memory of the CP left me with an image of people more profoundly affected, in terms of coordination, speech, etc. than Denys sounds to be, which probably means I'm confusing it with something else. If I can do that, so can other readers. Don't assume your reader knows.

Second comment: the vignettes at the ends of many chapters--I'm not quite certain why you didn't just weave these more into the narrative, rather than have them sitting off separate as they are.

Regardless, although I am not a reader of biographies or memoirs generally, I find this a very compelling narrative. Five stars on an excellent job! Best. Mark

Tarri wrote 444 days ago

Chapter 4. "What a weird place to feel normal" Excellent.



Denys and I were there so early that day and he was so excited but so very very happy. People seemed to catch his enthusiasm and joy. Normal is not a state that's easy for either of us - perhaps for most of us. But that day was perfect and so were we. Thanks for catching that and mentioning it! Take care, Tarri

iandsmith wrote 447 days ago

Chapter 4. "What a weird place to feel normal" Excellent.

Diwrite wrote 448 days ago

What a lovely premise for a novel. And the content does not disappoint.
The writing is easy and comfortable, and I felt engaged from the very beginning.

I can see your book providing support and inspiration for people who really need it.

On my shelf with my very best wishes.

Diana
Pascual's Birthday

FRAN MACILVEY wrote 453 days ago

Dear Denys and Tarri

I have today read up to the end of chapter four - seven uploaded - of "Into Light", a book which, in so many ways, echoes my own experiences. It is wonderful to read your story, and comforting in ways that I find hard to put into words. I am sure you understand. Knowing how much you have achieved gives me fresh hope and energy. I smile.

There is not much to say about your writing here. Your style is clean and easy to read. You manage well, the shift between past and present, though there is some room to tighten the manuscript for clarity and to take out elements of repetition. We all have that to do. Also, I felt that your reminiscences could be condensed slightly.

Denys' voice is very clear, clever and funny. That is what most matters.

Lots of love

Fran xxx :-))

FRAN MACILVEY wrote 453 days ago

Dear Denys and Tarri

I started reading what you have uploaded here, and of course i shall read it all. In time. Your writing needs to be taken slowly, and there is much here for me to appreciate.

I don't think, for the moment, that you much need the introduction which is uploaded chapter two. Denys says all he needs to say in what follows. On Authonomy, I would just start with his beginning.

I started reading about Denys' love of trees, the maple, and understood something else. Here is someone who loves them as much as I do and for the same reasons! For years, I loved trees, then I decided I did not, because their roots represented being stuck. Then I had a dream, and saw a great vibrant tree with branches and leaves that moved all the time, and seeds that fell to earth and grew, or were carried away on waters to the far distance. To see that echoed here gives me the shivers.

Reading on. xxx Fran :-))

Tarri wrote 456 days ago

Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see - your Mark Twain quote is very apt in describing your story. starred and shelved. an evocative content which will touch our hearts



Thank you, Sheila. If by telling Denys' story, we can help stop this madness of children killing themselves because of bullying, if one young person attempts to achieve what he's been told he cannot, and if we can save one adult's self-respect in the face of torment, Denys and I will have accomplished so much. Thank you for your encouragement.

sheila cooper wrote 456 days ago

Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see - your Mark Twain quote is very apt in describing your story. starred and shelved. an evocative content which will touch our hearts

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