The Moonflower Cure

Hi Richard,

What a kind and encouraging comment. I'm very nearly speechless. Thank you.

Jolly (Nick)

Hi Jolly; I have just read to the end of chapter three.

I was drawn to this by your intriguing book title and short pitch.

This is a very unusual combination. I thought the short Foreword quite beautiful with the flower falling of the cliff then straight into the witty banter. This is quite quirky but all the more entertaining for it as it is consistently quirky, (not easy to do.)

I wasn't sure what you were building to with the whale watching trip. When you start going into the detail of the pygmy whales and the sperm whales protecting their baby, your serious side had me quite spellbound. Then, wallop, the flash from the whales backside and we're off again with the humorous undertones. I liked it. It kept me on my toes.

The teasing of Star works well and I thought it a great hook at the end of the shopping trip chapter. This left me wondering whether Star had seen the event, as Bob believed, or if she was just saying it as she fancied him.

I really liked this as it's just that bit eccentric. Just crazy enough to work. I could understand people not getting into this, but in actual fact it is an awful lot deeper than at first appears and I applaud you for it.

A really good, innovative read and highly starred for it.
RMA (Richard)
The Snow Lily

Your pitch caught my interest, 'nuf said.

Thanks Jim. I 'd rather write a novel than a pitch any day. And thanks for shelving. I'll check out your book ASAP.

Your pitch caught my interest, 'nuf said.

Thanks for checking it out. I'm editing as I go (something which is threatening to suck the fun right out of it :)), so it's slow-going. But I'll definitely let you know when I post more chapters.

Hmmm, interesting! I just read all you have up of this and I enjoyed it a great deal. I'm curious where it's headed, so let me know if you post up more of it. This is one of the more unusual things I've read lately. You should hit up the comedy people and try to get more reads going on here.

Hmmm, interesting! I just read all you have up of this and I enjoyed it a great deal. I'm curious where it's headed, so let me know if you post up more of it. This is one of the more unusual things I've read lately. You should hit up the comedy people and try to get more reads going on here.