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word count 34129
date submitted 01.03.2012
date updated 11.03.2012
genres: Literary Fiction
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The Agony of Civilizing Sasquatch

Robert Bennett

"The Agony of Civilizing Sasquatch" is an easy read for a mass audience, much like "The Bridges of Madison County."

 

"The Agony of Civilizing Sasquatch" is a coming of age story encapsulated in a mystery designed to inform the reader of a time, not quite lost, when America still had a large measure of national integrity. The story is set in the Pacific Northwest, in the early 1970's, and speaks to both the passion and of the wisdom of youth, unadulterated. It's a book of heartache, courage, energy and hope, and delivers the reader to a place of reflection, where elements of sublime tranquillity can be reached with a modicum of effort on the part of the reader. It's a story of love, work, understanding and acceptance. "The Agony of Civilizing Sasquatch" is an American Story.

 
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Chapter 18

Once they were in the old pickup and headed for the trailer court, Jimmy asked, “So how does April Dawn figure into your equation?”

There was silence.

Jimmy was sorry he’d asked, and he was trying to think of some plausible means of changing the subject, when Molly finally responded.

“She’s the reason I never finished high school,” she said.

Not knowing what to say, Jimmy just drove.

“I was in my junior year,” she finally went on, “popular, a cheer leader, in the glee club… I was even on the honor role, when I ran into this guy at a party.”

Jimmy remained silent and, coming to a corner, he double-clutched the old pickup down into third.

“He was an iron peddler,” she went on.  “He sold heavy equipment, a lot like Matt—the guy you hoodwinked into dancing on the lead shot from Woody’s blackjack—but he was taller, and better looking.  He told me he wanted to marry me.  ‘We can have a life together,’ he continued to say…”

She trailed off at that point, and Jimmy knew better than to push it.  He figured it wasn’t his business anyway.

But she’d apparently decided it was all right for him to know, because she went on.  “But then I got pregnant, and once I told him about it, I never saw him again.  Wondering what had happened, I tried to find him.  I got a friend to drive me to the place where he worked in Medford, and when I walked in the front door of the building, I saw him dash out a side door and drive away.

“I asked the receptionist if she knew anything about him.  She told me he was the founder’s son-in-law.  It turned out he already had a wife and family.  The receptionist told me other things, like maybe she’d been smitten herself, and abused. 

“After I made that trip to Medford, he skedaddled,” Molly said.  “He took a position in the Eugene office; I suppose so his wife wouldn’t find out about me.”

     Jimmy and Molly drove in silence for a while.  He took a wrong turn on purpose so it would take longer to get back, and Molly began to speak again.  “I went down to stay with family in Hoopa,” she said, “to have the baby.”

Jimmy felt rage and heartbreak in equal proportions.  “And you’ve never heard from him since?”

She shook her head.  “Not a word, probably me and a dozen other girls.”

“Does this Casanova fella have a name?” Jimmy asked.

“Jerry,” she said, “Gerald Wexford.”

“And he sells Caterpillar equipment?”

“International Harvester,” she said.

Jimmy turned into the trailer park and pulled up beside Molly’s mobile.  He wanted to ask her how she’d found her way back up here from Hoopa, and on into Curly Jack’s, but he figured he’d pried too much already.

She sat, and allowed him to be gallant and come around to open the passenger’s side door.  She stepped down from the old rig and said, “Thank you, Whistle Punk, that’s the best outing I’ve had in a long time.” 

He didn’t believe her, but it made him feel good to hear her say it.  He pulled her to him and kissed her on the forehead, which was on about the same elevation as his lips.

“It was my pleasure,” he said.  Then he added, “I’d better be getting back to the camp.”

She hugged him and scampered for the front door of the trailer.  Under the dim porch light, he watched her sexy rear end bounce up the steps and disappear inside.  It wasn’t until he was back in the driver’s seat of the pickup that he realized how dark it had gotten.

Before leaving town, Jimmy pulled up under a street light and checked his oil.  He was only down half a quart, so he decided to ignore it and continue on his way.  As he drove, he went over the details of Molly’s story.  He couldn’t believe what an asshole that iron peddler had been.  He knew guys like that from school though, and he knew them to be jerks. 

He had to concentrate to drive with the dim power of the pickup’s old six volt head lights.  He’d just pulled off the spur that ran along Indian Creek to camp when the old rig began to sputter.  He pumped the accelerator and managed to get things going again, but after two hundred yards it sputtered again.  After three more fits of refusal and restarts, the old GMC went into a convulsion and quit altogether.  He got out and pushed his old steed onto a turnout, knowing there was no point in trying to start it again.

He didn’t have anything of value in the rig—two quarts of oil and a few tools—so he put them in the cab, locked the doors, and began the walk to camp.  He figured he had four or five miles to cover.  That wouldn’t have been a problem in the daylight, but this night was dark and moonless.  Aside from the constant gurgling of the creek, there were a lot of distracting night noises in the woods.

He wished he’d brought a flashlight.

Each time an owl hooted, Jimmy would jump.  At one point, where the road went over a culvert, he heard the grunting and growling noise of a bear down by the water.  He ran a few steps, but tripped over a rock in the road, which made a lot of noise, so he slowed down.           Another time, he heard the ear piercing scream of a cougar.  It was a ways behind him, but that didn’t prevent him from wetting his finger and sticking it into the air to see which way the wind blew.  Finding it traveled from him back towards the cougar, he attempted to run again, but stumbled once more, and then simply quickened his walking pace. 

He came to understand why the fellas on the crew all carried rifles when they went into the woods.  He thought they were hoping to see a deer to shoot, or something to kill in order to brag about it.  Now he came to realize—a rifle in the woods was a matter of survival.

He began to wonder about wolves, were they really extinct around here?  An unarmed man in a wilderness like this would have no chance at all against a pack of wolves.  And of course, having just finished The Call of the Wild, the extinction of wolves made him think about Sasquatch.

He was about a half a mile from camp—though he didn’t know it—when a family of raccoons scurried across the road in front of him.  His heart nearly jumped out of his chest.  Normally, coons wouldn’t bother him, but all he could see were unblinking eyes staring up at him, and the coons made him think of other things that might pass close to the ground, skunks, porcupines, snakes, coyotes—and maybe a rabid fox.

Finally, as he plodded around an outside corner he thought he could detect some artificial light through the trees.  But the road veered away from the creek at that point, so he lost sight of it.  Coming to a place where the road went straight, he saw the light again.  And after staring at it for a few minutes, he was able to recognize the late burning lamp in the boss’s cabin.  Clyde was trying to get on top of his paper work.

It gave Jimmy a target to walk to.  He made his way methodically to the drive that turned into camp and then walked silently along the old bleached logs to the porch of his cabin. 

He tried to be quiet; he could hear Andy breathing, deeply, lost in sleep.  So he pulled off his shoes and dove into a deep sleep of his own, with his clothes clinging to his still frightened body.

 

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irelandsmemories wrote 354 days ago

Hello Robert
This is usually not my genre, but we all need to step out of our zones. Your mentioning of "Bridges of Madison County" definitely grabbed my attention. Your story line is similar in many ways but your characters back-stories are more authentic and relevant. I enjoyed the land and nature descriptions, you created perfect visuals and your literary flow is ideal.

I will definitely return to read on, as I am sure you have a lot more creative and engaging plots to install.

I will keep this on my w/l for further follow-up.

Thanks
FC

Andrew Esposito wrote 356 days ago

Robert, I've reviewed the first several chapters of 'The Agony of Civilising Sasquatch' and really enjoyed it! You instantly had me with the sinister Kent State reference and the return to the link in Chapter 5 intrigued me even more! Jimmy is instantly likeable, your writing seems to promise more, lots of little tit-bits like 'since Molly'. And the 'scissors' visual was great! Angel is a compelling character - I certainly wanted to know more about her and anxiously followed Jimmy's journey. The plot construction is smart... Angel fading out of the story is tantallising and I found myself wanting her to return soon. Robert, you have a good grasp of characterisation, the loggers, a profession you know well, being a good example, Other good characters are Squint and Andy and the offbeat war veteran Oscar. I've watchlisted your novel because it raised more questions than answers - a great start and I will continue to read it with interest! Best regards, Andrew Esposito / Killing Paradise

Skookum Maguire wrote 357 days ago

Casimir, yes the book is complete, though I still might tweak it a bit. I downloaded a few chapters, and was asked to download a few more, but it didn't seem to me like anyone would want to read the entire book on Authonomy, so I backed off at that point.

I noticed you are a fan of Graham Greene. There is a literary magazine in New England called "The Long Story." I've sent them a few things in the past, but I always got the response, "No, no--we want material similar to Graham Greene." So if that's the way your writing goes, you might try them.

Anyway, thanks for the kind words.

Bob


Hi Robert - I don't normally begin incomplete books, but your rich detail drew me in, so it's now residing on my stylish, but rough-hewn, pine bookshelf. I've dipped in and out so far, will be reading more next week, and you sustain the earthy feel throughout.

A question. Is the book complete but not uploaded, or is it unfinished?

On my shelf for a while anyway...

All the best, Cas

Casimir Greenfield wrote 357 days ago

Hi Robert - I don't normally begin incomplete books, but your rich detail drew me in, so it's now residing on my stylish, but rough-hewn, pine bookshelf. I've dipped in and out so far, will be reading more next week, and you sustain the earthy feel throughout.

A question. Is the book complete but not uploaded, or is it unfinished?

On my shelf for a while anyway...

All the best, Cas

Skookum Maguire wrote 412 days ago

Thank you very much for the kind words and the support. I'm just beginning to find my way around Authonomy, and I apologize for not responding earlier.

Thanks again, Bob

An intriguing story, well told. Backed, Marj.

M. A. McRae. wrote 415 days ago

An intriguing story, well told. Backed, Marj.

Helianthus wrote 423 days ago

I finished the new chapters you loaded. I really like this, and I've grown very fond of this guy. Still, 23 chapters in, barely any idea what Sasquatch has to do with anything. I can't say much; nothing seems to happen in my book for thirty chapters or so. I assume you're building to something. Let me know if you post more up to read.

A few typos on the way via message.

Skookum Maguire wrote 437 days ago

Alright, I read all of this, and I have mixed feelings. The parts in the middle are just fabulous - all the stuff with the loggers and the bear and the bar and the hookers - wonderful stuff. I could read that for hours. The parts with Angel, I wasn't so enamoured of. The logger parts felt more real, probably because you used to be a logger.

You should upload more, probably, though it's like pulling teeth to get people to read deeply around here. There was no explanation of the Sasquatch deal in the 13 chapters I read, and I'm sort of curious about the meaning behind this title. Your pitch needs some work.

I have a list of typo comments if you'd like to have them in a private message.






Of course, I'd be interested in any suggestions you have that would make the work stronger--typos included. The story of the loggers is actually "framed" inside the other part, and the Sasquatch explanation won't develop for a while yet.
I could down load some more chapters over the weekend, if you're interested.
Thanks for the help. B.

Helianthus wrote 438 days ago

Alright, I read all of this, and I have mixed feelings. The parts in the middle are just fabulous - all the stuff with the loggers and the bear and the bar and the hookers - wonderful stuff. I could read that for hours. The parts with Angel, I wasn't so enamoured of. The logger parts felt more real, probably because you used to be a logger.

You should upload more, probably, though it's like pulling teeth to get people to read deeply around here. There was no explanation of the Sasquatch deal in the 13 chapters I read, and I'm sort of curious about the meaning behind this title. Your pitch needs some work.

I have a list of typo comments if you'd like to have them in a private message.

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