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THE ROYAL NAVY& ME

FREDERICK RODGERS

The adventures of a young sailor who joined the Royal Navy at the age of 15 and served for twelve years.

 

The story is told through the eyes of a young sailor who joined the Royal Navy in 1955 as a Boy Seaman 2nd class, the absolute lowest rank in the Navy. Follow his induction at HMS Ganges, the toughest boys training establishment in England, if not the world, and his first assignment to HMS Cockade in time to visit Australia for the opening of the 1956 Olympic Games. This is a thoroughly amusing tale,tempered with dark moments of despair as he visits islands in the South Pacific,tours Hong Kong,Korea and Japan, passes through the Suez Canal en-route to Malta and Gibraltar. Patrols Iceland during the Cod Wars, and plunges to crush depth aboard a submarine. This is a voyage not to be missed

 
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Setting out on a long motorcycle journey in the month of January required a lot more thought than I'd given it. January is better described as the dead of winter. I left Chatham Dockyard at 0800 hours on 12th January 1959 clad in Army surplus motorcycle clothing better suited to desert warfare than a winter crossing of England.
 
Nevertheless that’s exactly what I did, leaving on a cold and wet morning. Three days before my twentieth birthday, I faced a daunting three hundred miles of slow winding roads passing through endless towns and villages. There were no fast two-lane highways in those days, and the speed limits varied from 30mph to 50mph,which was the maximum. Numbers of buses and lorries used the roads and getting stuck behind one could last for miles. Using a map while riding a motorcycle in the rain was impossible without pulling over. Around 10.30 am I passed through Croydon and Reading having covered perhaps fifty miles. Rain was seeping through my clothing. I was cold and wet as I pressed on to Newbury. I stopped at pub called the Spotted Bovine. I ordered a pint of best bitter and a pork- pie and sat beside a glowing fire. Leaving the pub half an hour later the rain had stopped. The improving weather lifted my spirits a little.

An hour later it was snowing. It was a mixture of rain and sleet that made the roads treacherous and slowed traffic. Late afternoon I crossed the Bristol Channel and entered Wales.

Here the roads quickly became even more winding and narrow. Just west of Newport, exhausted, half frozen and starving I pulled into a bed and breakfast for the night. 
 
The next morning I was up and on the road very early. I felt refreshed and eager to reach my destination that afternoon. The bad weather continued with cold temperatures and more sleet. As I travelled deeper into Wales the roads became narrow lanes with high hedgerows on both sides. Often so narrow it was impossible to pass an oncoming vehicle.

About a mile apart were widened areas where one vehicle could pull over while another passed. It seemed the rule was the vehicle nearest the passing area would back up. In a car this works quite well as cars have a reverse gear. Motorcycles don’t. I'd have to stop and push the bike back.

At three o'clock that afternoon I had arrived in the town of Haverfordwest. I was filthy and tired but a mere fifteen miles from the base. I asked a local policeman for directions. Impressed, he listened to my adventures while pointing me in the direction of Harrier. When finally the main gate of HMS Harrier came into view it was a wonderful sight. I reported to the guardhouse and received my instructions. I found my barrack, had a hot bath and collapsed on my bunk.

 

 


 
HMS Harrier began in1947 as an extension to the naval air station at Dale, HMS Goldcrest. It was first known as Goldcrest 2. It was used as a test centre
 
for new radar and meteorology equipment.

In 1948 it became HMS Harrier, and radar training began with the arrival of the first classes. The camp consisted of mostly portable buildings, prefabricated accommodations, Nissan huts and such. The largest building was the Cotton Trainer, a place where I'd spend much of my time while learning the radar trade. Harrier closed down in 1960 and radar training moved to HMS Dryad in Southwick

During my first days at Harrier I was re-united with several of my old Ganges shipmates. In particular I remembered Michael Foster and Andy Brown, classmates from the Ganges Annex.

 

 

 

The radar plot course covered a period of six months. I found the training familiar having done much of the same thing aboard ship for the last two years. Memorizing the sequence for turning on several different types of radar sets wasn't so easy. A unit might consist of three or four large cabinets containing radio valves and tubes. They took time to warm up before they were operational. Turning the wrong switch or using a wrong sequence could result in burning out a circuit. This was guaranteed to bring the wrath of an instructor down upon your head. I learned that in many areas of training we worked closely with radar-qualified Wrens. The term ‘wren’ was substituted for WRNS – Woman’s Royal Naval Service. Harrier had a compliment of some eighty Wrens, most of whom were in the radar branch. To say that eighty Wrens could be a distraction would have been an understatement. Aboard ship we had long since become used to the absence of female company. At Harrier we might bump into a wren at every turn. Of course there was absolutely nothing wrong with that. It was a simply marvellous situation, just like living in paradise. The wrens usually found themselves on the receiving end of most jokes taking place at the camp. The first thing a shipmate asked me was, did I know the difference between a wren and a sailor? I replied, “I’m sure you are going tell me”. Well it’s obvious a wren wears a double-breasted jacket. Waiting one morning for our instructor to arrive some fool decided to give us his slant on algebra. On the backboard he wrote the following example  (AB/wren = wren/due = AB/C’s) For those of you not sailors let me explain. We were all AB’s (Able Seaman) and wren over due meant she was pregnant, the responsible AB then volunteered to go overseas. Another regular event was to wake up and see a variety of wren’s underwear flying from the masthead. Embarrassing for the owners whose names were clearly stamped on each item. The morning colour party took pleasure in attempting to return the items after hoisting the Ensign. Needless to say, no wren ever asked to have her missing knickers returned.
 
In my six months at Harrier I saw romances blossom and wither among my shipmates

Owning a motorcycle and sidecar proved to be a valuable asset. Indeed any vehicle was an asset when so far from the nearest town. Within my first week at Harrier I was dating a very pretty wren name Margaret. She was one of the few wrens not in the radar branch. Margaret wore a trade badge of crossed flags denoting the Signals Branch. Better known in the Navy as a bunting tosser.

We quickly became very close and we spent every available off-duty moment together. We divided our time together between the base cinema, Haverfordwest and long walks along the cliff pathways. Our romance grew steadily and for the first time in my life I was truly in love. In previous romances I'd often thought I was in love. However this time it just felt right and had to be the real thing. Anyone seeing me heading to the barracks after kissing Margaret goodnight would probably have agreed. I literally bounced back to the mess leaping in the air to kick my heels together. Boy! I must have had it bad.

In Haverfordwest we'd eat supper at a little café on the main street. I usually had sausage and chips while Margaret ordered mushrooms on toast. I confess I'd never tasted a mushroom, they reminded me too much of 'shit on a raft'.

In mid March, with the first signs of spring in the air Easter leave began. I wasn't excited to be going home. Leave meant separation from Margaret for two long weeks.

I made the best of it riding my bike home via the Holyhead ferry. In Belfast I visited relatives and friends showing off my machine. One evening I dropped in at McWater`s Bakery to pick up my father. I thought he'd be pleased as I lowered him into the sidecar. Especially as I had him home fifteen minutes earlier than usual. He appeared relieved as he climbed out of the sidecar and disappeared indoors. Later he said to Anna "tell that wee fella not to pick me up in that contraption again.”
 
Eventually leave ended and excitedly I returned to Harrier. Margaret and I were reunited and all was well with the world. A few weeks later Margaret invited me to her home in Worcestershire. It was a big step and I was quit anxious about meeting her parents for the first time. What would they think of me? Nevertheless I set about cleaning and polishing the motorcycle for the trip. I hoped my bike would be impressive even if I wasn’t.

A few days before we were due to leave a crisis arose. Margaret's parents wrote pleading with her not to travel home on a motorcycle. Her mother considered it much too dangerous. It seemed that just like my father she saw my contraption as unsafe.

Without transportation it looked like the weekend was off. Travelling to Worcestershire in private transportation was difficult enough. Public transportation such as trains and buses were either unavailable indirect or too slow. I scrambled around the camp looking for an alternative. I offered my bike in trade for a car for the weekend. A classmate agreed to swap his 1938 Hillman Minx convertible for my bike. This solved my immediate problem but his car left a lot to be desired. The many faults included a leaky top, worn steering, bald tires and almost non-existent brakes. The only saving grace was the fact that it couldn’t reach much over thirty miles per hour. That at least made the need for braking a little less urgent. If Margaret's mother had been aware of these facts my motorcycle might have regained favour.
 
Spending a whole weekend with Margaret would be wonderful. Upon our arrival in Worcestershire I soon realised I was not favoured as a suitor by her mother. During the weekend we drove to Bristol to visit my brother Tommy and his wife Joan. Tommy had a 1936 Hillman Minx saloon for sale that piqued my interest. I decide to sell the motorbike when I returned to base and buy the car. It was two years older than the borrowed convertible but was in much better condition with brakes that actually worked. Margaret and I arrived back at Harrier late on the Sunday night to a silent and sleeping camp. We unloaded the car, kissed goodnight and returned to our respective messes.

The next morning I returned the ignition key to its owner. He looked a little sheepish when he saw me, and I understood why when I saw my bike tucked in beside our mess block. The sidecar body was sitting on the ground behind it.
 
Apparently driving down to the village pub with two passengers, one in the sidecar and one on the pillion they hit a bump. The sidecar body parted from the frame and came to an abrupt halt in the middle of the road.

The sudden loss of weight caused the bike to veer off into a hedgerow dumping the two riders in dense thicket. The helpless sidecar passenger was trapped and sitting in the middle of the road. The canopy could only be opened from the outside.  No real damage had been done and after thinking about it, it was really quite funny. The bolts holding the sidecar to the frame had rusted and worked loose. I’d never sat in the sidecar so was unaware that a problem existed. However I was most grateful it hadn’t happened to Margaret while visiting her parents

I didn't bother repairing the sidecar and removed the frame and wheel from the bike.  I placed a ‘for sale’ ad on the mess hall notice board. A few messmates showed immediate interest and by the end of the second week a deal was concluded and the bike was gone. My next off duty weekend I made tracks to Bristol and bought my brother’s Hillman.
 
In May the radar course became more complicated and we spent a lot of time in
 
the Cotton Trainer learning aerial radar tactics. No one in the class had served
 
aboard an aircraft carrier so the type of radar we now worked with was new and unfamiliar. We surely caused our instructors no end of problems as we
 
attempted to vector aircraft onto enemy targets.

Our aircraft were known as ‘Friendly’ and we were supposed to guide then to the enemy aircraft, known as ‘Bogeys’. It was easy to get confused and mistake a classmate's Friendly as a Bogey. We often ended up shooting down our own planes. Slowly we began to learn and were able to accurately guide a friendly fighter onto a Bogey.

The training was a simulation without real aircraft. I had no desire to do it
 
for real and lived in fear of being posted to an aircraft carrier.

 

 


 
The month of May was a difficult month in more ways than one. I received a
 
letter from home saying Pop was unwell and had to leave work. There was no
 
mention of what was actually wrong with him. The omission caused me concern. I knew Pop never missed work. Whatever was wrong with him must be serious.

Later Anna wrote to explain that he had a large sore on the inside of his mouth.  Apparently it was caused by poorly fitting false teeth. I relaxed, thinking it would soon heal and with new better fitting teeth everything would be okay.

The next bad news arrived a few days later. Margaret had received a draft notice to
 
leave Harrier on the 20th June. Her new posting was HMS Mercury the Naval
 
Signal Station located near Portsmouth. I was unprepared for the possibility
 
that Margaret might move. Deep down we both knew it was bound to happen but had chosen not to think about it. I knew when the course ended I'd be drafted and possibly stationed overseas.
 
The weekend before Margaret was due to leave we packed the Hillman with her
 
many belongings and headed for Worcestershire. She had an unusual collection of
 
items that included a teddy bear named ‘Twurly’ and a potted cactus called
 
’Alfred’.

She held Alfred on her lap for the duration of the journey. He actually turned out very handy because during the trip we ran into heavy rain. The Hillman was a saloon car with the centre roof section made of fabric. Over the years the material had deteriorated and rain dripped directly above Margaret's lap. Alfred had never before been so well watered.

 

 


 
After Margaret departed Harrier I suffered indescribable pain and heartache.
 
I had never before missed someone so completely. We wrote to each other
 
every day and, while it was a thrill to receive letters they only offered
 
small consolation.

 

 


 
The commencement of exams forced me to clear my mind and prepare for the
 
tests ahead. The exams lasted for a whole week and consisted of written, oral
 
and practical. The last thing I wanted to do was fail. 

Fortunately I passed, and on the 15th July 1959 I was sewing my newly qualified radar badge on the right arm of my uniform.

In the following days draft notices began to arrive. This could be exciting or disastrous depending on where one was posted.

When my name appeared I was dumbfounded to read I was posted to HMS
 
Dolphin, to begin submarine training. I didn't recall volunteering for the
 
submarine service. I checked with my Divisional Petty Officer. He looked up
 
my records and sure enough I had put my name forward whilst aboard the
 
Eastbourne.

Slowly it all came back to me. I remembered that particular tot time when I decided an extra shilling a day was a good idea.  Once recovered from the initial shock it really wasn't so bad. The extra pay would certainly be handy. Better still Dolphin was in Portsmouth, and so was Margaret.
 
I loaded the Hillman with my kit and hit the road. Leaving Harrier my journey would be more comfortable than my January arrival on the motorcycle.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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irishrover wrote 9 days ago

Thank you so much for W Listing my book and for your very kind comments. Yes Belfast is indeed a grand old city be it we still have a few idiots running on the Falls and Shankill. Talking of Armalites, in 1986 I took my 9 year old daughter home with me , we were stopped by a British army patrol near the top of the Shankill, I fumbled to find my passport while an 18 year old soldier boy held me at gun point. Sad times and have never understood why the protestants have such fear and hatred of the Catholics. I'm a protestant but more than that I'm proud to call myself Irish. I love all of Ireland and all the peoples both North and South. I believe the root cause is the lack of Irish history being taught in the public schools, I never knew anything about 1916 or James Connolly et al. But enough about Ireland, your book is hilarious and so entertaining, I only had time to read the 1st chp. Sorry my shelf is full at present but I have added you to my W'L and starred.

Otter wrote 9 days ago

"Kippers for Breakfast" - a wonderful evocative opening.

I really enjoyed your opening chapter, it certainly invites the reader to follow these young boys on their adventure.

Watch listed and may even back when i have read a lot more.

I remember the Belfast of the mid sixties, for a small town west of ireland lad, the rows of red brick buildings were a world apart. The famous cranes of H&W, the quays, for three summers, I holidayed in Belfast and have fond memories. All that changed when the Armalites took to the streets. I remember smell of fear as we walked the Shankhill road and a bomb exploded in the distance.

Maybe its high time, I walked the Shankhill road again.

Norman Morrow

http://authonomy.com/books/53181/the-con-father-brennan-book-1/

bannism4 wrote 15 days ago

Hi Frederick,
your writing style is very much like mine so of course I loved it!!
Kind Regards,
Mick Bannister (Gibbous Moon).

irishrover wrote 45 days ago

Hi Fredrick
Having no naval nor any forces (for that matter) background to relate this to I found it rather hard to follow. Your memoirs are something for you to cherish, but I can see why you wanted to share them. I can see this going down well though, with ex military or naval personnel, who would have more in common with it than me. Sorry if this disappoints you but this is my opinion and I like to be honest on here. It is only my opinion so discard it if you want.
Hi Brian am I to assume from your comments that you did not return my support???
Cheers.
Brian.

Brian G Chambers wrote 46 days ago

Hi Fredrick
Having no naval nor any forces (for that matter) background to relate this to I found it rather hard to follow. Your memoirs are something for you to cherish, but I can see why you wanted to share them. I can see this going down well though, with ex military or naval personnel, who would have more in common with it than me. Sorry if this disappoints you but this is my opinion and I like to be honest on here. It is only my opinion so discard it if you want.
Cheers.
Brian.

Seringapatam wrote 116 days ago

Frederick, This is wonderful and intelligent piece of writing and I enjoyed it very much, Nice pace Nice flow. Well done.
Sean Connolly. British Army on the Rampage

irishrover wrote 117 days ago

Thank you Lynn glad you enjoyed, I will get to your book soon.

Lyn4ny wrote 117 days ago

Great Story. I enjoyed it! I wish the best of luck with it. High Stars!

-Lyn
Forty-Four Footprints Following Me

ShirleyGrace wrote 122 days ago

Thank you so much for your comment. I read and backed you a long time ago. I enjoyed your book. Maybe I can back you again soon.
ShirleyGrace

irishrover wrote 192 days ago

Thanks Catherine, I appreciate your comments. took a look at your book, great opening and I didn't notice any editing issues???but I know what you mean its a tough job and no matter how many times I check and recheck I still manage to miss things. Merry Christmas, I have starred and added you to my WL

CATHERINE SHAW wrote 192 days ago

Fab story. 6 stars x

patio wrote 197 days ago

I read part of this story some time ago and commented. I read a bit more and opinion still the same. Its a great story. Max stars

Brendie wrote 203 days ago

An excellent story that will awake some wonderful memories in all the old salts that served in the Royal Navy - or any other Navy, for that matter. Told with style and humour, it really captures the mood of those times.

Software wrote 223 days ago

A very personal and convincing story invoking remembrances of the work the work of Nicholas Monsarrat. Real life always provides the best baseline material for adventure yarns, and this draws heavily on the authors experiences. Skillfully crafted, backed and stared highly.

Clive Radford
Doghouse Blues

irishrover wrote 236 days ago

Hi thank you for taking the time to read my book, glad you enjoyed it. I have taken a quick look at your first chapter and will offer you this advice. Although you should keep in mind I'm no expert!!! I found your first chapter heavy going and wasn't clear where your story was headed, it was also very long. I have always believed the first chapter is the most important chapter, if it doesn't grab the reader they will probably not read further. I have starred and add to my WL. I wish you luck finding that elusive publisher, you might consider self publishing, it seems to be the way to go these days, also have your book as an E book, gives you much wider coverage.

irishrover wrote 236 days ago

Hllo
the first day o Naval career is interesting to read. I like everything about you wrote. Most of them was the cinema of 1984 by George Orwell. common men, that is one of my great mentors. that shows you are bringing literature into your writing. dont change that style. ofcus memoir sounds very interesting and you created it well here. it tells us how young boy in Naval was trying to be responsible man. high stars from me.

will you kindly look at mine also. it is title Animals In Paradise

Isoje David wrote 236 days ago

Hllo
the first day o Naval career is interesting to read. I like everything about you wrote. Most of them was the cinema of 1984 by George Orwell. common men, that is one of my great mentors. that shows you are bringing literature into your writing. dont change that style. ofcus memoir sounds very interesting and you created it well here. it tells us how young boy in Naval was trying to be responsible man. high stars from me.

will you kindly look at mine also. it is title Animals In Paradise

Maevesleibhin wrote 237 days ago

The Royal Navy and Me
I am really not a big reader of memoirs, and have frankly read more on this site than anywhere else. The main issue with memoirs is that they rarely follow a clear trajectory - of course, life is rarely so coherent as to follow a plot arc. So many memoirs come out as being a bit episodic.
I read to chapter four and really found it quite interesting. Just not gripping. It reminded me of hearing stories from my dad. They are fascinating anecdotes, but only held together by my interest in him. I feel that in order to engage me as a reader you need to give me a goal, be it a direction or a theme. I felt that you missed several opportunities to do this. For example, when you talk about the boy who was a mess, whose whites were ever grey and whose mother asked you for help.(sorry, I am rubbish at names).
It seemed a good opportunity for character development, even if the relationship does not flourish. I also felt that you eluded some great possibilities to have rich descriptions. The airplane trip seems like a phenomenal experience, as does the incident with the shoe shining urchin and even the laundry experience. But, again, they come across as a bit rushed to me, like you are anxious to move on to the next anecdote. I feel this is a shame, because you have a great deal of interesting stories, and I think the story wants to be told.
I would humbly recommend that you consider giving me a goal. Towards which we can work. It might be starting at a later moment in your life, where you can talk philosophically and maybe even comically about your past. That or start with some fabulous description that will grab hold of me.
As with all less-than-rosy comments, this is just my opinion. Follow your guts.
Best of luck with it,
Maeve

TPN wrote 265 days ago

A fascinating story! Reminds me of those wonderful old Jack Hawkins movies--the dark sea roiling and salt spray lashing at one's face, only this time Mr. Rodgers was in a submarine. Rodgers really evokes the gritty atmosphere of life below the waves as well as the ups and downs of the life of a sailor offshore and on. An enthralling read!

irishrover wrote 265 days ago

Thank you Jesamine, that was probably the nicest review I have received to date. I'm pleased you enjoyed my adventures/misadventures??? I have often thought of Trevor and still feel some guilt, wondering if I could have done more. Trevor really wanted to succeed and become a sailor, he simply didn't have the capacity to cope with the harsh training. I have often wondered what became of him.



ThaQUOTE] Realclub review.

This is a charming and impeccably written tale of a boy becoming a man in the Royal Navy. It flows so well that you feel like you're following him through his journey.
The first day and following weeks you realise how much these new sailors are just small boys. They're excited and frightened and unaware of what awaits them.
Little accurate descriptions make this more than a story that could be fiction. The kidneys on toast sounds revolting. The needles being sterilised on Bunsen burners and used over and over, blunting them makes you wince with the pain that this caused these naïve boys.
I really felt sorry for Trevor. Some people just can't ever get anything right and he seemed to be one of them. I couldn't help thinking that maybe he wasn't as useless as he made out and really he just didn't want to be there.
I liked how you showed us the transformation from naïve boy to responsible individual. When being taken advantage of in the streets (by the older sailors) you realised the seriousness of your own actions and took control of the situation.
Once the basic training horrors were out of the way, the story goes down a fantastic path into a trip to Australia (during the Olympics), the ideal job and the freedom to have some fun.
The part where the two of them are hiding like frightened rabbits under the girl's beds and making their escapes out through the bedroom window made me chuckle. They truly sound like happy times.
The boyish jokes and tricks, like shaving off half of Reds beard, shows us how things haven't really changed that much over the years.
The references to sayings was interesting and I hope these continue throughout the story.
It is very well written, edited and polished. I did spot a couple of tiny edits that you might want to change.
...and made put a wet wool sock in his mouth...and made to put...
...for any unhappy lad to attempt desertions......maybe that ones ok, but lads or desertion would make it sound better.
Great story Frederick, I'll have to read more another time. I'm sure there'll be harsh times too and a lot more fun to go with it. Highly starred. Backing to follow when I have space.
Jesamine.

gingerknucklehairs wrote 265 days ago

Realclub review.
This is a charming and impeccably written tale of a boy becoming a man in the Royal Navy. It flows so well that you feel like you're following him through his journey.
The first day and following weeks you realise how much these new sailors are just small boys. They're excited and frightened and unaware of what awaits them.
Little accurate descriptions make this more than a story that could be fiction. The kidneys on toast sounds revolting. The needles being sterilised on Bunsen burners and used over and over, blunting them makes you wince with the pain that this caused these naïve boys.
I really felt sorry for Trevor. Some people just can't ever get anything right and he seemed to be one of them. I couldn't help thinking that maybe he wasn't as useless as he made out and really he just didn't want to be there.
I liked how you showed us the transformation from naïve boy to responsible individual. When being taken advantage of in the streets (by the older sailors) you realised the seriousness of your own actions and took control of the situation.
Once the basic training horrors were out of the way, the story goes down a fantastic path into a trip to Australia (during the Olympics), the ideal job and the freedom to have some fun.
The part where the two of them are hiding like frightened rabbits under the girl's beds and making their escapes out through the bedroom window made me chuckle. They truly sound like happy times.
The boyish jokes and tricks, like shaving off half of Reds beard, shows us how things haven't really changed that much over the years.
The references to sayings was interesting and I hope these continue throughout the story.
It is very well written, edited and polished. I did spot a couple of tiny edits that you might want to change.
...and made put a wet wool sock in his mouth...and made to put...
...for any unhappy lad to attempt desertions......maybe that ones ok, but lads or desertion would make it sound better.
Great story Frederick, I'll have to read more another time. I'm sure there'll be harsh times too and a lot more fun to go with it. Highly starred. Backing to follow when I have space.
Jesamine.

ShirleyGrace wrote 266 days ago

Frederick:
I have read three chapters of your work. Due to the subject matter, I didn't think I would be able to get into it but I did. It's well written and I felt bad for the guys being forced to put up with all that s#it. What don't kill us makes us strong? I guess but I did not envy you. ..Laughs. I thought it was well told and good reading. High stars from me.
Shirley Grace
The Devil's Stepchild
Realclub review

Tod Schneider wrote 269 days ago

Great job of showing us what life was like for a new recruit! Your writing is very clean, and you capture details well.
Critique-wise, if there was one thing I might tinker with it would be to look for ways to spice up chapter one with more dialogue, and if you can come up with a hook that would be good -- something to grab the reader and say "oh no, what happened next?" But overall, really very clean and solid.
Best of luck with this!
And if you have any interest in children's literature, do drop in on the Lost Wink.
Thanks!
Tod
http://authonomy.com/books/40646/the-lost-wink/

jack hudson wrote 272 days ago

The Royal Navy and Me is an error free memoir that moves along at a fast pace and seems to improve as it unfolds. From the failure of Trevor, through marital difficulties with an unfaithful wife, a harrowing uncontrolled descent in a submarine, and the aftermath after the end of a navy career, the diary-like narrative unfolds. My only suggestion is to consider starting the story with the tense event in the last chapter and telling the story through a" my life unfolds as I am about to die" flashback to hook the reader and start with a bang before getting back to the eventual resolution of the uncontrolled dive event late in the book. High stars. jack hudson

Neville wrote 337 days ago

The Royal Navy & Me.
By Frederick Rodgers.

A good description of the night at the Mission before travelling down to London, I enjoyed the scene.
I had to laugh though about the train with no toilet facilities and the way it was managed to overcome the problem…good job you never had the kippers at breakfast!
Quite a shock when you arrive at HMS Ganges, all the commotion and activity.
Chief Petty Officer, Bermingham with his welcome tone of voice, ha, ha.
Such a shock from ‘civvy street’ I would have thought!
You’ve written this very well, I can almost feel that I’m there, in the cold shower, wondering what’s next to come, what you’ve got yourself into!
I love the carefree way you write and I found no errors as I moved along—it’s all good!
I will have to come back again, Fred as I’ve only got past your first day but already like the book.
You look very smart in your sailor’s uniform—something to be proud of!
Well starred and I’ll be back!!

Kind regards,

Neville. The Secrets of the Forest – The Time Zone.

…Check the heading- THE ROYAL NAVY(&) ME (The Royal Navy & Me)… Space!

Shelby Z. wrote 344 days ago

This is very interesting.
The realistic plot really draws the reader in with interest.
You do well by starting right into things.
The words flow well as the story develops.
Good work!

Shelby Z./Driving Winds

P.S. Please take a look at my pirate adventure Driving Winds.

Silvia Gambia wrote 346 days ago

Interesting. The book says 'biography', but isn't this autobiography?

grahamwhittaker wrote 356 days ago

I'm giving this a read Fred because we share things. I too went to Ganges at the age of 14 and nine months. Drake 40 Mess and became a Sparker. Went into EW on Phoebe and all that stuff. I haven't gone through it as such yet but I certainly will. It's an interesting biog and there is a decent market for good biogs. BTW if you are not already there visit www.forcesreunited.com and register. You will qualify and it's where we all keep up with one another. Take care and I will give you may opinion now that the book is on my WL
Graham Whittaker The Girl From Kosovo

David Price wrote 377 days ago

Frederick, I've just finished the first two chapters, and I now know why I never wanted to become a sailor! This is very well-written and well-remembered, but I guess there was a reason for that. I will read on, but just want to let you know my thoughts for now.
Some of your imagery is wonderful, for example: 'a scene of lost curls and locks with occasional traces of blood' and 'shit on a raft'.
It's possible I missed this, but I would like to know how old you are on the day you set off on the steamer from Belfast to Liverpool. This will help the reader identify with you, and care more about you from the beginning. I also wondered if you made any friends - on the train down to London, or in your first 24 hours as a sailor? If you didn't make any friends, it would be helpful to know that too, because once again, it will give us an insight into your character. By the way, it's not Euston Street Station but Euston Station (which is on Euston Road). (Unless they've changed the name in the last 50 years, which is possible!)
Not really knowing anything about a sailor's life, I didn't quite understand what 'double smartly across it' and 'an hour of doubling' signified exactly. Perhaps you might want to consider expanding a little on these terms.
Finally, I noticed a few typos you may want to fix - all in chapter 2 I think. '...empting blankets and bodies onto the deck' - the 'y' is missing in 'emptying'. 'I doubt any of them wouldn't have been hired to shear sheep.' I think you mean '...would have been hired..'.
But overall, I think this is a very genuine account of a sailor's life, written with care and affection. A place on my watchlist for now, and five stars.
David
MASTER ACT: a memoir

irishrover wrote 380 days ago

Thanks Lenny I appreciate your comments and hope you might consider backing my book

Lenny Banks wrote 380 days ago

Hi Frederick, I read chapter 6. I found the recount of your journey very interesting, especially the stop when you bought the momentos. Some of the chapters in my book follow an hour or a day in the life of my characters, this chapter accounts for weeks of your life, I am sure you have many interesting stories and accounts of events you could have included. You have led an interesting life and it is a great shame the forces have been scaled down depriving many of the adventures you experienced. I wish you luck with your book, it is very intersting.

Kind Regards and Best Wishes
Lenny Banks
Tide and Time: At the Rock

Camac wrote 385 days ago

I was a member of a school cadet force and made several trips on Irish Sea ferries - albeit at a later time than you - so your opening chapters brought back memories of my own youth. This is an extremely well-written account and your recollection of events back in the '50s is astonishingly clear. The training undergone by teenage RN recruits will seem Spartan by today's standards - not so back then when caning was allowed in schools and capital punishment one of the laws of the land. I can visualize your book in shop windows in towns with a RN tradition, so I sincerely hope that you will go on to finish it. High stars!

Camac Johnson
Hemingway Quest

jasonronin wrote 387 days ago

A well written trip down memorie lane. The adventures of the boy that would become a man, at times I felt I was walking close behind in your footsteps. A great insite into the salty sea dog life of a sailor from back in the day.

irishrover wrote 404 days ago

I appreciate that you took the time to look at my book, sorry it didn't hit the mark for you,. We all have deferring opinions of what is good or bad. I don't necessarily agree with your comments, indeed I have had some very positive remarks about the book from readers not of a Naval background. I have especially received positive comments from other Ganges boys saying how my story brought back so many memories. I do agree they were good times, sadly now long in the past. Yours Aye Irishrover

Pretzki wrote 404 days ago

Unfortunately this work fails to hit the mark, less told through the eyes of a boy, more the man who has difficulty expressing the true emotion felt all those years ago.
I did the same, wrote a memoir of my time in the Andrew and where yours is too late, mine was too soon, dripping with jack speak, so much so that no one outside of the mob could understand.
They were good times, but the only people who'd ever understand them, are the ones we served alongside and more often than not we missed that opportunity

Mr. Nom de Plume wrote 406 days ago

The "mild and bitter" is a new one. The "sweet and sour" notations always amused me. This work is extremely well written with humorous situations neatly included, e.g. "None" as a signal flag hoist. Backed, I was never in the RN but this work is informative and entertaining. Well Done. Chuck

Cara Gold wrote 406 days ago

{The Royal Navy & Me} – Frederick Rodgers
Chapter 1:
I like the way you open this, standing at the ship’s guardrail. I like the insight you give into the mind of the young sailor through the use of first person, and also the daydream – this is very effective in characterization and setting the scene, and perhaps foreshadowing battles to come.

An excellent transition from the calm of daydreaming, to the more suspenseful two-sentence para ‘Now wasn’t the time to reminisce about the past. I had far greater priorities on this important day.’ There is a nice ebb and flow of tension, maintaining the readers interest in the opening of what is a crucial chapter.

Nice depiction of arrival, and the setting. You make the reader feel like they are there in the scene, experiencing things themselves. One thing I would be careful of is repeating any of the more ordinary, everyday descriptions.. e.g. eating/going to the toilet/etc… mainly in order to improve the pace early on, and catch the reader. Having said that, you do a good job of linking and making these ordinary actions relevant → e.g. ‘I decided not to ask him what it was’, because the big burly cook didn’t look particularly happy. This is great because it shows the reader more about the character’s personality. But, in contrast, an example of description to cut could be ‘Trevor and I collected our cups, plates and cutlery…’ because it doesn’t add either to the plot, or to the characters, if that makes sense? Just a thought!

In chapter 1, the nerves, anxiety and impatience → I’d show this more, perhaps describe sweaty hands, eager with anticipation, jittery thoughts, etc… to really build up more connection with the characters and reading – as is essential too when writing from the first person. There are a few other instances of this (e.g. ‘I was confused/I was surprised’)

Also a suggestion to look over and count how many times the word ‘was’ appears → try and eliminate any passive voice possible through rewording of sentences. In the first chapter, I used the ‘find’ tool, and ‘was’ came up 100 times. Using this tool is good because it truly highlights to you where the repetition is. I had the same problem until Michael Dale on Authonomy pointed it out to me, and I went through the process of rephrasing to reduce this! E.g. ‘The journey to London was uneventful, and we arrived safely at 1.30pm on Wednesday afternoon.’ Could be → ‘After an uneventful journey, we arrived safely in London at 1.30pm…’ Trust me, fixing overuse of ‘was’ is not as scary as it seems… the ‘find’ tool on word is terrific for highlighting, and then I just spent a day quickly going through the manuscript :)

I hope these comments are useful to you as you go through edits! Pretty minor stuff :)
I look forward to reading on and seeing how everything unravels!!
All the best in the meantime, and thanks so much for your enthusiastic response to ‘Dawn of Destruction.’
Cara

Sharda D wrote 409 days ago

Hi Frederick,
here for our reading swap, thanks again for your backing of Mr Unusually. Much appreciated.
Feel free to ignore my comments, they are just my opinion and what do I know???

Your writing is lyrical and flowing and you are good at sensory detail - I can smell the woodbines and taste the bacon and eggs. But I kept wondering why you were writing? What do you really want to say?

I like all the ‘historical’ detail about the sailor’s lives but I felt at times there was too much detail and that your material needed a little more crafting. I suppose it depends on what you want to do with this. If you are happy self publishing for other men of similar experiences to read, this is a fine, well written account, with lots of well remembered detail to keep your readers happy. But if you want a more wider readership, you need to stick to incidents that will have a broad appeal. The only one I read in your first two chapters was your account of weeing out of the window on the trains and making a dash for tea and buns. That was a little recollection that will amuse and delight many people. We need more of these little nuggets.

Memoir does not have to be 100% accurate or to flow from one day to the next, the same rules apply as to fiction, we need more of a 'story' shaped out of your real experiences. We all need a bit of dramatic tension to keep us turning the pages. Something to keep us wanting to read on. But I couldn't find much to keep me gripped here. There is a lot of detail but it doesn't feel as if it has sufficient direction.
All the best with this, you've got a lot of potential here and writing talent,
5 stars from me.
Sharda.

fatema wrote 409 days ago

Hi, i read through your descriptive maritime journey. I rememebered Ports mouth, on every board you get on, you get loaded with interesting oldtime naval story. fascinating. A whole world captured in your memory. Very well written and thank you for bringing it to us.
I wondner when this Native English boys of those era lived an English life. They haven't. All the were lived with instruction and commandments.
This will turn up to be a history subjects. Welldone. please add rest of your chapters as it is imcomplete. Rated and backed. Good luck.

patio wrote 414 days ago

I only ever heard brief information on service men. Thanks for sharing so much details on the ins and outs

SpicePepe wrote 420 days ago

One of my favourite books is The Cruel Sea by Nicholas Monserrat and with this in mind I placed this biography on my watchlist. The Royal Navy and Me is matter-a-fact and interesting with loads of details. I read nearly to the end of the available chapters quickly and easily. I wish you well with the next chapters. All the best, Bridget - The Road from Makhonjwa

Casimir Greenfield wrote 427 days ago

A vibrant and evocative read. My wife's father was in the navy, you've filled in a lot of gaps with your honest, down-to-earth approach to the whole adventure.

Starry, starry night...

Cas

Adeel wrote 427 days ago

Writing Biography is not an easy thing but you have done it so fantastically that makes me to read more of it. A hooking story which deserves to be termed as excellent. Highly starred.

Stephen Cooper wrote 427 days ago

Nossers, then Nozzers in chapter two.
Apart from a few grammatical mistakes, a workmanlike story which could be improved upon, but the subject is interesting and should be told.

grantdavid wrote 446 days ago

Thank God I joined the Air Force! This is a terrifying tale, though full of humour. Written in a crisp monologue, like an intimate fireside chat, it leaves nothing out, (sometimes nothing on). To think I tried more than once to join the Navy before getting a better offer!
Non-fiction has its restrictions, and this account seems to hover very close to fiction - but that's what the good old Navy's like - unbelievable.
High stars to you, Frederick, and on my watch-list. Now we all turn over again, the backing will soon follow.
David Grant,
"Pompey Chimes"

grantdavid wrote 446 days ago

Thank God I joined the Air Force! This is a terrifying tale, though full of humour. Written in a crisp monologue, like an intimate fireside chat, it leaves nothing out, (sometimes nothing on). To think I tried more than once to join the Navy before getting a better offer!
Non-fiction has its restrictions, and this account seems to hover very close to fiction - but that's what the good old Navy's like - unbelievable.
High stars to you, Frederick, and on my watch-list. Now we all turn over again, the backing will soon follow.
David Grant,
"Pompey Chimes"

Margaret Anthony wrote 447 days ago

I confess this is not exactly the sort of book I might choose to read, more of a man's choice I think. However, what I can offer is great respect for biography's especially when they are amongst other things, records of the past. Here the writer captures his memories with ease and manages to tell a story which doesn't inform the reader, merely gently take us with him through the good, bad and at times mundane of a fascinating period in his life. Well written and entertaining for lovers of Military reads.

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