Menagerie

Flawlessly written and very funny. I am going to come back to it. Top stars!!!

Hi Will. I've read all you uploaded, but not the repeated ones, although it did stump me at first and I thought chapter 8 may have been a different version of chapter 7. I soon realised that it was probably to get the word count to 10,000. I would have liked some more.
The Princess of Wales (Whales) story was very clever and I wonder how many people would have cottoned on to the pun. Diana is buried on an island on the Althrop estate about a mile from my home. It was all very sad and the day of the funeral was very different from our end than all the goings on in London and on the TV. It must have been nearly 20 years ago now, God that makes me feel old and yet it seems only like a couple of years ago.
Anyway I'd love it if you'd join our little weekly comp. Your work would go down a treat and it's good to encourage us to write something short and different every week. Please at least take a look at the thread:
http://authonomy.com/forums/threads/106192/fff-november-23-2012/
I hope you can find time to take a look. I may even be cheeky and poach the sea food poem for myself. Only joking.
I look forward to watching this charming book grow. Please add some more. High stars.
Take care, Jes.

Will:
How is everything going?

Wonka:
I cannot understand why this book is not shelved more. I know you aren't on much and I shelved it in the past. Maybe if you uploaded more of your work? I think it is clever and something for everyone. I thank you for your continued support.
Shirley Grace

Hi Will; Varied and intriguing. I particularly liked The Exodus (very good indeed) and The Seafood (or is it the raven) made me smile, which isn't easily done. Its nice to read something a bit different. Keep it up and well done.
RMA
The Snow Lily
Sea Spray and Stars

Haha, nice name and nice collection, sir. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to more writings from you!

Mr. A.

Hi Will ...

Just had a brief look through your writing and found it unusual and interesting. The mixture of short stories and poetry means there is something for everyone. Only one real problem at the moment. In the novel about the hikers, when explaining the lack of brain power in the older boy, I feel there are too many cliches. This stops the flow of the story. Apart from that, what I have read so far is excellent. Backed and rated. Regards ... Duncan.

Will:
Took a skip through. The Exodus is beautifully written. Seafood is funny and very clever. When I can I will read more. High stars and backed! Welcome!!!
Shirley Grace