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date submitted 24.04.2012
date updated 19.08.2012
genres: Fiction, Fantasy, Children's
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The Uncle Bunkle Stories

Tod Schneider (writing as Uncle Bunkle)

Cordelia, her mama Penca, her grandma Anacely and Jack the Dog find tiny aunts and uncles underneath the bunk bed, including one who tells stories.

 

With the help of an armadillo, Cordelia rids her pants of tiny ants, who turn out to be aunts. But that’s just where it starts! Soon she discovers tiny men, building houses down beneath her bunk bed. They are politely asked to leave, and when they don’t they are sent off to live with those tiny aunts. Finally Cordelia discovers one last uncle, down beneath the bunk bed, scratching with a goose feather pen. He and his scribblings are swept skywards, but before he disappears he cries out, “Those are your stories! But do not worry, for as sure as I am your Uncle Bunkle I shall bring them back to you!” This is more important than she realizes – for without her stories, she will lose all her memories from her earliest years, when she was tiny as well. And so begin the Uncle Bunkle stories.

 
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Chicken Trouble

 

Chickens are okay, they just can’t do a whole lot. They strut and they strut and they buck, buck, buck. They muddle through the puddles, pecking in the muck. They eat worms, seeds and bugs. They lay eggs every day. For most chickens, that’s what life is all about. But for Cordelia’s chickens, it wasn’t enough.

“We’re bored,” they clucked. “We want to do something new and exciting.” It sounded like, “bawwwwk bawk bawk.

“I understand,” Cordelia replied. “I once felt bawwwk myself. It lasted two minutes.”

Bawwwwk bawk bawk,” said the chickens.

“All the time!” said Cordelia. “That’s dreadful. We’ll have to do something about that.” She told Anacely, “Abuela, the chickens need something to do.”

“Isn’t laying eggs enough?” asked Anacely.

“Nope,” said Cordelia.

“I think it should be,” said her grandmother. “Tell them how much we appreciate those eggs every morning.”

“But laying eggs is no fun,” said Cordelia.

“Really? Are you sure? Have you ever tried laying one?” asked Anacely.

Cordelia admitted she hadn’t. “Still,” she insisted, “they need something more exciting in their lives, like games to play.”

“Very well,” said Anacely. “I suppose it’s up to me.”

The next morning, when Cordelia awoke, she rolled over and looked out the window. There she saw Anacely clapping a slow rhythm. The chickens were standing in a clumsy row, their big butts sticking out toward Cordelia, their heads tilting to one side. They were listening very respectfully.

“All right then,” Anacely told them. “Let’s give it a try. One and two and one and two and . . .”

The chickens looked bewildered. It seemed to Cordelia they were saying “Awwwk! Oh dear, oh my, this is not proper chicken behavior.” But after a few magic words from Anacely, they paired up, beak to beak, and attempted a simple dance step or two. Unfortunately, this ended quickly when one chicken stepped on another’s foot. They both fell over, landing on the chickens next to them, who tumbled into more chickens. A great deal of alarmed squawking, flapping of wings and ruffling of feathers ensued.

“Up, up, up,” said Anacely. “Come on now, don’t look so sheepish.”

Bawk! Just what do you mean by that?” said one chicken, wondering if she had been insulted.

“Sheepish means embarrassed,” Anacely explained. The chickens hadn’t known this, so now they looked more sheepish than ever.

“I thought it meant we looked woolly,” said another chicken.

“Or that we were clumsy dancers,” said a third.

“No, no that’s not it at all,” Anacely reassured them. “When sheep are embarrassed they are called chickenish.”

For some reason, this made the chickens feel a lot better, and they were able to get back to work.  Anacely continued her rhythmic clapping, singing along as well: la, la, lalalala, la, la, lalalala. The chickens stood and tried again.  This time they did a little better, stepping front and back, side to side, with only a little bumping, and no one fell down.

Buck, buck, buck,” they cackled, pleased with themselves. They practiced for the rest of the day, and for every morning after that.

One day a neighbor, Solomon Tizza, dropped by to trade a fresh jug of milk for a basket of eggs. He was a large, smiling, happy man. Solomon knocked at the front door. When there was no answer he walked around back. What he saw there was so startling his legs went tingly and he sank to the muddy ground. It was only sheer luck he didn’t spill any milk on his overalls.  His mouth dropped open, his hair curled up and his eyes grew wide. He rubbed them with balled up fists, then looked again. Nothing had changed.

Right in front of him stood 27 chickens in a line. Their wings were stretched across each others’ shoulders, and while Anacely clapped the beat they were dancing the can-can, kicking their legs, left, right, left, right, as high as they could. Chicken legs are not very long, so their kicks weren’t very high, but the effect was still startling.  Nearby sat Jack the Dog and three frogs, all watching attentively. When the dance ended Solomon Tizza sat, stunned, for a full minute before bursting into applause. 

The chickens had never been applauded before. Some of them thought he was clapping a new dance rhythm, and tried frantically to keep up.  Anacely laughed and explained to them what all the clapping was about. The chickens were pleased.

The next day Solomon showed up with his wife and children. Three frogs were joined by 17 more. The day after that there were 21 people and 23 frogs. In no time at all, the whole village was lugging picnic baskets through the mud, heading for the show. Forty-three children sat up front, where they could see better. Thirty-seven frogs sat in their laps.

This all would have been fine except for one thing: the chickens weren’t used to this kind of attention.  Normally, hens are humble creatures, although roosters do tend to crow. But dancing chickens, applauded daily, can become overly proud, which is exactly what happened. 

First, they insisted they needed makeup before performing. So Anacely would apply lipstick, rouge and mascara, which looked very silly on chickens. The hens thought they looked splendid. They insisted on having a mirror installed in the hen house, which Jack the Dog arranged immediately, since he never used his anyway. The chickens decided that seeds and bugs were terrible for breakfast. Instead, they demanded peanut butter sandwiches and imported French snails. One day they announced it was scandalous to be dancing naked. Although Anacely pointed out their fine coats of feathers, they clucked strong disagreement and refused to dance until provided with matching lime green tutus. 

The muddy backyard no longer suited them. They demanded a horse-drawn wagon to take them into town, so they could dance on a real stage in the village square. A simple platform was built to suit them, but the chickens grumbled about standing in the rain, so a roof was added. The chickens clucked at the cold, so walls, a fireplace and a chimney were built. Then the audience couldn’t see them so a whole new theater had to be constructed, with seats for hundreds of people. An immense sign on the roof read: “Chicken Palace.”

This still wasn’t enough. Their vanity was spinning out of control. At first, they hadn’t even dreamed of being treated as equals by human beings, but now they saw themselves as quite superior to people. They weren’t entirely sure at first, so they asked each other, and they all agreed: we are the best.  After all, we can dance. We have lime-green tutus and a theater named after us. The evidence is clear.

They posted flyers the next day, reading: “The most amazing chickens in the world!”  “The most beautiful chickens in the universe!” and “The best dancers ever!”

Fathers went home and asked their kids, “Did you know those are the most amazing chickens in the world?”

“That is so cool!” their children answered.

Mothers went home and asked grandmothers, “Did you know those are the most beautiful chickens in the universe?”

“We are so lucky to have them here.” the grandmothers replied.

Children went home and asked little babies, “Did you know those are the best dancers ever?”

Ga ga,” said the babies.

The more people spread the news, the more excited everybody became.  On Friday night dozens of villagers came to the Chicken Palace early, to make sure they got seats. Visitors who traveled all the way from Drain--even Mrs. Crumbley, the librarian-- stood patiently in the rain or sat in puddles, huddling together for warmth. Some were just starting to get grouchy when the chickens showed up, riding in a wagon pulled by Horatio the horse, driven by Jack the Dog, and followed by 37 hopping frogs.

“There they are!” screamed the fans.  The crowd surged toward the wagon. People in back were shoving. Everybody wanted to be in front where they could see the chickens up close, and maybe even touch them.  They were pushing so much the wagon started to tremble and tip. Finally it tumbled over with a crunch and a thud, followed by terrified squawking, frogs croaking and Jack the Dog barking an alarm.

The chickens in the wagon were all thrown clear.  Up the street they waddled, as fast as they could in their lime-green tutus, trying not to step on the 37 hopping frogs. Jack the Dog urged them on, running back and forth and barking encouragement. The crowd chased after them, led by the mayor. Three people were hollering “We want your autographs!”

“But we don’t know how to write!” hollered the chickens. Seven people were hollering “Give us your beautiful feathers!”

Aggh!” cried the chickens, “not our feathers!” Forty two people were hollering, “We must have your tutus!”

“Buck-buck-bkawwwk!” The chickens cried. “This is way too exciting.  What have we done?”

They ran as fast as they could, but the crowd was close behind. The chickens were terribly worried about what would happen if their fans caught up, but at the last moment, as they turned a bend in the road, they tumbled, beak over chicken feet, into a slime-covered swamp.  As if that wasn’t bad enough, dozens of nasty, hungry snakes suddenly slithered out of the muck, with chicken dinners in mind.  Jack the Dog barked. Frogs popped up like green firecrackers, then zipped away in all directions. The chickens leaped straight up, flapping so hard their feet barely touched the swamp and skedaddled away as fast as they could.

At least now the fans had given up. They didn’t want to squish their way through a snake-infested swamp. Besides, the chickens didn’t look like famous dancers anymore--they looked like slime-coated porcupines. 

Finally, the fans went home. So did the chickens. They all clucked in agreement that things had gotten completely out of hand--and they didn’t really need all that vanity and excitement after all.  Since that time they’ve been completely satisfied back in the chicken coop.  As it turned out, having friends like Cordelia, Penca, Anacely, Horatio the horse and Jack the Dog was a lot more important than being chased by fans.

As for Chicken Pride, it faded away. The mirror in the chicken coop was ignored, gradually disappearing under a coat of dust and mud. The makeup was stored under a nest and forgotten.  They kept the tutus, however, and they still work with Anacely on new dancing skills, but only at home in their own backyard, and only with frogs for an audience. Mostly they strut and they strut and they buck, buck, buck. They muddle through the puddles, pecking in the muck. They happily eat worms, seeds and bugs instead of peanut butter sandwiches and French snails, and they lay eggs every day. For most chickens, that’s what life is all about. And after all they’d been through, for Cordelia’s chickens, that’s just fine too.


 

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amor87 wrote 111 days ago

CHIRG REVIEW: THE UNCLE BUNCLE STORES

Tod,

Here is my return read and CHIRG review. ☺

FIRST IMPRESSION

Based off your pitch, I really like that this is where we are getting a little of the backstory. I’m expecting an entertaining and age appropriate read! Also, I love the rhyming name Uncle Buncle. I think kids will really like that!

CHAPTER 1 & 2

After reading through this, I think it is full of imagination and wit. From explaining where aunts and uncles come from, to the armadillo, to the fun names, this is an easy and engaging read. I did have a question about the MC age. 10 seems a little old for the main character, considering the target age group. But perhaps I’m just thinking this because I see this book more for “emerging readers.” So that the target age group would be around 7-9. You may be targeting a slightly older audience, but with the theme of the story that makes me think that it is for younger readers. Anyways, all in all, a colorful story! I can see illustrations going perfectly with this and that this is something that kids would read before going to bed at night! Well done! High stars from me!

Best,

A

CARite wrote 120 days ago

The Uncle Bunkle stories-
Tod, I love the whimsical miniature world you have created with these little people.They are fantastically fun little stories sure to delight any who read them. Fabulous!
Cindy
CADreilling The Line-Beginnings

evermoore wrote 162 days ago

CHRG
Tod...what an amazing imagination you have to create such fun tales. From the first you present a fun stage for the rest that follows. I can see my Doodlebugs loving this book...I can even hear them quoting some of the parts by heart because it would be one they read often, just for the smiles you evoke. The animals were perfect for your cast of characters and I'm leaving you with a smile and six stars.
Best of luck and God bless..
Linda
Daniel Simmons Journey
and
Children Walking with Jesus

Diane60 wrote 195 days ago

CHIRG

Tod, what a super set of stories! they are funny and charming and i love the use of the same characters throughout. really enjoyable for everyone! i especially loved the pumpkin story (being a halloween baby). Read all 18 chapters.
:)
diane

Blancherose wrote 203 days ago

This is fun with the play on words and a easy read for children to listen to, and entertaining enough to keep grownups reading.

Blessings with the book!

Roslyn
Scribe-Lings, for your child like heart
"I Am" Through the Ages, for your seeking heart

margaret c wrote 207 days ago

I loved this bit of nonsense it made me smile. I read a few chapters then raced to the last chaper to see how it would end. Thorougly entertaining, Little children should love this, after they have checked uner the bed! Sorry it has taken me so long to read it. Margaret C. The Magic Kingdom

Lacee Alysse wrote 220 days ago

This is very cute and silly. My kids would adore this! Very good for chapter reading to five year olds I'd say.

Lacee Alysse wrote 220 days ago

This is very cute and silly. My kids would adore this! Very good for chapter reading to five year olds I'd say.

Joseph P wrote 253 days ago

Have been dipping in and out of The Lost Wink, also by Tom Schneider, and loving it the more I read it, very clever, charming tale told in a spellbinding tone. Glad to have backed it and 6-starred too. Now I've also discovered The Uncle Bunkle Stories, hilarious, another unique yarn. Highly recommended - for children my age and younger.

sunkle wrote 278 days ago

Chucklesome stories from Uncle Bunkle.
(I also took my nickname from similar sounding Sunkle 'The One Arm Fisherman', a story-telling character of a previous book I wrote)
These stories would be enchanting as a bedtime read for kids snuggled under the covers and read by a parent. They remind me of the old fairy tales of medieval fantasy.
A couple of tiny observations...
Do you pronounce 'aunts' as 'ants' in USA? We say, 'arnts' for 'aunts' in UK (ants as 'ants') but be assured that it doesn't detract from the great fun of the story for British readers.
In the book preview you state an aardvark sucks up the ants but in the book it's an armadillo (?)
Just minor observations for a very well written and entertaining read. I'm gladly backing this book.

David F. Norman wrote 295 days ago

As a curmudgeonly old man, I would be terrified trying to read a story to a small child. I think I could handle these.

I probably would get my tongue angled over some of the repeated dialog, but I know that is a commonly used device in children's stories. Really I can find no faults here a little editing for punctuation would not fix.

Good Job.

kokako wrote 296 days ago

CHIRG

Hi Tod,

I’ve read the start of your lovely ‘The Lost Wink’, so I thought I’d have a quick dip into ‘The Uncle Bunkle Stories’.

Ch 1

Interesting story, Tod. This is nicely put together, with a good balance between narrative and dialogue and a lovely story-teller tone. I suspect my accent doesn’t do the story full justice, but it was a lot of fun all the same. Very reminiscent of Rudyard Kipling’s Just-So Stories.

I only have one suggestion;
‘like a skittering spider, looking for ants to eat’
remove the comma, otherwise it sounds as though Cordelia is looking for ants to eat.

Ch 2

I like the way you’ve carried Cordelia through into the second story.

Just a few minor suggestions, to use or toss as you please.

1) ‘true,” he replied’
full stop after ‘replied’

2) ‘said the man’
full stop after ‘man’

3) ‘Oh great,” said Cordelia’
full stop after ‘Cordelia’

Another fun story.

Ch 3

Nice ending.

You write beautifully and the stories are quick and entertaining. Perfect for young children. Well done.

Sue

Julie_Undead wrote 296 days ago

Tod,
I was pleased to read the Uncle Bunkle stories to my 5 year old boy. He asked for more at the end of each one, and sat still straight through chapter 4! He giggled at the tiny people, and loved that there was an armadillo involved. He had no issue with the more "grown up" phrases. I think it is critical to use some formal language in children's books, as it encourages them to ask questions and deduce meanings of words from the context of the sentence. I, personally, love the tiny people...they remind me of The Indian in the Cupboard, which I always wished would happen to me. Charming, funny, crisp and warm. The Hutchings family gives it a thumbs up! I am happy to back your book.
--Julie

Kenneth Edward Lim wrote 327 days ago

Tod,
This book is a winner, full of silly scenarios a child would find appealing. Cordelia's world outside her walnut shell is rife with tiny aunts, dried snakes, weird chickens, a my-my bird and an uncle who grows up. Each chapter has a Dr. Seuss zaniness that invites reading aloud especially at bedtime for that final laugh before dreamland where hopefully the story continues. Thank you so much for sharing.

Kenneth Edward Lim
The North Korean

scargirl wrote 330 days ago

strong writing, but i didn't think i would like this from the premise and the idea of aunts and uncles under the bed....
j

MarkAM wrote 334 days ago

A charming and delightful children's book with lots of colorful characters to pique the imagination. From start to finish, it keeps the reader enraptured as though reading with the mind of a child; yet with the complete ability to make parallels to everyday life. Thank you for sharing this book and I wish you the best for its success.

- Mark
"Look to the Sky"

benedict wrote 347 days ago

CHIRG REVIEW

Hi there, Tod,

You definitely have a good command of language and a head full of fantastic ideas. Your writing is almost flawless, I normally come away with a whole page of corrections from most people's books but have found hardly anything here.

I really liked the idea of the little aunt and uncles, especially of them growing inside the grandmother's tummy. The ideas in the second chapter are also interesting, with the man capable of speaking to the various animals. I felt the stories came into their own in the fourth chapter which was the first instance in which you deliver a complete narrative for us to enjoy. I also liked its folk tale like qualities and of course your excellent prose. The dialogue in that chapter is particularly good.

However before this point, I found your first three chapters far too disparate and lacking in defining narratives to help children settle into the stories. Your first chapter happens in a clearly fantastical world and yet you don't give us the slightest description except to say that there is a desert nearby, which also seems to be contradicted in chapter 4 when you say they live in a forest. The second chapter is narrated by an unknown narrator and its narrative is yet to relate in any way with the rest of the book. I actually felt that chapter four does a better job of introducing the world of the book than anything that comes before.

My only other criticism was that you sometimes lapse into rather formal language which I felt wasn't really fitting with the target audience.

Here are the few close corrections I found:

cat-sized scaly creatures that gobble up ants.
-A little too technical, I’d say : scaly creatures the size of cats that…

Perhaps you could set the scene a little and at least tell us that Cordelia lived next to a desert, before we’re told her dog goes off into it to look for an armadillo – though I accept you are going for a rather surreal feel.

she burped you OUT when you were a baby too!

CH 2
This was especially true OF Ella

I’ve no basis for comparison.
-rather formal language for a young children’s book

leaving me unmolested when I was so inclined
-again this is funny language for an adult but I find it rather too formal

She checked out the door
More checked than checked out, no?

Some really nice ideas and language but I think you have to rejig the opening.
Highly starred.

Best of luck,

Benedict

Sarah Armin wrote 351 days ago

Dear Tod,
I read some parts of your story, and I realized it very sweet.
I hope I can know your opinion about my story: http://authonomy.com/books/44638/christmas-s-snowy-dream/
I look forward for receive your comment as soon as possible.
With best wishes
Elham

faith rose wrote 351 days ago

Dear Tod,

You have another charmer here! Wow...I'm so impressed. I loved your previous piece, so it's no surprise to find such a gem from you. I read your first two chapters, and I love the characters, the word choice, and the complete "sillyness." This will go far. Wonderfully written.

All the very best,
Faith Rose
Now To Him

Cariad wrote 352 days ago

Hi. CHIRG here.

What a great cover you have - did you draw it? I really enjoyed your book - and if my girls were still young(er) it is just he sort of thing we would have enjoyed reading together. I felt it had an old fashioned feel - and by that, I don't mean it negatively, as in the writing is old fashioned - I mean the sort of story that you used to find, and don'd come across so much any more. It reminded me a bit of brer rabbit, andn a bit of Milly Molly Mandy - in that they can be read and shared and they have charm and rhythm and deal with things young readers will recognise. There's a nice, lyrical feel to the words, they flow and sway while reading them. Altogether an unusual and delightful book, which I will happily star, and put on my watchlist for shelving when my list is covered.
Cariad.

JMF wrote 360 days ago

Hi Tod
CHIRG
As promised I have returned to look at your lovely stories. You have a great imagination and a very original style. I'm sure young children will enjoy having these read to them at bedtime. I'm sorry, I haven't got much to say in terms of criticism - they are well-written and enjoyable. One nitpick in ch 2 "You rally must stop." Should be really.
All the best with your writing.
Highly starred.
Julia
Shadow Jumper

leelah wrote 364 days ago

I have read the two first chapters and am smiles all over. Silly logic - what I love the most. Both very small children and a little older girls like me (67) will love this. Its the kind of books I would LOVE to read to the little ones in my family. Most grown ups don't have the necessary appreciation of the silly-world - and that is sad: it is crammed with the beauty of the non-expected.
High stars ans watchlisted, soon on my shelf.
Leelah Saachi

maretha wrote 367 days ago

Dear Tod, Your Uncle Bunkle Story book is on my watchlist and I've starred highly for a most informative and inmaginative book for children. I've read up to ch 9 and will continue soon. I promised my grandchild that I would read another children's story to her.
You are such a natural storyteller that I can only say: Well done! I love the dialogue among the main characters and of course Jack the Dog is a star.
Thank you so much for reminding us that we were children too once upon a time
kindest regards
Maretha/African Adventures of Flame, Family, Furry and Feathered Friends

keirthomas wrote 369 days ago

I read the first three intro chapters, then two following chapters. So I suppose you want me to write a review? Sorry but I cannot.

I'm joking! I'm happy to review such a fantastic book. Extememely well written by somebody who is quite clearly a born storyteller, I found these stories enchanting, funny and charming. As I hope is obvious, Tod Schneider is creating a new mythology here, and weaves dreamlike worlds that have the key characteristic of successful mythology: they're internally consistent and fantastic in a way that is plausible. Despite being often strange, everything makes sense! (Do I get points for pointing out the link to Greek myths and the birth of the major gods when the little people are swallowed early on? There might be other influences too.)

Above all the stories are entertaining and even compulsive reading. This book is going on my shelf.

One minor point: when the little people are boxed up early on by Cordelia, I began to worry about them starving to death, sealed in their boxes for four days. Not to mention air issues. This is the kind of small detail kids tend to pick up on.

Jed Oliver wrote 384 days ago

Tod, this is wonderfully charming and original writing. Very enjoyable! Best of luck with all your books!
Regards, Jed Oliver (French Roast and Lingerie) (Saving Bob)

patio wrote 385 days ago

Aunts, stop eating and drinking in his Anancely's tummy

I like this book. Its funny and easy to follow
crisp dialogue

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