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rank 5847
word count 12601
date submitted 05.05.2012
date updated 07.04.2013
genres: Fiction, Literary Fiction, Romance,...
classification: universal
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Stories About Things

Aelius Blythe

Thoughts and memories and stranger things....

 

Stories About Things is a collection of very short stories about... things. ~~~~ Death preserved forever in drops of maple syrup – a name just out of reach – a bear’s growl – a door that leads to… nowhere, and a man who walks through it. ~~~~ These are the stories of things: some just this side of reality, some just that side of… somewhere else.

 
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~~The Swing~~

 

When the swing fell again, the tree died.

That wasn't how it was the first time. Then, it had been just a matter of getting a new rope and stringing it back up. They couldn't do that anymore because there was nothing to string it up on. 

 

 

The first time, Bridget has seen the rope make a graceful arc from bough to ground. It had sounded like a candy bar snapping in half (not one of the gooey ones, though–a crisp bar.  Like Crunch or Hersheys, not Twix.) A soft, crisp pop, then the arc.  Broken from hours of carrying her up into the sky, it was a beautiful, not a sad injury.

She had shared the wound then, too.  The seat disappeared from beneath her, somehow falling much faster than her own body and the rope's.  Of course, she should have been holding on like her father always said to, but she liked to drape her arms lightly around the ropes.  That way, it was more like flying. 

That time, she really had been flying.  Her body was weightless, not like a bird struggling to keep itself aloft, but really weightless like the air itself.  

For a second.

She saw the broken rope falling beside her, and wondered how it felt to finally be free of the tree. They landed beside each other in the leaves which crunched beneath them.  It sounded like applause.

 

 

The second time the swing fell, there was no applause, and no flying. 

The saws screamed so loudly that Bridget couldn't even hear the snap of the branches.  She imagined it must have sounded like a much bigger bar of candy - maybe a solid block of chocolate filled with nuts.

The branch with the swing went first because it was lowest.  The swing fell silently, or at least whatever sound it made was drowned by the hysterical saw.  It's branch made a soft whump against the ground, which was again brown with leaves. 

Bridget couldn't help cringing, just a little, remembering the bruising fall.  The swing and the branch laying beside each other reminded her of her and the rope laying beside each other, looking at each other.  But she had been happy then, despite the bruises, and she couldn't imagine the rope feeling sad either.  Both the swing and the branch looked sad now.  They hadn't flown, just fallen.  The grace was gone. 

Maybe that was why the leaves didn't applaud.

She looked for one second, then another limb fell on top of the first, then another and another.  Then the trunk joined the pile and the screaming finally stopped. For a while she just stared at the pile, unsure of whether she were looking at it from the outside or whether she were still trapped down there on the ground with the swing.

 

 

 

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Chris Whitson wrote 304 days ago

Hi Aelius, These short prizes are better than outstanding! Your thought process and writing skills, amazing. So glad I happened upon your work. I love pleasant surprises, and these shorties were a pure treat!

Teacups: You describe these smells better than a blind man. The depth of your simple descriptons sent me to places and times I knew well. I had a similar experience with my mother's possessions. I wish I would have protected those cherished memories as he did. I also enjoyed the exit/ending. Very smooth!

Time: Incredible concept and delivery! Harnessing the power of the mind is a tricky thing.
Dr. Ellis theorized..... Is a most impressive paragraph. Well done. The rest was just plain brilliant!

Goddamnit: Don't know how you thought of this concept. You are quite gifted! I could totally relate to your characters thought process, but your words were so fresh and your veiwpoint was fascinating. ..."Oops wrong funeral"..... Super clever and funny. A smiling moment for sure.

What can I say? This made my morning. I came for the 'free beer' and received shots of 'top shelf' whiskey and a snack! All Free! I must read more. But for now, I just want to say great job and thank you!
These winners deserve max stars, and a future on my shelf. Those who read them will be as pleased as I was.

Peace.
Chris/ A SPICY HURRICANE

Ps. Hope I will do enough for others, so they will remember my name. At least at my funeral. Makes ya think.

Chris Whitson wrote 302 days ago

Hi Aelius, I enjoyed reading and commenting on your wonderful short stories. You are obviously a very talented writer and I would highly respect your thoughts on A SPICY HURRICANE. It is quite short (6000words) and is intended to inspire kids to read fresh, fun and purposeful stories.
No obligation! Regardless, your stories were well worth the read and high rankngs.
Thanks,
Chris/ A SPICY HURRICANE

Chris Whitson wrote 304 days ago

Hi Aelius, These short prizes are better than outstanding! Your thought process and writing skills, amazing. So glad I happened upon your work. I love pleasant surprises, and these shorties were a pure treat!

Teacups: You describe these smells better than a blind man. The depth of your simple descriptons sent me to places and times I knew well. I had a similar experience with my mother's possessions. I wish I would have protected those cherished memories as he did. I also enjoyed the exit/ending. Very smooth!

Time: Incredible concept and delivery! Harnessing the power of the mind is a tricky thing.
Dr. Ellis theorized..... Is a most impressive paragraph. Well done. The rest was just plain brilliant!

Goddamnit: Don't know how you thought of this concept. You are quite gifted! I could totally relate to your characters thought process, but your words were so fresh and your veiwpoint was fascinating. ..."Oops wrong funeral"..... Super clever and funny. A smiling moment for sure.

What can I say? This made my morning. I came for the 'free beer' and received shots of 'top shelf' whiskey and a snack! All Free! I must read more. But for now, I just want to say great job and thank you!
These winners deserve max stars, and a future on my shelf. Those who read them will be as pleased as I was.

Peace.
Chris/ A SPICY HURRICANE

Ps. Hope I will do enough for others, so they will remember my name. At least at my funeral. Makes ya think.

rikasworld wrote 346 days ago

Thanks, Aelius! There are a couple of short story threads on the forum now, if you are interested in joining in. A Verse Artiste one and a Rachelsarah one.

rikasworld wrote 370 days ago

I don't know what to say about these. I think they are probably absolutely perfect! I like the twist of being in a shop at the end of number one. Love the time machine (the wood burning stove made me giggle) and the psychology and the grim ending. In the funeral story do you mean (Of he was) or is the OF a typo? My favourite is the Maple Syrup story. Very, very sad.
Fantastic stuff. Six stars and on my watchlist for the future. I'll give these a plug on the Newbie site. We should have a short story writers thread too. I'll see if it catches on.

Kenneth Edward Lim wrote 382 days ago

Aelius,
Destroying a cup in a china shop, racing against time and losing, getting into the head of a bear, all simple themes with much irony. What a collection of stories told with a wonderful econoimy of words, each turn of phrase weighty and impacting. Thank you so much for the captivating read.

Kenneth Edward Lim
The North Korean.

patio wrote 382 days ago

Fabulous story

One of my highlights: "He liked-then-and-now-things". Its catchy and kool

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