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date submitted 08.05.2012
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Survived A Choice

Jeff Harding

Come along as I search for my birth parents and find out how close I came to not being born at all.

 

Survived A Choice is a true story that takes readers on a very real and heartfelt journey. It is the story of my search for my birth parents. As I discover the circumstances unto which I was born, I also finds out how close I came to not being born at all. This account is filled with adventure, laughter and tears as it provides an opportunity to learn about the adoption experience of searching for ones birth parents. It is told in a way that takes it's readers along on the journey since it is revealed and told step by step as I embarked on this surreal adventure. Just when you think you know where it is going, you find yourself heading a different direction. The story shows in biblical principal that every life is valuable. It doesn't preach the pro life agenda, but rather takes you along with me throughout the story and causes readers to evaluate where they stand on the issues of love, life and adoption. In doing so, it just might change the way you look at these issues forever.

 
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The Meeting

Chapter 5

The Meeting

 

 

After shouting out, “This is CRAZY!!!!” several more times, I took a quick shower and shaved.  I drove around town following the directions he had given me.  Eventually, I found myself parked at the end of a front walk with a mailbox indicating I had found the right house.  I got out and stood at the curb looking up the front walk that led to the front door.  I felt frozen there.  It seemed every emotion I had ever felt in my life was now coursing through me at once.  I was nervous…excited…afraid…I was everything.   I couldn’t bring myself to take the first step.  I just had a feeling that this was not going to go as I had planned.  I felt my control over the situation slipping through my hands.  I forced myself to walk to the door.  I stood there thinking to myself, “You don’t have to do this if you don’t want to.  You could get in your car and just lay rubber up the street on your way out of town and forget that it ever went this far.”  But before I could turn around, the door opened.  A very beautiful woman smiled and introduced herself as John’s wife.  She invited me in and for just a few seconds I didn’t move.  She reached out and took my arm and pulled me right next to her and leaned over to whisper in my ear.  Her voice barely spoke, it’s as if she breathed the words … “He knows.”  Immediately, my legs felt as if they had just failed and all my emotions had collapsed onto the floor.  I stood there crying in front of a woman I didn’t even know.  I turned and sat on the front steps of their house and just held my head in my hands.  I didn’t know what to do.  My plan was shot.  I was completely unprepared for this.  Maybe I should of considered the possibility of this happening, but I didn’t.  And now I found myself ripped from my comfort zone and thrown into a situation I now had no control over.  It was important to me from the beginning that, although I had no control over where my search took me, I would still have control of the pace at which it progressed.  I now had control of neither.

 

John’s wife sat next to me and put her arm around me and told me, “You know, I have been with John for 23 years.  He is the kind of guy who doesn’t show his emotions often.  I often find myself having a hard time figuring out how he feels about things because of this.  In those 23 years I have never seen him cry…..not once…until tonight.  When he hung up the phone with you, he shouted at the top of his lungs…. ““IT’S HIM!!   IT’S HIM!!””  And he immediately sat down on the steps just inside the front door and he cried.  He actually cried in front of me.” 

She went on to tell me that when he came back from Vietnam, Sarah called him one day and asked him to meet her.  They got together and she informed him that she had become pregnant with his child and hadn’t found out until just after he left out of country.  She felt a lot of guilt and explained to him how she felt all alone and that it seemed as if she didn’t have any choice but to put it up for adoption.  John told her, “I want to see my son!”  She cried as she informed him that he couldn’t.  They weren’t allowed to search for me.  The only way he was ever going to meet me was if I decided to search for them once I had turned the legal age of 18.  And even then, It may not happen if I chose not to do so.  I was now 22.  She told me, “John kept track on calendars in his office of how old you were.  Each year on your birthday, he would sit in his office and wouldn’t come out.    He just counted off the years by placing x’s on each day until your 18th birthday finally arrived.  On that day, he got dressed up and spent the day sitting in front of the big picture window in the living room watching each car as it drove by.  That was the longest day of our marriage.  And when we went to bed that night, I thought he would cry but he didn’t.  He just laid there awake.  It was like that for the next few years.  Even months after your 18th birthday, I would notice changes in him.  He would be mowing the yard and he would see a car coming and he would stop pushing the mower and stand there and watch it round the corner.  Then start mowing again. 

 She went on to tell me, “About a year ago, he finally just accepted that it simply wasn’t in God’s plan.  This day would probably never come regardless of how much he wanted it to.  So he stopped fighting it.  He just started to move on.  And now it’s 4 ½ years later and you called wanting info on Sarah.  He knew immediately it was you.  He’s in the shower right now.  He’s been in there for a half hour.  He wanted this for so long but I guess he never knew what he would say if you actually showed up.  So I suppose he is in there wasting water just as nervous as you are.  You two might as well figure out a way to get past that and just move on to something more meaningful.  I guarantee you he loved you every day he never knew you.” 

 

And so I sat down at their kitchen table and Sarah poured me a cup of coffee.  Then I heard the water shut off down the hall.  A few minutes later into the kitchen walked my father. He looked like an older version of me. He sat down at the table and said, “Hi.”  His wife looked at us and she said to him, “You took a 30 minute shower and all you came up with was HI?”  He said, “I wasn’t sure how else to start this conversation.  I’ve been waiting to have it for 22 years.  I really gave up hope.”  You could see the emotion in his face as he rubbed his eyes to try to keep that first tear from falling.  He reached across the table and took my hand and looked me in the eyes. ,”You’re finally here.”   And that’s when the tears started…for both of us.

He cried as he told me,”I couldn’t find you.  They wouldn’t let me.  I never even had a say in how it all happened.  I don’t blame her for making the decision to give you up.  But I never would of wanted to wait this long to see you.”  I smiled and said,” I don’t blame her either.  I mean she was just a girl in college and you were in Vietnam.”  I told him you don’t have to worry about whether it was the right decision or not when it comes to the life I was given after she said goodbye.  I had a great upbringing.  My parents are awesome.  But I am sorry for what you went through not being able to see me.  I wouldn’t of wanted that either if I would of known you wanted to see me and didn’t have any say in the matter.”

I told him I served in the army too and that I had just returned from Operation Desert Storm.  He asked what my MOS was and I told him I was an EOD Specialist.  His mouth fell open and he looked at his wife.  She said,” So was John.”   I couldn’t believe it.  “Seriously? A 55Delta?”  “Yes”, he said.  He asked me to tell him more about myself.  I told him I liked sports in high school.  I wrestled and played football.  John asked, What weight and what position?”  I told him I wrestled at 138 and played defensive back.  He said, ”So did I. Both!”   I told him I loved the outdoors and loved to fish and hunt.  He went on to tell me how he was a rancher, fishing and hunting guide.”  He asked if I ever fished any tournaments.  I told him I fished in the Governors cup 2 years ago when I was home on leave.  He also fished that tournament.  In fact we finished two places apart in the top ten. This means I stood almost directly in line behind him as they announced the results.  I tried to recall if perhaps we had spoken that day and not known who each other really were.  And on we went comparing our pasts.  We both got average grades and we both were told by our teachers we could of done better if only we had tried harder.  We shared a good laugh over that one.  We sat there talking all night long.  Soon the sun was rising and we hadn’t even realized it was midnight yet.

I spent the next day with him and we hooked up his boat and went fishing.  It was cold out but neither of us cared.  We were going fishing, no one was stopping us.  A father and son, out in the boat for the first time.  We had a lot of time to make up.  Each month following that, I would come over to his town for two or three days and we would fish, hunt and do things together.  After a few visits, Christmas was near and he asked me to come visit over the Holidays

 

I drove there in the snow with a gift I had gotten just for him. It was a really nice fishing rod.  He had over fifty of them hanging in his shop, but none of them were from his son.  I was excited that this would be out first Christmas together.  John had two brothers and they would both be there with their families.  Both were living out of state so it was a big deal to have the family all together.  I hadn’t met John’s mother yet, my grandmother.  John hadn’t told her about him ever having a son.  I was the family secret.  I drove to John’s house and along with his wife and I, he drove to his mothers house grinning the whole way.  We went through the garage and as we were about to go inside he asked, “Would you mind waiting out here until I come get you?”  I agreed.  I could hear what was being said inside the house as I leaned my ear against the door.  John’s youngest brother and his brother’s wife had just had a baby.  They were passing it around and taking turns oohing and aahhhing over it.  After a few minutes, John said, “I have a lil something of my own to show you.”  He opened the garage door and I walked in.  He said, “I would like to introduce to all of you my son, Jeff.”  My grandmother almost had a heart attack learning she was my grandmother and leapt out of her chair.  She yelled, “John!!!, I always knew there was something going on!!!.  I just knew you had a son out there somewhere!  I just had a feeling.  I thought someone told me that Sarah was pregnant after you left for the Army and I was afraid maybe she had had an abortion but I didn’t know.”  John went on to explain how he had met me, and how he had waited for that day. 

 

The following day I drove home.  Every time John and I get together now, it seems kind of different.  I don’t look at him and see “my dad”.  Maybe this is because my adopted father will always be my dad in my eyes.  But I look at John more as a best friend.  Someone who I can always count on to tell me like it is.  Someone who is willing to do anything for you like a father would.  But since I didn’t have any experience growing up with him and seeing him in that role, It is hard to see him in that light now.  I know he considers me a blessing in his life and an answer to prayer.  And although he wasn’t that to me immediately, I now see him as the same.

 

 

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wordworker wrote 283 days ago

This book has a lot of potential (and that is NOT a backhanded compliment). What a great resource and encouragement for others who are searching for their roots! But you need to get a little help with your grammar and usage but that's a doable thing. Find one of your friends who is good at English and grammar and ask them if they will read through your work ... or you can actually hire an editor to do it for you.
I urge you to keep working on this. The message is great, the style is interesting and engaging, and your story is one that should be told.
God be with you,
Joyce ~ Slave

wordworker wrote 283 days ago

Ch. 6 Overall, I get the impression you use "I" too often. See if you can drop some of them. For example, in the para starting, "I drove the 250 miles ..." you write, "I drove ... I was in ... I was excited ... I embraced ..." all within two sentences. Try smoothing it out by saying something like: "I drove the 250 miles ... in a good mood with the radio blasting. I was excited and embraced the ..."
Next para starting, "I arrived at the school ..." you again use "of" instead of "have" ("It ... wouldn't HAVE looked...")
If you're using Word, bring up your manuscript, highlight the word or phrase you want to change on the far right of the taskbar, find "find" ... and then you should be able to type in the replacement phrase, "would have" rather than "would of".
Para starting: "At this point I snapped ..." you again have "would of" and THIS time it's the school principal saying it.
In the same para, the principal uses the word, "anyways" ... this is another midwestern foible ... drop the s for correct grammar.
Para starting, "He went on to tell me ..." you've got a typo, "we're" instead of "were".
Para starting, "It was late in the day ..." you write, "...there have been times in my life WHERE ... " (should be WHEN) ...also, clarity is an issue in the following passage: "...what would be the problem with calling him and ask him if I could meet him and just say I was searching for a family friend. One that another lead had recommended perhaps you could help me with locating ..." It needs to be broken up. Something like, "what would be the problem with calling him? I could tell him someone had suggested I talk with him because I was searching for a family friend and then I could ask him if we could meet." LOL later you say, "who AM you researching?" You write, "...near the hotel we could meet ..." stick a "where" in between hotel and we and drop the "at". You've got a serious tense problem, too, "WHAT HAD I JUST DONE? (past perfect tense) This is crazy (present tense) ..." I would suggest you switch the present tense passage into thought. (Italicize and add the phrase, "I thought" ... ie: "WHAT HAD I JUST DONE? (then in italics) This is crazy, (not italics: I thought). (Italics again) I'm now skirting the edge of my comfort zone. I'm going to meet ..."

wordworker wrote 287 days ago

I'm really excited to be getting into your book ... please understand that I will "nitpick" grammatical and punctuational errors throughout my read. I will also give positive comments but understand that they will probably be outweighed by the nitpicks Just be encouraged that ... if I wasn't enjoying it, I wouldn't continue to read.
First nitpick, in the first chapter/first para: two things ~ "...was most welcomed" (drop the d on welcomed) and "I stepped off of the plane ..." "of" is totally unnecessary and very "midwest" in flavor. "I stepped off the plane" is smoother and more acceptable.
Second para: "I must of slept ..." should be "must have" and "driving down the same highway ..." since he was driving you were "riding down the same highway" or "rolling" or "traveling" ...something that gets you out of the drivers seat.
Para starting, "Growing up, I had been raised ..." you write, "...tell them just how much I loved them and all they did for me ..." are you telling them you love all they did for you or are you telling them how much you love them and HOW GRATEFUL you are for all they had done for you?" Just a question only you can answer.
Last para: you write, "He said he is in the room next door and faired better than me ..." If you're quoting him, you've forgotten the first quote marks and you need to say fared better than YOU if you're quoting ... if not, it needs to be changed to past tense: "He said he was in the next room..." also it's "fared" better.
Great opening chapter, captures the reader early on and doesn't let go. Needs grammatical help but a good read just the same.
Joyce

Mule wrote 311 days ago

Jeff,

The humanity of this personal story is quite compelling. I'm drawn to it by your character, and by the character of both your "real" parents and your biological parents. Every main character in this account is someone whom I would like to know and become as a friend. I was pulled in immediately by your opening paragraph as a soldier in the 82nd Airborne during Operation Desert Storm. I was a freshman in high school when that happened. From there, you build, or reinforce, the opening by the account of your car wreck that makes you question and reexamine your relationship with God. These are great opening scenes. Blockbuster-type scenes. I'm touched by your biological father's reaction when you called him, which was quite different than what you had imagined it to be; that he cried for the first time in any of the years which his wife had been married to him. Very emotional stuff. I compliment you on this work, satuarted with heartfelt candor that left me in a better and more humbled state. My wife is adopted. She cannot contact her biological parents because it was a closed adoption, and it has bothered her for some time. It would take a herculean battle to try to open it up. I'm glad that people were so willing to help you find your biological parents.

I encourage you to work hard at polishing the prose. Keep the conversational, down-to-earth narrative voice, but study and learn the components that comprise compelling prose. In other words, if you learn to pare the paragraphs and make each word count, it will jump your story into not only the already heartfelt true personal story that touches people like me, but a masterpiece that will be loved by many. You have a great story, an awesome one. If you continue to hone and sharpen the prose, and the narrative design, and the pacing, and the wording, and the opening and the ending of each chapter (which are segmented in good, sizeable chunks), then you will attract many, many readers.

Thanks for sharing SURVIVED A CHOICE with me! And also, thanks very much for backing HOW WELL THE SAILORS RUN; I am humbled and appreciative.

Take Care and God Bless,

Sam

AudreyB wrote 313 days ago

Hi, Jeff – this is a review from AudreyB. I saw your book on the shelf of another member and couldn’t resist. I am often accompanied on my reviews by my English teacher alter-ego, The Grammar Hag. If I say anything you don’t like, it was probably her idea.

The pitch you have up right now is probably the right one for Authonomy. You need to be clear that you’re not preaching. But when publication is on the horizon, I think I’d skip mentioning the ‘pro-life agenda’ entirely. Allow that observation to be made by one of your reviews. It’ll mean more to potential readers.

My, that’s quite a first chapter. Wherever you go with this ms, your return from Kuwait and Iraq, plus the horrific accident, make for an exciting story. I’m at the bottom of chapter 1 right now, and there’s nothing anyone could do to keep me from turning the page. Great start.

I’ll announce right now that I’m sending The Hag off to dust the blinds. Your writing would make her nuts. You have lots of tiny errors in usage and punctuation. My advice is that you focus on the story and its structure, and in the end hire someone to do the line edits. Your story far outweighs the fact that you’re no grammar expert. You write with honest authenticity. Anyone else gives you grief about the grammar/usage, you tell them I said “Keep reading.”

The description of your adoption, the signing of the papers and the party at home, provides a window into the workings of a loving, supportive family. It’s my favorite part so far.

I’m now at the end of the fourth chapter and continue to be amazed by your story. I can absolutely imagine that Harper True Life will have an interest in this manuscript, as would a Christian publisher.

What a marvelous Principal! Over and over in your story you meet amazing people who open their hearts to you. Had these people not been in place, the woman at the courthouse who gave you $5, the Principal…it’s remarkable how differently your story could have turned out. However, the stories also give rise to the possibility that you are a friendly, pleasant, and likeable person whose decency brings out the best in others.

A very engaging and worthy book.

~AudreyB
Forgiveness Fits

KMac23 wrote 314 days ago

This story was so very moving, your meeting with your dad so heartfelt, it brought tears to my eyes. Your message clearly came through in a way that I think others will benefit greatly from and your book would appeal to a wide audience, adopted or not. I love the way the whole feel for the story came through as so forgiving for your mother. Sometimes, people tell their story as if they have experienced forgiveness, and yet they leave a hint of bitterness by adding information that might put the other person in a bad light. It is true grace to be able to fully forgive and love someone even in their imperfections, so much like Jesus does for us. I wish you well and give you very high stars for this. Kara

David Olawoyin wrote 332 days ago

Dear Jeff,
It’s a privilege reading your work and offering this comment. The central idea of your pitch is quite intriguing – talk about coming close to not being borne. That alone draws a laugh, much of which your work promises. And, yes, you write well, so well that I must take it up with you for not immediately notifying me of it in your pitch…  (I’ll come back to that). You voice and style are also dashing and inviting, exuding confidence and control, especially in your opening. All this are good for holding your reader.
There are a few things I’ll like to point out. From your pitch, the true-life story is apparently not about you. Nevertheless, the story is told in the first person, and you delve strait into it. This creates a kind of conflict for the writer, or at least a kind of misperception. While it is perfectly okay for the story to be told in the first person, you might want to consider including a prologue of some sorts to put things in proper perspective. This might be more imperative considering that you are offering it under “Harper True-Life.” Since your chapters are also titled, you might want to weigh including a table of contents.
You might also want to do more work on your pitch, as this is often the make or mar factor for a prospective backer, agent or editor. It often determines whether they’d look any farther. And considering how well you write, you would want to make the best impression from the outset. It is particularly not favorable that there is an error in your very first line – that is, the short pitch. You write: “A true story of one boys crazy search for his birth parents reveals just how close he came to not being born at all.” That ought to be: “A true story of one BOY’S crazy search for his birth parents reveals just how close he came to not being born at all.” You make the same mistake in the second line of the long pitch. And then you make a reverse mistake farther down, where you write: “It is told in a way that takes it's readers along…” That ought to read: “It is told in a way that takes ITS readers along…” You seem to face a challenge with when to use an apostrophe and you might want to watch out for the possibilities of such mistakes through your work. You should also keep an eye on the use of articles – “a,” “the,” etc. There are also some structural issues in your pitch and you might also want to tighten up the prose. The rest of the pitch sentence just considered reads: “…with on the journey and just when you think you know where it is going.” The “with” seems to have slipped in inadvertently.
All said, I like your premise and literary style, and I can see a place for your work. Please, act quickly on the pitch. I realize that writing pitches is an area in which some good writers face peculiar challenges, and you might want to seek assistance with it. As I revolve my bookshelf with time, I hope to come around to backing this. Thanks for the offering. Blessings always!

Elizabeth Kathleen wrote 340 days ago

A bag full of stars for you and your wonderful story! I couldn't stop reading. Your story is one of love...God's love in giving you life, your mother's love in not aborting you, your father's overwhelming love for a son he loved without ever knowing and your parents love for you each and every day of your life! Thank you so much again for this fantastic story! God bless you!!
Elizabeth Kathleen
"If Children are Cheaper by the Dozen, Can I Get a Discount on Six?"

mistybrooke wrote 345 days ago

Jeff-

thank you for supportng me, but more than that I am so excited about the topic of your book. I believe in adoption with all of my heart, having worked for child protective services at one tme. I also believe that God makes every life for a great purpose. This is going on my bookshelf today!!!

Patricia Laster wrote 350 days ago

dear Jeff: What an inspiring, uplifting, wonderful story! And you are a gifted writer. Thank you for sharing your true-life story with us.

I read all of your book and have no corrections to make. Your English is perfect as far as I can tell and the length of your paragraphs and chapters are brief enough to move the story along at a nice pace but detailed enough to give us, the readers, the information needed.

Jeff, I want to say that I especially appreciate two aspects of your book: 1. your wonderful testimony to your "real" parents and 2. your testimony to your faith. You give credit to God and to your adoptive parents in such a loving way that I know they are very, very special people, including your sister ... and, oh, how proud they must be of you!

Although I was a little dismayed by your birth-mom's eventual reaction ("NOT INTERESTED!"), I'm glad you shared this because, as you point out in ch. 10, not all birth parents will be receptive to meeting their child. I think one of the most valuable things about your book can also be found in ch. 10 where you re-direct an adopted child/adult to the blessings they have been given in life - as a child psychologist, I can tell you that this may be the most healing aspect of your book. Thank you for including this!

I'm amazed that you were a member of the "bomb squad" and a bit in awe of you! You certainly know how to get a reader's attention with your opening paragraph about leaving the military and the subsequent car crash. Your imagery of the crash and your recovery was vivid! and allowed you to bring in your Christian faith and promises to God very naturally. Good job!

Despite the fact that your birth mom didn't want any further contact with you, how wonderful that she left a journal for you - I wish all birth mom's would do this for the children whom they give up for adoption. Perhaps your book will start a trend here of doing just that! I hope so :-)

Just a couple of more points in your book that I found exceptionally touching: I cried when your birth mom told you that "you have your mother's eyes" and I laughed out loud with you shouting "This is CRAZY!" when you worked up the courage to call and meet your birth father, John. Yes, I'm really glad that you are now in John's life and certain that you are a blessing to him!

Well, I must stop gushing on about your wonderful book, but, yes, it is a marvelous story and I do hope to soon see it in a publisher's hand. Prayers for you and your book, Pat

rutheb248 wrote 374 days ago

. Friends of mine adopted two little boys and this book will resonate with a lot of people. You should do very well

faith rose wrote 376 days ago

Dear Jeff,

I just finished all you have posted here. I was so caught up in your story that I just found myself reading on and on. Several friends of mine recently adopted children, so this wonderful journey is fresh in my mind.

Your story is beautifully told, heartwarming, and honest in every way. I love your tone, and I love that you do not hold back, especially related to your feelings about Sarah and your siblings. You have not painted a rosy picture, yet there is such hope on these pages. I got quite teary when you met John; that was so heartfelt and beautiful and probably my favorite part.

I can only imagine the ministry you must now have! This story, your story, will touch and encourage many people. I especially like how you end with 'What's Your Story?' This really draws the reader into your journey and gives a sense of togetherness....a sense of belonging. Many stars for this beautifully written, highly important piece.

All the very best,
Faith Rose
Now To Him

scargirl wrote 379 days ago

good narrative. you have a typo in the short pitch with it's. this will hit the heart of some readers. i myself am an abortion survivor...
j
what every woman should know

patio wrote 379 days ago

This a touching story. The emotion is real unlike some so-called real life story

TDonna wrote 380 days ago

Jeff, first of all, thank you with all my heart for your service and sacrifice. I salute you. Secondly, this is a phenomenal story! I planned on reading a chapter or two, but you had me glued to the chair and by chapter 4, tears flowed freely. I loved the meeting with your dad, how he knew, how he waited, how he hoped. And I'm grateful the Lord answered the longing of his heart. Without knowing much, I thought about how I would have reacted had it been me. I wouldn't know how to deal with the guilt of having given you up and likely I'd harden my heart. And the principal appeared in your life as though purposefully placed by the Lord to guide you. This is truly a tremendous testimony and it's awesome that you're faithful to your calling to impart this message for life. I absolutely loved it!

Your narrative flowed very well. I like the short chapters for each was packed with emotional intensity. Wonderfully done!
TDonna
(No Kiss Good-bye: The consul pronounced our sentence: "As long as I live, you will not enter the United States.")

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