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date submitted 16.05.2012
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My Life on the All Saint's Road

Frank Skully

Growing up on the All Saints rd seemed to shape the rest of our lives and its a story that needs to be told.

 

When I did eventually walk onto the All Saints Road, it was to purchase some fried dumplings, I saw men who didn’t look like they were trying twice as hard to get somewhere in life like my father had advised. These men wore shiny suits, shiny shoes and had gold jewelry dripping around their necks, on their wrists and on their fingers too. Women looked at them with beaming smiles and a glint in their eyes. The cars parked on the road had invitingly crisp leather seats shinning in the sun, I looked around totally mesmerized by what I was witnessing. I had never seen a group of Black men gathered like this before anywhere else in my life, and I wanted to know more. I wanted to know where they worked, what they did and where they lived…I wanted answers to all these questions.

 
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                Welcome to the 1980's

It was now the early 1980's and Thatcher's Government had begun the new generation of greed, Harry Enfield's catch-phrase "Loads of Money" couldn't be more apt a phrase to describe life on the All Saint's Road, you only needed to stand there for a minimum 1 hour before someone approached you, asking for something or the other, the human traffic going thru the All Saint's Road was relentless, night & day. The posh kids from high up Notting Hill were coming down to Ladbroke Grove to the "Frontline" as it was now called & was asking for specific street dealers, who they knew by first name terms. Random drug smugglers were bringing all the contraband to the frontline for a quick sale, even risking confiscation from the more hardcore violent street hustlers.Pop stars of the day like Adam Ant, Boy George, who were charting at the top of the pop charts, were parting with their royalty money on the All Saint's Road, a day never passed without a known celebrity passing thru our "Frontline".

 

To feed this excess of people, more catering was needed, we not only had food from the Mangrove, Philsons & Bibs, but also Kong's & Madams, all reputable cooks of Caribbean food. Guru's chip shop, which was previously owned by Mick the Greek & situated on the corner of All Saint's Road & Lancaster Rd, was now the new headquarters of the under 21 age group of All Saints Road, the attraction of the new Space invaders & Pac Man arcade machines, replacing the old school pin-ball wizard & one arm bandits became a popular relief to the young street hustler's, who unlike the older more established men of All Saint's Road, (who were tucked away in the basement of the Mangrove, otherwise known as the "Hole") were plying they trade openly on the street, cars were pulling up non-stop with the occupants demanding Marihuana or Hashish. Within 30 minutes you could easily double your initial stake of £30 for half an ounce of Hashish, £60 an hour was standard pay for any street hustler, but a more violent street hustler lay in wait of these non-stop sales as the streets became darker, but the one street hustler hated by one & all, were the ones that bought "mixed herb's" from the local grocery store & peddled it off as weed, this form of hustling begun as a way to initially get your stake money, but it also became popular to the hit & run hustlers, the ones trying to make a quick money to go out partying with the usual, more wealthier hustlers.



I recently had been released from a young person' prison in Aylesbury, Buckinghamshire & i no longer depended on the All Saint's Road for my regular income, i had started working with an escort girl, who was feeding us information on wealthy clients, they was an occasion once where she had a client tied & blindfolded for sex, and we were systematically going thru every draw in every room, accumulating envelopes of the new Christopher Wren £50 notes, which had only recently been issued for the first time ever.



I now came to the All Saint's road to socialise, or as a first stop meeting place. My longtime friend & partner Booker, was the proud father of two beautiful girls, & so he was happy playing daddy, & also becoming an important person to know on the All Saint's Road, if you needed large portions of weed. Booker introduced me to the "new kid on the block" a mixed-race cocky, but quietly slick young kid called JP. The first time I met JP, I nearly ended up in the Harrow rd cemetery.

Car racing was a popular hobby for the young-bloods of All Saint's Road, we went places in convoys of cars & returned in a Wacky Races format, first car back to the Frontline was the winner, JP owned a RS 2000, Green Ford sports car, a vehicle designed for racing, while cruising on the Kilburn Lane one evening, JP was overtaken in a Triumph PI, by a driver i recognised as Dave Penfold, Penfold was an older guy than me, so I knew he had some driving experience, the rain was coming down in a drizzle & the roads were slippery.       

 

That never deterred JP, he threw the RS into 3rd gear & woke up the engine, flicked on the full beam, & with a quick juggle of his feet, the RS was overtaking Dave Penfold's Triumph PI, But as i turned around from seeing where we had left Dave's Triumph, straight in front of me was the end of Kilburn Lane & barriers blocking entry into the following Wakeman Rd, somehow JP skidded the car full circle, thereby delaying the inevitable smash, i came out of that car trembling with anger, but also respect for JP, because throughout the whole incident, he remained ice-cool, as if he knew the outcome.

The following day, instead of phoning JP to pick me up, i went in search of my own car to buy, i had heard of a guy from Kilburn called Bola, who had a Blue Rover V8 3.5 for sale, i sent news to him that if he came onto the All Saint's Road, i'd buy the car off him, i didn't have long to wait for his appearance, he came with another driver, so i presumed he was confident of a sale, he wanted £350, so i took off one chain & gold Krugerrand, which because of the political goings-on in South Africa, i was desperate to off-load & also a sovereign ring, i gave these to Bola & he seemed happy enough to give me the log book.

I now had my destiny back in my own hands during car trips, we were changing cars every 6 months as the money rolled in, it wasn't too long before we all, me, Booker & JP upgraded to the sexy but unreliable Triumph Stag convertible sport cars, these compact curvy convertibles, had a reputation for breaking down because of a few factory faults, but they oozed class in looks, & had the most wonderful growl of a car engine you had ever heard, especially first thing in the morning with the engine cold.

 

 

 

 

 

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Cyrus Hood wrote 374 days ago

Hi Frank,
welcome to the site.
Just picked up your work and thought I would drop you a line.
Tell me to shut up if you don't want any comments on grammar or typos.
It seemed almost like the first chapter had been written by someone else, because you really kick this into gear in the second.
This is very evocative stuff and is panning out to be an excellent read. I think the style is just great, however, you should lose the' &' signs for 'and' - it makes the reader feel short changed. There are also quite a few times that you use 'i' instead of' 'I'.
From the start the tension builds and there is a definite sense of inevitability, a feeling of something dreadful about to happen from the start- a very gripping use of writing.
In the sentence ' Christopher Wren £50 notes, which had only recently been issued 'for the first time ever'. The last 5 words are rhetorical and I would delete them.
This book will do well, I have put you on my watch list and given you a whole bucket of stars.

Perhaps I can tempt you to have a look at Hellion 2, I would appreciate your comments

regards Cyrus

FrankSkully wrote 178 days ago

Thanks for your comments, yeah, sounds like we lived parallel lives in and around the same ends, if you have a facebook account, add me www.facebook.com/frank.skully1


Frank,
Have you read 'Yardie' by Victor Headly? I think you'd like it.
It looks as though our upbringings weren't a million miles away from each other. I lived just off the Harrow Rd in Westborne Park in the early 80s. I recall some of your memories about the place, there were a few mugger's alleys I can tell you that!
Anyway, there's loads to look at here, you've had a very interesting life. I agree with one of the comments so far, it would be nice to see some dialogue to help drive the narrative along, I'm sure there were plenty of characters who would come to life (especially Don!) if you gave them words.
If you can, check out some of Ashley Copse - An Autobiography, I think you'll recognise some of the places and some of the people I'm writing about. I'll keep reading on...
Peace!

Houndy wrote 178 days ago

Frank,
Have you read 'Yardie' by Victor Headly? I think you'd like it.
It looks as though our upbringings weren't a million miles away from each other. I lived just off the Harrow Rd in Westborne Park in the early 80s. I recall some of your memories about the place, there were a few mugger's alleys I can tell you that!
Anyway, there's loads to look at here, you've had a very interesting life. I agree with one of the comments so far, it would be nice to see some dialogue to help drive the narrative along, I'm sure there were plenty of characters who would come to life (especially Don!) if you gave them words.
If you can, check out some of Ashley Copse - An Autobiography, I think you'll recognise some of the places and some of the people I'm writing about. I'll keep reading on...
Peace!

strachan gordon wrote 271 days ago

I enjoyed reading your first chapter about how you acquired a suit at a young age, but then suddenly you have come out of prison , perhaps you dont want to delve into that . Watchlisted and starred.Would you be able to look at the first chapter of my novel 'A Buccaneer' wahich is set amongst Pirates in the 17th century , with best wishes from Strachan Gordon.

FrankSkully wrote 343 days ago

Hi Frank,
welcome to the site.
Just picked up your work and thought I would drop you a line.
Tell me to shut up if you don't want any comments on grammar or typos.
It seemed almost like the first chapter had been written by someone else, because you really kick this into gear in the second.
This is very evocative stuff and is panning out to be an excellent read. I think the style is just great, however, you should lose the' &' signs for 'and' - it makes the reader feel short changed. There are also quite a few times that you use 'i' instead of' 'I'.
From the start the tension builds and there is a definite sense of inevitability, a feeling of something dreadful about to happen from the start- a very gripping use of writing.
In the sentence ' Christopher Wren £50 notes, which had only recently been issued 'for the first time ever'. The last 5 words are rhetorical and I would delete them.
This book will do well, I have put you on my watch list and given you a whole bucket of stars.

Perhaps I can tempt you to have a look at Hellion 2, I would appreciate your comments

regards Cyrus



Thanks very much for your kind words Cyrus, taken everything you said onboard, my grammar is not very good, but i can tell a mean story, i will now look at your book Hellion 2,

Tod Schneider wrote 349 days ago

This looks like you have a good story to tell, from looking at the first two chapters. Your descriptions are good and the anecdotes interesting. From a critiquing point of view, if I were to tinker with this, I would insert quite a bit of dialogue in the text. In novel writing one of the most important rules is "show, don't tell." Right now, you tell us a lot. If you have characters involved in dialog then we can learn this background information without feeling like we're being given a briefing. I hope that makes sense and is not too harsh. You've got good stuff here, I just think you might be able to inject more oomph into the telling. Please ignore me if you prefer! Best of luck with this!
If you have some interest in kids' literature, you are invited to take a look at my novel, the Lost Wink at
http://authonomy.com/books/40646/the-lost-wink
Thanks,
Tod

Dianna Lanser wrote 374 days ago

Hi Frank,

Thank you for sharing your story. I liked walking back in time a bit, the music you reference was familiar, but to be honest, the lifestyle was not. Nonetheless, I found your experiences to be very interesting and at times jaw-dropping. I love learning about people and the cultures in which they live, and the All Saint’s Road, definitely has a unique culture. As I was reading, I wondered what your parents thought of your involvement with the happenings on All Saint’s Road.

Some of the terms you use right at the beginning, I was not familiar with. If your intended audience is going to be mainly British, then no problem. But if you are broadening the scope of your book’s reach to the U.S., you might want to define such terms as “sound system.” I stumbled a little on the meaning of that. Is it a music band? And maybe give a little background on the Profumo scandal.

You have done a wonderful job, documenting the riskiness and excitement of living life on All Saint’s Road. I was quite enthralled by the descriptions of dress, cars, music, people and business dealings. No doubt, you have caught the essence of a particularly unique society that for a time, was part of your life.

I think at some point, it will serve you well to have a friend go through your manuscript with a fine-toothed combed, pointing out grammar and typographical errors. There aren’t many and the ones I came across where hardly distracting to the action of the story, but still, you will want your manuscript to be the best it can be. I wish you all the best with this. Highly starred!

Dianna Lanser
Nothing But The Blood

FrankSkully wrote 374 days ago

Thanks Cyrus, this is a very uncomplete work, i spent the majority of my youth in prison, where i learnt to write, as you can see, i am still struggling, but i have a story inside of me that is bursting to be released.

Hi Frank,
welcome to the site.
Just picked up your work and thought I would drop you a line.
Tell me to shut up if you don't want any comments on grammar or typos.
It seemed almost like the first chapter had been written by someone else, because you really kick this into gear in the second.
This is very evocative stuff and is panning out to be an excellent read. I think the style is just great, however, you should lose the' &' signs for 'and' - it makes the reader feel short changed. There are also quite a few times that you use 'i' instead of' 'I'.
From the start the tension builds and there is a definite sense of inevitability, a feeling of something dreadful about to happen from the start- a very gripping use of writing.
In the sentence ' Christopher Wren £50 notes, which had only recently been issued 'for the first time ever'. The last 5 words are rhetorical and I would delete them.
This book will do well, I have put you on my watch list and given you a whole bucket of stars.

Perhaps I can tempt you to have a look at Hellion 2, I would appreciate your comments

regards Cyrus

Cyrus Hood wrote 374 days ago

Hi Frank,
welcome to the site.
Just picked up your work and thought I would drop you a line.
Tell me to shut up if you don't want any comments on grammar or typos.
It seemed almost like the first chapter had been written by someone else, because you really kick this into gear in the second.
This is very evocative stuff and is panning out to be an excellent read. I think the style is just great, however, you should lose the' &' signs for 'and' - it makes the reader feel short changed. There are also quite a few times that you use 'i' instead of' 'I'.
From the start the tension builds and there is a definite sense of inevitability, a feeling of something dreadful about to happen from the start- a very gripping use of writing.
In the sentence ' Christopher Wren £50 notes, which had only recently been issued 'for the first time ever'. The last 5 words are rhetorical and I would delete them.
This book will do well, I have put you on my watch list and given you a whole bucket of stars.

Perhaps I can tempt you to have a look at Hellion 2, I would appreciate your comments

regards Cyrus

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