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rank 5844
word count 10740
date submitted 16.05.2012
date updated 16.05.2012
genres: Fiction, Thriller, Crime
classification: adult
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Vesta Dawn

Peter Christian Fraedrich

A young girl kidnapped on holiday in Ukraine, a dead police officer in DC and one man's drive to change the world.

 

A young girl kidnapped on holiday in Ukraine, a dead police officer in DC and one man's drive to change the world. Discover what happens when men have the audacity to believe that all people should be free no matter the cost.

 
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action, adventure, clandestine, crime, freedom, military, police, revolution, secret, sexual abuse, slavery, spy, violent, world

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peter christian fraedrich wrote 373 days ago

Cyrus,

Thank you so much for your kind words and your keen editor's eye! It's always welcome to see others interested in such a personal work.
I'll be sure to take a pass at Hellion when I get a few moments and leave you some of my thoughts.

Thanks again!

- Pete

Hi Peter,
just read 'Vesta Dawn' and found it a worthy piece of writing. The roller coaster starts right off and the tension hits you, pow!. I found the detail excellent and the dialogue cogent and authentic.
Only one error ' She tried to rush past the greasy man and go through the door BE he was too quick'
Remember, when editing, always insert the re-edited chapter before deleting the old one otherwise you lose your rating.

Perhaps I can tempt you to have a look at Hellion 2 - Part 2 of a 4 part series but it can be read as a stand alone work - I would really appreciate you comments.

Your book is now on my watchlist with a load of stars

regards

Cyrus

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Cyrus Hood wrote 373 days ago

Hi Peter,
just read 'Vesta Dawn' and found it a worthy piece of writing. The roller coaster starts right off and the tension hits you, pow!. I found the detail excellent and the dialogue cogent and authentic.
Only one error ' She tried to rush past the greasy man and go through the door BE he was too quick'
Remember, when editing, always insert the re-edited chapter before deleting the old one otherwise you lose your rating.

Perhaps I can tempt you to have a look at Hellion 2 - Part 2 of a 4 part series but it can be read as a stand alone work - I would really appreciate you comments.

Your book is now on my watchlist with a load of stars

regards

Cyrus

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