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rank 5849
word count 17489
date submitted 21.06.2012
date updated 22.06.2012
genres: Fantasy, Young Adult
classification: moderate
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The Hybrid

Se'Friena Hiatt

Tamryn, she is half vampire, half wolf. Her battle with the evil bond between her and Balthazar. Who will she chose.

 

Tamryn who is half vampire and half wolf. She lives with eight wolf boys. She has a bond with the evil man Balthazar will she kill him or give in to him. Will she go with the man that shes known since she was a baby and the one her mom wanted her to be with? Is there an even bigger evil coming?

 
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Dilettante wrote 335 days ago

That's better. And you have a great book-cover.

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Shelby Z. wrote 336 days ago

This is sort of a different vampire/wolf book.
Those these aren't my type of stories I do read them.
I love your MC name.
You have a good flow and have a good opener that grabs the reader's attention.
You need to edit this a bit but it isn't too bad.
This is creative.
Good work.

Shelby Z./Driving Winds

P.S. Please look at Driving Winds.

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Duse wrote 336 days ago

For a start, you need to re-load it so that's not in boldface. Currently, it's hard to read.
There is also the matter of too many errors. It reads like it could be written by a fifteen-year-old. Feel free to ask me to delete this comment if you choose, but if you delete your book, and start instead with a better font, then the comment will go automatically.

I am fifteen sorry to tell you. I will look back over it. Thank you

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Duse wrote 337 days ago

Please message me and tell me what you think

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