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rank 4278
word count 14323
date submitted 11.08.2012
date updated 11.08.2012
genres: Fiction, Thriller
classification: universal
incomplete

Border Town Blues

Andrew Scorah

On the run with gal and a gun

 

Jimmy Dalton and Jamie Duggan are on the run n America. Coerced into doing a job for one of the spook agencys, they head into the border lands of Mexico where they uncover a terrorist plot which could lead to the deaths of millions. They find themselves in a race against time to stop the terrorists completing their plan.

 
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ubulord wrote 239 days ago

Finished page 3. It's well written, easy and pleasurable to read. Reading it feels like playing Uncharted on the PS3, well, sort of. It would adapt very easily into a First Person Shooter game. Will be back when I have the time.

Sneaky Long wrote 250 days ago

I like your story and the fast pace. I read the first three chapters and have put it on my watch list. The two areas I would suggest looking at is transition from the pub to Arizona. How did Jimmy and Jamie get there and under what circumstances? Also, Deacon's dialogue in not how Americans talk. I would suggest asking an American to advise you on the language. Other than that, I liked it and look forward to reading more.

If you would give me feedback on The OrKey, I would appreciate it. Good luck!

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