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date submitted 16.05.2008
date updated 10.02.2009
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The Book of Causes

Emma Rhind

A wry look at Catholicism for women in the 21st century - a 'women's group' novel for people who like to think deep.

 

Catherine Pevensey, a bored mother and housewife, establishes a prayer group with a friend, Grania. Together they take under their wing a much younger woman, Anne, new to the area and with a very troubled past. During the prayer group meetings, Anne gradually begins to take Grania and Catherine into her confidence, but the complications in the latter women’s own lives, and the conditioning all three women have received in their Catholic upbringing, skewer their efforts both at helping Anne and resolving their own issues...
Narrated from three perspectives, the story is lightly told but raises serious questions about religious belief in general and Catholicism’s expectations of women in particular.

 
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In Which the Lord is Baffled

Grania crossed herself under the statue of Our Lady, set into a stonework medallion above the arched entrance to the parish hall where Marion held her mother and toddler group.  The statue, more of a moulding really – there was a French term for it that Grania could never recall – showed the Virgin from the elbows up, our Lord tucked under her right arm, face out. Her head leant forward out of the medallion setting and her veil flowed back, lifting over her shoulders, and it looked for all the world as if she was riding urgently into the wind on a motorbike, our Lord a precious parcel to be delivered by an un-missable deadline. Hardly a dignified image of Our Lady’s shining example of motherhood – Granai suppressed a smile as she pushed open the heavy oak porch door.

  Greeted by the glorious din of young at play, she picked her way across groups of toddlers bent over their toys - mothers seated nearby chatting watchfully - towards the kitchenette where Marion was usually to be found. It felt a bit peculiar turning up without Niamh, to be honest; but Grania had a reason of her own for coming along today, as well as Catherine’s invitation to help her integrate her latest waif and stray. For Grania had formed a plan she wanted to consult Catherine about. Quite excited, she was. And Catherine would be keen, she could almost bank on it.

‘Ah, Marion, there you are!’ Grania held out her arms as Marion emerged, beaming, from the kitchen, hands laden with trays of warm bread rolls. In all the years Grania’d been coming to this mother and toddler group, Marion never aged, her hair the same grey-blonde, woven into a thick plait that rested between her shoulder blades, her fringe nearly reaching her eyes that were set about with laugh lines.

‘Grania, how perfectly lovely to see you!’ Marion put down the trays on a table by the kitchenette door and turned to hug Grania, ‘And looking so refreshed after the summer break. Were you in Ireland?’ Marion had a way of peering at people, tipping her face forwards a little and narrowing her eyes as if she was squinting through a dirty window. Grania found it endearing and also not a little unnerving; it was as if she was going to spot something about you that no one else would notice.

‘Most of the summer, yes,’ Grania explained, ‘my mother’d never forgive me if I didn’t go and visit then, though Frank misses us, for sure.’

‘Still that’s families for you, you just can’t please everybody! One is rather tempted just to please oneself, by the time you reach my age.’ Marion’s eyes twinkled with mischief; she always dished out her little dollops of wisdom with a dose of humour. ‘Anyway,’ she added brightly, ‘I wasn’t expecting you this morning. What a lovely surprise.’

‘I’m here to see Catherine. She’s bringing a new mother to the group, one she picked up last week on Harvey Road. Rescued her from some road rage incident, apparently.’

‘Oh yes, she told me all about it.’ Marion’s brow knit slightly. Then her eyes squeezed closed with a smile: ‘Quite amazing the number of people she collects, isn’t it? Well, I’d better be getting on with passing round the coffees. Who mothers the mothers, eh? Look, Catherine’s over there, with the newcomer, Anne, I think she’s called.’

Catherine and Anne were sitting next to each other along the row of plastic moulded chairs that Marion always set out around the edges of the hall. Anne had her hands on her lap and her doe eyes were staring straight ahead of her; she gave a small nod every so often in response to what Catherine was saying, accompanied sometimes by a brief smile which would push up and wrinkle her small narrow nose rather fetchingly. Grania felt the desire to draw her - her art crate as yet unopened, still awaiting her in the dining room – to capture that fleeting look of doubt before it was bleached out by her smile. It was odd given the warmth but Anne’s clothes covered her body completely; a lightweight pale blue skirt and shapeless, long-sleeved white T-shirt were draped over her small frame. As for Catherine – nattily dressed as usual, this morning in jeans and T-shirt, ideal for toddler group – her face was animated with talk and she had Anne’s infant hooked over her shoulder, pressing his back in soothing motions with one hand, gesturing with the other, occasionally touching Anne’s forearm, as was her wont when making new friends.

  ‘Grania!’ Catherine gave a light laugh, ‘Here you are at last! I was just saying to Anne how late you tended to be to everything.’

  Anne looked up at her wide-eyed, there was something startled about her open face. Grania thought she saw apprehension there, and smiled warmly. Anne smiled back, eyes trusting now, a sensitive face on which every shade of feeling showed, typical of a young face, in fact. It was not beautiful exactly, but memorable, with large, deep set eyes, and brutally short dark hair.

  Never comfortable with silences and new people, Grania found it a tad difficult not to gabble on a little. ‘Anne, now isn’t that a lovely name, one hardly ever comes across it these days.’

‘Oh, mummy was very traditional, she liked the way things used to be.’

‘Did she now? Well, there’s a thing! And my mother obsessed with all things Irish! So I’ve a name people can either spell or pronounce, but never the two together.’ Grania was pleased to see Anne laugh at her little joke. ‘So this is your first time here at this mother and toddler group? Well, you’ve come to the right one, I can assure you. You’ll not want for friends in Cambridge now.’

‘Oh, really?’ Anne’s dark eyes shone. ‘That is good news.’ She lowered her voice: ‘It’s so daunting coming to live in a new place, not knowing anyone.’

Catherine resettled the baby over the other shoulder and shot Grania a slightly harried look.

‘You’ll be fine now then,’ Grania went on rapidly. ‘Do you know, on my way to this playgroup for the first time, with Patrick a mere dot of a thing on the back seat, my Saint Christopher fell off my rear-view mirror. It’s a sign, I said to myself then, it’s a sign. And sure enough, the patron saint of travel was telling me I’d found a new home. For it was here that Catherine and I first met, would you believe, all those years ago!’

  ‘Really?’ Anne smiled wistfully. ‘How wonderful. I’ve never been to any mother and toddler groups before.’

‘Jesus! How on earth did you manage to survive three babies without friends to swap horror stories with?’ Grania blurted out, then, seeing Anne’s hurt look, wanted to kick herself for speaking without thinking.

  Anne blinked rapidly: ‘I had a ready-made circle of friends through my family, you see,’ she explained, like she had to apologise. ‘I’ve got five sisters-in-law, and they’re all older than me, and so when the children came along, they gave me all the advice I needed.’

‘Well, there you go then!’ Grania cried warmly, anxious to dispel any suggestion of criticism. She cast about for a chair.

‘Grania,’ Catherine cut in with her back-to-business voice, prising the infant off her shoulder and passing him back to his mother. ‘I must go and talk to Christine. She’s… oh, you just wouldn’t believe, and I mustn’t be indiscreet,’ she shook her head, lowered her voice, and rolled her eyes at Anne, ‘but the things one hears at these toddler groups. The lives of others, I tell you… It makes one appreciate just how lucky one is.’ Catherine stood up  and brushed down her front with the tips of her fingers as if removing cat hairs.

Now was Grania’s only chance, ‘O, Catherine, before you go, I did just want to mention…’

Catherine glanced down at her, and raised questioning eyebrows.

‘I’ve an idea to put to you. It was Frank, give him his due, who put the idea into my head in the first place, at the weekend.’

‘Go on.’ Catherine gave her most patient smile, her hands now still by her sides. 

‘Well, now that we’ve all this extra time on our hands with our youngests at school and what have you, I thought perhaps we could set up a prayer group. You see, when I was a young girl, at school, my friends and I formed this little group, nine or ten of us there were. And over the weekend I came across all the paraphernalia for it, up in the attic. The chaos up there, you wouldn’t credit it!’

Catherine nodded, her patient expression twitching at the edges, and Grania drew a lungful of air, ‘It was called the Hail Mary club, we’d pray the rosary once a week, you see. And then, a tad like the Brownies, we’d come up with good deeds and intentions we could carry out the following week to help those in need. And each other too of course, prayers can be so telling, after all, of people’s troubles.’

‘Oh really?’ Catherine plumped down in her chair again, eyes now lit with interest. ‘And you thought we could set up our own Hail Mary club? What a great idea.’

‘Well, yes, sort of you see, we could take it in turns to host it….’

‘Oh,’ cried Catherine, ‘but I insist we hold it at my house, I’m a bit closer to the school than you, Grania, and for all those mums pushing toddlers around, it’d be ever so much more convenient…. I can see it now… We could hold it in the day living room,’ Catherine was full steam ahead in planning gear now. ‘I’ve got a table we could use to put a crucifix and a candle on. There’d be room for everybody. Grania, you’re a genius!’

Grania felt herself colouring up - wasn’t it just marvellous to have Catherine on board, who was always so generous with her encouragement? ‘And maybe we should have a statuette of our Lady, there’s one I could bring along,’ Grania suggested.

‘No, no,’ Catherine put in hastily, ‘don’t you worry, I’ve got one already, it’s absolutely beautiful, an alabaster thing, it’ll even match the curtains! Good idea, though, Grania. Don’t you think, Anne?’

Jesus, in all the excitement, Grania’d quite forgotten the newcomer.

‘It’s a lovely idea,’ Anne agreed with a small nod and a radiant smile. She then added thoughtfully, ‘It’s a wonderful way of living the Faith.’

‘Exactly!  Oh, we should get in quite a crowd, don’t you think? The more, the merrier. And Anne of course you must come.’ Catherine touched her shoulder lightly.

‘Thank you, I’d love to.’ She paused, glancing quickly  from Grania to Catherine. ‘When were you thinking of holding it?’

‘Hm. Why not Mondays, straight after school drop-off?’ Catherine gave a girlish giggle. ‘I can barely wait to get started. I shall mention it to the head teacher at St Margaret’s in just a moment. Perhaps she’ll put up an announcement on the playground notice-board so mums can see it at pick-up time. Oh, Grania, you are brilliant, truly brilliant.’ She sent Grania her most dazzling smile, and Grania found herself reddening again, stupidly, but then Catherine had that kind of effect on lots of people; Grania’d witnessed it herself.

‘Now,’ Catherine seized her bag from the trestle table near her chair. ‘I’d better get going! Lots to do before Monday. Look after Anne, now, Grania!’ she called over her shoulder with an affectionate wink. Then she lowered her voice conspiratorially: ‘Oh, and do have a word with Christine. Let me know how she’s getting on, there’s a love.’

‘I will, Catherine, don’t you worry.’

 

An hour or maybe more later, Grania drove the short distance home. She slowed at a junction where a car was waiting to pull out, and, gesturing at its puzzled-looking driver to come out in front of her, gave a happy sigh. Frank would be delighted with the way things had turned out this morning at Marion’s, he truly would.

  The traffic queue ahead of her drew to a halt for a red light. ‘Dear God,’ she whispered, closing her eyes ever so briefly, ‘give me a sign of your blessing on our Hail Mary club.’ She opened her eyes again and blinked. Nothing about her or outside the car had changed since she last looked. After a moment she  switched on the radio. The news was on: midday already.

Some part of the world where suffering never seemed to cease had been afflicted with natural disaster – God have mercy on the poor souls; the horror some had to endure. It was too much, it really was. Her mood clouded over and she sat pensive, gear in neutral, waiting for the traffic to move again. How could a good God let bad things happen in the world? It was mystifying, it truly was, but Grania knew that theologians had an answer to all those kind of doubts and anyway you could drive yourself nuts just thinking about those sorts of questions – like how big space was, for example. Moreover, it wasn’t as if the scientists had all the answers either, so there you had it, and that was that.

  Eventually the car ahead of her drew away and she drove forward. A red bus made to pull away from a stop so she slowed again: those poor bus drivers, weren’t people for ever pushing in front of them? It would make anyone’s life a misery. 

She read the ad across the back of the bus. ‘ The Alpha Course’ it announced in big lettering in hopeful sky blue:  ‘explore the meaning of life’. Perfect. There was the sign she’d been looking for, God’s blessing on their new Hail Mary Club: you had only to wait a minute and the Lord’s voice would come through. 

 

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nonpond wrote 1680 days ago

Very, very, very well done. You have me sitting here begging for more...

This is one of the most impressive books I have read one this site!

I am just one of the many simple book readers looking for good books to read. Beleave me I went through this book like a speeding bullet nothing was going to get in my way, I just could not put it down. I wanted more and more. I still need more!

Emma, This book is 10/10 material NEVER, EVER let anyone tell you otherwise!

Yours truly

Steven (Nonpond)

StevenJWatson wrote 1747 days ago

Have read chapter 1. Very enjoyable, I thought, and superbly written. I did wonder whether there's perhaps a little too much 'tell' rather than 'show' in the early stages (but then, it is good backstory being divulged so perhaps it's a little more forgiveable!) - for me after a great start (love the Book of Causes) it then sags a bit until the phone call. Minor nit-pick, though - it's great stuff!

Steve

Jess wrote 1830 days ago

Well, I've just finished reading your second chapter and think this story is really wonderful. The description of the prayer group and bitter, cynical Clare was so vivid. I do hope Catherine and Grania will help poor serious Anne lighten up a bit. I'm wondering if Anne might have been sexually abused during her childhood to make her the way she is. I guess I'll have to wait and find out!

I'll try and snatch a break from my writing soon to read some more.

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VisionScript wrote 1618 days ago

Hi: I read half of the first chapter checking to see what I can remove from my watchlist. I like this. The poor sex scene really bothered me. You could ease into it by ending the first section about Catherine with the beginning of a hot sex scene, then the up-coming poor one won't put the reader off the way it did me. I felt really sick about it. Anyways, I'll keep this on my watchlist. It's very professionally done. But I'm not Catholic FYI.

char wrote 1654 days ago

I just finished chapter one and wanted to let you know this is already a bookshelf book for me. I agree with the post below about shortening up the chapters, but I would have read all this way through one or four chapters today, just to get the feel for these main characters before I had to stop. THere is one point in Ch. 1, where Grania and Frank are headed up to the attic, when suddenly a bit from Catherine's life seems accidentally pasted in...within the same paragraph the characters are confounded. As lucid as the whole of your writing is, I'm absolutely sure this is some sort of typo/word processing issue, but it is somewhat jarring. I am Catholic and love the way Catholicism is an authentic part of the scene you are setting for us, and it is not preachy at all. I honestly have no idea whether future chapters might 'agree' with me and my sense of the faith, but in this chapter I have begun to trust you and really look forward to continuing in this story. 'Catholic' is a huge audience, so don't let anyone talk you into downplaying it!

Bel wrote 1679 days ago

This is one of the more unusual stories I've encountered browsing through the site so far and a refreshing discovery for that reason - clear prose and a subtle delineation of the relationships between the women. I liked the way you established the reader's sense of the esoteric milieu in which these characters exist, but then introduced the sex scene. It establishes empathy and is a definite hook.

Some well drawn observations, too, 'her eyes scanned Anne's face with a rather mechanical thoroughness', which hints to the reader that there is an ambiguous, possibly even psychologically sinister (?) element to 'The Book of Causes'.

I'm interested in fiction which takes me to unfamiliar psychic territory and, in the case of your story, as a thoroughly secular reader, I want to find out more about what really makes these women tick beneath their religious preoccupations, self-denial, self-discipline and cultivated exteriors. You've succeeded in intriguing me.

epery wrote 1680 days ago

Why, thank you, Steven for your fulsome praise! I've been away from the site for weeks due to illness and this is a wonderful welcome back. I'll go check out your work as soon as. Emma

nonpond wrote 1680 days ago

Very, very, very well done. You have me sitting here begging for more...

This is one of the most impressive books I have read one this site!

I am just one of the many simple book readers looking for good books to read. Beleave me I went through this book like a speeding bullet nothing was going to get in my way, I just could not put it down. I wanted more and more. I still need more!

Emma, This book is 10/10 material NEVER, EVER let anyone tell you otherwise!

Yours truly

Steven (Nonpond)

epery wrote 1701 days ago

Thanks for the feedback, Jo. Interesting idea to cut the first clause; I'll review those opening chapters with your comments in mind.

epery wrote 1715 days ago

Hi Amy - thanks for your kind comments. I'll certainly chop up the chapters into more digestible chunks when I get a moment. Look forward to checking out your work asap - it's whizzing up the charts, well done you! . Emma

amycm wrote 1715 days ago

This is really lovely and exactly the kind of book I like (I notice actually that we like alot of the same authors).

I love the idea of a 'book of causes' and despite being a quiet hook got me straight into the story and told me a lot about Catherine instantly. I like the heavy emphasis on Catholicism (something else we share - I actually worry I might overdo it myself!).

I agree about the long chapters though - could probably do with being broken up (although maybe it just seems to long because of the lack of pages on this site?).

Anyway, you're on my shelf.

StevenJWatson wrote 1747 days ago

Have read chapter 1. Very enjoyable, I thought, and superbly written. I did wonder whether there's perhaps a little too much 'tell' rather than 'show' in the early stages (but then, it is good backstory being divulged so perhaps it's a little more forgiveable!) - for me after a great start (love the Book of Causes) it then sags a bit until the phone call. Minor nit-pick, though - it's great stuff!

Steve

epery wrote 1828 days ago

Thanks, Toscka, for all your feedback. V interesting! You touch upon two central dilemmas that preoccupied me during the writing of HMC: one - whether to have a 'contrast' character; two - how much focus to give the central theme. The 'contrast' character was in the first completed draft. I took her out because her 'inner' story ended up being not germane to the plot of HMC. The central theme took over once I had a good look at the plotting of draft two, and saw that I needed to knit all three main characters' stories much more closely if I wanted a compelling, knot-tightening drama sustained throughout the book. Obviously there is a risk therefore of one-dimensionalism and as you say absolute obsessiveness, but the latter, I've found in my own very Catholic upbringing, is rather typical of dyed-in-the-wool Catholics. Catherine's voice is deliberately old fashioned/ultra middle class to show how sheltered she is, and ill-equipped to involve herself in the more complicated lives of others. And yes, bravo, you spotted it: there IS something teenage about her. She's never grown up, and thereby poses a threat to all when she delves into the real adult world. ... Thanks again, truly, for your feedback. In the world at large, I find it's hard to find writer-readers to discuss my work with. This is one of the great benefits of this fab website, don't you think? Will check your work out when back from imminent holiday ...

toscka wrote 1828 days ago

Emma, still reading this and it is still engaging. Now read the scenes with Anna. Again, I wonder whether you need to bang home the catholicism in the middle of sex. WOuld it not be more interested, in the light of the previous character and her book of causes etc, to have someone who, at least at first, seems very different. Anna has problems with sex, we think why? and only later do we realise it's chatholicism again. I know Catholocism is a central theme in the novel, and nothing wrong with that, I just wonder whether you are being a little heavy handed. If I could get to know the characters as people first it would work better, at least for me. As they currently are, they seem like a bunch of obsessives. They're not, it's just with their thoughts never straying far from the catechism, they come across as one dimentional.

toscka wrote 1828 days ago

Hello Emma, this is pretty good. I hope you don't mind but I am making comments as I go along. I'm up to the end of the phone call at the moment. I'm just wondering whether you are not overdoing the Catholicism at the moment. The story began well, it felt real, and I think you are going for realism, but there were so many mentions to her good causes and her catholicism that it began to feel like overkill, and as it went on I started to think this woman was a teenager. I know she isn't, but she has the singularity - ie the relentless obsession with catholicism - and the phrasing of a 1930s teenager in an enid blyton mallory towers gushing kind of way - dear old gervaise..., referring to her retired mother as mummy. For me this didn't quite ring true. As I say, I enjoyed the low key beginning, but that is now bothering me a little and spoiling my enjoyment.

Anyway I shall read on and let you know...

PS/ Hope the above doesn't sound too critical. I just thought if you could tuned it down a little it would be more convincing.

Jess wrote 1829 days ago

Really enjoyed the whole picnic scene, especially the rather dramatic climax. If anyone else had behaved toward Christopher as Catherine did, I would suspect them of flirting. Yet, I really believe she was only being friendly. The trouble is that poor Christopher, starved of female affection for so long, is bound to fall under her spell.

Yes, I am hoping to post my novel “Painting The Summer” on the site quite soon. I’ve still got a few chapters to write, and then I’ll have to edit it to make sure it’s as good as I can get it before letting the unsuspecting public loose on it!

epery wrote 1830 days ago

Really glad you're enjoying it, Jess. Are you going to post any of your writing up on the Authonomy site? Your website link isn't working

Jess wrote 1830 days ago

Well, I've just finished reading your second chapter and think this story is really wonderful. The description of the prayer group and bitter, cynical Clare was so vivid. I do hope Catherine and Grania will help poor serious Anne lighten up a bit. I'm wondering if Anne might have been sexually abused during her childhood to make her the way she is. I guess I'll have to wait and find out!

I'll try and snatch a break from my writing soon to read some more.

Lisa Polhill wrote 1831 days ago

Having had a brief but fervent addiction to the Rosary myself as an unhappy ten year old, I found this very interesting and true to life. This is very easy to read and the characters are coming to life. I'm reminded of my own days at toddler groups etc. I am already wondering about the fine mess 'Saint ' Catherine will get herself into.

epery wrote 1833 days ago

Thanks for taking a look and spotting the formatting problem. I've sorted it out so reading should, I trust, be easier! Hope you enjoy the rest, Jess, that I'll be uploading shortly.

Jess wrote 1833 days ago

Yes, I noticed the formatting issues as well. NO idea what was going on with the speech marks and apostrophes. Apart from that, I am really enjoying this novel so far. You have a readable style that flows well. Your characters are also very quirky and well drawn. Catherine is kind but a little self-rightious, Anne sweet but with some deep rooted issues we have yet to understand, and Grania who is friendly and probably the most likable. I'm looking forward to learning how their relationships progress.

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