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rank 5847
word count 11755
date submitted 01.03.2009
date updated 03.06.2009
genres: Fiction, Literary Fiction, Non-fict...
classification: moderate
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Clear is the Water

Cornelius Clarke

The small town was everything to Clarko. However, as time rolled by, the only thing he would be sure of was that nothing was forever.

 

An anecdotal memory of an Irish childhood, a fireside-style narrative recalling boyhood fantasies and nightmares, of school days, being kissed by one teacher, pinned to the wall and threatened by another, on being hit by a boiled sweet thrown from the back of a lorry carrying Santa Claus and then meeting the man himself for the first time hidden away in a book shop. The picture-postcard existence finally peels away when tragedy and violence destroy everything forever. Like the scent of an old photograph or a memory roused by an old song on the radio, Clear is the Water recalls the story of Clarko, a short, ginger-haired, freckled, shy boy. Growing up in a small, grey town in Ireland in the 70's, this book charts the life of a boy experiencing his first love, his early school days, his passion for films, his joys and ultimately, the intensity of the death of a loved one. Twice. Written in the first person, jumping back and forth in time, each chapter illustrates a moment, building up a personal collection of memories, reminding the reader of a time, perhaps in their own childhood, of sights, sounds and sensibilities that seem long gone.

 
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, childhood, christmas, death, ghosts, halloween, irish, light-hearted, violence, warm

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Paolito wrote 1384 days ago

Clear is the Water...

So many people say their work is literary, yet I rarely find it so. This is a welcome exception. Lovely writing and a poignant and dark story at times, yet leavened by a delicate humour.

My only fear is that publishers may feel that Frank McCourt did it all. I don't think so, however. Bravo.

Shelved, of course.

Cheers,
Sheryl
IN ALL THE WRONG PLACES

Odysseus wrote 1419 days ago

Grabbed by the heart from the first:

“...there's something about being in a graveyard at midnight that sobers up a person. I took out her memorial card and in the bleak drizzled moonlight, read the one verse that meant more to me than the others. On the other side of the card, her face smiled back at me. My heart threatened to burst.”

And I just love the nostalgia of this:

“The Ireland of my childhood is dead.... Dead like the idea that children should be treated like children, instead of 'little people'. When I was a child, 'little people' darted in and out of hedges in the moonlight, desperate not to be caught by a drunken man in search of a pot of gold. My gold was those times on weekend evenings in summer, when I'd play out in the streets at the back of our pebble-dashed house. The light from the fading sun danced with the yellow beams from bedroom windows, the sound of a hundred hair dryers blowing the sweet-scented heads of women preparing for a night out.”

A remembrance of things past when well written like this is an open door for the emotions that most of us will gladly step through all day and every day.

And anecdotes like this bitter/sweet one will always engage the reader:

“One of the many town loons 'Mad Aggie' was over by the radiator drying her knickers. I didn't know that at the time but apparently, it was common knowledge that she used the holy water fonts to do her laundry. No one ever stopped her from doing this, not even the priest. Stranger still, it didn't prevent people from dipping their fingers into the font to bless themselves with either; such was their faith that the water was indeed holy. She died not long after and according to my Aunt Pat, she was found sitting by an empty fireplace surrounded by old photograph albums. It was strange to think that at one time she had people around her, her loved ones, her family.”

As will this at a funfair:

“I stood in the mud, goldfish in one hand, Molly's toffee apple in the other, people brushing past smelling of candyfloss and watched wide-eyed under the glare from the revolving monster. Molly waved to me as the chairs began their first revolution. The night was alive with sounds - The sparks from the grill above the bumpers, the rattle of wooden hoops bouncing off glass jars, the changs and clunks of the many slot machines - to say nothing of the barking of over-excited dogs.”

Much more needs to be uploaded soonest but this is a very well written memoir and an enjoyable read. Backed.

Heidi Mannan wrote 1420 days ago

Cornelius,

Wonderful way to portray this story. The humor makes the sorrow easier to swallow and creates an enjoyable read. Beautifully written. Happy to give it a go on my shelf.

Heidi
Turning Red

kgadette wrote 1444 days ago

Dear Cornelius,
You follow in the footsteps of your Irish storytelling forebears, ie Joyce, Dylan Thomas, and the more contemporary McCourt brothers, Frank and Malachy. You have a wonderful voice, sorrowful and humorous, loving and cynical all at the same time.
"My heart threatened to burst" -- I'd do away with that cliche.
Funny -- the substitution of sheep's eyeballs for marbles, the painted rock face for a doll. Lovely description of Mam, with her chesty laugh, who could tut faster than anyone.
This is some very special writing. Shelved.

JohnRL1029 wrote 1446 days ago

Ha. Sheep eyeballs and pig bladders. I love the line about frying an egg on the cement, but mother saying the ice in the wind would blow it down the street. This is great writing. Funny and tragic. Especially concerning the boy who was castrated. Very disturbing and sad. This is powerful, elegant writing. WL.

Jeff Blackmer wrote 1455 days ago

Cornelius,
What a great story. Your writing is very beautiful and poetic. You bring back vivid memories so well. And you illustrate so beautifully, how all we tend to remember the good times of youth and think how easy kids have it today. Just like the phrase I love so well: "When I was a kid, all we had to eat was dirt, and we were glad to have it!"
Some of your phrases are so original "Murder vacationed here rather than abroad." Particularly liked that one.
Some of your paragraphs seem a tad long, but that's the worst thing I can say about this. Well done. On my shelf.
Jeff

JasonDiggy wrote 1458 days ago

Hi Cornelius! I enjoyed your book. It's strength is that it has a sense of place. So many books here are set in generic no-name places. Well done! I found it funny in places. I could relate to going to confession, I remember making things up so I'd have something to tell the priest--I didn't want him to sit there for nothing. I also liked lines like: "His unique brand of child psychology..." And, hey, you have to love a story that has "fangdangle" in it. :) This has to rise higher in the rankings. It deserves it!

Michael
The Last Coming Out Story

Cornelius wrote 1459 days ago

Thanks very much, Patrick. Looking forward to reading Shakespeare Cuthbert

This is beautiful, it actually gives me a connection to my own father's past. Very well written. On my shelf. Patrick Barrett (Shakespeares Cuthbert)

PATRICK BARRETT wrote 1459 days ago

This is beautiful, it actually gives me a connection to my own father's past. Very well written. On my shelf. Patrick Barrett (Shakespeares Cuthbert)

Cornelius wrote 1471 days ago

Thanks Bren. I appreciate your comments.

I had a quick look at this and it seems really polished. It deserves to be way, way higher than it is. Only one thing I'd suggest. Break up your pitch into more sections. That huge block of text is a bit daunting for potential readers. Otherwise, super.

Bren Verrill wrote 1471 days ago

I had a quick look at this and it seems really polished. It deserves to be way, way higher than it is. Only one thing I'd suggest. Break up your pitch into more sections. That huge block of text is a bit daunting for potential readers. Otherwise, super.

TheresaMC wrote 1511 days ago

May I suggest a few things:

Try staring with the sentence "When I'd climbed over the wall i was drunk, but there's something about being in a graveyard at midnight that sobers up a person." It's an attention getter. I'd also cut that second sentence in the opening paragraph, and perhaps break the whole paragraph into two. You're on to something with being drunk in a graveyard, and not being able to remember the face of the deceased. Don't muck it up with sentimentality.

Cornelius wrote 1521 days ago

Randy, thank you for your comments. I've been out digging the garden all day and needed a boost. That's not a euphemism, by the way, I was actually digging the garden. All the best Cornelius

Cornelius, Clear Is the Water is indeed a picture-postcard anecdotal memory--perfectly cast in an old Irish stone. I can feel this book. I like books that give me a sense of time and place. The first chapter would seem to some to ramble on and seem incomprehensible. However, I realize you are not writing commercial fiction here. Your approach is appropriate to your selected genre. Your usage of vernacular is appropriate, although quite foreign to me, as an American. However, it did give me a distinct visual of your setting and characters. I'm backing this book for its great potential. Keep up the good work.

Randy
(Buttermilk Moon)

Raydad wrote 1521 days ago

Cornelius, Clear Is the Water is indeed a picture-postcard anecdotal memory--perfectly cast in an old Irish stone. I can feel this book. I like books that give me a sense of time and place. The first chapter would seem to some to ramble on and seem incomprehensible. However, I realize you are not writing commercial fiction here. Your approach is appropriate to your selected genre. Your usage of vernacular is appropriate, although quite foreign to me, as an American. However, it did give me a distinct visual of your setting and characters. I'm backing this book for its great potential. Keep up the good work.

Randy
(Buttermilk Moon)

Cornelius wrote 1528 days ago

Thanks for your comments, John. I really appreciate it.

Cornelius,

This is really powerful and true. I believe in the same way I believe my car will get me to work. Someone really smart put it together, and there are processes at work, and all I have to do is pay just enough attention to keep from getting creamed. Dangers lurk and the romanticized poverty is withdrawn at just the right times to remind us.

I'm normally not a fan of dialect writing. In the US it has a bad history. But what you do with it is expert, it helps bring these characters to life and creates a sense of place.

The writing is polished and the narrative choices really smart. I would have complete confidence as a reader that the book will payoff.

Cornelius wrote 1528 days ago

Thanks for placing my book on your shelf. I appreciate it.

I saw that John commented on your book so I knew it would be good! Great job at transporting us to the Ireland of your childhood and communicating the bitter sweetness of it. On my shelve, good luck!

Cornelius wrote 1528 days ago

Thanks for having a look at my book. The castration thing happened when I was a kid. Or at least it was told to me as a matter of truth, either to keep me from public urinals or as a replacement to "Don't take sweets from strangers"

An atmospheric tale of a time gone by – well, I hope it’s gone by. Poetically told, the sort of thing I’d like read to me in a nice Irish brogue, while I’m lying on the sofa with my eyes shut.

I’ll give it a flip on my virtual shelf.

(The castration story – I was under the impression this was an urban legend, but I couldn’t find it when I looked for it on the internet.)

Lexi wrote 1528 days ago

An atmospheric tale of a time gone by – well, I hope it’s gone by. Poetically told, the sort of thing I’d like read to me in a nice Irish brogue, while I’m lying on the sofa with my eyes shut.

I’ll give it a flip on my virtual shelf.

(The castration story – I was under the impression this was an urban legend, but I couldn’t find it when I looked for it on the internet.)

Dania wrote 1528 days ago

I saw that John commented on your book so I knew it would be good! Great job at transporting us to the Ireland of your childhood and communicating the bitter sweetness of it. On my shelve, good luck!

John Minichillo wrote 1529 days ago

Cornelius,

This is really powerful and true. I believe in the same way I believe my car will get me to work. Someone really smart put it together, and there are processes at work, and all I have to do is pay just enough attention to keep from getting creamed. Dangers lurk and the romanticized poverty is withdrawn at just the right times to remind us.

I'm normally not a fan of dialect writing. In the US it has a bad history. But what you do with it is expert, it helps bring these characters to life and creates a sense of place.

The writing is polished and the narrative choices really smart. I would have complete confidence as a reader that the book will payoff.

Cornelius wrote 1539 days ago

Thank you very much. i hope you enjoy. I'm ok with mondays (I do love the song though), it's wednesdays I hate.

I've backed this book, because from the little I've read it looks like it's going to be very interesting reading. Hopefully, it will help boost you up the charts too!

I'll be back later to read more, just got some work to do first, don't you hate Mondays!!

Hannah x

Hannah Dunham wrote 1539 days ago

I've backed this book, because from the little I've read it looks like it's going to be very interesting reading. Hopefully, it will help boost you up the charts too!

I'll be back later to read more, just got some work to do first, don't you hate Mondays!!

Hannah x

Cornelius wrote 1540 days ago
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